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Okazaki Ritsuko - For FruitBasket

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nzcy
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nzcy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月12日 at 20:45:16

Artist: Okazaki Ritsuko
Title: For FruitBasket
Source: For FruitBasket
BPM: 69
Filesize: 3749kb
Play Time: 03:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.29 stars, 361 notes)
  2. Normal+ (3.05 stars, 278 notes)
  3. yuzi39's Easy (2.94 stars, 272 notes)
Download: Okazaki Ritsuko - For FruitBasket
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First map.
My favorite girl's favorite song.
May you love it!


Easy mode DONE @2010-2-8 23:51:38
yuzi39's Easy mode DONE @2010-2-18 15:32:05
Lyrics rework @2010-2-22 20:23:50
Some skins @2010-2-25 19:58:08
Normal rework @2010-2-26 15:22:15
Some slight modification @2010-2-28 14:41:19
Slight modification again @2010-3-4 15:25:07
^again @2010-3-12 20:45:38
Last edited by nzcy , edited 32 times in total.
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Beatmap file is corrupted.
Please try full resubmitting. (choose "Full submission" after you go to "Upload Beatmap")

Please check if the file you used has some japanese/chinese letters. Those might be the problem.
If that's the case, you have to rename the file and edit manually the .osu file with the notepad and replace the name there too.
Anyway, try asking someone in #chinese to help you with this.
nzcy
8 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
nzcy

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Beatmap file is corrupted.
Please try full resubmitting. (choose "Full submission" after you go to "Upload Beatmap")

Please check if the file you used has some japanese/chinese letters. Those might be the problem.
If that's the case, you have to rename the file and edit manually the .osu file with the notepad and replace the name there too.
Anyway, try asking someone in #chinese to help you with this.
Thank you for testing my map. I'm so sorry my map is uncompleted :( .
I just came back home today and also I want to add more lyrics and difficult mode to my map. It will take some time .
Would you please test my map again after I finish it ? I'll inform you . OR put my map back to <Beatmap Help>
I hope it won't inconvenience you. Thank you again :)

Beatmap file is corrupted---Something is wrong with the StoryBoard in my map ,I have fixed it.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Really nice map, I'll mod it later, when I have time~
For now a star :]
nzcy
8 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
nzcy

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Really nice map, I'll mod it later, when I have time~
For now a star :]
:] Thank you for loving it . It's still uncompleted :)
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
Overall :
Set a PreviewTime(All diffs) [Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point]

[Normal]
本歌音效重点：soft-clap & soft-finish都不适合。就用我给你的custom-finish和soft-whistle下音效.
Nomal的音效我帮你改完了。你看看，如果觉得适合的话，其他难度的音效都按这个来。
有个部分忘改了。以下列出
03:07:851 (8,1,2,3) - 取消clap

01:38:620 (2) - 把所有这种Start和End重叠在一起的slider都改掉,吧头和尾分开点，否则分不清slider向哪边开始移动(unrankable pattern)
02:48:398 (1) - ^和上面一样
03:33:401 (1) - ^


BPM 69.050
Offset1: 01:45:618
Offset2: 02:55:168
Offset3: 03:23:874

i'll mod other diffs if i'm free.
good job for the first map.
Star

Download: Okazaki Ritsuko - For FruitBasket (nzcy) [Normal].osu

Download: soft-hitfinish.rar
nzcy
8 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
nzcy

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
Set a PreviewTime(All diffs) [Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview Point]

[Normal]
本歌音效重点：soft-clap & soft-finish都不适合。就用我给你的custom-finish和soft-whistle下音效.
Nomal的音效我帮你改完了。你看看，如果觉得适合的话，其他难度的音效都按这个来。
有个部分忘改了。以下列出
03:07:851 (8,1,2,3) - 取消clap

01:38:620 (2) - 把所有这种Start和End重叠在一起的slider都改掉,吧头和尾分开点，否则分不清slider向哪边开始移动(unrankable pattern)
02:48:398 (1) - ^和上面一样
03:33:401 (1) - ^


BPM 69.050
Offset1: 01:45:618
Offset2: 02:55:168
Offset3: 03:23:874

i'll mod other diffs if i'm free.
good job for the first map.
Star
Set a PreviewTime(All diffs) done 没经验,呵呵.
hitsound slight modification.----clap->finish :?
首尾相连(end to end) I add some arrow mark...does it work?
timing/BPM/#$@%仿佛没什么问题?(No error?)

