Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) · forum

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-06-17T17:35:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 28 de setembro de 2014 at 18:43:35

Artist: Rogue
Title: Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm)
Tags: drumstep dubstep monstercat blue dragon [luanny] revolution
BPM: 165
Filesize: 6984kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:

BD's Hard (3,45 stars, 552 notes)
Easy (1,44 stars, 235 notes)
Luanny's Ultra Hard (4,18 stars, 573 notes)
Normal (1,87 stars, 286 notes)

Download: Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranking this because Luanny asked me.

Easy by Me
Normal by Me
BD's Hard by Blue Dragon
Luanny's Ultra Hard by [Luanny] ~~rip~~

Hitsounds by [Luanny]
SB also by [Luanny]

First thread: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/131220

Last edited by Kuron-kun 2015-01-05T14:14:02+00:00, edited 17 times in total.

Buttercup

1,065 posts

Joined May 2012

Buttercup 2014-06-18T20:56:17+00:00

Easy

03:12:823 (1) - Perceba que essa slider está no tick azul, isso deixou ele atrasado, mova-o para o snap anterior branco.

Boa sorte <3

Last edited by Buttercup 2014-11-20T17:06:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-06-18T20:59:44+00:00

Nhawak wrote:
Easy

03:12:823 (1) - Perceba que essa slider está no snap azul, isso deixou ele atrasado, mova-o para o snap anterior branco. Não vi isso, obg

Boa sorte <3

Hula

581 posts

Joined January 2013

Hula 2014-06-18T21:34:06+00:00

Lu will always be in our Dreams

Tikara

7 posts

Joined May 2013

Tikara 2014-06-19T03:00:41+00:00

Oi ,você pediu no #pt ,alem de ser a primeira vez que realizo algo do tipo, não espere nada muito bom.

Easy

00:15:278 (1) - Fora por um pouco http://puu.sh/9zS2c/1d01edf0b8.jpg
00:23:278 (3,1) - Isso me parece errado e se repete algumas vezes ao longo do mapa(01:04:005 (3,1) por exemplo),
mas se nao ver problema desconsidere.
02:02:914 (1,2) - Arrumar um pouco http://puu.sh/9zTrR/ec873e1433.jpg
02:51:642 (3) - Tem uma batida um pouco antes sem nota alguma
02:58:187 (1,2,3) - Tentar fazer algo mais assim : http://puu.sh/9zT4z/15e2e7658c.jpg (?)
03:20:005 (3,4) - Um pouco fora http://puu.sh/9zTeH/d79d7362e1.jpg , algo mais "encaixado" seria mais bonito
03:38:914 (1,2,3) - Alguma ideia para ajeitar isso http://puu.sh/9zWTl/4162fca54b.jpg (?) ficaria melhor

Normal

00:29:823 (3,1) - Deixar algo desse jeito http://puu.sh/9zV6W/c5532f9903.jpg
01:59:642 (4,1) - Alinhar um pouco mais (?) http://puu.sh/9zVzZ/d529a8aa21.jpg
02:56:733 (3) - Slider fora da tela
03:20:733 (4,1) - Igual o primeiro
03:36:005 (1) - Aproveitar a curva do slider (?) http://puu.sh/9zVQ1/1cfe1decfe.jpg
03:43:278 (3,1) - Arrumar http://puu.sh/9zVTt/0ff9cd89af.jpg
02:56:733 (3) - Slider fora da tela

BD's Hard

03:20:005 (1,2,3,4) - Esses sliders não deveriam manter o mesmo padrão dos outros?

