This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月25日 at 下午 09:36:11

Artist: Naia
Title: Roots of My way!
Source: Beatmania IIDX 17 SIRIUS
Tags: ACTRESS ROOTS26S Konami youngdow Saturio Sharon
BPM: 158
Filesize: 5527kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:

1. Beginner (1.72 stars, 120 notes)
2. Hyper (4.98 stars, 374 notes)
3. Normal (3.21 stars, 162 notes)
4. Sharon's Another (4.99 stars, 402 notes)
5. youngdow's Taiko Training (5 stars, 797 notes)

Download: Naia - Roots of My way!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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The song is Source for Beatmania IIDX 17 SIRIUS

I made the 4 level for [Beginner] - [NORMAL] - [HYPER]

And the 1 osu Guest Diff - [Sharon's Another] or 1 Taiko Guest Diff - [youngdow's Taiko Training]

Thank

Can give comment to me

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
  • Delete this timing section: Offset 3243
  • Beat snap divisor: 1/4 (recheck circles/slider)

[Beginner]

• • 00:34:381 (5) - New combo
  • 00:39:698 (10) - ^
  • 00:39:698 (10) - ^
  • 01:14:635 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:46:533 (8) - New combo
  • 02:20:331 (x) - Add a break

[Normal]

• • 02:36:597 (x) - Add kiai
  • 02:42:356 (1) - Start this spinner here 02:42:546 (red tick) end it here 02:50:331 (white tick) remove the finish

[Hyper]

• • 01:04:002 (9) - New combo

[Another]

• • 02:01:154 (9) - This slider is ugly; do something different.
  • 02:05:711 (1) - Delete this spinner, is too short
  • 02:07:799 (2) - This circle is hidden, make it visible
  • 02:13:875 (2) - This slider is ugly; do something different

Tnank you , i fix the map and i use you all comment now =]

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Resnap all notes in all difficulties

[Easy]

• • Delete this timing section...
  
  • 00:17:609 (2) - Move this slider on the white tick (00:17:673) and end it here 00:18:052 (white tick)
  • 00:45:774 (7) - New combo
  • 01:28:305 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it. Remember, spacing should be linear and intuitive.)
  • 01:34:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Normal]

• • 00:13:875 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
  • 00:16:154 (2,3) - ^
  • 00:17:293 (2,3,4) - ^
  • 00:19:571 (4,1,2) - ^
  • 00:20:647 (2) - Move this slider on the white tick (00:20:711)
  • 00:25:267 (3,4,5) - Spacing
  • 00:33:622 (4) - End this slider here 00:34:192 (red tick)
  • 00:37:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
  • 00:39:698 (1) - End this slider here 00:40:078 (white tick)
  • 01:45:394 (6) - End this slider here 01:45:774 (white tick)

[HYPER]

• • 00:18:748 (2) - Move this circle here 00:18:812 (white tick)
  • 00:20:711 (2) - Move this slider here 00:20:711 (white tick)
  • 01:45:394 (1) - End this slider here 01:45:584 (red tick)
  • 01:58:685 (1) - End this slider here 01:58:875 (red tick)
  • 02:10:837 (1,1,1,1) - Do this...
  

[ANOTHER]

• • Overall difficulty: 7
  • 00:27:926 (1) - End this slider here 00:28:116 (red tick)
  • 00:29:635 (9) - End this slider here 00:29:824 (white tick)

thank again , i with fix it now =]

Overall :
关于难度名，通常一般都写成[Another][Hyper]
只有首字母是大写的。

[Beginner]
有些微小的spacing问题，以下指出一些部分
(小声的问下，你谱图的时候使用distance snap功能么？使用这个功能下note的话，他会自动按照等时间，
等距离的下note)
01:43:495 (4) - move 2 grid to the left(level 3)
01:45:774 (7,8,1) - spacing problem,set the same spacing as 01:45:014 (6,7)
01:57:736 (6) - make it end on 01:58:116
02:42:546 (1) - set the 1.5 spacing as 02:41:597 (1,2)

[Normal]
00:33:622 (4,5) - set the double spacing as 00:34:761 (5,6)
00:42:736 (1,2) - 尽量吧slider设在白线上，这样节奏比较稳定。你这里slider的尾端放在了蓝线上，
如果能放在白线上比较好。如果你修改了，记得也要同时修改spacing
00:46:723 (3,4) - 吧这两个slider的尾端放在红线上。现在处于蓝线和红线的中间,这样节奏上就不太好了xD
00:57:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全部吧slider的尾端设在白线上会比较好
01:05:521 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:10:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
怎么那么多slider的尾端都没有放在线上？（是不是你修改过Slider Volocity了？还是说故意这么做的？)
后面也有很多slider都有这样的情况，我就不再累赘。
01:46:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - spacing有些微小的混乱，因为节奏上是相同的，所以建议下成完全
同样的间隔

