1. Easy (1,35 stars, 71 notes)
2. Hard (4,63 stars, 174 notes)
3. Insane (4,96 stars, 228 notes)
4. Normal (3,03 stars, 99 notes)

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Normal]
00:30:244 (1) - remove new combo OK~
01:20:142 (1) - remove new combo and new combo at 01:23:510 (6) OK, I hope I undestood this right. ^^;

[Hard]
00:05:142 (1) - (nazi) one grid up (lv3) OK~
00:13:102 (1,2) - align with 00:12:489 (7) OK~
00:40:653 (2) - spacing OK~
01:06:673 (1) - remove new combo OK~

[Insane]
00:08:204 (1,2) - align with 00:07:591 (6)? OK~
00:22:285 (7) - finish at return point OK~
00:24:122 (1) - remove new combo OK~
00:27:795 (1) - stack with 00:27:183 (9) OK~

good. star~

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:55:653 (1) - This could drag you from being ranked changed it just to one spinner now? .w.

[Hard]
Increase the Overall difficulty by 1 or 2 OK~

That's all I could found. Nicely done :D

lcclarke wrote:

Well,it's a good map,and I have several suggestions.
[Insane]
00:14:632 (5) - move to 00:14:479 I think it's better,of course you need to change the distance. OK~
00:43:561 (4) and 00:43:714 (5) - leave over 1/4 tempo It sounds better Ugh I'm so sorry but I don't understand what you meant. ;3; My english is bad~ orz

Star!

Lanttu wrote:

lcclarke wrote:

Well,it's a good map,and I have several suggestions.
[Insane]
00:14:632 (5) - move to 00:14:479 I think it's better,of course you need to change the distance. OK~
00:43:561 (4) and 00:43:714 (5) - leave over 1/4 tempo It sounds better Ugh I'm so sorry but I don't understand what you meant. ;3; My english is bad~ orz

Star!

Thank you♥ ;w;

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
I think you should start Kiai Time at 01:06:673 for all diffs. OK~

Normal
01:03:918 (1) - No New Combo. OK~
01:04:530 (1) - ^
01:05:142 (1) - ^

01:04:224 (2) - New Combo. OK~

01:16:775 (1) - Remove. Time distance between spinner and beat is a bit too short for a Normal. OK~

Hard
00:05:142 (1) - No New Combo. OK~
01:20:142 (1) - ^

01:21:061 (6) - New Combo. OK~

Insane
Even though I failed this, it doesn't quite feel like an Insane to me. Maybe increase Overall Difficulty by 1? OK~

lcclarke wrote:

I meant that
00:43:561 (4) - move to 00:43:714 OK fixed these~
00:43:714 (5) - move to 00:43:867

And
00:28:714 (4) - move to 00:28:561 Yes, I agree it would sound more rhythmical here but I'd like to keep the shape of the notes like it is now. ;w;

Dragonslayerxx wrote:

Trust me, trust me, trust me~

Normal

SPOILER

00:20:448 (1,2) - Move up a bit to align with previous 4?
00:22:285 (4) - Remove the reverse and extend to 00:23:204
00:23:510 - Add a note here?
00:51:673 (4) - Adjust note via shift + ctrl + click to align it with the slider?
00:54:122 (4) - ^
00:59:020 (4) - ^
01:11:265 (4) -

Hard

SPOILER

00:03:612 (3,4,5) - Just put the starting points in the same place?
00:19:224 (6) - Place the ending point on the 5?
00:42:183 (5) - Move slightly left to put it between the 3 and 4
00:43:102 (2) - Adjust note via shift + ctrl + click to align it with the slider?

Insane

SPOILER

01:19:989 (4) - Align with 3? Then readjust other notes

Good map. Star for you~

saymun wrote:

trust me x]

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete and full submit
2. Anime should not to be a tag, it contains to much :/
3. I think this song don't suit add KIAI time :/ Just my own opinion

1. 01:27:489 - spinner ends here with silence sound better imo

1. 00:53:969 (6,7) - move back 1/4 beat fit music more

saymun wrote:

Normal:
01:09:428 (1,2) - move down 1 grid? OK~

Hard:
00:05:142 (6) - down 1 grid? OK~
00:08:816 (3,4,5) - right 1 grid? OK~
00:14:938 (1,2) - spacing OK~
00:17:693 (6) - doesn't hurt to put this on the slider finish x] OK~
00:18:918 (5,6) - spacing OK~
00:20:755 (2,3) - spacing OK~
00:21:367 (5,6) - spacing OK~
00:44:020 (5) - down 1 grid? OK~
00:46:469 (5) - add this to the end of the sliders as well OK~
01:15:857 (4) - move this right 1 and up 1 OK~
01:15:857 (4,5) - spacing? (maybe just extend the repeating slider to 5) OK~
01:19:224 (1,2) - down 1 grid? (i know it might cause problems with 01:20:142 (3,4,5), maybe new combo at (3) then?) OK~
01:21:061 (1,2,3,4) - delete (2,3,4) then copy and paste (1) 3 times, rotate each one 90,180,270 degrees OK~

Insane:
00:27:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels weird to play... start the two double clicks at 00:28:561 instead OK~
00:53:969 (6,7) - move up 1 and left 1 OK~
01:06:673 (1) - remove new combo OK~

trust saymun:
rawr i can't mod my own map lol x] :'D

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete and full submit OK~
2. Anime should not to be a tag, it contains to much :/ removed
3. I think this song don't suit add KIAI time :/ Just my own opinion I think it fits quite well ;3;

[trust saymun]

1. 01:27:489 - spinner ends here with silence sound better imo OK~

[Insane]

1. 00:53:969 (6,7) - move back 1/4 beat fit music more OK~