Não achei nada muito fora nessa diff

Luanny's Ultra Hard

00:16:914 (6,9) - Arrumar o stack http://puu.sh/9zTCY/468e047dc6.jpg
00:30:733 (3,4,5) - Sliders com uma pequena diferença de espaçamento, http://puu.sh/9zNKl/5e821d2217.jpg
00:44:551 (2) - Coloca-lo no mesmo lugar do 00:42:733 (5) - seria uma boa ideia
03:08:369 (1) - Talvez colocar o ínicio do slider em cima de 03:07:642 (2) tipo assim : http://puu.sh/9zPxP/4dc99a9631.jpg
fique algo mais bonito

Ótima música, boa sorte para rankear o/

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-06-19T12:18:54+00:00

Tikara wrote:
Oi ,você pediu no #pt ,alem de ser a primeira vez que realizo algo do tipo, não espere nada muito bom.

Easy

00:15:278 (1) - Fora por um pouco http://puu.sh/9zS2c/1d01edf0b8.jpg Ah, ajeitei
00:23:278 (3,1) - Isso me parece errado e se repete algumas vezes ao longo do mapa(01:04:005 (3,1) por exemplo),
mas se nao ver problema desconsidere. Se você fala do overlap, não é um problema, mas ty por notar.
02:02:914 (1,2) - Arrumar um pouco http://puu.sh/9zTrR/ec873e1433.jpg Fixed
02:51:642 (3) - Tem uma batida um pouco antes sem nota alguma Coloquei uma nota, acho que tá melhor agora.
02:58:187 (1,2,3) - Tentar fazer algo mais assim : http://puu.sh/9zT4z/15e2e7658c.jpg (?) Ye, ok
03:20:005 (3,4) - Um pouco fora http://puu.sh/9zTeH/d79d7362e1.jpg , algo mais "encaixado" seria mais bonito Ok
03:38:914 (1,2,3) - Alguma ideia para ajeitar isso http://puu.sh/9zWTl/4162fca54b.jpg (?) ficaria melhor Nah, se você passar um tick da timeline da pra ver que ta encaixado.

Normal

00:29:823 (3,1) - Deixar algo desse jeito http://puu.sh/9zV6W/c5532f9903.jpg Ok
01:59:642 (4,1) - Alinhar um pouco mais (?) http://puu.sh/9zVzZ/d529a8aa21.jpg Pronto
02:56:733 (3) - Slider fora da tela Puxei um pouco mais pra cima pra não ficar fora ingame
03:20:733 (4,1) - Igual o primeiro Não tem problema como eu falei
03:36:005 (1) - Aproveitar a curva do slider (?) http://puu.sh/9zVQ1/1cfe1decfe.jpg Flow fica ruim imo.
03:43:278 (3,1) - Arrumar http://puu.sh/9zVTt/0ff9cd89af.jpg Acho que melhorou agora

BD's Hard

03:20:005 (1,2,3,4) - Esses sliders não deveriam manter o mesmo padrão dos outros?

Não achei nada muito fora nessa diff

Luanny's Ultra Hard

00:16:914 (6,9) - Arrumar o stack http://puu.sh/9zTCY/468e047dc6.jpg
00:30:733 (3,4,5) - Sliders com uma pequena diferença de espaçamento, http://puu.sh/9zNKl/5e821d2217.jpg
00:44:551 (2) - Coloca-lo no mesmo lugar do 00:42:733 (5) - seria uma boa ideia
03:08:369 (1) - Talvez colocar o ínicio do slider em cima de 03:07:642 (2) tipo assim : http://puu.sh/9zPxP/4dc99a9631.jpg
fique algo mais bonito

Ótima música, boa sorte para rankear o/

Obrigado por moddar, o do BD e da Luanny vou deixar pra falar quando estiverem online

MouseEasy

1,391 posts

Joined April 2012

MouseEasy 2014-06-19T15:30:31+00:00

Luanny's Ultra Hard

01:14:914 (6) - new combo porfavo
02:01:460 (5) - poe new combo aqui
03:20:914 (5) - confuso?

