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JLS - Everybody In Love

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aRiskOfRain
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 05 June 2010 at 10:32:52

Artist: JLS
Title: Everybody in Love
Tags: X Factor Larto
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2529kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.22 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Hard (4.46 stars, 263 notes)
  3. Larto's Normal (3 stars, 182 notes)
Download: JLS - Everybody in Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Go put your hands up!
gdeath
Overall :
Volume~75%~

[Normal]
make slidertick decrease to 1.0
00:22:445 (4) - remove finish and add whistle
00:23:516 (5) - remove finish
hmm...
you add too many clap and finish.
it'll sound better if you remove some from them.
i dont give more examples

[Hard]
00:23:516 (5) - remove clap
00:17:088 (1) - ^
01:23:945 (7) - ^
02:06:803 (5) - a bit offscreen
02:12:802 (7,8) - spacing.why is double spacing of 02:12:589 (6,7)? really confusing when i have first try.

map is fine.but i dont like the hitsound of this map...
hmmm...i think clap is not suitable for this map.try using whistle & finish or finding other custom hitsound : )
Star.
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

gdeath wrote:

Overall :
Volume~75%~ OK.

[Normal]
make slidertick decrease to 1.0 Alright.
00:22:445 (4) - remove finish and add whistle
00:23:516 (5) - remove finish
hmm...
you add too many clap and finish.
it'll sound better if you remove some from them.
i dont give more examples I like the way the sounds are, I'll wait for a second opinion on these.

[Hard]
00:23:516 (5) - remove clap
00:17:088 (1) - ^
01:23:945 (7) - ^ Again, I'll wait for a second opinion.
02:06:803 (5) - a bit offscreen You didn't complain about it earlier...
02:12:802 (7,8) - spacing.why is double spacing of 02:12:589 (6,7)? really confusing when i have first try. You didn't mind the first time here either...

map is fine.but i dont like the hitsound of this map...
hmmm...i think clap is not suitable for this map.try using whistle & finish or finding other custom hitsound : )
Star.
Thanks.
Leorda
Hello!

[General]
1) Source?
2) Tags?
3) You have to map until end of song for both diff OR cut the mp3

[Normal]
Check this diff, are U following rhythm or vocal?
00:09:159 (2) - Move it to right place, make sure the previous slider is not overlap this object
00:17:302 (2) - ^

00:20:731 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:32:088 (2) - Move it to right place, it's looks bad if this slider is little overlapped by previous slider
02:15:159 (2) - Move it to right place, make sure the previous slider is not overlap this object


[Hard]
00:26:088 (6,7) - Offscreen
00:31:445 (2) - ^

00:49:659 (9) - New combo
00:49:874 (1) - No new combo
00:51:374 (6) - New combo
00:51:588 (1) - No new combo

01:05:088 (5) - Offscreen
01:33:159 (2) - ^

01:51:374 (8) - New combo
01:51:589 (1) - No new combo
01:53:089 (6) - New combo
01:53:303 (1) - No new combo

02:06:803 (5) - Offscreen


GREAT MAP!
STAR
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Leorda wrote:

[Normal]
Check this diff, are U following rhythm or vocal?
00:09:159 (2) - Move it to right place, make sure the previous slider is not overlap this object
00:17:302 (2) - ^
They don''t...?
00:20:731 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider Ok.

00:32:088 (2) - Move it to right place, it's looks bad if this slider is little overlapped by previous slider
02:15:159 (2) - Move it to right place, make sure the previous slider is not overlap this object
Yes to the first one, no to the second.

[Hard]
00:26:088 (6,7) - Offscreen
00:31:445 (2) - ^
They aren't...?
00:49:659 (9) - New combo
00:49:874 (1) - No new combo
00:51:374 (6) - New combo
00:51:588 (1) - No new combo
I like it the way it is, thanks.
01:05:088 (5) - Offscreen
01:33:159 (2) - ^
It isn't...?
01:51:374 (8) - New combo
01:51:589 (1) - No new combo
01:53:089 (6) - New combo
01:53:303 (1) - No new combo
As above.
02:06:803 (5) - Offscreen Is it...?


GREAT MAP!
STAR
Diasios
Offset: 6610 (resnap all notes in all difficulties)
The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize

[Normal]

Add kiai
00:57:588 (5,1) - Spacing
01:59:302 (5,1) - ^


[Hard]

Add kiai
00:43:252 - Add a circle (red tick)
00:43:681 - ^
00:44:109 - ^
00:46:681 - ^
01:44:967 - ^
01:45:395 - ^
01:45:824 - ^
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

xxheroxx wrote:

Offset: 6610 (resnap all notes in all difficulties) OK.
The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize Alright.

[Normal]

Add kiai Done.
00:57:588 (5,1) - Spacing
01:59:302 (5,1) - ^
Fix'd.

[Hard]

Add kiai Done.
00:43:252 - Add a circle (red tick)
00:43:681 - ^
00:44:109 - ^
00:46:681 - ^
01:44:967 - ^
01:45:395 - ^
01:45:824 - ^
Alright.
Teara
General:

Delete .osb in song folder.
Add source
Add some tags

[Hard]

SPOILER
Combo Mod:
00:23:538 (1) - New Combo

Nazi Mod:
01:05:109 (5) - Slightly off screen
02:06:824 (5) - ^

Great song, great beatmap.