[HYPER]
sound better if you use sliderticke 1.0(suggestion)
00:15:774 (2,3) - set the same spacing as 00:15:394 (1,2)
01:10:458 --->>01:14:445 这一段的spacing和节奏有点混乱
使用distance snap功能来下note会比较好(suggestion)
02:42:356 (1) - 设条绿线，使这个spinner完全静音，听起来会更好

[ANOTHER]
00:48:622 (7) - 不要让slider头和尾重叠，这是unrankable的式样。
01:00:964 (1) - 重叠，unrankalbe式样,一些老图这种式样是被允许的，因为规则已经改变，所以这种
式样全部都不允许了。建议修改
02:30:014 (1) - spinner太短了。auto也只能转1000分
规则规定auto至少可以转2000分才是rankable式样，建议修改 ^^
02:42:356 (1) - 设条绿线，使这个spinner完全静音（和Hyper同样的建议xD)

Star!

>>>小声的问下，你谱图的时候使用distance snap功能么？使用这个功能下note的话，他会自动按照等时间

不太熟習所以沒開distance snap

>>>怎么那么多slider的尾端都没有放在线上？（是不是你修改过Slider Volocity了？还是说故意这么做的？)
后面也有很多slider都有这样的情况，我就不再累赘。

沒改Slider Volocity,只是以前的Beat snap divisor是1/6,後來改成1/4,所以部份slider的尾端變成没放在線上


以上問題大至上已經修改,感謝指導=]

star, one favorite song.

well add " ROOTS26S " to tag, this song first out at spinoff-drama-cd of beatmania.
beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 if I remember correctly.

gl!

dvorak wrote:

star, one favorite song.

well add " ROOTS26S " to tag, this song first out at spinoff-drama-cd of beatmania.
beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 if I remember correctly.

gl!

thank , yes it is beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 ,

i will add "ROOTS26S" tag now

NI HAO

Ah, a game from Konami

[General]
Add "konami" in tags, since this game from Konami

[Breaks]
00:50:236 ~ 00:57:546 (B) - Map this break for all diff
02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - ^
02:30:964 ~ 02:36:280 (B) - ^

[Kiai]
There's some kiai doesn't fit at all for all diff except Another, delete this part in Timing Setup
01:28:305 ~ 01:41:122
02:36:660 ~ end (including Another diff)

And then add a part with kiai
01:40:837 ~ 02:04:856

[Beginner]
00:09:698 (1) - Cut short this slider to 00:10:267 in timeline
00:11:217 (2) - This slider is not following rhythm or music, IMO. Try move backward to red tick in timeline and cut short this slider to white tick in timeline
00:14:635 (4) - Move 2 grid right + 1 grid down?
00:16:913 (1) - No new combo here
00:18:432 (1) - ^
00:24:508 (1) - ^
00:26:027 (3) - New combo here
01:50:584 (1) - Not snapped in timeline, snap this spinner to red tick and then cut short this spinner to 01:52:609 in timeline
02:12:356 (1) - No new combo here
02:15:394 (1) - ^
02:26:027 (1) - ^
02:38:179 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:673 (3) - Clap doesn't suite here, remove clap and add a clap at 00:18:052 (4)
00:18:432 (1) - Clap doesn't suite better too, remove clap and add a finish
00:42:356 (x) - Add note here?
01:07:040 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
01:08:559 (3) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
01:28:305 (1,2) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
01:31:343 (4,5) - ^
01:33:242 (6,1) - ^
01:43:875 (5,6) - ^
01:49:192 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:49:571 (2)?
01:55:647 (5) - New combo here?
01:58:685 (10) - ^
02:11:597 (1,1,1) - No new combo here
02:14:635 (1,1) - ^
02:26:027 (3,4) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
02:36:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
02:42:641 (1) - Silence this spinner suite better

[Hyper]
00:22:230 (3) - Maybe, add 1 repeating slider here?
00:42:736 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:43:495 (5) - ^
00:58:685 (1,1,1) - Remove the new combo please, combo spammer LOL
01:39:698 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing error here
02:30:014 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000 (current 0)) I suggest you to replace this spinner to slider

[Another]
Some pattern are boring, about replace 2 notes into slider? You can replace 2 notes into slider if 2 notes are unnesecary. And then, check the spacing please
00:15:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't stack please
00:26:976 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000 (current 1000)) I suggest you to replace this spinner to slider
00:41:407 (7) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:57:926 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer! Remove the new combo if unnescesary
01:00:841 (1) - Unsnapped in timeline
01:04:002 ~ 01:14:635 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all, remove it?
01:04:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't stack please
01:38:748 (6) - This slider is overlapped themself, remove this or replace to parallel slider?
02:10:837 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer! Remove the new combo if unnescesary
01:40:837 (1) - Cut short this slider to red tick

Please fix this, and I recheck it
Nice song
STAR

fix this now , please recheck thank


>>02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - Map this break for all diff
[Another] must add too?

owl13 wrote:

>>02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - Map this break for all diff
[Another] must add too?

