李爸你听得太细啦abalee wrote:
try 122.25 BPM @ 2139 offset
@v2b圈大一点也没关系啦 >_>
Nice mod, thanks for your careful mod!!!DiamondCrash wrote:
The "kelly" has a capital K.
Easy;
00:13:882 (6) - In line with the 4. It doesn't look beatiful if you put all note in line, you can check this put all notes in line. Hope you can understand.
00:17:808 (5) - In line with the 3. ^
00:21:733 (5) - ^ ^
00:40:379 (3,4) - In easy, don't put two sliders that look the same that have different repeats. I don't know this I'm a new mapper, if any one else mentioned this I will change it.
00:48:230 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:51:992 (6,7,8) - On the center line. fixed
01:38:770 (3,4,5) - Ugly, and the last slider should have one less repeat. If any one else mentioned this I will change it. lol
01:44:658 (1,2,3) - I don't think this is suitable for an easy. ^
02:18:514 (4,5) - You know what I'm going to say here. lol, you are a nice naze modder.
Hard;
The slowdowns are unneccessary and don't fit.
00:45:613 (1) - Delete. I myself also hesitate for this(these) note(s) but I insist on keeping them. One reason is it make the map more beatiful(?) and if you delete them, notes seem to put as the music but not sounds good for the map, you may try to listen more times, I myself at least listened 10 times.
00:53:464 (1) - ^ ^
01:08:348 (5) - This doesn't fit. I don't know how to change. orz
01:12:600 (3) - ^ ^
01:42:531 (1) - Move up so it's more like the combo before.2b errrrrrr...I made this on purpose01:45:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Looooong combo. ok
01:49:074 (1) to the break - The hp bar decreases too much during this section. More notes, or make the diffuculty less. Originally, the Hp drain rate was low and I think it may easy(?) so I changed to 7, if you want to FC this map, really, this doesn't matter.
02:35:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Shorten this combo. ok
v2b;
Fine.
Fix these, send me a message, and I'll star for you.
Shinxyn wrote:
o.o
this is from an Ablum called "Life in Cartoon Motion"... maybe use that as source (its even in the bg image)...? though it appears in some other places, too.. You can see the BG, added, thanks~
Timing kinda off, the notes start early and end late, I tried abalee's timing, same results, not my forte D: may be 122.275? 0.o
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1/3 maps o.o
SohuEasy- Easy...? this is more of a Normal, almost Normal+, there are some non-Easy friendly patterns
Remove Lead-in time for this diff, players don't have to skip twice then Yeah, yeah, surely you are not the first one who point out this, but the problem is I cannot map easier...orz Also, Lean-in time removed.
00:23:860 (1) - I don't really get the kiai + spinner... oh well.. oh well, it unnecessary but just let it there, lol
00:57:062 - use finish instead of clap? maybe better sound, changed
01:16:198 (7) - sounds poor for an ending before break... maybe add finish to end? but might be kinda loud... I added a finish, sound much better.
01:30:428 (1) - same as 23:860 I move the kiai just to the spinner, about the kiai, just left it there, ok? lol
01:46:948 (6) - new combo for new pattern? OK
01:48:256 - 22 second break? try keeping breaks under 15 seconds please (map a part of this) I also know this but I don't quite know how to map this part. I will try later.
SohuHard- those slow downs in the first half were kinda annoying... I myself also not quite sure about those slowdown parts, I just try to follow the music, since DiamondCrash has talked about this, I tried to put them all fast or slow, but I didn't like them, so I kept. Maybe....
The whole thing could've been mapped to 1/3 (didn't need 1/6) OK
00:12:901 (6,7) - off vocal (unless you weren't trying to map to vocal here), like I said, don't need 1/6 Shinxyn you are always pointing out what I am confusing, lol, I try to find you next time and let us talk about it in IRC, it's OK?
00:17:563 (8) - ^
00:21:488 (9) - ^
00:30:893 - add note? I think it's ok.
01:00:987 - though I don't agree on using the kiai just for the spinner, still, end the kiai earlier, so you don't have to see this note flash with kiai for no reason OK, I finish it ealier.
