This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 June 2010 at 01:33:58

Artist: The Beatles
Title: Hello Goodbye
Tags: RandomJibberish classic old Magical Mystery Tour
BPM: 95
Filesize: 3515kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Hello (0.42 stars, 97 notes)
2. Jibber's Goodbye (4.37 stars, 237 notes)
3. Stay (2.61 stars, 193 notes)

Download: The Beatles - Hello Goodbye
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Woo beatles.

Wow, a huge number of your sliders are a half beat too long or short to fit with the music. Remember that the white ticks are onbeat, so the large majority of beats and sliders should hit there.

Also, you have some notes on blue ticks, which in this song should only really be used in harder difficulties for streams or stacks, or when you want to make an object hit a -bye or -lo.

Fix these so it's playable and I'll remod and star~

'K, it's a lot better now.

00:05:049 (1,2,1) - Make each of these a half beat longer. Make sure you adjust the spacing accordingly though.
00:12:485 (1,2) - If the spacing after you've done that suggestion lets you, center these.
00:19:517 (2) - Make a half beat longer or shorter.
00:22:277 (1) - Make a half beat shorter
00:30:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Check your spacing, and either make (6) a beat longer, a beat shorter, or add a beat on the white tick right after it ends.
00:35:029 (1) - Not snapped: I'd suggest you extend it so it's a beat long. Make sure you fix the spacing after it too.
00:35:938 (2) - I'd probably make this a beat long, but it's not neccesary.
00:37:788 (1) - Not snapped, make it a beat long then fix spacing after it.
00:44:213 (3) - Not snapped, extend to next tick and fix spacing after it.
00:45:744 (1) - ^
00:47:594 - I'd add a beat here, but it's not neccesary.
01:06:222 (4) - Not snapped, extend to next tick.
01:08:977 (3) - Not snapped, shorten so it's a beat long then add another repeat.
01:24:686 (4,5) - Spacing
01:25:901 - Adding a beat here would make it a lottle more intuitive IMO
01:26:879 (7,8) - Spacing
01:27:407 (8,1,2) - Shorten so it lands on ticks
01:33:120 (1) - Lengthen to the tick then fix spacing afterwards.
01:34:629 (1) - I don't think a new combo's neccesary.
01:44:293 (4) - I'd either remove this note or add a note after.
01:53:082 (1) - Shorten to the tick.
01:58:498 (1,2,1,2) - Make all these a half beat shorter so they land on the white tick.
02:22:719 (1) - Snap to the previous tick
02:27:600 (2) - Snap to the white tick
02:32:106 (8) - ^
02:34:490 (1) - ^
02:37:206 (1) - ^
02:45:333 (1) - Move the end ahead a beat.

I wouldn't map the heya heyah-lo bit and leave it for the result screen, but if you want to keep it it isn't timed correctly at some points for some reason, so it'd take some messing with.

Assuming you fix all this, star'd~

Oh, and I made a diff.

Download: The Beatles - Hello Goodbye (IAmNotShinta) [Jibber's Goodbye].osu

Thanks for your diff. It's really awesome.

Updating Hello.

EDIT: Very helpful. I've left the end part in there for now, see if anything can be done, but if not I will remove it.

I will mod this and create a difficulty later. Remind me. I'm quite busy/forgetful.

Hello:

00:10:023 (1) - Personally, I'd end this at 00:11:869.
00:19:517 (2) - This should end at either 00:21:064 or 00:21:682.
00:22:277 (1) - I'd end this spinner at 00:26:031.
00:33:195 (6) - This slider should probably end at 00:33:508.
00:37:788 (1) - End at 00:38:405.
00:39:015 (2) - End at 00:39:624.
00:43:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I love this, it's fantastic! =)
01:21:153 (1) - I would end this at 01:23:207.
01:28:900 (1) - I think this should finish at 01:29:506.
01:50:681 (1) - Try ending at 01:51:305 and see how it works out.

Really not a fan of 02:50:124 and onward. What Jibber said.

Jibber's Goodbye:

01:38:816 (2,3,4) - I don't know if I'd put three hit circles here, I'd say remove the one at 01:38:969 (3).

Other than that, I think it looks pretty good to be honest.

I'm going to work on a difficulty too, guys! :lolwut:

Edit: Why the fcuk is one of the tags Hatsune Miku? Really? Get rid of that and put "Beatles" or something.

