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Hatsune Miku - Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri

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soulfear
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月16日 at 6:12:33

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri
Tags: Vocaloid
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13119kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futari (4.88 stars, 556 notes)
  2. Hitori (2.76 stars, 285 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It is do my best to finish it,and I hope you like it:)
Sallad4ever
Hello soulfear
First thing I want to say is I really like the how you use the hit sound, it's good :oops:

[General]
-You have to get rid off the music from your video, this will help you lower down the total size of the file
-The number of combo is too high, normally in normal difficulty the highest combo is 10 while in hard it could be until 15 and insane difficulty until 18. Usually combo never go higher than 18.
-Set a preview point for the map, you can set it anywhere you like my suggestion is you put it at 01:10:59. To set it click Timing-->Set current position as preview

[hitori]
-the spacing is not consistent, use distance snap to fixed it

[futari]
-Get rid of the break in the beginning
-Some bad spacing like in 02:17:478 (7,8) this is unrankable


This is my combo suggestion it's up to you to use it or not
SPOILER
[hitori]
00:17:302 (7) - new combo
00:18:361 (1) - remove new combo
00:26:478 (4) - new combo
00:28:596 (5) - ^
00:49:067 (3) - ^
00:51:184 (4) - ^
00:58:243 (4) - ^
01:00:361 (4) - ^
01:02:478 (5) - ^
01:10:596 (3) - ^
01:13:067 (8) - ^
01:19:419 (8) - ^
01:25:419 (7) - ^
01:28:949 (11,12) - make it into slider to lower the combo
01:32:125 (8) - new combo
01:39:184 (2) - ^
01:41:302 (5) - ^
01:50:478 (4) - ^
01:52:596 (5) - ^
01:57:890 (8) - ^
02:15:184 (6) - ^
02:22:243 (4) - ^
02:25:419 (6) - ^
02:37:067 (8) - ^
02:43:067 (7) - ^
02:46:596 (11,12) - Make it into slider to lower the combo
02:50:478 (10) - new combo
02:56:125 (8) - ^
02:58:596 (1) - remove new combo
03:00:008 (12) - new combo
03:02:125 (7) - ^

[futari]
00:49:419 (7) - new combo
00:57:890 (8) - ^
01:02:831 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:537 (7) - new combo
01:12:537 (10) - ^
01:15:890 (11) - ^
01:19:067 (12) - ^
01:21:184 (11) - ^
01:25:419 (12) - ^
01:25:419 (12) - ^
01:31:596 (11) - ^
01:33:890 (12) - ^
01:39:184 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:537 (8) - new combo
01:41:655 (1) - remove new combo
01:42:361 (9) - new combo
01:45:184 (9) - ^
01:50:831 (6) - ^
01:53:302 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:655 (8) - new combo
01:59:302 (6) - ^
02:01:067 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:772 (7) - new combo
02:07:067 (7) - ^
02:07:772 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:890 (7) - new combo
02:10:949 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:714 (9) - new combo
02:15:537 (1) - remove new combo
02:16:243 (10) - new combo
02:18:008 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:067 (9) - new combo
02:24:714 (7) - new combo
02:26:478 (1) - remove new combo
02:27:537 (9) - new combo
02:36:537 (10) - new combo
02:37:772 (1) - remove new combo
02:38:831 (12) - new combo
02:42:890 (11) - ^
02:45:184 (12) - ^
02:49:243 (11) - ^
02:51:361 (11) - ^
02:55:596 (11) - ^
03:03:714 (10) - ^

There are some other things, but this is it for now
Keep up the good work
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
soulfear
Thank youuuuuuuuuuu!!!
I had fixed these...!
Thank you very much!
Topic Starter
soulfear
I think the HQ video is better so I used AVI,but now I use the FLV so it is smaller than before.

[futari]
-Get rid of the break in the beginning
-Some bad spacing like in 02:17:478 (7,8) this is unrankable

I think 02:17:478 (7,8) have no wrong.
and how can I get rid of the break?My English is not good.
Sallad4ever
Hello there :)

-Delete the two .osb files on your song folder and do a full submit again
-To get rid of the break just put some random circle on the break until the break is gone
-A big space for a half beat note is unrankable see here
http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg

Also the preview point is not set, see my previous post on how to set it
Topic Starter
soulfear

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hello there :)

-Delete the two .osb files on your song folder and do a full submit again
-To get rid of the break just put some random circle on the break until the break is gone
-A big space for a half beat note is unrankable see here
http://osu.ppy.sh/images/beatspacing.jpg

Also the preview point is not set, see my previous post on how to set it
-Delete the two .osb files on your song folder and do a full submit again

fixed

-To get rid of the break just put some random circle on the break until the break is gone

how can I put a randomcircle on the break?

