1. Easy (1,37 stars, 159 notes)
2. Hard (4,47 stars, 322 notes)
3. Normal (3,04 stars, 236 notes)

RandomJibberish wrote:

Nice song.

I like your use of speed changes :P

General:
Delete the .osb


Normal:
02:19:398 (1) - Hard to tell which way it goes. Doesn't really matter though, as it's basically a hold slider. I was so sure it'd go left but it went right. This kind of an illusion is unacceptable in my normal. Changed :D

Hard:
No problems apart from the slider similar to the above.

Great map, Star'd

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Artist should be "Midee, Prozax"? I searched and found it with and without capitalisation so I guess it doesn't matter that much. It was without capitalisation on the official oc remix site.
-- Maybe take "(OC ReMix)" out of song title and put it into tags. (I could only find the song listed as The Twelfth Commandment) In osu, almost all of the OC remixes have it mentioned in the title. All my oc remix maps have it (OC Remix) but some have it without the () so I have no idea what to do here.
-- Take "(Judgement Day)" out of source since it's in tags. Consider it done :D
-- Might want to add tag such as "ffvii" Sure
-- Delete .osb and full submit lol.

Normal:

-- Disable countdown? Okay

00:12:081 (1) - Finish? Naww, it will just overlap the cymbal(?) and sound silly.
00:17:203 (1) - Clap Sure
02:19:398 (1) - Way too confusing, it's hard to decide which way the slider is going, redraw it? Done
03:04:770 (3,4,1,2) - Rhythm might be a bit too confusing for normal. I don't want to change this D:

Hard:

-- Disable countdown? I really don't know why but okay :D

00:12:081 (1) - Finish? no
00:17:203 (7) - Clap? Sure
00:38:422 (8) - New combo? Sure
00:43:544 (8,9) - Might be nice if you moved these down two squares so they overlap with the position of 00:43:178 (7) Nah, I like how it plays currently.
00:55:983 (5) - New combo? Sure
00:58:178 (4) - Clap? If there were more claps somewhere around here I would do this. With just one I think its better off without them.
00:58:910 (8) - New combo? Done
01:01:837 (1,2) - A slider here might be nice, it would make 01:02:385 (2,3) - easier to hit. Great
01:07:690 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
01:18:666 (1,2,3) - Jump feels weird because there's nothing "jumpy" in the music. Its my foolish habit to put jumps allover the place randomly. Fixed
01:26:166 (1,2,3) - ^ Disagreed o/
02:03:300 (2) - This shape might be confusing for some, but it's much easier than the shape you made for Normal (which went the opposite direction) I'll let this remain. Fixed the one in normal.

Nice maps overall :D
~ Star.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i suggest change the combo colors... the grey color will make players confused (like failed.) I originally intented to change them becouse of tag play, but since now you can choose custom colors for tag team I am going to leave these colors.
if you won't map the shole song, cut off the parts after maybe 03:20

[Easy]
00:14:276 (2) - whistle? Sure
00:17:203 (2) - clap? Sure
00:31:471 (5) - remove whistle. Sure
01:37:690 (3,4) - make (3) symmetrical and move (4) 1 grid up. Sure
02:38:422 (4) - new combo and remove new combo on (1) Sure
02:57:446 (2,3) - spacing? Its just few grids. I wanted it to be symmetrically below 1 and 2

[Normal]
00:14:276 (3) - new combo and remove new combo on (1) Sure
00:30:007 (2) - remove whistle. Nah
02:10:617 (4,5,6) - 1 grid right? You are right. I don't know what I was doing.
03:04:764 (3,4) - i don't like this part.
03:06:227 (1,2) - ^ But, but, but... D:

[Hard]
00:13:544 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on next(1) Okay
00:15:007 (4) - ^ ^
00:17:568 (1) - remove new combo and new combo on (2) Okay
00:19:032 (1) - ^ I refuse.
00:42:995 (6,7,8) - strange to me. I like it.
00:53:056 (1) - stack with (2)? Ooh, better.
01:11:715 (1) - break after this note is too short, remove plz But why? Players can die becouse of drain without this break. I'll remove it though. But I don't understand
02:03:300 (2) - i suggest a remap. But... I don't wanna do that.

star

Mukku wrote:

01:11:715 (1) - break after this note is too short, remove plz But why? Players can die becouse of drain without this break. I'll remove it though. But I don't understand

Garven wrote:

[General]
Combo colors: Tag mode players are going to hate you. :P I decided to let it be since you can now change tag colors manually in multiplayer! At least that was possible when I last time played tag D:
Sometimes the hit sound volume raises up a bit too high compared to the song's crecendos. Give it another listen and see if anything sticks out bad to you. Not sure about this. Will fix once I feel bad about something here :D

[Normal]
The slider speed changes were getting disorienting after a bit. Sometimes it would make sense with the music, other times, it didn't feel like a good spot to slow down at. Meh, looks like everyone else loves them though.
01:53:788 (3,1) - This anti-jump intentional? Or is it due to the .5 bpm that has little to no musical cue of it's approach? I actually wanted it just to look symmetrical. Fixed

[Hard]
The slider speed changes felt a lot better for this difficulty than the normal diff's.
01:27:629 (1,2,3,4) - Check your spacing here. Intentional. Acceleration spacing.

Good stuff.