1. Extra Stage (5,5 stars, 2150 notes)

Wheew wrote:

Dowloaded it just to check it out since Demetori is fun.

http://puu.sh/bDacE/6ea77b1024.png
Unsnapped slider-end 03:15:643 (4) oopsie, fixed lol

The amount of stamina needed to play this is no joke indeed, huehuehue
Maybe a break from: 03:52:691 - 03:58:234 nope nope nope

Since its still a wip I won't say anything more than this since you will prob be changing some stuff up anyways.

Good luck with the map

Mazzerin wrote:

nice map
the slider at 03:15:643 (4) - still seems to be unsnapped even though it got updated? huh weird... should be fixed now
i'd actually recommend lowering the hitsounds by a few % during the solo (that part from 02:44), i couldn't hear the guitar for shit Mhhh, I did want the hitsounds to be loud, but I can still hear the guitar just fine.. I will definitely lower the volume if more people point it out though
00:52:240 (3,4) - how about sliders instead of these 2 notes to follow the guitar riff? it also repeats later at 00:58:023 (3,4) - 01:09:589 (1,2) - etc Would probably make sense too, but I like circles more c:

Okoratu wrote:

isn't the full title of the song
リジッドパラダイス ～ Dawn of the Dead
which is romanized as
Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead

??

Wheew wrote:

Not really a mod, no kd already got some from my other comment.
04:44:649 http://puu.sh/bRJF4/8f184db8d7.png <- probably unintentional since its just a split second, this also makes the error for less than 15 seconds of kiai show up in AiMod.
Your map filesize is also over 10MB, not sure if thats a problem tho.

Wheew wrote:

Really wondering what you are going to do with the end since there are about 40 bookmarks there

GoldenWolf wrote:

nop

1. Wow wtf you are such a noob your bg isn't even 1024x768 wow wtf.

1. Unsnapped objects. Check aimod. kdspls
2. I'm not sure how to explain this or why, but for some reason the triples fits the song, but at the same time don't fit all the places you put them for me. I dunno why though so this is basically a completely useless point. I'm probably just being silly, so don't mind this.
   
   
   
   
3. 00:06:809 (1,2,3) - Man these are kinda awkward. I dunno, but they should be easier to read correctly if you space them out a bit more, as players will be more ready for this to be 3/2 and 2/1.
4. 00:22:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Space these so that the spacing increases gradually? Would make it easier to catch the first 1/4 jump as well, and fits the way the song gets higher in pitch. Also, I don't think you need those NCs.
5. 00:45:735 (1,2,3,4) - I like the SV increase, but I think 1.5x is a bit too excessive for the last slider. Makes it look kinda long and stuff. Consider incrementing these by lower values.
6. 00:47:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Personal preference, but I think it looks better to have NCs when you change spacing midstream.
7. 01:07:421 (6,9) - The pattern looks nice, but the distance feels too low
8. 01:11:577 (4,5) - Due to the complexity of the repeatslider + 1/4 slider before, it would probably be best if you didn't also have this 1/4 jump imo. If anything, at least follow the curve of (4) into the stream.
9. 01:45:553 (6,1,2,3) - Maybe unstack the (6,1) a bit more, so it's easier to see the (1) note and time this part correctly.
10. 02:05:704 (5) - Rip offscreen slider
11. 02:16:728 (2,3) - A bit too close compared to the other notes in this section.
12. 02:21:065 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this stream looks out of place, as they barely overlap at all while the other streams all overlap more than this.
13. 02:27:391 (7) - Is that drumwhistle intentional?
14. 02:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should split this up into 4notes+1/4slider as well, as it fits the higher pitch of the guitar imo.
15. 03:10:583 (8) - This is close to (7) and feels lame after the jumps
16. 03:14:740 (7) - Same as above Maybe ctrl+g and moving these a bit further apart?
17. 03:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream, splitting this up works better imo, so the pattern is different when the guitar is higher in pitch. + It feels faster, which works well with the high pitch as well imo.
18. 03:51:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you went straight then curved to follow the way the pitch changes and whatnot, but it looks reaaaaaaaally weird to me. The angle between 03:52:209 (3,4) - isn't sharp enough to quite distinguish them imo. Personally I'd prefer to just make this a circular 1/3 stream, but if anything, try to make the two parts more distinct from each other?
19. 04:01:637 - Where is muh triple.
20. 05:02:270 - I dunno. The 1/4 sliderjumps and constant 1/4 feels a bit excessive to me. You kinda just bumped up the intensity of the map without the song actually getting more intense.
21. 05:20:973 (15) - That's baaarely not outside the playfield. Consider just moving this stream up a bit.

