1. Advanced (2.3 stars, 117 notes)
2. Average (1.57 stars, 79 notes)
3. Hanjamon's Muzukashii (2.02 stars, 156 notes)
4. Hanjamon's Oni (2.65 stars, 225 notes)
5. Relaxing (1.37 stars, 51 notes)
6. Tough (2.9 stars, 149 notes)

Hi Gero \o/ .Let's start!

1. The background quality is really poor and the first guy head looks a bit hidden for the life bar. So, I suggest you one of these background: (1024x768)
   
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2. 01:00:474 Would be better if spinner from all difficulties ends here, since here ends music

1. 00:24:245 (4,1) OMG These stacked objects </3
2. 00:13:567 (2) The slidershape doesn't look very well here with the previous object in my opinion. What about to replace this slider for a simple curved slider?. Something like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:32:889 (5,1) *spanish turn on* Honestamente siento que es una muy mala idea hacer uso de 1/2 ritmo. No necesitas seguir precisamente la música tal y como suena en una easy. Te recomendaría que el slider comienze en la posición del circle actual *spanish turn off*
4. 00:32:889 NC should be here for your consistency pattern
5. 00:45:092 (1) A Finish in the beginning of this slider fits very well with the music. You should try it!
6. 00:49:669 (2) Honestly the Clap from the slider end sounds a bit weird. Music doesn't need a Clap on there. So , I suggest you to remove this Clap and add it at the beginning as you did in rest of map
7. 00:57:041 (1) Same suggestion about 1/2 rhythm. But . . . if you don't want to change it , move this circle to x:352 y:196 for a better flow

1. 00:04:923 (1,2) The way how it flows could be good for a Hard diff or Insane maybe, but here feels a bit weird . Maybe you want to try something different or maybe you have a better idea than me:
   
   Example

   
2. 00:08:482 (1) In my opinion , ignoring a Clap in a music like this one is a bad idea. 00:08:991 I have the need to press something or listen to Clap here, Maybe you could use some slider-tick or cut this slider
3. 00:31:872 (2) Move this slider some grids up since the beginning of the slider is going out of gameplay area a bit
4. 00:47:126 (1) Same suggestion about flow |00:04:923 (1,2)|
5. 00:49:160 (1) I think you are missing a Clap at slider end. I hope you are missing it since the slider sounds weird without it
6. 00:51:194 (1,2,3) The pattern that you are using to follow the music here doesn't play very well in my opinion. You did a good pattern rhythm in 00:47:126 .So, maybe you should make at the same way

1. 00:01:363 (2,3,4) I'm not sure about this triplet. Feels weird while playing, I don't know what do you think about this
2. 00:01:872 (5,6,7) (^)
3. 00:47:635 You did a good rhythm pattern, but I think I have a better idea about this. 00:47:635 (2) - Maybe you could replace this slider for a circle and 00:48:143 (3) could starts in 00:47:889 and finally add a circle in 00:48:652. Similar as you did it in 00:51:448
   
   Example

   
4. 00:49:669 (2) I'm not really sure, but I think that you are missing a Clap in the beginning of this slider

1. Widescreen support should be disabled.
2. Spears in the tags doesn't make much sense, please remove it. Yes, I know that it goes with Britney, and yes, it's still does'nt make much sense.
3. The following hitsound is unused:
   
   1. soft-slidertick2.wav

1. 00:17:635 (2,3,2) - can't say that it is completely safe. Let's try to go for something less tricky, in order not to confuse beginners.
2. 00:24:245 (4,1) - minor - it is recommended to avoid stacks in Easy diffs as they might feel tricky and uncomfortable for players.
   Note: 00:32:889 (5,1) - yeah.
   
   Neat.

1. Circle Size 3,5 should match nicelly here, give it a try!
2. 00:55:770 (2,3) - these two are a different sound/instrument. Consider unstacking (4), for a better representation of the song.
   
   Nicely done!

1. 00:00:855 (1) - this might get overlapped with score meter. Move it higher, if possible.
   
   Short streams, triplets and jumps fit well with the song, but don't work with the spread.

Everything is just fine, but I recommend you to make an Advanced diff, as it will fit nicely and make the set pleasant for any-level players.