Yes

Recheck time

[General]
1) Check the spacing for all diff
2) You forgot to fix about breaks

[Beginner]
00:11:217 (2) - Move backward to red tick in timeline
01:46:533 (8) - New combo
01:47:293 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
No BPM Adjustment is 2x, it could be difficult for Beginner Player
00:28:305 (2) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:29:065 (3) - ^
00:29:824 (4) - ^
02:00:394 (4) - Cut short this slider to red tick in timeline

[Hyper]
00:26:976 (1) - Still unrankable, delete this spinner, and then, make a slider

[Another]
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This 1/8 stream are unrankable, use 1/4 stream
01:51:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Thank

i'm Alreadyfix it

now [Normal] i edit the slider velocity , fix to 1X now

i use Aimod check the [Beginner][Normal][Hyper] is no problems now , Perhaps need recheck

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

ok thank ,

Done , And i add the x2 warning for [Another] and [Hyper] now

General:

-- Black is a bad combo color please change it.
-- You need a hitcircle overlay.
-- Remove "IIDX Beatmania" from tags, not necessary.

Beginner:

-- Remove audio lead in.
-- Recheck spacing with "Distance snap" active.

00:12:356 (1,2,3) - Too close.
00:15:394 (1,2) - ^
00:25:267 (6,1) - ^
00:35:141 (2,3) - ^
00:46:343 (2,3,4) - Confusing notes for beginner.
01:00:964 (5) - New combo.
01:11:597 (3,4) - Too far.
01:13:116 (1,2) - ^
01:14:635 (3,4,5) - ^
01:28:305 (1,2,3) - ^ etc make sure to recheck spacing.
01:37:419 (5) - New combo.
01:40:837 - Start kiai here.
01:50:900 (1) - Add finish.
02:01:723 (1) - End at 02:04:761
02:24:508 (1,2,3,4) - Hidden slider ends might confuse new player.
02:42:546 (1) - Consider spinner here like [Normal]

Normal:

00:25:837 -- Raise overall volume from here. By 2 or 3 ticks.
01:10:078 (1) - Slider hidden by previous note.

Some hidden sliders but most play fine.

Hyper:

- Use same kiai as other difficulties.
- Please recheck all spacing, some is confusing to play.

00:15:394 (1) - Jump is hard to read.
01:13:780 (3) - Start on white tick (01:13:875)?
01:58:685 (1,2) - Spacing. Too close.
02:37:989 (5,1) - ^ Too far, hard to read.

Another:

-- Make kiai the same.
-- Recheck all spacing! Lots are too far others too close. This difficulty is really confusing to play.
-- x2 slider velocity does not suit this song imo.

00:22:989 (1,2,3,4) - Unrankable. Slider returns and notes are hidden D:
00:31:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing?
00:33:622 (8,9) - ^ too close.
00:33:622 (8) - Ends on yellow tick make it land on white tick.
00:34:192 (9) - Ends on yellow tick make it land on white tick.
00:38:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider returns are completely hidden. [Unrankable]
00:41:407 (7,1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Stream doesn't fit anything in the music.
01:41:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing rhythm, and spacing again.
02:13:875 (1) - Unexpected slowdown.
02:42:356 (1) - Make this spinner longer.

The easier difficulties were more fun. Keep working on it

ok, thanks , i will Edit it ,

Now I'm fixed spacing note as [B][N][H] diff,

[A] i need some time to recheck it , i will keep working it =]

Hi

Beginner
01:43:495 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:45:014 (6) - Hitsound clap
01:47:293 (2) - Hitsound clap
01:48:812 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:50:331 (6) - Hitsound clap

Normal
01:35:521 (2) - Hitsound clap
01:37:040 (1) - Hitsound clap
01:40:457 (7) - Hitsound Finish
02:13:875 (5) - New combo here
02:30:204 (4) - Add a beat here

Hyper
00:15:014 (6) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right
00:18:432 (1) - New combo here
01:00:964 (5) - New combo here
01:35:331 (2,3) - Hitsound clap
01:35:331 (2,3) - Fix spacing
01:36:850 (5,6) - Hitsound clap

Another
General : re-check general spacing
00:34:192 (9,1) - This is rhythm out
01:52:609 (17) - Hitsound finish or clap

k starr*

thank you , i fix this now =]