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Raymond Gramke - Metallic Menace

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Xgor
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 7 april 2010 at 20:12:29

Artist: Raymond Gramke
Title: Metallic Menace
Source: Eduardo the Samurai Toaster
Tags: Wiiware Wii Toast run 'n' gun Semnat Studios
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2880kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,43 stars, 63 notes)
  2. Hard (4,88 stars, 202 notes)
  3. Normal (4,24 stars, 115 notes)
Download: Raymond Gramke - Metallic Menace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BEST GAME TITLE EVER!.......
....Well 10:th map, I enjoy it myself but I dunno if others do.
Proably the most obcure song I have mapped so far
Symbolic
- in General
  1. Remove .osb file, it's unused.
  2. Set Preview Time on all difficulties.
- Easy
  1. The Taiko-whistles aren't really making sense imo.
  2. Why are the clapsounds not on beats where there's a clap in the backgroundmusic?
- Normal
  1. Nothing big here.
- Hard
  1. Please, fix the hitsounds so the claps on the notes are at the same spot as the claps in the backgroundmusic!
Starred *
Topic Starter
Xgor
Removed the osb
Otherwise i didn't change much due to that I don't want to change the beat placement so much (And SB hitsounds are d+jsoikcvnsjcsjbncv)
iDwarf
[Easy]

All Ok.

[Normal]

All Ok

( Some sliders look ugly >.< But that's not a big problem)

[Hard]

- 00:43:821 (3) - This sounds not right 'cause of the previous combo. (Change clap's position on this, or previous combo)
- 01:02:678 (5,6) - Maybe it'll look better if you snap those closer to (4) (Move (5) one grid up (Lvl2) and snap 6 then)
- 01:06:107 (4,5) - ^
- 01:08:357 (7) - A Triplet could sound better here.
Shohei Ohtani
Easy:
00:22:285 (2) - Kind of boring. Change it so there is a repeat on every white tick, and add 2 more repeats. Make the 1st and 3rd repeat have a clap, and the end have a finish.
00:29:142 (2) - ^
00:36:000 (3) - Remove clap hitsound on the beginning.
00:37:714 (1) - Remove Clap
00:47:142 (5) - Add Clap
00:48:000 (1) - Remove Clap
00:49:714 (4) - Remove Whistle
00:54:000 (3) - Add clap
00:58:285 (1) - Remove Clap
00:59:142 (3) - Add Clap
01:00:000 (4) - Same as 58:285
01:00:857 (6) - Same as 59:142

Normal:
00:14:785 (3) - Add Clap on the End
00:16:500 (3) - ^
00:20:142 (5) - Add Clap
00:25:285 (5) - ^
00:27:000 (5) - Add finish
00:34:285 (1) - I, personally, am fine with these, but I'm not sure that this is rankable.
00:36:000 (1) - ^
00:42:642 (3) - Eww. Move this towards the middle of the circle formation you have.
00:58:928 (2) - Move the clap from the repeat to the end of the slider.
01:08:571 (5) - Add clap

Hard:
Rename to insane?
00:34:928 (2) - Remove clap

Desu~
Topic Starter
Xgor

CDFA wrote:

Easy:
00:22:285 (2) - Kind of boring. Change it so there is a repeat on every white tick, and add 2 more repeats. Make the 1st and 3rd repeat have a clap, and the end have a finish.But your suggestion is even more boring <.<
00:29:142 (2) - ^
00:36:000 (3) - Remove clap hitsound on the beginning.Done
00:37:714 (1) - Remove Clap^
00:47:142 (5) - Add Clap^
00:48:000 (1) - Remove Clap^
00:49:714 (4) - Remove Whistle^
00:54:000 (3) - Add clapAdded whistle instead.
00:58:285 (1) - Remove ClapDone
00:59:142 (3) - Add ClapNo
01:00:000 (4) - Same as 58:285
01:00:857 (6) - Same as 59:142

Normal:
00:14:785 (3) - Add Clap on the EndDone
00:16:500 (3) - ^Done
00:20:142 (5) - Add ClapDidn't do it on this one
00:25:285 (5) - ^Done
00:27:000 (5) - Add finishDone
00:34:285 (1) - I, personally, am fine with these, but I'm not sure that this is rankable.Well, if more complain about it i fix it
00:36:000 (1) - ^
00:42:642 (3) - Eww. Move this towards the middle of the circle formation you have.Kinda fixed it.
00:58:928 (2) - Move the clap from the repeat to the end of the slider.Done
01:08:571 (5) - Add clapNo

Hard:
Rename to insane?
00:34:928 (2) - Remove clap

Desu~

Midget wrote:

[Hard]

- 00:43:821 (3) - This sounds not right 'cause of the previous combo. (Change clap's position on this, or previous combo)Done
- 01:02:678 (5,6) - Maybe it'll look better if you snap those closer to (4) (Move (5) one grid up (Lvl2) and snap 6 then)Um i think i did it....
- 01:06:107 (4,5) - ^
- 01:08:357 (7) - A Triplet could sound better here.No
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modify :3

[General]
Okay.