map bao demas

ghm12

osu! Alumni

652 posts

Joined April 2013

ghm12 2014-07-02T18:34:35+00:00

oi mod request pq vc me pediu por PM

Easy

00:21:096 (1) - esse slider tá com blanket ruim ajeita
00:42:914 (3) - ctrl g nesse slider?
00:46:914 - adiciona uma nota aqui?
00:56:005 (1) - esse slider tambem parece estranho, faz o que eu falei no primeiro
01:03:278 (2,3) - mesma coisa aqui
01:07:642 (1) - o que acha de curvar um pouco esse slider
01:20:733 (3) - não ta um pouco longe do spinner pros novatos?
01:49:823 (2) - coloca esse ponto vermelho um pouco mais pra baixo, parece estranho
02:17:460 (1) - blanket?
03:05:460 (3) - ^

Normal

00:43:642 (5) - curva um pouco pra ficar mais bonito
00:54:551 (3) - ajeita o blanket?
00:56:733 (2) - esse slider pode confundir new players não acha?
01:38:187 (3) - slider bonito

Insane

00:40:369 (6) - stack um pouco errada
00:41:096 (8) - ^
00:44:005 (8) - ^

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-07-02T18:46:10+00:00

ghm12 wrote:
oi mod request pq vc me pediu por PM

Easy

00:21:096 (1) - esse slider tá com blanket ruim ajeita ok
00:42:914 (3) - ctrl g nesse slider? o flow fica ruim se eu fizer isso
00:46:914 - adiciona uma nota aqui? claro que não, isso é overmap
00:56:005 (1) - esse slider tambem parece estranho, faz o que eu falei no primeiro ok ajeitei
01:03:278 (2,3) - mesma coisa aqui uhm... ok
01:07:642 (1) - o que acha de curvar um pouco esse slider ok, deixei uma parte mais curvada
01:20:733 (3) - não ta um pouco longe do spinner pros novatos? nem tá
01:49:823 (2) - coloca esse ponto vermelho um pouco mais pra baixo, parece estranho ok!
02:17:460 (1) - blanket? sim, blanket
03:05:460 (3) - ^ ^

Normal

00:43:642 (5) - curva um pouco pra ficar mais bonito ta bom
00:54:551 (3) - ajeita o blanket? okie
00:56:733 (2) - esse slider pode confundir new players não acha? não acho
01:38:187 (3) - slider bonito <3

Obrigado por moddar! <3

Mismagius

9,239 posts

Joined July 2008

Mismagius 2014-07-14T17:38:05+00:00

SPOILER

14:24 cheesiest: hey
14:24 cheesiest: umm
14:24 cheesiest: are you up for an IRC mod for
14:24 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442293 Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) [BD's Hard]]
14:24 Blue Dragon: sure
14:25 cheesiest: alrighty so
14:25 cheesiest: 00:45:460 (7) -
14:25 cheesiest: perhaps remove 1 repeat, and put a circle to replace the last repeat
14:25 cheesiest: if you think about it, it's kind of like having a 1/1 slider there
14:25 cheesiest: and it doesn't "make sense" if u know what i mean
14:26 Blue Dragon: ehhh
14:26 Blue Dragon: idk, I don't wanna do such things in a hard diff
14:26 Blue Dragon: I want to keep it simple
14:27 Blue Dragon: I really have like my rhythm simplified in hard diffs
14:27 cheesiest: you kind of do that thing at 00:56:733 (1,2,3) -
14:27 Blue Dragon: but it's with 2 sliders and then I use another slider later
14:28 cheesiest: fine, i suppose lol
14:28 Blue Dragon: idk, i'm not fine with kicksliders
14:28 Blue Dragon: as in, mixed with streams
14:29 cheesiest: 02:21:642 (3,4) -
14:29 cheesiest: maybe increase spacing
14:29 Blue Dragon: oh btw
14:30 cheesiest: since you change up the spacing at:
14:30 cheesiest: 02:32:551 (2) -
14:30 cheesiest: 02:28:005 (2,3,4) -
14:30 cheesiest: etc etc
14:30 Blue Dragon: you'll notice there's a broken 1/4 slider
14:30 Blue Dragon: somewhere near the end
14:30 Blue Dragon: don`t mind it
14:30 Blue Dragon: 03:20:733 (3) -
14:30 Blue Dragon: anyways
14:31 Blue Dragon: yeah but i made spacing higher there because of 1/2s
14:31 Blue Dragon: i'll change it anyways
14:31 Blue Dragon: since i see that it's a bit confusing
14:33 cheesiest: and yeah that's it really
14:33 Blue Dragon: well thanks