03:07:851 (8,1,2,3) - 取消clap
我只是单纯想表现出,嗒,嗒,嗒,嗒,嗒嗒嗒嗒 这样的节奏,嗯...

太谢谢你的意见了,呵呵!
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Easy
It started pretty well, but I got disapointed when the gameplay turned to be faster =/ Starting that moment, is not Easy anymore, it's Normal :| And why there are so manny parts that are the same on Yuzi39's? o.o
  1. 00:29:722(2) - Too close with the (1)
  2. 00:40:592(spinner,1) - Maybe too hard for a Easy. Please, delet the (1) and extend the spinner to 00:42:113
  3. 00:49:505(7,8,1,1,1) - Really weard combo section. Please, New Combo on the (7), then take off the new combos on the last three (1)s.
  4. 01:03:200(1,1) - No New Combo on these two =/
  5. 01:03:635(spinner,1,1,1,spinner) - Not really cool to play. Please, start the spinner at 01:04:287 and extend until 01:09:070, deleting the three (1)s and the last spinner. It's Easy and follows nicely with the song rythm.
  6. 01:22:983(2) - Too far from the (1). Don't forget to replace the (3) too.
  7. 01:37:331(1) - Delet this note. Too hard for a Easy =/
  8. 01:38:200(1) - I think it's better delet this one too
  9. 02:03:635(SB) - The two "were moved" are late
  10. 02:24:722(3) - New Combo
  11. 02:28:200(5) - ^
  12. 02:38:635(5) - ^
  13. 02:42:113(5) - ^
Yuzi39
Rename as Yuzi39's Normal. The spacing is big, there are jumps and a map with 2 Easys is not really atractive.
  1. 02:35:157(5) - New Combo
Normal
Mod when I have time, for now, I ask to you to rename it as Hard. Other then that, make it easier.

I so love this song >w<
Card N'FoRcE
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- General:
  • Since you storyboarded the background, the map has no BG in the listing. Just add the image as background too, it shouldn't affect the storyboard.
    I think that the storyboarded text are a little too "fast".
    The comboburst is just.... bad. It's small and bad cut.
    Anyway, really, really great job. It's rare to find a first map with a storyboard.
- yuzi39'Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    Rename to yuzi39's Easy
    There are many New Combo spam, are they really so necessary? D:
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:374 (3,4) - stack properly
    01:03:853 (1) - end this at 01:07:331 or 01:10:809
    03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:50:374 (3), 01:35:157 (3), 02:44:722 (1) - all these sliders have one problem
- Easy:
  • .Opinions:
    Rename to Normal?
    01:38:635 (1) - O.O
    .Suggestions:
    00:22:113 (1) - i suggest moving it down a bit, to make 00:22:983 (1) more readable
    01:22:983 (2) - move it down and left a bit?
    02:03:635, 02:04:287 - these two kiai sections are too close, it's a bit disturbing while playing
    02:23:200 (2) - end on 02:23:418? if you don't like this, at least remove the finish hitsound from the end of the slider, it sounds REALLY bad D:
    02:26:679 (4) - ^
    02:28:200 (5) - new combo
    02:42:113 (9) - ^
    02:44:070 (12) - end this on 02:44:722, then make the spinner start at 02:44:940
    03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
    03:36:027 (1,1,1) - stack properly
    03:48:200 - this kiai seems quite useless, the other two should be ok, since there are two spinners
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:29:722 (2) - too close to 00:29:070 (1), it seems a 1/2 spacing because of the previous combo.
    02:48:200 (1) - as easy, it's impossible to tell which direction one is supposed to go.
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    No Kiai at the end, like in Easy?
    .Suggestions:
    01:07:548 (1) - extend to 01:10:809?
    02:37:113 (6) - same as Easy
    03:16:244 (1) - remove it, it sounds bad
    03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    Rename to Hard, and i am serious this time. there's no way a Normal can have triplets like 01:48:418 (1,2,3) and overall 7.
    00:32:983 (2) - end on 00:33:418
    01:32:00-01:34:00 - way too much kiai fountains, seriously.
    02:48:200 (1) - awawaw slider, impossible like the others i pointed out before, also, it should end at 02:50:809
    03:08:635 - add a beat
    03:33:418 (1) - ^
Some things need fixing, so i can't star, but i'll give you a kd-star because it's a great work for a beginner ^^
Call me back after fixing and reaching at least 8 stars.
nzcy
8 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
nzcy
Thanks a lot for you modding ,Card N'FoRcE ,I know my map need fix ..a lot of fix.