01:08:348 (5) - remove one repeat and add note to white tick? (the repeat makes this sound weird) Let's discuss about this, I don't know to add. o.o
01:41:550 (1,2) - was this on purpose? even so, I think remove (1) (since it would match vocal better AND the last combo start on vocal (with 4 notes)), then new combo I adjust and hesitate a lot here, but finally I kept it for "funny" the map.
01:42:531 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:43:186 (5,6) - new combo one of these for seemly jump (preferably 6) OK
01:47:111 (8,11) - new combo these two? (makes this pattern a bit more read friendly) I forgot to add new combo, but I made this style on purpose
01:56:925 (4) - ...... odd way to start a break, remove this note (and add finish to 3) or map a bit more please (prefer you mapped more)
02:34:053 (7) - new combo for slight diverse to the drums? Added
02:38:142 (12) - new combo for jumps! I have changed.
v2b- mmm yea, remove Lead-in or just use about 0.5 second lead in
violent slider speed, kinda evil map.. Overall diff +1 please! OMG, OA8! Shinxyn you are really evil! lol
00:26:640 (4) - o.o huh, the slider speed changed before the spacing did, evil! (oh well xD)
00:53:137 (1,2) - switch new combo?
00:57:389 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - whoa, evil jumps for quiet section
01:47:111 (4,7) - maybe new combo to make this easier to read? but then again, the overall diff +1 would make it easier (for me), too
Oh gosh, the map's hard
Could use a lot more new combos imo, didn't wanna point them all out
mm... double check the timing with someone else ^^;;
Derekku Chan wrote:
[General]
*bg is too large; max size allowed is 1024x768, so please resize it. OK
*set a preview point on all diffs please I don't understand this, I'm a new mapper. o.o
*BPM is too fast towards the end. (It's really noticeable orz) 122.25 should be a LOT better, but you'll probably have to do it .1 lower, resnap, .1 lower, resnap, etc. to make sure that the 1/3 notes and everything snap properly. If there are 1/4th notes, you'll have to do those manually. I feel it after 02:43:xxx, I will check if the BPM goes down there. 1/4? no. I tried.
*offset seems to be fine~
*no tags? o: added according to Shinxyn suggestions.
*o_o audio lead-in really isn't needed... SohuHard need
[SohuEasy]
00:23:696 (2) - Since the spinner basically starts on this beat, you should put the kiai here too imo. I added a timing point here mainly to control the sound, kiai? For fun. Shall we just keep it?
00:23:860 (1) - end kiai at the end of the spinner so that the following notes don't flash OK
00:48:721 (7) - put this below (6) so that (6) ends next to where (7) begins. You check very carefully! But when we play, does this necessary?
00:54:936 (4) - too far from previous for an easy diff Thank you and I remapped this part for more regular distance.
00:55:917 (6) - ^ ^
01:11:782 (6) - a bit off-screen in editor (nazi comment) No problem when you play
01:30:428 (1) - start kiai on the beginning of the spinner and end it at the end of it. I realized this problem, thank you!
*I wish you would map this to the end
*There may be a couple other minor spacing issues that I didn't pick up, so you can check AIMod (ctrl-shift-A) to check all of them for this diff~ wow, I never used ctrl-shift-A since I don't like constant distance, that boring, right?
[SohuHard]
00:12:901 (6) - sounds awkward DiamondCrash also think so but until now I don't have better idea.
00:17:563 (8) - move to the next 1/3 tick and fix spacing if needed if 1/6 ahead, this don't sound good, this also confuse me, how to change?
00:21:488 (9) - ^ ^
00:41:360 (4) - I'd end kiai here. changed
01:41:550 (1,2) - wtf spacing? wowLOL, I made them on purpose!
01:42:531 (1,2) - ^ ^
[v2b]
*I think these size circles are ugly, so I recommend turning them up a size, but that's just my opinion orz
00:41:370 (7) - I'd end kiai here ;o OK
01:32:413 (13) - ^ OK
Nice job (b'.')b
EDIT: Oh, I see that abalee already posted the bpm fix. Well, after testing multiple times, I think that this bpm works great; the offset is fine, as is (whatever you currently have it set as).