Jerry wrote:

Here's my taiko mod~

• [Hanjamon's Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:008 - I would suggest filling this gap with a kat because it feels way too empty imo no, a break is necessary
   
   
2. 00:26:279 - ^ Same, add a kat here ^
   
   
3. 00:32:889 - add a don here to accompany the big kat because as it is, the big kat feels very awkward to play since i can't add a 2/1 break there i want to keep this more easy so, no change
   
   
4. 00:34:541 - This kat triplet here is very unnatural, delete the kat here at the centre so that it'll flow better as a kkk k k D pattern i think is good for the spread, the Oni has a stream, anyways, i'll think about it
   
   
5. 00:42:550 - I suggest adding a kat here, it feels too empty breaks..
   
   
6. 00:54:753 - ^ Same, add a kat here same :c

• [Hanjamon's Oni]

1. 00:05:177 (20) - Change this to don so that there is a consistent rhythm with 00:03:143 (13) - nup, this will break my consistency, i'm following k in these parts because fits good with the vocals imo
   
   
2. 00:13:313 (51) - ^, Same, change this to don so that there is a consistent rhythm with 00:11:279 (44) - ^ :c
   
   
3. 00:17:889 (67) - kdkdk kinda ruins the flow for this part imo, try changing this note to don? kdkdk i think flows good and fits good with the vocals
   
   
4. 00:28:185 (116) - Move this note to 00:27:931 -? The pattern flows better my consistency :c
   
   
5. 00:35:558 (148) - This kkd sounds kinda rough and unnatural to play imo. Remove this kat? it's fine with kkd imo >.<

That's all from me, hopefully my mod is helpful!

Irreversible wrote:

Hey Gero al Burro~

[Muzukashii]

Let's try to mod taiko for once haha, feel free to deny all

00:42:550 - How comes you ignored this triplet? changed some parts of the kiai, for make the triplet possible
00:53:228 (147) - Idk why but i think d fits more. keep with k for consistency with the oni

Not much to say, but what confuses me is that you sometimes follow the vocals excessively, then you ignore them, and you basically ignore all heavy drums too sometimes D: I'm not sure whether it's good or not, but I feel like stating my opinion.

[Oni]

oh, i enjoyed that one a lot, gj! nice to hear that ^^


Good luck !

Hanjamon wrote:

Irreversible wrote:

Hey Gero al Burro~

[Muzukashii]

Let's try to mod taiko for once haha, feel free to deny all

00:42:550 - How comes you ignored this triplet? changed some parts of the kiai, for make the triplet possible
00:53:228 (147) - Idk why but i think d fits more. keep with k for consistency with the oni

Not much to say, but what confuses me is that you sometimes follow the vocals excessively, then you ignore them, and you basically ignore all heavy drums too sometimes D: I'm not sure whether it's good or not, but I feel like stating my opinion.

[Oni]

oh, i enjoyed that one a lot, gj! nice to hear that ^^


Good luck !

Thanks for the mod :3

Update ----> http://puu.sh/i56Zb/d9ff5674e8.rar

1. Can you make hitnormal a little louder? Or replace it with something else. I absolutely can't hear some of them, like 00:35:940 - this one on Normal.

1. 00:24:245 (4,1) - once players see this, they will expect 00:32:889 (5,1) - this to be an 1/1 pattern, as well. Which is kind of confusing. :c

1. 00:00:347 (1,1) - I did math, it's ~500ms of recovery time, which is, unfortunately, not enough. :c

1. For a low-BPM map I'd go with lower AR. 7,2 would fit slightly better, if you ask me.

1. Just a little unsure about the diffname. Just try to consider it.

-Bakari- wrote:

So sweet.

[General]

1. Can you make hitnormal a little louder? Or replace it with something else. I absolutely can't hear some of them, like 00:35:940 - this one on Normal. Replaced by a new one.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:24:245 (4,1) - once players see this, they will expect 00:32:889 (5,1) - this to be an 1/1 pattern, as well. Which is kind of confusing. :c Fixed in another way, I hope it's fine now.

[Average]

1. 00:00:347 (1,1) - I did math, it's ~500ms of recovery time, which is, unfortunately, not enough. :c Fixed.

[Tough]

1. For a low-BPM map I'd go with lower AR. 7,2 would fit slightly better, if you ask me. You're right.

[Brooks]

1. Just a little unsure about the diffname. Just try to consider it. I talked with you about this, it's fine as is imo.

Get back to me once this is checked.