Powerdrone311 wrote:

Hello:

00:10:023 (1) - Personally, I'd end this at 00:11:869.
00:19:517 (2) - This should end at either 00:21:064 or 00:21:682.
00:22:277 (1) - I'd end this spinner at 00:26:031.
00:33:195 (6) - This slider should probably end at 00:33:508.
00:37:788 (1) - End at 00:38:405.
00:39:015 (2) - End at 00:39:624.
00:43:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I love this, it's fantastic! =)
01:21:153 (1) - I would end this at 01:23:207.
01:28:900 (1) - I think this should finish at 01:29:506.
01:50:681 (1) - Try ending at 01:51:305 and see how it works out.

Really not a fan of 02:50:124 and onward. What Jibber said.

Jibber's Goodbye:

01:38:816 (2,3,4) - I don't know if I'd put three hit circles here, I'd say remove the one at 01:38:969 (3).

Other than that, I think it looks pretty good to be honest.

I'm going to work on a difficulty too, guys! :lolwut:

Edit: Why the fcuk is one of the tags Hatsune Miku? Really? Get rid of that and put "Beatles" or something.

Thanks for the mod, didn't agree with all your points but most of it was helpful. I'll let Jibber change his diff.

I will definately be deleting the last bit, but the fade to black doesn't work when I do. Not a clue why.

I need to finish my difficulty auuuughhh...

Done~

Download: The Beatles - Hello Goodbye (IAmNotShinta) [Powerdrone's Insane].osu

modding this because you now have a desu miku avatar I randomly clicked a link

Mostly combo-remarking suggestions, don't kudo if you're not changing anything, of course.

[General]
Set a preview point (go to Timing -> the most bottom option)

[Shinta's Hello]
00:40:233 (3,4,5) - Perhaps move them closer to (2), but it's intuitive so I guess you can leave it the way it is.
01:27:407 (9) - New combo
01:28:900 (1) - Remove new combo
02:29:999 (4) - New combo
02:54:646 (1) - Remove new combo
02:57:963 (2,3,4,5) - Move them closer to each other, or move them farther from 1.

[Jibber's Goodbye]
00:27:296 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:726 (1) - Remove new combo
01:41:543 (1) - Remove new combo
01:43:078 (6) - New combo
01:44:597 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:522 (4) - New combo
01:48:843 (1) - Remove new combo
01:50:376 (6) - New combo
02:26:068 (1) - Remove new combo

[Powerdrone311's Go]
00:13:385 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:099 (7) - New combo
00:31:008 (1) - Remove new combo
00:34:421 (1) - Remove new combo
00:35:029 (3) - New combo
00:40:540 (8) - End this slider on the white tick (00:40:846)
00:50:683 (5) - New combo
01:16:895 (x) - Add a note here
01:45:522 (10) - New combo
01:46:136 (1) - Remove new combo
01:47:493 (x) - Add a note here
02:00:933 (6) - New combo
02:28:506 (1) - Remove new combo
02:29:702 (3) - New combo
02:41:102 (8) - New combo

Edit: You should update this sometime, maybe :c

I'll edit my diff then re-post it. Sound good?

Sorry for forgetting to look at your mod

I'll leave RJ and Drone to their diffs

Powerdrone311 wrote:

I'll edit my diff then re-post it. Sound good?

Yeah

Thar

Download: The Beatles - Hello Goodbye (IAmNotShinta) [Jibber's Goodbye].osu

If you're calling your diff Goodbye change my diff to something else, like Jibber's Yes or Go or something. I think it'd make more sense.

crazy timing

[Hello]

1/6?!
Lower the beat volume?

00:55:504 - end slider here?
01:21:153 - slider don't end right
01:27:407 - ^
01:30:104 - ^ + wrong middle
01:48:543 - ^
02:05:703 - ^ + wrong middle
02:37:206 - ^ + wrong middle
02:50:727 (2,3) ^ + something wrong with timing here

[Goodbye]

Lower the beat volume?

