Blue Dragon wrote:

Easy
00:14:966 (1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1) - No, please. This is not a mappable part for easy. Follows piano and claps (of the song) if you listen carefully.
01:01:110 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:565 (3) - add new combo
01:09:748 (1) - remove this and insert a break Nah... unless other peeps have probs.
01:56:576 (1) - same as 01:01
02:00:031 (3) - same as 01:04
02:05:214 (1) - long spinner :< is it really... a bad thing?
02:26:474 (1,2,3) - make sliders, like... go to the center can't, because of spacing ;_;
02:57:198 (5) - ugly and doesn't fit
03:00:653 (1) - long spinner same here.

Normal
01:04:997 (3) - new combo?
01:09:748 (1) - pretty long spinner =="
01:19:323 (1) - remove new combo...
01:19:757 (2) - ...and add here
02:00:463 (3) - same as 01:04
02:05:214 (1) - same as 01:09
02:29:073 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really can't understand the new combos if i didn't, it'd be an unnecessarily long Combo.

Insane
00:15:831 (5) - align with 4
00:42:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA XD

Star

JarJarJacob wrote:

Your timing is...off? Quite. That black hitcircle colour is hard to see against the background, might want to change it. This map is lacking decent-sized breaks, use them. Insane has unsnapped objects.

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Easy]
00:52:473 (3) - new combo
01:47:939 (3) - ^
02:01:759 (2) - ^
02:43:378 (3) - ^
02:49:856 (2) - ^
02:57:198 (5) - ^ Fixed all.

[Normal]
00:23:843 (6) - add clap
00:28:618 (1) - whitsle at last
00:30:137 (2) - clap at last
00:31:439 (3) - make symmetry or flip vertically 00:31:439 (3) to be good-looking layout
01:06:725 (1) - add one more return
01:19:323 (6) - add clap
01:25:616 (2) - clap at last
01:26:918 (3) - make symmetry or flip vertically 01:28:654 (4) to be good-looking layout
01:54:849 (3) - add clap at second return
02:02:191 (1) - add one more return
02:21:710 (1) - add clap
02:28:640 (4) - add clap at the beginning Fixed all as well (i think)

[Insane]
00:16:264 (6) - align with 00:15:831 (5) ?? already aligned
00:23:843 (5) - add clap
00:25:579 (4) - ^
00:27:315 (4) - ^
00:32:524 (4) - ^
00:33:826 (3) - add clap at the beginning
00:39:468 (7) - add clap
00:41:204 (5) - ^
00:43:591 (13) - ^
00:45:327 (12) - ^
00:56:791 (2) - ^
00:59:383 (3) - ^
01:00:247 (7) - ^
01:03:702 (4) - add clap at the beginning
01:05:429 (4) - ^
01:19:323 (4) - add clap
01:22:795 (4) - ^
01:28:004 (4) - ^
01:29:740 (4) - ^
01:34:947 (6) - ^
01:48:802 (5) - ^
01:52:257 (2) - ^
01:55:713 (7) - ^
01:59:168 (4) - add clap at the beginning
02:00:895 (4) - ^
02:04:350 (6) - ^
02:16:080 (2) - add clap at the last
02:23:009 (2) - ^
02:30:372 (6) - add clap
02:32:104 (6) - ^
02:44:241 (5) - ^
02:48:344 (5) - align with 02:48:128 (4)
02:50:288 (3) - add clap
02:51:152 (7) - ^
02:54:607 (4) - add clap at the beginning
02:56:334 (4) - ^

Breeze wrote:

I got a BPM : 138.5 Offset : 21281
you didn't need to use so many timing section, there are few songs need to use many timing section
your notes are off at the middle part
I could help you to ask for a timing help if you want
send me a forum if you have changed BPM and Offset I posted
Or tell me you want a timing help, so I would ask other players who good at timing to have a timing check

Breeze wrote:

OK, after you changed BPM
Recheck

[General]

1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it and full submit

[Easy]

1. 00:17:597 - spinner starts here sounds better but, makes more sense for it to start where it is already D:
2. 00:22:146 - 00:42:074 - I think these notes are hard for beginner, 'cause they are not apart same beat
   I suggest use slider to make them easier will change if i really MUST change it, or someone else suggest to as well
3. 00:56:586 (1,2) - a slider at 00:56:586 - 00:57:453 and a note at 00:57:886 fit more imo
4. 01:16:731 - 01:37:525 - hard to beginner, use slider or put note at every two white tick, that would be easy
5. 01:52:037 (1,2) - same to 00:56:586 (1,2)

[Normal]

1. 01:41:207 - 01:44:889 - too empty there, add something or add break was originally a break here... don't know what happened. Fixed~

[Insane]

1. 00:58:211 (1,2) - move them 1/8 back so they would fit "haha" :/ a bit hard to hit, but I thinks it's OK for a insane diff.
   01:53:554 (1,2) - ^
   02:49:005 (1,2) - ^

imo, it sounds too early when I move them back.

now have a star

Leorda wrote:

Hello!

[General]
1) Source? no source. Just a song I heard from the radio that I really liked

[Easy]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

[Normal]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

[Insane]
02:17:380 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it

GREAT MAP!
STAR

DJPop wrote:

Hisounds are too loud, volume shouldn't be more than 70.
BPM: 138.498 <<< you don't have to change it anyway =P lol, will save myself trouble and not change. But if someone else thinks this timing is good, will change


~Easy~
01:16:731 (1) - add hitfinish?

~Normal~
00:19:546 (1,2) - wrong spacing
00:23:879 (6,1) - ^
01:19:330 (6,1) - ^
02:33:842 (1) - move the end 1/4 right

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star

termerys wrote:

[Insane]
[suggestion]: i think there is too much notes, I suggest you to make some notes into sliders (it's up to you :3)
anyway, it such a great map!!

liknkin park!!!

JInxyjem wrote:

You should remove Black and then make Grey a little darker (but not totally black), its hard to see. ok~

All Difficulties
00:49:655 - Make kiai start here instead of earlier.
01:45:106 - ^
02:40:557 - ^ IMO, Kiai looks better when it starts from where it is already ^^

Starred.