MkGuh wrote:

Brooks

I didn't found anything wrong with your map, so i'll just give my sugestions
00:33:143 (5) - i think it's a good idea to convert this slider into a stream. Is not a good idea because is overmap.
00:56:787 (3,1) - - you could make a triplet here Same as above.

1. 00:33:143 (92) - Esta nota se siente algo random a pesar de ser de las más fuertes en la música, deberías poner una nota al menos para el patrón de las percusiones, puedes probar estas alternativas o puede ser alguna otra que tu creas conveniente.
   
   
2. 00:50:177 - Estarás de acuerdo que acá se siente vacío, prueba añadiendo un don. No hay mucho de que preocuparse ya que esta parte está un poco más basada en 1/1.
3. 00:52:465 (144,146) - Remueve una de estas dos notas, considerando como mapeaste esta sección un pattern de 5 notas rompe esa consistencia, además de que esta sección no requere énfasis.

1. 00:18:016 (68,70) - No sé que piensas de remover estas notas para dar un poco más de énfasis a las voces, que son más notables.
2. 00:34:923 - 00:38:991 - Esta sección algo muy densa comparada con el resto del kiai y a como está mapeada en el Muzukashii, si pudieses simplificar un poco esta sección para que sea más acorde a ambas estaría muy bien. Pudiese bastar con remover 00:37:211 (157,158) - .
3. 00:41:024 - 00:43:058 - Algo similar en esta parte.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola.

[General]
No recomendaría mapear el inicio de la canción (en Taiko al menos), ya que las música en si no es tan clara, pero en caso de que lo quieras conservar, puedes mapear un poco más a las voces. eliminadas algunas notas para dejarlo similar al ejemplo


[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:143 (92) - Esta nota se siente algo random a pesar de ser de las más fuertes en la música, deberías poner una nota al menos para el patrón de las percusiones, puedes probar estas alternativas o puede ser alguna otra que tu creas conveniente.
   
   
2. 00:50:177 - Estarás de acuerdo que acá se siente vacío, prueba añadiendo un don. No hay mucho de que preocuparse ya que esta parte está un poco más basada en 1/1.
3. 00:52:465 (144,146) - Remueve una de estas dos notas, considerando como mapeaste esta sección un pattern de 5 notas rompe esa consistencia, además de que esta sección no requere énfasis.
   
   todo aplicado aqui, espero no sea un problema los breaks..

[ Oni]

1. 00:18:016 (68,70) - No sé que piensas de remover estas notas para dar un poco más de énfasis a las voces, que son más notables.done
2. 00:34:923 - 00:38:991 - Esta sección algo muy densa comparada con el resto del kiai y a como está mapeada en el Muzukashii, si pudieses simplificar un poco esta sección para que sea más acorde a ambas estaría muy bien. Pudiese bastar con remover 00:37:211 (157,158) - . done
3. 00:41:024 - 00:43:058 - Algo similar en esta parte. eliminado 00:42:423 -