14:33 Blue Dragon: now mod my other map pls
14:33 Blue Dragon:

http://puu.sh/ab86o/6eed429caa.osu

cheesiest

721 posts

Joined September 2009

cheesiest 2014-07-14T18:14:03+00:00

cool

13:35 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442294 Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) [Normal]]
13:35 Kuron-Kun: yes!
13:35 cheesiest: hmm
13:35 cheesiest: 00:14:369 (4) -
13:35 Kuron-Kun: lets go
13:35 cheesiest: i don't like stuff like this tbh
13:35 cheesiest: the 1/2 sliders you have there
13:35 cheesiest: idk
13:35 cheesiest: it just feels eh
13:35 Kuron-Kun: why
13:35 Kuron-Kun: ):
13:36 cheesiest: since the slider starts at a rather passive sound in the song
13:36 cheesiest: and ends at the strong one
13:36 cheesiest: so it's like you're pressing a soft note
13:36 cheesiest: and not hitting the strong one
13:36 Kuron-Kun: a
13:36 Kuron-Kun: I see
13:36 cheesiest: yeah
13:36 cheesiest: personally i'd do like 2 circles
13:36 cheesiest: although lol this is a normal so hmm
13:37 Kuron-Kun: 00:17:278 (3) - 00:20:187 (4) - 00:23:096 (3) -
13:37 Kuron-Kun: same
13:37 Kuron-Kun: but I like the sliders
13:37 cheesiest: ye
13:37 cheesiest: ;~;
13:37 Kuron-Kun: lu did this too with her normal
13:37 cheesiest: i guess you can keep it
13:37 cheesiest: since like
13:37 cheesiest: the deep bass sound at the start
13:37 Kuron-Kun: ye
13:37 cheesiest: it just feels rather weird w/ the still strong sound at the end
13:37 cheesiest: so eh
13:38 cheesiest: esp w/ a slider that short
13:38 cheesiest: 00:26:914 (3) -
13:38 cheesiest: if you move the middle red point
13:38 cheesiest: to the left two grid points
13:38 cheesiest: then the slider is now perfectly in half at the red point
13:38 cheesiest: since the way it is right now, the 2nd side has more of the slider in it
13:39 Kuron-Kun: hmm... ok!
13:39 cheesiest: 00:50:187 (1) -
13:39 cheesiest: maybe mvoe the red point to 196, 140?
13:40 Kuron-Kun: done
13:41 cheesiest: 01:09:096 (3) -
13:41 cheesiest: this looks lopsided
13:41 cheesiest: i am currently trying to fix it lol so
13:42 cheesiest: hold up, im gonna give u points and ye
13:42 Kuron-Kun: okie
13:43 cheesiest: ok
13:43 cheesiest: keep the start at the same spot
13:43 cheesiest: the 1st red point at 312, 328
13:43 cheesiest: 2nd at 368, 364
13:43 cheesiest: and then the last point at 432, 344
13:44 Kuron-Kun: are you sure about this http://puu.sh/ab8LX.png
13:44 cheesiest: maybe it should be smoother, right?
13:45 Kuron-Kun: ye!
13:46 Kuron-Kun: http://puu.sh/ab8TO.png
13:46 Kuron-Kun: is this good
13:46 cheesiest: hmm
13:46 cheesiest: seems lopsided i think
13:47 Kuron-Kun: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1817773
13:47 Kuron-Kun: ):
13:47 Kuron-Kun: idk
13:47 Kuron-Kun: I like it
13:47 cheesiest: i got 1
13:47 cheesiest: !!
13:47 cheesiest: oh
13:47 cheesiest: hmm
13:47 cheesiest: mine looks
13:47 cheesiest: near the same lol
13:47 cheesiest: my points are
13:47 cheesiest: start: 248, 348
13:47 cheesiest: 1st red: 314, 338
13:48 cheesiest: 2nd red: 377, 358
13:48 cheesiest: and end at 443 348
13:48 cheesiest: so that the start and end are at the same line lol
13:49 Kuron-Kun: ye perfect
13:49 Kuron-Kun: thankss
13:49 cheesiest: :3
13:49 cheesiest: 01:12:005 (3) -
13:49 cheesiest: this doesn't like
13:49 cheesiest: go through the slider's middle
13:49 cheesiest: idk if u want that
13:50 cheesiest: if you mvoe the end point to
13:50 cheesiest: 228, 123
