1. HD (4.79 stars, 270 notes)
2. NM (3.85 stars, 162 notes)
3. SC (5 stars, 397 notes)

Doomsday93 wrote:

Oh boy

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

1. Offset = 750
2. There is nothing in the source or tags. In the tags, you could put "Ronald Mcdonald MAD Night of Nights Flowering Night" in there

[ANGELHONEY]

00:11:416 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Long streams of spinners like these are boring. you should put something else here instead.
00:21:750 (4,1) - This jump comes out of nowhere, and it throws me off. you should get rid of this jump.
00:21:916 (1,1) - ^. The way this slider overlaps with all those beats underneath also make it really hard to read it.
00:26:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again, these sliders all overlap with each other, and is really hard to read. Just make these beats, or just delete it and remap that bit.
00:53:416 (5,6) - Make these sliders just 1/2 beat long? the way it is now sounds a little weird.
01:58:083 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Long streams of spinners like these are boring. you should put something else here instead.

[RANRANRU] (shouldn't it be "Ranranruu"?

First up, this is very hard to read. you use a lot of stacks and clustered notes that are really hard to read. To be honest, I would remake this difficulty, because it wil take a lot of work to make it approvable, since there are many other issues. I will point out some of my main ones:

00:43:416 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2 etc.) - No matter what I try, i can't hit these. At least move the sliders closer together so they are easier to hit.
00:47:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:52:833 (1,1) - These spinners are far too short. I would map something else here.
01:36:166 (1) - ^

There are other issues, but I will leave them to other modders.

This really does need a lot of work done to it unfortunately. You should ask more people to help you with this, and mod this. Sorry if you don't understand what I am saying in some of this post

lzy wrote:

..唔。。好歌。。
不过确定要做成APP?
star

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

SC:

Maybe decrease the circle size by 1 tick? Not needed, just feels betetr since this is very spammy with slider thrown in the streams :<

Other than that this was not that bad.... decrease circle,if it's hard?

HD:
00:02:710 (1) - Move to red tick and extend to white. done.
01:03:810 (3) - Shorten to blue tick listen to the music carefully
01:04:510 (4) - Move to red tick listen to the music carefully

NM:
Delete unneeded timing points. consider this



Edit: What wrong with this thread oh man

• .Opinions:
  Has "NM" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Easy"
  .Suggestions:
  00:53:010 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - really awkward. I think you should use sliders to introduce the player to this rhythm and he will be able to read the combo right after.
  00:57:710 (6) - end 1/8 before...? (I'm not so sure, but it seems to sound better)
  01:48:910 (6) - ^ forget these
  01:42:410 (1,2) - too far, please move the (1) closer; also, same problem as 00:53:010 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)
  01:50:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these kind of patterns are not stacked correctly. Please try to fix.

• .Opinions:
  Has "HD" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Hard"
  .Suggestions:
  00:09:410 (3) - stack under the end of 00:08:610 (1)?
  00:30:610 (1,1,1) - nonsense. it's really hard to tell when the begin and when they end and that new combo spam does not help at all.
  00:37:210 (1,1,2) - ^
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:51:310 (1,2) - spacing. Most people will read this as a 1/2 spacing, but it's at 3/4 right now.
  00:57:810 (6) - increasing the spacing by a little amount like that does not help. I suggest you use a slider here, since the timing is weird.
  01:10:610 (6) - ^
  01:17:010 (4) - ^

• .Opinions:
  Has "HD" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Insane"
  This difficulty is the best in the pack, it looks a bit weird at first, but everything seems to the right place to me.
  .Suggestions:
  01:53:510 (12) - remove this?
  01:59:910 (12) - ^
  02:06:310 (12) - ^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- NM:

• .Opinions:
  Has "NM" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Easy" it's DJMAX's diffcult name.short of NorMal.Suggestions:
  00:53:010 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - really awkward. I think you should use sliders to introduce the player to this rhythm and he will be able to read the combo right after. some change.
  00:57:710 (6) - end 1/8 before...? (I'm not so sure, but it seems to sound better)
  01:48:910 (6) - ^ forget these
  01:42:410 (1,2) - too far, please move the (1) closer; also, same problem as 00:53:010 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) add new combo.
  01:50:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these kind of patterns are not stacked correctly. Please try to fix. what?

- HD:

• .Opinions:
  Has "HD" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Hard" it's DJMAX's diffcult name.short of HarD.
  .Suggestions:
  00:09:410 (3) - stack under the end of 00:08:610 (1)? I like this.
  00:30:610 (1,1,1) - nonsense. it's really hard to tell when the begin and when they end and that new combo spam does not help at all. I like this.
  00:37:210 (1,1,2) - ^ I like this.
  .Errors/Mistakes:
  00:51:310 (1,2) - spacing. Most people will read this as a 1/2 spacing, but it's at 3/4 right now. yeah,fixed.
  00:57:810 (6) - increasing the spacing by a little amount like that does not help. I suggest you use a slider here, since the timing is weird. I like this.
  01:10:610 (6) - ^ I like this.
  01:17:010 (4) - ^ I like this.

- SC:

• .Opinions:
  Has "HD" some particular meaning? If not, please choose a name that recalls the meaning of "Insane" it's DJMAX's diffcult name.short of Super Crazy.
  This difficulty is the best in the pack, it looks a bit weird at first, but everything seems to the right place to me.
  .Suggestions:
  01:53:510 (12) - remove this? I like this.
  01:59:910 (12) - ^ I like this.
  02:06:310 (12) - ^ I like this.

1. Countdown的设置没有意义,把所有难度的countdown关掉吧

1. 00:29:210 - 00:31:410 - 你这些timing section感觉设置用处不大,slider中间是感觉不出声音变化的,note前的设置那个会比较好感觉出来
2. 01:44:210 (1) - spacing太远了点,最简单的一个难度不应该出现jump
3. 00:53:010 (1-10) 节奏是没问题,不过3/4拍间距的note不太好掌握hit时机,对新手会比较难

1. note本身倒没什么问题,spcing方面的小问题比较多,一个combo内间距是一样的,虽然new combo间距可以变,也不要每次new combo间距都换一下,整体应该还是大致一样的.还有个回弹的slider次数不明,一般情况下回弹1次最好也玩起最顺,太多次的无法判断究竟要弹多少次,一不小心放手了就断combo

1. 也同样spcing小问题比较多,比如
2. 01:05:610 (1,2) - 这里的间距不好判断,前面6 stack,这里new combo又放在前面5,6之间的位置,第一反应是介于5,6note间的拍子(2/3)的一个note,而实际上是1/2拍的,极有可能点早. 诸如此类的,很多地方spacing不太明了