1. Advanced (4.13 stars, 270 notes)
2. Beginner (2.22 stars, 180 notes)
3. Challenge (4.86 stars, 406 notes)

Dusty wrote:

<3 awesome song and map

3:05:888 - Kiai until 3:12:888? Sorry, I don't like KIAI now : (, it's eye-dazzling

[Easy]
2:15-2:40 - I think the break is too long, maybe add some SB or map some of the break? Emm...I have no idea what to add here...Someone who could suggest?

[Normal]
03:05:088 (3) - New Combo? Emm, why here new combo?

Sushi971 wrote:

Set a preview point on all diffs oops, I forget it, thanks

[Challenge]
01:33:588 (2,3) - symetry It's not symmetrical? emm...

this map is just <3

Breeze wrote:

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
03:05:088 (3) - New Combo? Emm, why here new combo?

bmin11 wrote:

[Advance]
02:21:713 (5) - I'm not sure if this speed up would be acceptable for [Normal]. They are still newbies you know I made it no curves so that it has a slower speed o.o

Maybe add C - Pop for the tag? That's it! added
Anyway, awsome SB, skin, song, map. Just mainly perfect

DJPop wrote:

~Beginner~
02:15:338 - break time is too long imo Well...It seemed I should add something...

~Advance~
01:59:213 (4) - 1/3 snap awesome, fixed

~Challenge~
01:59:213 (4,5,6,7) - 1/3 snaps Fixed
02:54:588 (4) - new combo fixed


+Star

alvisto wrote:

Breezi sama~~~ Your map improve tremendously ! I am happy ! ^.^ It's very good. Some simple and quick mod.

CHALLENGE
00:23:088 (5,6,1) - Don't you think the whistles here are weird ? Coz other diffculties don't have this whistle. O.O You're right, use soft whistle instead
02:01:004 - I don't know why this part stephanie seems like singing cantonese here, lol. xD o.o I know few about cantonese...
03:23:088 (1) - Why not end the slider here 03:24:838 ? Just like Beginner oops, fixed

ADVANCED
is fine and fun !

Love the custom hitsound where there're a lot of drum during middle part of the song. Simple SB makes the map even more <3.

Remember to force default skin for all difficulties.

Star ~~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[General]
1) Mark the display storyboard in front of combo fire (Click song setup -> Storyboarding -> and check the box of Display storyboard in front of combo fire awesome, fixed
2) Because this song have a applause, how about you add a boo at fail? Add the boo sound and rename the file to failsound Great suggestion, If I could find one boo sound...I'll try to, thanks!

[Beginner]
00:26:088 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider OR add note at 00:26:588
00:27:088 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider OR add note at 00:27:588 I put it like this on purpose o.o I wanna use different notes mode
00:56:088 (1) - No new combo fixed
01:04:088 (1) - ^ fixed
01:33:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound finish should appear at 01:34:088, I put no note there, just follow the lyric

[Advanced]
00:29:588 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:45:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:21:088 (SB) - You have to make a circle fade out like 01:20:338
02:51:088 (SB) - ^
02:59:088 (SB) - ^
03:07:088 (SB) - ^ awesome, Barbie lol Actually it's a trigger loop SB effect, just effect when hitclap works... I forgot some SB clap sound ;_;, you got that is absoluterly right! added now

[Challenge]
00:45:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:33:838 (3) - ^
02:51:088 (SB) - You have to make a circle fade out like 02:50:338

[Overall]
Storyboard are good, but you need some translation lyric, so anyone know what they mean I want to, but I don't know how to translate some sentence in this song My English sucks, as I can't translate it nicely, I prefer to no traslation, sorry

WOW! Nice MAP!
You must be follow the faculty of graphic desginer when you college! Actually I'm not, just interested in maming SB ; )
STAR

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The title might look better like: "Meng Bu Luo (Dream Never End)" - with a space. Or perhaps just "Meng Bu Luo" with Dream Never End in tags? If you can't change without making a duplicate then just leave it as it is XD OK, fixed

Beginner:

02:51:088 (4) - New combo?
02:56:588 (3) - New combo.
02:59:088 (6) - ^ these 3 note above are not the end of lyric, so I keep them for now
03:05:088 (3) - ^ applied
03:07:088 (6) - ^
03:15:088 (3) - ^
03:18:088 (5) - ^? not end of lyric, too

A lot of new combo suggestions, but your combos got longer towards the end of the map (just compare the beginning to the end).

Advanced:

02:16:463 (2) - Too fast, it throws off the rhythm imo. It just fit the rhythm You could hear clearly by playback rate 25%, and when playing, players just need to hold mouse there, 1/8 sliders are too short, so I used 2xBPM 1/4 sliders : )
02:22:463 (6,7,8) - Stack under 5 or place direct above 5 so it's easier to hit? put it direct and fixed other notes

Challenge:

01:19:088 (6) - Minor spacing error. lol fixed, you're so careful
02:16:338 (4) - New combo? Still think it's too fast XD Emm, it's OK imo : P

Rest looks good to me, great job with the map and SB.

~ Star

kino77 wrote:

>w<~

Zekira wrote:

Offset: Just a quick -3 from current go fixed

[Beginner]
02:13:085 (3) - make it so that it appears at the almost exact middle of 1 and 2? Turn off Grid Snap if necessary, and fix the thing after this note if you'll do it fixed
03:09:335 (9,10) - seeing as how this is an Easy, maybe notes under a slider aren't really recommended... keep it for now, if one more modder complain about it, I'd change it

[Advanced]
01:42:338 (1,2,3) - oddly enough, move this 1/8 later and it'll sound spot on the vocals. Your choice though, but I really think it sounds better this way. lol correct, fixed
01:43:088 (4) - New Combo? fixed
01:51:338 (4) - New Combo (3) new comboed, it's the start of lyric
01:55:088 (5) - ^ fixed
02:50:838 (1) - What the random clap in the middle? Maybe reduce volume of that orz SB clap lol, it always sounds different to game playing clap
02:53:088 (5,1,2,1,2,3) - Odd new combo placement IMO
02:57:088 (4) - New Combo? applied
02:58:838 (1) - What the random clap in the middle? Maybe reduce volume of that orz
03:06:838 (5) - ^ I would rewrite them all by script

[Challenge]
I like this map.
01:42:338 (1) - suggestion: it would sound nicer if this thing had one repeat, mainly because the vocal here is like 'taktaktak', but the behavior of the 1 and 2 there is a bit odd. you're right, fixed
01:46:588 (6,3,3) - ...are these the reasons why you lowered the slider ticks? Get someone else's opinion as to whether these 2x sliders are okay or not... wait for more people to mod it
01:59:254 (4) - New Combo I think it's OK here, they and (1,2,3) are both notes with whistle
02:35:088 (Break) - I feel that something should be mapped on this part for more awesome Emm, keep it fo now, map here need 1/8 BSD or 2xBPM 1/4 sliders lol, it shouldn't be so hard cause whole map is not such hard.