This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 17 marzo 2010 at 21:05:07

Artist: Chara
Title: Kataomoi (TV Size)
Source: Kimi Ni Todoke
Tags: Reaching You
BPM: 144
Filesize: 7134kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2,25 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (4,68 stars, 166 notes)
3. Normal (3,46 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Chara - Kataomoi (TV Size)
Download: Chara - Kataomoi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kimi Ni Todoke Ending. Easy, Normal and Hard by me, tmokb93.

Complete.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Waaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
StarreeeD!!! *_*

General:
BPM:144
Offset: 1061

Will Mod everything else when you resnap the circles x]
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Ok~

Easy:
General Comment:

• -I think this is a bit too hard, maybe get rid of some of the circles, and also replace some other circles with sliders? Normally my Easy Diffs range from 0.01~2.00 difficulty
  -I won't mod spacing and placing yet.

Normal:
General Comment:

• -Good difficulty for normal
  -A few beat placement mistakes, but lets fix that x]
  -I won't mod spacing and placing yet.

Hard:
General Comment:

• -A lot of New combos x_x

Lol sorry for the delay =S


Star~ x]

'Kay fixed, but i didn't follow many thing in easy's mods 'cause it is a rythm-following diff, not a voice-following one

Gezz saymun has quite a lot good points that you totally ignored that i noticed.....

[Video]
God, the quality is pretty bad at some parts.....

[Easy]
00:03:561 (5) - New combo
00:38:560 (3) - Move this one grid to the left so it aligns with (2) (Grid 3)'
Allot of 1/2s for an easy...

[Normal]
I think this difficulty would be better if you didn't forced yourself to follow yourself to strictly follow the lyrics....

Also those 10 beats long combos feels a bit too long for an normal

00:01:061 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Finish abuse!
00:01:269 (4) - Move this to 00:01:477
00:01:686 (5,6,7) - Ugh, stacks like this is awful
00:15:852 (4) - (Suggestion) Make this slider 1/2 longer
00:17:519 (3) - ^
00:23:769 (1,2,3,4) - Please stack all of these or none of them, right now it's looks kinda weird.
00:34:811 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Finish abuse again
00:58:560 (1) - I strongly suggest you move this to 00:57:727 and add another reverse arrow

[Hard]
00:16:269 (7) - Move this to 00:16:477
00:16:894 - Add circle
00:20:852 (5) - Make this a 1/2 long slider
00:21:477 (6) - Add circle
00:32:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please use 0,8 distance snap here or something, It almost looks like the 1/2s if you look on the spacing
00:34:602 (2,4,6) - Move these 1/2 forward on the time-line.
00:46:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Please use 0,8 distance snap here or something here too...

*star*

[general]

-change the offset xD I suggest 1.050 but no 1.061, remember make the new scale and snap, If you ask, why i have to do this change? well... i get 90% acc in easy ,89% in normal and 88% in hard whit your offset, maybe you need confirmation of more people since I'm not sure it is 1.050
-Add some skin =/
-Try to use normal hit, not only whistle and finish.

[easy]

-00:48:965 maybe new combo here or a slider in 00:48:340

[normal]

-i don't see problems

[hard]

-00:13:966(2) <-> 00:14:383 (1) trying to keep the same distance as before,it's only a suggestion, I see the decrease of the distance.


Pretty good i like the map =), good luck and my star.

Hi hi

Some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Add a Preview Point.

~Easy~
- I agree with Xgor, too many 1/2's for an Easy

00:09:383 (3) - Stack under (1)
01:04:382 (1) - Start at 01:04:069?

~Normal~
00:42:716 (1) - Maybe too short?
00:54:799 (6) - Fix Spacing.

~Hard~
No problems :3

Nice map, good luck!! *star*

Timing feels a little off ~ I'd suggest you get a second opinion, since timing isnt my strong point in modding, I cant help you out there.

other then that, great beatmap, no problems I can see from here

Star~

-Preview point on easy: 46,778
-Preview point on normal, hard:46,779 (make them the same)
-delete osb file and do full submit
-when you are using inherited timing sections for your hitsounds put them 1/4 before the note
-timing seems ok to me....but again this isn't my strong point either...I would just make sure the MAT that pubbles checks it carefully

Easy:
increase hp drain and overall diff by 1 or 2 ticks
00:15:841 (1,2) - switch new combo
00:21:049 (3) - new combo
00:21:882 (1) - remove new combo
00:22:716 (4) - new combo
00:24:382 (4) - ^
00:27:716 (4) - ^
00:47:715 (4) - new combo
00:48:757 (4) - add note
00:48:965 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:048 (2) - new combo

Normal:
00:01:049 (3) - new combo
00:03:550 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:716 (7) - new combo?
00:34:383 (3) - new combo
00:36:883 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:216 (1) - ^
00:54:799 (6) - new combo?
01:01:049 (3) - ^

Hard:
00:01:483 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I don't think any of the new combo's here are needed
00:54:383 (8,1) - switch new combo
01:01:049 (9,1) - ^
01:02:716 (1,2,1) - remove new combo's?
01:04:383 (1) - start at 01:04:174?