Buena suerte :3c

SPOILER

16:23 Gero: well, that was fast (?)
16:23 Lanturn: eh? lol
16:24 Gero: that I come back to talk with you xD
16:24 Lanturn: oh haha
16:24 Lanturn: I have no idea what I'm doing
16:24 Gero: playing (?
16:25 Lanturn: well
16:25 Lanturn: If I was gonna mod this
16:25 Lanturn: I'd have no idea what to say
16:25 Lanturn:
16:26 Gero: well you can suggest patterns that fits with the song, for example I saw something that is kinda weird
16:26 Gero: w8
16:29 Gero: 00:08:482 (29,30,31,32,33) - this one, I think that flows better with ddkkd instead ddkdk
16:31 Gero: 00:08:991 - also why not since this is a strong beat so would be better using one d instead of k
16:31 Lanturn: only reason i can think is maybe the guitar strums
16:31 Lanturn: then again, that would make 00:07:719 (27) - a k if he was following it
16:32 Lanturn: so your reason would definitely be valid XD
16:32 Lanturn: 00:07:719 (27,28) - like for all of these, I would think it would be k d instead of d k
16:32 Lanturn: there's a bunch of them in the song
16:33 Gero: I just found that, yeah that one is a nice suggestion
16:35 Gero: 00:43:821 - maybe a d here?
16:35 Lanturn: possibly
16:36 Lanturn: 00:32:635 - I've never been a fan of these because of how they still give a strong beat here. I feel like it should just be a triplet or something
16:37 Gero: lol I was writing about it right now
16:37 Gero: ddd is nice
16:37 Lanturn: lol
16:38 Lanturn: Oni doesn't need gaps or whatever right? The 1/1s are more than enough?
16:38 Gero: Oni is fine with 1/1
16:38 Gero: due the BPM is so slow
16:38 Lanturn: I remember Charlotte or Nardo telling me about this or something
16:39 Lanturn: 00:44:075 (180,181,182,184,185) - doesn't it make sense to have the triplet between (184,185) instead?
16:39 Gero: of course you can suggest a break if you find a good place
16:39 Lanturn: ok XD
16:42 Lanturn: Is it worth mentioning that compared to the rest of the song, 00:33:906 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - feels really dense?
16:45 Gero: nah the last stream is fine
16:46 Lanturn: ok XD
16:46 Lanturn: didn't think it would be a problem
16:46 Gero: nuu
16:46 Gero: is Oni pls
16:46 Lanturn: haha
16:46 Lanturn: I guess it's pretty light for an oni
16:46 Gero: yeah it is
16:46 Lanturn: I could probably FC this after playing it 20-30 times XD
16:47 Gero: use DT
16:47 Gero: xD
16:47 Lanturn: haha nooo
16:47 Gero: HD+FL then
16:47 Gero: jk
16:47 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707683 Jamie Lynn Spears - FOLLOW ME [Hanjamon's Muzukashii]]
16:47 Gero: 00:09:753 - as you can see there is a 2/1 break so is fine
16:48 Gero: 00:17:889 - here again
16:48 Lanturn: Yeah I noticed a lot of 2/1 breaks in it
16:48 Lanturn: I was like.. sweet
16:48 Lanturn: this person knows what they're doing
16:48 Lanturn: really consistent 2/1
16:49 Lanturn: though i think he could add one more around the 00:30:346 (85,86,87,88,89,90) - range
16:49 Lanturn: maybe delete 90?
16:50 Gero: yeah why not
16:50 Lanturn: then maybe one more sometime in the last half of the kiai
16:50 Lanturn: no idea which though
16:50 Gero: 00:33:652 (93) - here is a good one
16:50 Gero: delete this
16:50 Lanturn: oh nice
16:50 Gero: 00:32:380 - instead 9'
16:50 Gero: 90*
16:50 Lanturn: yeah
16:51 Gero: you know K K K ins constant
16:51 Lanturn: yeah thats true
16:52 Gero: 00:42:041 - here is a 2/1 breaks but somehow I think it needs one at the last part but I don't know where tbh
16:52 Gero: 00:53:736 (148) - maybe this
16:52 Gero: yeah is a good one
16:52 Lanturn: that's a good one yeah
16:52 Lanturn: I was trying to find one but I couldn't figure it out XD
16:53 Gero: there is no vocals that's why is good
16:53 Gero: xD
16:53 Lanturn: yup XD
16:53 Lanturn: what do you think of the very start?
16:53 Lanturn: I find it a bit awkward to play
16:54 Gero: on muzu?
16:54 Lanturn: well both I guess idk
16:54 Lanturn: same rhythm, just slightly different patterns
16:56 Gero: what about this on Oni https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251890 and Muzu this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251892
16:56 Gero: feels a lot better
16:57 Lanturn: maybe put dons at 00:00:347 - and every 1/2 afterwards as well
16:57 Lanturn: so it kind of starts on beat
16:58 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251901 what about this?
16:59 Lanturn: yeah that's pretty awesome
16:59 Lanturn: I like it
16:59 Lanturn: same thing for muzu I guess?
16:59 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251903 Muzu
17:01 Lanturn: that feels so good
17:01 Lanturn: lol
17:02 Gero: where is my kudo :^)?
17:02 Gero: jk
17:02 Lanturn: haha
17:02 Lanturn: Give yourself one
17:03 Gero: pls hahahaha
17:05 Lanturn: 00:33:143 (92) - this finish feels kind of odd
17:05 Gero: muzu?
17:05 Lanturn: yeah
17:05 Lanturn: especially if we're asking to remove (93) from it afterwards. IDK
17:06 Gero: well he used K K K d K doesn't feels bad imo
17:06 Lanturn: ah ok XD
17:06 Lanturn: should the d be a D then?
17:07 Gero: for standard yes but in taiko it sounds low instead the next ticks seems strong that's why he used d K
17:07 Lanturn: hmm alright
17:08 Lanturn: I was thinking more about the movement since it's easier to play two fingers twice instead of one finger and then two
17:09 Lanturn: otherwise I don't really see much else in the muzu
17:09 Lanturn: I remember you guys talking about HP and stuff
17:10 Lanturn: is it good or should it be higher?
17:11 Lanturn: Oni you can pass with like 66% or something
17:12 Gero: is we add the finish on the d? well it is fine for me and to be honest is not a big deal
17:12 Lanturn: ah ok
17:12 Lanturn: well I'll suggest it anyways
17:13 Gero: sure
17:23 Lanturn: Ok. I'll post our IRC and give the mod suggestions to Hanjamon in a little bit. I'll probably throw in a quick mod of your standard diffs as well, if I see anything