Star :)
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Teara wrote:

General:

Delete .osb in song folder. Added a storyboard instead.
Add source
Add some tags Done.

[Hard]

SPOILER
Combo Mod:
00:23:538 (1) - New Combo

Nazi Mod:
01:05:109 (5) - Slightly off screen
02:06:824 (5) - ^
Fix'd all.

Great song, great beatmap. Aww, thanks.

Star :)
orioncomet
[General]
- delete "(album)" from Source >_<
- BG Colour: Black?

[Normal]
01:15:181 (6) - spacing? or new combo
01:47:860 (1) - end this spinner at 01:49:038
02:16:895 (6) - spacing? or new combo
combo mod
SPOILER
00:49:681 (5) - new combo
00:49:895 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:395 (4) - new combo
00:51:609 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:109 (1) - new combo
00:53:324 (2) - remove new combo
01:03:395 (4) - new combo
01:03:609 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:109 (5) - new combo
01:05:324 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:824 (3) - new combo
01:07:038 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:395 (5) - new combo
01:51:609 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:109 (5) - new combo
01:53:324 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:824 (3) - new combo
01:55:038 (1) - remove new combo
02:05:109 (4) - new combo
02:05:324 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:824 (5) - new combo
02:07:038 (1) - remove new combo
02:08:538 (3) - new combo
02:08:752 (1) - remove new combo

[Hard]
- Overall +1
01:47:859 (1) - end this pinner at 01:49:038
combo mod
SPOILER
00:23:538 (9) - remove new combo [do it like this part 01:21:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ]
00:49:681 (9) - new combo
00:49:895 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:395 (8) - new combo
00:51:609 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:109 (5) - new combo
00:53:324 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:395 (5) - new combo
01:03:609 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:109 (6) - new combo
01:05:324 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:824 (6) - new combo
01:07:038 (1) - remove new combo
01:51:395 (8) - new combo
01:51:609 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:109 (8) - new combo
01:53:324 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:824 (5) - new combo
01:55:038 (1) - remove new combo
02:05:109 (5) - new combo
02:05:324 (1) - remove new combo
02:06:824 (6) - new combo
02:07:038 (1) - remove new combo
02:08:538 (6) - new combo
02:08:967 (2) - remove new combo

nice song ~ Starrrrrrrr ~ ^.^

ps. about Easy diff let's me try ;) If it've fun for me I will post .osu later ~
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- delete "(album)" from Source >_<
- BG Colour: Black? OK.

[Normal]
01:15:181 (6) - new combo OK.
01:47:860 (1) - end this spinner at 01:49:038 It's better ending on the lyrics.
02:16:895 (6) - new combo OK.
combo mod
SPOILER
*stuff*
Done.

[Hard]
- Overall +1 OK.
01:47:859 (1) - end this pinner at 01:49:038 As above.
combo mod
SPOILER
*stuff*
Done.

nice song ~ Starrrrrrrr ~ ^.^ Thanks.

ps. about Easy diff let's me try ;) If it've fun for me I will post .osu later ~ OK.
SamiPale
Hello,as your request


[General]
Delete JLS at "Source" because there's the same word as "Artist"

[Normal]
01:14:324(4,5) - (4) down a gird,(5) left a grid (on grid level 3)
01:47:538(2,3) - Not Stack Completely,delete and reput them ,they will stack automatically under (1)'s end
01:49:895(2) - align with (3) (just a little)
02:16:038(4,5) - (4) up a grid ,(5) right a grid (on grid level 3)

[Hard]
01:55:038(2) - add clap


pretty arrangement,star~
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
Did all you said, thanks.
Real1
These are all suggestions, so treat them as such.

[Normal]
01:15:181 (1,2) - Hard to read these notes, especially for a newbie. If you move them somewhere it's no problem.
01:26:109 (1,2) - There is nothing wrong with these two notes, but if you make it a triplet, (adding a note on 01:26:324 (white tick)) it sounds waaay better here.
02:16:895 (1,2) - Hard to read for noobs, etc.

[Hard]
01:47:859 (1) - Consider ending this at 01:49:038?

Great, star!
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Real1 wrote:

These are all suggestions, so treat them as such.

[Normal]
01:15:181 (1,2) - Hard to read these notes, especially for a newbie. If you move them somewhere it's no problem. I suppose you're correct. Fixed.
01:26:109 (1,2) - There is nothing wrong with these two notes, but if you make it a triplet, (adding a note on 01:26:324 (white tick)) it sounds waaay better here. Consider it done.
02:16:895 (1,2) - Hard to read for noobs, etc. Yeah, fixed

[Hard]
01:47:859 (1) - Consider ending this at 01:49:038? Yeah, OK.

Great, star!
Thanks.
Mashley
Really nice maps, good job :) No problems with the map, but the offset is wrong, the main beat is on the wrong tick. Use 7,038 - there will be notes before the offset but there's no problem with that.
Also the guy on the right in the bg looks funny.
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain
Offset updated.
Mashley
Was just about to pubble when I checked aimod and found this

Normal
02:15:182 (2) - Unsnapped

Get to me when you've fixed that and I'll pubble.
Topic Starter
aRiskOfRain

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Was just about to pubble when I checked aimod and found this

Normal
02:15:182 (2) - Unsnapped

Get to me when you've fixed that and I'll pubble.
Kaching.
Mashley
Pubbled then :)
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