13:50 cheesiest: it will go through 01:10:551 (1) - the middle of this slider
13:50 Kuron-Kun: hm.. yeah
13:50 Kuron-Kun: ok changed
13:51 cheesiest: 02:05:823 (1) -
13:51 cheesiest: move the red point to 244, 92?
13:52 cheesiest: 02:30:551 (2) - move the red point down 1 grid
13:52 Kuron-Kun: yesss
13:52 Kuron-Kun: yessssss
13:53 cheesiest: 02:40:733 (1) -
13:53 cheesiest: the whole middle of slider thing lol
13:53 cheesiest: you can move the end point to umm
13:53 cheesiest: 220, 187
13:53 cheesiest: and it'll go through the middle
13:53 cheesiest: but then you have to move some stuff around after the slider
13:53 cheesiest: to fix spacing
13:54 Kuron-Kun: oh ok
13:54 Kuron-Kun: done
13:54 cheesiest: 03:05:460 (3) - maybe just copy paste that other slider we made before
13:54 Kuron-Kun: moved the next note
13:54 cheesiest: and then rotate a bit or something
13:55 Kuron-Kun: done
13:55 cheesiest: 03:30:187 (1) - middle point to 89, 296?
13:56 Kuron-Kun: ok
13:56 cheesiest: 03:38:914 (1) - middle point to 136, 104 (maybe u can just keep the notes after it the same since it's just 1.03x)
13:57 cheesiest: 03:46:187 (3) - move the end of this slider to 244, 256 if you want to get it through the middle lol
13:57 cheesiest: and that's it for the normal
13:57 Kuron-Kun: yee
13:57 Kuron-Kun: thanks
13:57 Kuron-Kun: let`s go to ez
13:58 *cheesiest is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442364 Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) [Easy]]
13:58 cheesiest: 00:58:914 (1) - middle point at 356, 128?
13:58 cheesiest: 01:12:005 (3) - idk lol w/e
13:58 Kuron-Kun: hmm ok
13:59 cheesiest: for umm
13:59 cheesiest: 01:12:005 (3) -
13:59 cheesiest: maybe copy 01:10:551 (1) -
13:59 Kuron-Kun: I can do this http://puu.sh/ab9Tx.png
13:59 cheesiest: and then umm
13:59 cheesiest: oh
14:00 cheesiest: ye, i guess
14:01 cheesiest: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1817809
14:01 cheesiest: i got this
14:01 cheesiest: want points?
14:02 Kuron-Kun: yea
14:02 cheesiest: ok so umm
14:02 Kuron-Kun: no no
14:02 Kuron-Kun: I did it
14:02 cheesiest: oh
14:02 cheesiest: ok :3
14:02 cheesiest: 01:28:005 (1) -
14:02 cheesiest: move the red point 1 to the >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
14:02 cheesiest: the right
14:03 Kuron-Kun: done
14:03 cheesiest: 01:35:278 (3) - move the red point to 212 160?
14:03 cheesiest: ha hah h
14:03 Kuron-Kun: !!!!!!!
14:03 Kuron-Kun: done
14:03 cheesiest: 01:49:823 (2) - down 3 for the red point
14:04 Kuron-Kun: same
14:05 cheesiest: 02:21:823 (3) -
14:05 cheesiest: move red point to 368, 239?
14:05 cheesiest: 02:40:733 (1) - red point to 146, 156 lol
14:06 Kuron-Kun: 02:43:642 (1) -
14:06 cheesiest: 145!!!!! not 146 whoops
14:06 cheesiest: lol
14:06 cheesiest: 02:43:642 (1) -
14:06 cheesiest: just move the red point 1 to the left
14:06 cheesiest: aha hahaha
14:06 Kuron-Kun: it's just one pixel
14:06 Kuron-Kun: u so nazy
14:06 cheesiest: B)
14:07 cheesiest: 03:01:823 (2) -
14:07 cheesiest: maybe
14:07 cheesiest: u could try a ZIG ZAG slider
14:07 cheesiest: here
14:07 cheesiest: B)
14:07 cheesiest: that moves every 1/2
14:07 Kuron-Kun: let me see
14:09 Kuron-Kun: ok!
14:09 cheesiest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1817829
14:09 cheesiest: B)
14:09 cheesiest: and yeah etc etc
14:09 cheesiest: ok
14:10 cheesiest: 1 last thing
14:10 cheesiest: actually nvm
14:10 cheesiest: it's not a probemk lol
14:10 cheesiest: good map!!!!!!!
14:10 Kuron-Kun:

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-07-14T18:15:33+00:00

pro mappers

where bats

lukinhasxxx

699 posts

Joined October 2013

lukinhasxxx 2014-08-30T18:23:39+00:00

Luanny's Ultra Hard

00:24:006 (1) - pra q new combo aqui?

01:17:823 (5) - esse slider vai e volta ta meio esquisito ali

01:33:823 (1) - finish com new combo ,desse jeito que ta,ta esquisito

01:44:005 (1) - outro new combo q ta estranho

caso eu esteja equivocado ,favor desconsiderar

map ta otimo

Mismagius

9,239 posts

Joined July 2008

Mismagius 2014-08-30T18:55:41+00:00

acho q rola moddar esse map

Kuron-kun

Topic Starter

Kuron-kun 2014-08-30T19:54:13+00:00

se moddar mais uma vez da pra rankear

Lust

osu! Alumni

2,667 posts

Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-09-18T22:19:08+00:00

IRC Modded with Near

Log

17:48 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442294 Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) [Normal]]
17:49 Lust: 01:16:005 (4,1) - move this pattern up a bit because 01:16:369 (1) - dips a bit too far down almost offscreen
17:49 Lust: it will be cramped for newer players and they may get confused
17:49 Near: oh ok
17:50 Near: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2048512 is this better?
17:50 Lust: maybe just a few more grids up
17:51 Near: done
17:51 Near: looks good ingame
17:52 Lust: 03:04:005 (1) - you need to move this over a bit, on 4:3 resolutions it will be offscreen
17:53 Near: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2048519 better
17:54 Lust: yeah should be good
17:54 Lust: that should be it for the normal
17:54 Lust: update it and let me see
17:55 Near: done
17:57 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442364 Rogue - Dreams (feat. Laura Brehm) [Easy]]
17:58 Lust: 03:21:460 (1) - same suggestion about being cramped at the bottom of the screen
17:59 Near: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2048532 better?
17:59 Lust: perfect
18:00 Near: :3
18:15 Lust: remove the first luanny from tags
18:16 Near: done
18:16 Near: updating now