*star*

Italian modding~

Ottimizza l'offset: -5ms

[Easy]

Overall: I pattern sono orribili, le posizioni degli hitobjects sono molto casuali. Segui la prossima volta qualcosa di più ordinato (ad esempio posiziona gli hitcircles per formare dei poligoni, come dei pentagoni o triangoli). Con gli hitsounds hai fatto un'altro pasticcio. Pff, scarica l'osu alla fine del post <_<
Inoltre questa non è una Easy, e una Normal!


00:16:883 (4) Rifai questo slider simmetrico, come il precedente 00:15:216 (3)
00:15:841 (4) Troppo difficile per una easy; eliminalo
00:31:882 (8) Posizione orribile, spostalo più avanti in modo da formare un triangolo con il (7) e lo slider (6)
00:46:882 (1,2,3) Difficilissimo per una easy; eliminali e poi allunga il precedente spinner (00:41:882 (1)) fino a 00:46:882
01:04:173 (1) Silenzialo all'inizio e non alla fine (timing section)

Overall rating: 8/10

[Normal]

Overall: Come sopra, potresti fare di meglio per quanto riguarda lo stile e gli hitsounds. Non mi piace granchè come normal.

00:08:133 (1) Prolungalo di 1/1
00:20:841 (5) Offscreen, brutta posizione. Cambia anche l'orientamento dello slider
00:30:425 (1,2,3,4) Difficili per una Normal, non incrociarli così, falli più larghi
00:46:049 (1) Fallo iniziare da 00:45:216 (x) e fallo finire a 00:46:883
00:57:716 (1) Che brutta posizione, prova qualcosa come nella figura:


Overall rating 8/10

[Hard]

Overall: Migliore delle altre, ma continua a non piacermi. Posizioni casuali e abbastanza scontate, mi dispiace <_<'
La overall inoltre è alta e non si adatta al ritmo lento della canzone. Considera di diminuirla.

00:32:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Streams asimmetrici, riposizionali meglio
00:35:216 (4) Fuori ritmo, eliminala oppure spostala avanti di 1/4
00:35:841 (6) Eliminala, fuori ritmo come sopra
00:36:258 (1,2) 1/4 indietro
00:36:675 (x) aggiungi una nota qui
01:04:383 (1) Silenzialo all'inizio e non alla fine (timing section)

Overall rating: 8/10

Download: Chara - Kataomoi (TV Size) (tmokb93) [Easy].osu

[General]
- Offset: 209 - re snap all note ~
- Disable countdown

[Easy]
00:15:227 - this timing selection seem useless?
other are fine for me

nice song, starr ~

Easy
00:22:291 (3,3) - remove whistle from the beat and from the slider's end
00:25:625 (4,7) - ^
00:28:541 (3) - end it with finish
00:38:124 (2,4, 6) - no hitsounds here
00:40:624 (8) - new whistle beat here
00:47:708 - start kiai time here!
00:52:291 (4,6) - no sounds here
00:53:957 (spinner) - start it on 00:54:791 (same end point) If you do this, add a beat on 00:53:957!
01:01:041 (1,2,3,4) - remove hitsounds...

Normal
00:47:708 - like Easy

Hard
As seen on the other modes...

A last opinion, before starring this good map:
you aren't forced to set hitsounds on EVERY beat! Try to switch off some hitsounds along the modes and see if it's better. (maybe in sections with over 5 whistles or claps on a row!)

Offset: 1,043

~Easy~
00:26:041 (5) - new combo
00:39:374 (5) - ^
00:49:791 (5) - start on right red tick, no repeat
00:52:708 (5) - new combo
01:04:375 (1) - silence it, end on 01:08:542

~Normal~
01:04:375 (1) - silence it, end on 01:08:542

~Hard~
00:39:792 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:48:750 (4) - end on left white tick
00:49:792 (7) - move 1/2 right
00:50:208 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:625 (2) - new combo
01:04:375 (1) - silence it, end on 01:08:542


+Star

keep kiai time the same on all difficulties
delete osb file in folder
when changing the audio and putting custom hitsounds put the timing section 1/4 before the note starts (needs to be changed on all difficulties)

Easy:
00:04:792 (4) - add note?
00:18:542 (3) - add whistle
00:20:209 (2) - remove whistle from the end?
00:54:375 (5) - add note?

Normal:
remove break in this difficulty and map it

Hard:
00:01:042 (2) - new combo
00:32:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add whistles? (like other stream)
00:33:959 (10) - AIMod says to move this further away from 9..meh
00:35:001 (2,3,4,5) - I don't think this follows music particularly well
00:54:792 (2,4,5,6) - align?
00:54:376 (1,3) - ^
01:04:376 (1) - start at 01:04:168 like easy and normal? (and end at same place)

PM me after fixes and hopefully I can pubble

delete one of the soft hit-finishes in the folder as they both sound the same to me?
start kiai time at 00:47:709 end at 00:57:293 (on all difficulties)
(I can pubble after this)

Pubbled!!

detele .osb file and full submit

next are just suggestions ^^

Hard
00:24:168 (3,4) - shorten the slider half beat, reverse the slider or add note here 00:24:584, and move (4) half beat earlier

Normal
00:32:293 (8,9) - remove, and place a slider instead, start point at 00:32:293 - and end point at 00:32:709

Star + kudosu star 'cuz i love the song *w*

Gogogo! Fight! Here's a star!

Bubbled!