[Easy]
Try to use 1/4 Divisor Snap.
00:12:000 (3) Ugly! x.x Try modify it.
00:18:000 (1) Symmetrize it.
00:20:571 (1) Try to make this like 00:22:285 (2)
00:27:428 (1) ^ like 00:29:142 (2)
00:32:571 (3) Symmetrize it.

[Normal]
I didn't mod anything about symmetry 'cause it's seems here are all intentional. :D

[Hard]
ok :D

Good job, Starred!
Topic Starter
Xgor

tmokb93 wrote:

[Easy]
Try to use 1/4 Divisor Snap.What? Why? No!
00:12:000 (3) Ugly! x.x Try modify it.fixed
00:18:000 (1) Symmetrize it.Done, I think
00:20:571 (1) Try to make this like 00:22:285 (2)what?
00:27:428 (1) ^ like 00:29:142 (2)
00:32:571 (3) Symmetrize it.Ok done
Symbolic

Xgor wrote:

Removed the osb
Otherwise i didn't change much due to that I don't want to change the beat placement so much (And SB hitsounds are d+jsoikcvnsjcsjbncv)
You forgot lots of claps on places where you have notes, and where they are in the music, whilst you added claps on places where they are not in the music. I wasn't talking about SB'ing hitsounds..
AngelHoney
Star :) :)
alvisto
^.^

NORMAL
00:23:142 (2) - Shouldn't this slider end like, here ? 00:23:571
00:30:000 (2) - ^
This difficulty feels so weird cause you use too many 1/3 notes and sliders, hence rhythm is really hard to catch. That doesn't sound flattering to me. xD

HARD
00:51:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like thia part because jumps with notes on blue line is kinda hard to catch on the 1st time, since you mainly place notes on white/red lines before this set of jump, hence, it was a bit unexpected. You should ask other for more opinions.
This difficulty has good rhythm.

EASY
Nothing

This song is difficult is map, and for me, it's hard for me to love this kind of song. xD

Nevertheless, good job on hard. Star.

And also lol at the offset at being 0ms (I think the timing is ok though, just feel weird that the offset is 0ms)
Real1
I don't really find anything WRONG with the map, but here are some opinions!

The 0 offset disturbs me. :P

Toast in tags, neccessary?

Easy:
Maybe add a spinner if you find a spot to use it so everyone's score won't be the same!
00:50:571 (6) - Use clap instead of whistle? To fit with the previous three notes.

Normal:
Maybe add a spinner if you find a spot to use it so everyone's score won't be the same!
00:33:857 (4) - Sure to use both clap and finish here? Sound weird.

Hard:
Nothing
NoHitter
Suggestion: Change preview point to : 00:20:357

Don't kudo this

Edit: okay pubbled
xierbaliti
Offset: I like +9 ms but you should get confirmation on this

-hard-
00:44:035 add a circle here?
00:51:428 (1,2,3,4,5) -as alvisto saids,I really don't like this part, too.

good map. :)
Topic Starter
Xgor

alvisto wrote:

^.^

NORMAL
00:23:142 (2) - Shouldn't this slider end like, here ? 00:23:571No
00:30:000 (2) - ^
This difficulty feels so weird cause you use too many 1/3 notes and sliders, hence rhythm is really hard to catch. That doesn't sound flattering to me. xD Well i was kinda worried about that but I don't find it so hard to read

HARD
00:51:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like thia part because jumps with notes on blue line is kinda hard to catch on the 1st time, since you mainly place notes on white/red lines before this set of jump, hence, it was a bit unexpected. You should ask other for more opinions.I kinda like this D: So I keep it for now

Real1 wrote:

Toast in tags, neccessary?Why not :P

Easy:
Maybe add a spinner if you find a spot to use it so everyone's score won't be the same! Nah I like it spinner free
00:50:571 (6) - Use clap instead of whistle? To fit with the previous three notes. No

Normal:
Maybe add a spinner if you find a spot to use it so everyone's score won't be the same!Same as above
00:33:857 (4) - Sure to use both clap and finish here? Sound weird. Ok fixed this

Hard:
Nothing

xierbaliti wrote:

Offset: I like +9 ms but you should get confirmation on thisI checked with Zekira about the offset and Zekira thought my offset was good

-hard-
00:44:035 add a circle here? Nononono)
XepherX3
why do i even mod :lol:

star
KIA
:O
GladiOol
[Hard]
01:08:357 (7,8,9,10) - Blub, make this a 1/6 slider please ^_^ Because it feels 'out of place'. All of the sudden 1/6 notes. xD
Topic Starter
Xgor

Gladi wrote:

[Hard]
01:08:357 (7,8,9,10) - Blub, make this a 1/6 slider please ^_^ Because it feels 'out of place'. All of the sudden 1/6 notes. xD
I made two 1/6 sliders insead :D
gdeath
All fine to me
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