-A big space for a half beat note is unrankable see here

I'm sorry, I had fixed,Please see it.
ZeTia
队长神威!
cpymax
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
rustbell
有些圆圈的距离不对...(不是jump

开distance snap做下修正吧 :)


还有歌名和难度注意大小写:D

☆ミ
Topic Starter
soulfear
歌的难度都给你看出名堂了 基地你真不简单 简直就是GOD啊!
Shinxyn
wow, interesting custom hitsounds~
the file I downloaded still had the two .osb files, double check if you deleted
Capitalize "Miku" and the song name... use an English name if you can.... though there is no official English... add whatever English names you can find to the tags then
Though the romanji I keep finding is "Hitoribocchi De Futari Kiri" @-@ (the "de" is seperate)
Maybe find a better image?
Remove countdown, it doesn't match the music (if you don't know how, press F4, click Storyboarding tag, and uncheck Enable Countdown)
Source: Deco*27
offset... mm... -20 (1400)?
Set Preview point for both diffs (move to where you want the preview to be, click Timing on the very top (where File, Edit, View... is) and click "Set Current Position as Preview")

hitori- maybe capitalize Hitori~
Hmm... the map itself is fairly Normal/Easy, so you wouldn't need anything easier~~~ ONLY if you decrease overall difficulty and Circle size~
Use Large or Largest circle size instead, and lower overall diff by at least two ticks please
you didn't use grid snap OR a set distance snap (for most of the map)?! wow, I couldn't really tell when playing, oh well, but its possible and easy enough, but still....
02:04:949 (1) - please remove one repeat, since the two sliders before this both has 4 repeats while this note

futari- capitalize Futari~
wow, again, no grid or set distance snap (still played nicely though)
remove the empty first break~ how? move mouse to timing panel and right click on that break
lol, your sliders are messy with slider ticks, press a, s, or d on the keyboard to change the slider types?
... there nothing wrong in terms of playing the map, but there may be complaints about the map's spacing consistency..

mmmm...... just use grid snap (on Tiny grid), and a set distance snap to be safe otherwise, the map's actually pretty good.. in a sense >-<

EDIT: you've done most of what I asked.... (not all, thats your choice) ._.~
Topic Starter
soulfear

Shinxyn wrote:

wow, interesting custom hitsounds~
the file I downloaded still had the two .osb files, double check if you deleted
Capitalize "Miku" and the song name... use an English name if you can.... though there is no official English... add whatever English names you can find to the tags then
Though the romanji I keep finding is "Hitoribocchi De Futari Kiri" @-@ (the "de" is seperate)
Maybe find a better image?
Remove countdown, it doesn't match the music (if you don't know how, press F4, click Storyboarding tag, and uncheck Enable Countdown)
Source: Deco*27
offset... mm... -20 (1400)?
Set Preview point for both diffs (move to where you want the preview to be, click Timing on the very top (where File, Edit, View... is) and click "Set Current Position as Preview")

hitori- maybe capitalize Hitori~
Hmm... the map itself is fairly Normal/Easy, so you wouldn't need anything easier~~~ ONLY if you decrease overall difficulty and Circle size~
Use Large or Largest circle size instead, and lower overall diff by at least two ticks please
you didn't use grid snap OR a set distance snap (for most of the map)?! wow, I couldn't really tell when playing, oh well, but its possible and easy enough, but still....
02:04:949 (1) - please remove one repeat, since the two sliders before this both has 4 repeats while this note

futari- capitalize Futari~
wow, again, no grid or set distance snap (still played nicely though)
remove the empty first break~ how? move mouse to timing panel and right click on that break
lol, your sliders are messy with slider ticks, press a, s, or d on the keyboard to change the slider types?
... there nothing wrong in terms of playing the map, but there may be complaints about the map's spacing consistency..

mmmm...... just use grid snap (on Tiny grid), and a set distance snap to be safe otherwise, the map's actually pretty good.. in a sense >-<
thanks for your modding,I'll fixed these.
Joyeden
路过,支持,等电脑弄好了再试玩~
Topic Starter
soulfear
All fixed.
AngelHoney
Star~ :) :)
chrismisa
star~
tky12321
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
cloness
:? 中間都沒啥打擊感
tky12321
不如把中间部分做成slider来回的那种
[DBF]
offset: 13419

[Futari]
00:45:537 (7,8,9) - spacing.
00:56:125 (5,6) - ^
01:57:890 (1,2,3) - make this is like in this 01:07:772.
02:22:243 (2,3) - jump or spacing?
02:28:772 (1,2,3,4) - spacing.. bit number 2 close to the slider.
02:36:714 (6,7) - sharply.
[Hitori]
01:12:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - little bad spacing. fix it.
01:39:184 (1,2) and 00:13:419 (1,2) compare, yes, spacing.

your map need sounds, add it~
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