1. Hard (4,33 stars, 257 notes)
2. Insane (4,82 stars, 425 notes)
3. Normal (3,17 stars, 211 notes)

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Hard]
00:57:406 (5) - new combo for jump
01:11:593 (9) - new combo
01:33:691 (3) - new combo here and delete new combo at 01:35:056 (1)
01:36:965 (6) - new combo here and delete new combo at 01:37:238 (1)
01:40:512 (1) - delete new combo
02:38:078 (3) - new combo
02:44:899 (1) - delete new combo
02:48:445 (1) - finish at return point
03:02:359 (1) - remove new combo

[Insane]
01:37:784 (7) - one grid down
01:40:512 (1) - remove new combo
02:44:898 (1) - ^
02:48:445 (1) - finish at return point
02:50:627 (5) - ^
03:02:359 (1) - remove new combo

Cool song and map, star :3

xierbaliti wrote:

-overall-
Hitsound suggestion:Use finish-hitsound replace clap.
Ughh i dont know, i suck with hitsounds, and the parts where i have used the finish hitsound is because i couldnt find a way to make claps or whistles to make it sound good in those places, new ideas for the hitsounds are very welcomed

-insane-
00:35:035 (3) - volume 3.5~4 in the end is better I think. If you can, can you give more details about what you mean?
01:13:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm chaos ._. Erm ops... i... kind of fixed it, thanks for noticing it ._.
01:41:603 (4) - I can't see it in my first play. It was on purpose, im actually waiting to see if this is rankable or not...
02:17:343 (?) - like 01:13:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add 3 circles at 02:17:343 & 02:17:479 & 02:17:616 Ughh i guess ill pass with this...
02:18:161 (?) - add a circle
02:18:298 (3) - remove the circle and add acircle at 02:18:571
02:19:253 (?) - add a circle
Semi done =o

03:04:132 (1) - remove it
Ill pass with this too...

-hard-

Like the picture ._.
[attachment=0:7e45b]screenshot931.jpg[/attachment:7e45b]
02:17:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Semi done, i made some fixes first... but tried to do it as you have suggested

other parts are fine.

Sorry for my poor English ._.

Hope it's useful to you Oh it was... i never heard that "rymth chaos" xD

• 00:35:035 (4) Whistle
  00:41:037 (4) Finish at the end
  00:49:767 (3) ^
  00:57:815 (5) None
  01:11:593 (6) New combo
  02:02:611 (6) None
  02:50:355 (5,6) 1 grid up

• 00:19:757 (3) Whistle
  01:09:410 (1) Finish
  01:26:598 (4) None in the middle
  01:29:463 (1) None
  01:30:963 (1) 2 Grids down
  Because to align with the spinner 300 (Try in the Test)
  02:00:701 (1) Whistle
  02:35:349 (1) 2 Grids down
  02:45:989 (4) De activate Grid snap and make is more cleaner
  02:52:810 (1) 2 Grids down
  03:04:541 (2) Whistle

• 00:57:815 (2) None
  02:09:704 (2) Finish
  02:16:252 (2) make a line with (1) and (3)
  02:34:531 (1) Clap
  02:49:809 (2) Whistle
  It "LOOKS" fun~

1. There's an awful lot of spinners for this level of difficulty.

1. Looks good.

1. 01:42:285 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - lol honeycomb streams. These aren't perfectly positioned. Being out of grid, I can't blame you.
2. 03:02:359 (2,3) - Spacing. Move closer together.

Sushi971 wrote:

Set offset to 18120.

[Normal]
00:22:076 (1) - 1/4 beat earlier. and the end may still finish at the same time (white tick) Ermm did something different
00:55:224 (1,2,3) - align? Done

[Hard]
02:17:889 (1,4) - symetry? Done

[Insane]
00:57:133 (4,1) - symetry? Its already in symmetry? >_>
01:26:052 (2,3) - ^ Done
01:40:785 (3,4) - hidden slider. I disapprove. [color=#0000FFF]Flipped[/color]
02:01:519 (4,1) - symetry? Its already in symmetry?


/me approves
Great!!

MetalMario201 wrote:

Offset: 18,100 Done

Please use a tick rate of 2 on all difficulties. (Even 4 sounds good but scores too high.) Done

Normal:

1. There's an awful lot of spinners for this level of difficulty.

Umm 5 its a lot? Umm... ill see what i can change then... but not now...

Hard:

1. Looks good.

Insane:

1. 01:42:285 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - lol honeycomb streams. These aren't perfectly positioned. Being out of grid, I can't blame you. Lol
2. 03:02:359 (2,3) - Spacing. Move closer together.

Done

I could nazi the combo numbers but I'm too tired.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The black and silver combo colors don't really contrast with the BG well enough imo, silver is annoying in tag and is at points in the map difficult to see. [Black and White BG with silver and black combo colors... =.=] Umm silver colour deleted... Actually i was waiting for some suggestions on what colour to use instead of these


Normal:

-- Inheriting sections increase volume by 1 tick, adjust start volume or change the volume back to the starting level at 01:43:220. Ops

01:33:128 (5) - New combo.
02:37:514 (5) - ^
Done

Hard:

-- You inheriting sections increase in volume for 1 tick. Adjust the start volume.