CXu wrote:

[General]

1. Wow wtf you are such a noob your bg isn't even 1024x768 wow wtf. 1023*767 is good enough ok

[Extra Stage]

1. Unsnapped objects. Check aimod. kdspls
2. I'm not sure how to explain this or why, but for some reason the triples fits the song, but at the same time don't fit all the places you put them for me. I dunno why though so this is basically a completely useless point. I'm probably just being silly, so don't mind this. The roles of triples here are mostly to keep the difficulty curve more or less consistent through the map. I like them a lot, and think they fit the intensity of the song (And very few of them are overmapped, mainly during the choruses where the drum pattern is a bit too light during the first 4 measures).
   
   
   
   
3. 00:06:809 (1,2,3) - Man these are kinda awkward. I dunno, but they should be easier to read correctly if you space them out a bit more, as players will be more ready for this to be 3/2 and 2/1. Mh okay, spaced them apart a bit more
4. 00:22:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Space these so that the spacing increases gradually? Would make it easier to catch the first 1/4 jump as well, and fits the way the song gets higher in pitch. Also, I don't think you need those NCs. Okay, altough I'll keep the NCs to be consistent with this part 00:16:819 (1) - there
5. 00:45:735 (1,2,3,4) - I like the SV increase, but I think 1.5x is a bit too excessive for the last slider. Makes it look kinda long and stuff. Consider incrementing these by lower values. I think it's totally okay, I want it to be long and fast :^)
6. 00:47:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Personal preference, but I think it looks better to have NCs when you change spacing midstream. Okay, added a bunch of NCs
7. 01:07:421 (6,9) - The pattern looks nice, but the distance feels too low It's a little bit too close I'd agree, I blame myself mapping into corners at the time :c However I don't think it's really an issue, it's just a bit less visually appealing, but I'm fine with that. dun wanna remake whole pattern for visual appeal
8. 01:11:577 (4,5) - Due to the complexity of the repeatslider + 1/4 slider before, it would probably be best if you didn't also have this 1/4 jump imo. If anything, at least follow the curve of (4) into the stream. I think I get what you mean, but I decided to change the stream but slapping some sliders there anyway.
9. 01:45:553 (6,1,2,3) - Maybe unstack the (6,1) a bit more, so it's easier to see the (1) note and time this part correctly. k
10. 02:05:704 (5) - Rip offscreen slider Omggg nooo ajsaaj moved stuff around :c
11. 02:16:728 (2,3) - A bit too close compared to the other notes in this section. Changed this into a jump
12. 02:21:065 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this stream looks out of place, as they barely overlap at all while the other streams all overlap more than this. I'm not sure why I have two 5-stream before this one though... changed the pattern into a bunch of triples, it also makes this stream not-so-awkward so yay
13. 02:27:391 (7) - Is that drumwhistle intentional? Huhh it was supposed to be a DC:4 instead of default, but all things considered.. I like it more as a default hitwhistle so keeping it as it is lol. TL;DR - yes
14. 02:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should split this up into 4notes+1/4slider as well, as it fits the higher pitch of the guitar imo. Correct
15. 03:10:583 (8) - This is close to (7) and feels lame after the jumps B-but muh stacking OCD...
16. 03:14:740 (7) - Same as above Maybe ctrl+g and moving these a bit further apart? Ohhh I like this idea, changed it
17. 03:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream, splitting this up works better imo, so the pattern is different when the guitar is higher in pitch. + It feels faster, which works well with the high pitch as well imo. I'd agree with this, but I kind of like this being a long stream more, also the stream shape/the way it goes back on itself soemwhat, I like this more than slapping a slider in the middle.
18. 03:51:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you went straight then curved to follow the way the pitch changes and whatnot, but it looks reaaaaaaaally weird to me. The angle between 03:52:209 (3,4) - isn't sharp enough to quite distinguish them imo. Personally I'd prefer to just make this a circular 1/3 stream, but if anything, try to make the two parts more distinct from each other? Changed it into a circular pattern, I was mostly just trying to come up with some original shape but it didn't really work out eh
19. 04:01:637 - Where is muh triple. Muh diamond is cooler tho
20. 05:02:270 - I dunno. The 1/4 sliderjumps and constant 1/4 feels a bit excessive to me. You kinda just bumped up the intensity of the map without the song actually getting more intense. I wanted this to be El Grande Finale, but I guess it doesn't work Changed stuff
21. 05:20:973 (15) - That's baaarely not outside the playfield. Consider just moving this stream up a bit. Ok but just a tiiiiny bit.