00:10:638 (4) - end this slider at 00:11:869
00:12:177 - add circle
00:13:385 - start first spinner here?
00:16:768 - end second spinner here?
00:18:899 (1) - end this slider at 00:19:827?
00:20:291 (2) - move it to 1/4 left
00:21:218 (4) - move it to 1/4 right
00:21:683 (5) - move it to 1/2 right, delete repeat
maybe add another repeat to (2) and (4)

00:26:351 - end slider here, delete finish
00:26:827 (1-4) really cool! Maybe add claps to (1) and (3)?
00:30:705 (4) - hmm, this slider don't end right, start it at 00:31:008 and end at 00:32:258, add circle at 00:30:705.
00:40:846 - end slider here, finish sound?
00:43:448 (1-4) - weird, move it to 1/4 left
00:52:492 (1-3) - really weird sliders,
00:57:171 (1) - move it to 1/4 left
I get tired here. Too many blue ticks

[Jibber's Goodbye]

awesome!

some minor bugs:
00:12:485 - slider don't end right
01:30:703 - ^
02:18:173 - ^
and maybe more

gyt wrote:

some minor bugs:
00:12:485 - slider don't end right
01:30:703 - ^
02:18:173 - ^
and maybe more

Unfortunately these are unavoidable due to the timing. It's not noticable while playing though, so it's not really a problem.

I think, due to the ridiculously accurate timing, lowering the hit volume for my diffs should be very tedious and I probably won't. Also, I mapped Hello in 1/2, must have accidentally pressed something or something in the editor, lol.

I'll look a the rest of your mod when I'm not really tired, anyway. Thanks.

I think, due to the ridiculously accurate timing, lowering the hit volume for my diffs should be very tedious and I probably won't.

Use shift key to select several timing sections.

Beatles, nice
sorry for the wait

[General]
- What a red line, where did you get all those timing?
- Consider cutting the mp3 if your not mapping till the end
- Random Jibberish is already in the tags delete jibber

[Hello]
Re-snap all notes, there are 2 unsnapped objects check the AImod
There are some breaks that I think is too short you probably won't need it like in 00:41:152
00:10:023 (1) - this slider touching the hp bar, lowered it down
01:25:575 (5) - NC ( new combo )

[Stay]
Please re-snap all notes, there are 20 unsnapped objects
hmm the combo are not consistent there are combo that last until 12 then 6 then 12 again this confuse me

[Jibber's Goodbye]
My fave diff, nice flow
Why is there a Kiai when the map is already over?
01:58:195 (7) - remove clap

That's all I can found good map
Star~

Diff Updated
Download: The Beatles - Hello Goodbye (IAmNotShinta) [Jibber's Goodbye].osu

Also get rid of the old BGs in the folder and full submit

Hello
02:05:703 (2) - Flip this horizontal to flow with the pattern.

Stay
00:05:677 (3) - Move this 1/2 forward
00:08:177 (3) - ^
00:22:128 (1) - End 1/4 earlier
00:26:827 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier
00:27:764 (3) - Move 1/4 later
00:52:492 (1) - End 1/4 earlier
00:54:286 (2) - ^
00:56:114 (2) - ^
01:00:501 (1) - End 3/4 earlier
01:04:217 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extend by 1/4
01:05:916 (2) - Move 1/4 later and extend by 1/4
01:07:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move 1 and 2 2/4 later then move 3 1/1 earlier, and get rid of 4 and 5.
01:27:407 (1) - End 1/4 earlier.
01:28:748 (1) - ^
01:29:954 (1) - Start 1/4 later
01:34:629 (1) - Extend by 1/4
01:35:215 (2) - Start 1/4 later and shorten by 1/4
01:46:443 (5) - Shorten by 1/4
01:48:543 (7) - ^
01:49:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move 1/4 earlier
01:53:382 (4,5,6,7) - Move 1/2 later
02:05:394 (1) - Lengthen by 1/2
02:06:613 (2) - ^
02:07:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move 1/4 later
02:11:645 (1) - Shortern by 1/4
02:15:496 (1) - ^
02:19:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move 1/4 earler
02:21:650 (9) - This note's unnecessary, delete it
02:23:022 (1) - Shortern by 1/4
02:23:781 (2,3,4) - Move 1/4 earlier
Fucking hell

Jibber's Goodbye
What's with the weird kiai on this diff? Get rid of it, or at least make it regular.
01:43:230 (2) - Lengthen by 1/4
01:56:988 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern's weird, move these up 1 grid.
01:58:498 - Map some of this break

This map pissed me off... where's my sandwich...