00:28:467 (5) - Minor spacing error.
00:29:013 (6) - ^
00:29:559 (7) - ^
Umm... i checked but it doesnt have any spacing error... Maybe you can specify more?
01:30:943 (1) - As red this is potentially annoying for some people because it blends in with the spinner.
02:35:330 (1) - ^
02:52:790 (1) - ^
Lol i already kind of knew that...

Insane:

00:26:830 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/4 streams spread out so far are annoying imo, though this is an insane...
00:28:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yeah 1/4 streams spread out this long really are annoying. (applies to others like it, but since this is an insane it is technically okay.) Lol, the only difference between hard and insane in these parts is the spacing... so yeah

00:58:206 (3) - Unsnapped Ops D:
03:04:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - lol? Yeah lol ;D!

Well this difficulty felt like a chore for me, the 1/4 streams were just constant and too liberally spaced imo, I'd get some more opinions on this though.

Pretty nice overall.

~ Star.

[Insane]
01:14:847 (1) - Deadly jump. Just try to make the jump easier..... Ops didnt wanted to make it so deadly, changed on both parts

That's all for me. I'm glad to see this song as a beatmap

Dusty wrote:

Tags: add "metal"? Added

[Hard]
IMO you have too many stacks, unstack them? Intentional. I had already planned to make hard full of stacks while insane has no stacks
01:33:944 (2,3,4,5) - Slightly weird how it goes back and forth. How is it that they are weird?

[Insane]
Those short spinners are annoying. intentional >=D

but overall I love the beatmap, it's both symmetrical/good-looking and fun

EDIT: Also, make the black combo color not totally black, more like really dark grey, so it doesn't blend so much with the skull Lol already been said to not use gray for tag purposes, so... purple will be!!!

LKs wrote:

LK STRICT MODDING~

NORMAL

[00:26:83]~[00:35:56] About this part,i feel not very clear.
my suggestion :this part has four (1 ,23, 45)---->[attachment=0:b514b].PNG[/attachment:b514b]

first and third (1 ,23, 45)=(Whistler ,Clap Whistler, Clap Whistler)
second and fourth (1 ,23, 45)=(Clap ,no Whistler, no Whistler)
Done

[00:57:79] new combo
[02:02:18] ^
All done

HARD

[00:24:64] new combo Done
[01:40:76] new combo or fix spacing Ive been told lots of times to remove nw combo at around these parts
[01:42:67] Whistler Done
[02:45:15] new combo Same reason as 01:40
[02:55:51] ^ Done

INSANE

[01:40:76] new combo
[01:51:13] (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) why so orderless? do something Its not orderless, 7 point stars, you know how to draw one right?
[02:37:78] (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
[02:45:15] new combo
[03:04:11] (1~16) how about set a new combo at 8 or 11? Ugh.. it will kind of look ugly... will wait for more opinions

excellent map! but im not very fond of this song,so no kudosu star.sry
star~

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Put RED offsets at 58477 and 122863 with the same BPM. The time signature resets at those points. Done (yay i got the bpm right! )

[Normal]
Feels a bit difficult for a Normal. That's just me though.
01:15:120 (3) - lol turn on grid snap, hold shift, and align with 2 (shift + grid snap on can actually do this o_O I only discovered this now) Done, lol
02:52:790 (1,1) - I have a feeling this is a bit out of place... Ughh i didnt wanted to put these parts full of circles placed on all the white ticks... but... will think about changing these spinners...

[Hard]
00:21:101 (1,2) - swap new combos
00:33:378 (5) - New Combo pl0x
Done
...woooh, lazing out all of a sudden. This is it for now.

Xgor wrote:

[Normal]
01:01:206 (3) - (Suggestion) I think this would be far more fun as one long slider instead of a short repeating slider.
01:05:571 (3) - ^
01:09:936 (3) - ^
02:05:592 (3) - ^
02:09:957 (3) - ^
02:14:322 (3) - ^
Done
02:52:517 (1,1) - (Suggestion) This would be better if you made a somewhat long slider here instead
Will think about it....

[Hard]
00:30:649 (6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I kinda dislike how crammed it is here.
Pretty good, maybe a bit steamy for an Hard (And it would be nice with a bit fewer streams) but it's at least Passable for me :3 Lol and its fcable to me as well, and ill leave this part the way it is, just to show everybody how crammed this map would be if they arent stacked >_>

[Insane]
I'm not so good so i can't mod this so well
I suggest that you lower the HP drain or add more beats on the chorus as the chorus currently is pretty hard to survive
I think the hp drain is fine as it is...
Great, I like how you mapped the chorus
*star*

happy30 wrote:

hey

the timing is a bit off on this map.
try removing every red line

and add:

BPM 219,94
Offset: 18.114

youll need to lower the slider velocity to match the slider speed with the new BPM
Done

[Normal]

Nothing wrong here, but I kinda dislike the kiai part, it's just a few sliders, and most of them look a bit ugly.
I had already planned to have thiese chorusese full of sliders. Im still a new mapper (no ranked map yet >_>) So yeah, if theres some ugly sliders tell me which and ill see what i can do. Also i changed some sliders to make them less repetitive
[hard] and [Insane] are nice

call me back for protobub will do after posting this