Since you storyboarded the background, the map has no BG in the listing. Just add the image as background too, it shouldn't affect the storyboard.
I have tried many times to add a background,but it didn't work, so today I unpack the .osu file....now it is available!...
The comboburst is just.... bad. It's small and bad cut.
:? I'll change it.

- yuzi39'Easy:
Rename to yuzi39's Easy
:) my bad English
There are many New Combo spam, are they really so necessary?

yeah, I kill them all.

00:35:374 (3,4) - stack properly
done
01:03:853 (1) - end this at 01:07:331 or 01:10:809
03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
no experience :]
00:50:374 (3), 01:35:157 (3), 02:44:722 (1) - all these sliders have one problem


- Easy:
Rename to Normal?
01:38:635 (1) - O.O
I found the new maps are harder and harder... but it's really not easy. I change it , so does Normal.
01:38:635 (1)--it's a cross,wrong cross :)
00:22:113 (1) - i suggest moving it down a bit, to make 00:22:983 (1) more readable
01:22:983 (2) - move it down and left a bit?
done

02:03:635, 02:04:287 - these two kiai sections are too close, it's a bit disturbing while playing
02:23:200 (2) - end on 02:23:418? if you don't like this, at least remove the finish hitsound from the end of the slider, it sounds REALLY bad D:
02:26:679 (4) - ^
02:28:200 (5) - new combo
02:42:113 (9) - ^
done
02:44:070 (12) - end this on 02:44:722, then make the spinner start at 02:44:940
It's not wrong , I follow the "da da(1) da da(2) da(3) da(4) da(spinner)~~~"
03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
03:36:027 (1,1,1) - stack properly
done
03:48:200 - this kiai seems quite useless, the other two should be ok, since there are two spinners
00:29:722 (2) - too close to 00:29:070 (1), it seems a 1/2 spacing because of the previous combo.
yeah,I fixed it.
02:48:200 (1) - as easy, it's impossible to tell which direction one is supposed to go.

- Normal:
01:07:548 (1) - extend to 01:10:809?
02:37:113 (6) - same as Easy
03:16:244 (1) - remove it, it sounds bad
03:16:461 (1) - end at 03:19:505
done
Rename to Hard, and i am serious this time. there's no way a Normal can have triplets like 01:48:418 (1,2,3) and overall 7.
:)
00:32:983 (2) - end on 00:33:418
done
01:32:00-01:34:00 - way too much kiai fountains, seriously.
02:48:200 (1) - awawaw slider, impossible like the others i pointed out before, also, it should end at 02:50:809
03:08:635 - add a beat
four slow,and four fast ,why add another beat?~

about the red sentences:
I add the arrow marks...does it work? I'll make the marks well-marked.
the kiai :
I don't know if there is a convention to use kiai in the ending or...
I prefer to use it as a accent--the flying stars(hearts) & special hitsound~

I'm curious about how you can find the littie mistakes such as no background / slider's little little little difference ..
If these are all by your ears,you are my idot :)
AImod?... :cry:

Thank you again <3
Card N'FoRcE
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LOL i forgot to complete the sentence in "00:50:374 (3), 01:35:157 (3), 02:44:722 (1) - all these sliders have one problem" xD
The problem is that noone can see where the sliderball will go (right or left?) so you need to Storyboard that or to move the end and the beginning of the slider. It's the same you did with Normal and Hard, so just do that here too ^^

Well, i should check better, but i noticed you fixed everything it was needed, so it should be ok.
I hope you won't get trouble with KIAI: usually using two close KIAI fountains is not allowed.

Good luck ^^

P.S: Yeah, anything i told you was by "ear", i use Aimod only to check unsnapped notes :P
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