1. 00:08:482 (29,30,31,32,33) - This should flow better as ddkkd instead ddkdk | Also 00:08:991 - is a strong beat so it'd make sense using d instead of k here. (from Gero)
2. 00:03:652 (12,13) - | 00:07:719 (27,28) - | 00:09:753 (36,37) - | 00:11:787 (43,44) - | etc | I was thinking they'd be better as k d instead since the guitar strum gives off more of a high k feel while the second note has more of a lower d effect.
3. 00:43:821 - maybe a d here? (from Gero)
4. 00:32:635 - I've never been a fan of these because of how they still give a strong beat here. I feel like it should just be a triplet or something. Gero said ddd would work good here.
5. 00:44:075 (180,181,182,184,185) - doesn't it make sense to have the triplet between (184,185) instead?
6. So we were talking about the intro to the song. I personally feel like it's a bit odd to play on both diffs. After a bit of playing around, Gero came up with these screenshots | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251901 for Oni | and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3251903 for Muzu | Both of which play very well. I highly recommend this! First note is at 00:00:347 -

1. See last mod of Oni for the beginning suggestions.
2. 00:33:652 (93) - I would suggest deleting this so you have more 2/1 (or in this case a 3/2) gaps. You don't really have another one for quite some time after this due to the kiai.
3. 00:53:736 (148) - same with this note possibly. No vocals playing here so it's a good one to remove for a 2/1 break. (Both these suggested by Gero)
4. 00:32:889 (91) - Maybe change this to a finish D? It'll add more effect into this section and work better with the fingers since the notes before and after are both K's, and to me it feels powerful enough to be its own D.

1. 00:47:126 (2) - Why not move this to x149 y133 (to remain on the same level) so the slider doesn't almost go off the screen? It's rankable as is, but for people that play in 4:3, (Literally who does this?) it'll be welcoming to not have to get so close to the left side of the screen. Especially as a new player.
2. 00:32:889 (5,1) - Since hitting two 1/2's in a row can be a bit difficult, and confusing with the stack. I would like to suggest that you add a reverse on to 00:31:872 (4) - so it becomes two slider ends which is by far easier to play.
3. 00:57:041 (1,1) - mostly the same reason as above, but could you start this spinner 1/2 earlier and remove the circle? It will capture the full effect of the guitar.

1. 00:27:296 (2) - maybe make this flow into (3) better? I guess the best way would to simply curve (2) downwards. Adjust (1) as needed.
2. 00:53:991 (2) - Maybe move this more to the right?
3. 00:56:279 (4) - This (4) is kind of odd. It really doesn't hit anything in the music. Maybe make this a 2/1 slider from 00:56:024 -

1. 00:12:296 (8) - This is kind of a forced jump as nothing really important plays here. It almost feels like it would be a 1/1 gap to be honest. I highly suggest that you consider deleting this note, or use regular DS here.
2. 00:23:228 (2,3) - The other one. I almost feel like the gap here is a bit too big for the diff. It does work with a jump, but it should probably be assisting it. Some ideas... You could change (2) into a 1/2 slider and simply add a reverse onto it, or add an extra circle after. http://puu.sh/inXn3.jpg could work pretty well if you like it. The main thing is trying to get that jump reduced a little since it feels like the biggest one in the difficulty which should probably be reserved for the Kiai.