General:
- Get a new mp3, I can hear some sounds in the background that doesnt belong to the song, such as people talking, doorbell ringing, etc etc etc. I have downloaded another mp3 and i can confirm that the one i have downloaded doesnt have these strange sounds. Im already aware that there are in fact some strange sounds in the mp3 such as airplanes and stuff like, but there are are others that arent...
- If youre going to get a new mp3, it will be very probably that you will need a new timing
- I think timing should be 1 white tick earlier
- You should try to add tags and sources if possible
- I see lots of not so intuitive objects placed in the timeline. And with this i mean that there are some extra circles/sliders that doesnt makes sense, or the reverse, there are some missing circles/sliders that would make more sense if you added them. I can see various cause, being the most important to me the one that you doesnt really follow the same rymth thoughtout the song, others they just simply doesnt fit with the music. Ill try to say SOME of the ones that doesnt fit with the song.
- There are some spacing issues in general. Ill try to say SOME of them.
- I fail to see what are the other files in the song folder are doing, delete them along with the osb file and do full reupload.
- 01:33:407 End kiai time here
- 02:35:282 same as above
- Please note that if i had said something, they will most likely applies to the rest of the map/difficulty that have the similar pattern/problem.
Novice:
- 00:48:876 (1) - Lol, im sure you can make this slider with much less dots, and with a even better design
- 01:54:501 (3) - Consider adding a repeat.
- 02:53:799 (1,1,1) - Spinners problems, try to make them start/end at white and rec ticks only, without having an end and start in the same tick
-03:17:002 (1) - OKAYYYY scrap this slider and make one less confusive
Just average:
-00:11:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These should be symmetrical to 00:07:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), copy, past and flip them accordingly
- 00:59:188 (1) - Make it end in the next white tick
- 01:54:501 (2) - UGLY star :X
- 02:22:157 (1) - Start this slider at 02:22:391, you shouldnt have two objects in the same timeline
- 02:28:719 (3,6) - 1/4 shorter
- 02:34:813 (1) - same as 00:59:188
- 03:20:282 (1) - Where does it goes? to the left or to the right? (I mean, this in unrankable)
Expert:
- 00:11:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - One grid down. Do this only if you want more symmetry with 00:07:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
- 00:20:282 (5,6,7,8) - These doesnt makes sence, move them 1/2 back, and add a circle at 00:21:688
- 00:43:251 (5,6) - These should totally go farther from 00:42:547 (4) -
- 00:46:532 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:20:282 (5,6,7,8)
- 01:08:797 (7,11) - What happened with this spacing?
- 01:25:438 (13) - Spacing
