1. Easy (2.57 stars, 124 notes)
2. Extreme (5 stars, 698 notes)
3. Normal (4.28 stars, 194 notes)

? All Diff Finished.Enjoy and mod it plz :D

Sallad4ever wrote:

[File Check]
- Size: 23458kb -- This is too big, you should decrease it. Cut the audio from the video that you used this will decreased the total file size or you can cut the mp3 or don't use video cause the video it self is not very interesting it's up to you. I delete the movie and make a SB,now it is smaller~
- There are 4 .osb file delete the other 3 (everything except the Hatsune Miku - Rottenga Rugurotesukuro (xsk1995).osb one) Delete all~

[Normal]
- Nice one, but this is more like Hard IMO, try asking other for this ummm...There are only 1/2 beats and i think it is not very hard

[Insane]
- I don't understand the multiple offset do you really need them? yeah.i fixed it
- This is great, but it's kinda long IMO
03:35:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - This stream is a little mess make it more neat ummm. i don't quite get you.Must i make the steam easier?

Sallad4ever wrote:

Yay Re-check

[General]
Great The SB is very interesting too it makes me a little scare
Delete hatsune miku and xsk in the tags, cause it's already in the artist and author, use vocaloid j song and the name of the song in english yeah,fixed
Didn't find anything wrong, some suggestion for the congratulation BG at the end, I like it more if you used some gothic miku BG. (You can ignore this cause this is my preference) i use a new congratulation BG now
And I still think you need easier diff i wii make a easy diff andl post this map to queue forum after it finish

[Normal]
00:59:542 (1) - This is really way off from the sound, is this intended ? if not move it to 00:59:320

I still don't like some of the offset, if you sure about all of those offset ignore this mod or you can find someone who's good with multiple timing.

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:38:880 (6) - These offsets are not needed cause you already use 0.5x bpm section, delete them, then make the slider's end to 00:39:324 and don't forget to add a 1x bpm section after the slider
00:49:543 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make this on their own combo
00:53:098 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:05:762 (3,4,5,6) - Make this into stream
01:06:207 (x) - add a note here?
01:14:871 (5,1) - This spacing is bad, you have to fix this
01:15:315 (6) - add new combo here and the remove new combo in 01:15:426 (1) so that it consistent with 01:15:982 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:19:536 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:201 (3) - remove this offset, then make the slider's end to 01:28:646 and don't forget to add 1xbpm section in 1:28:869
01:29:089 (1) - remove this offset and then re-snap all note
02:10:413 (1) - remove these offsets, use a 0.5bpm, make the slider's end at 02:11:748, and then add a note at 02:12:192. Also re-snap the note in 02:10:413 (1)
02:26:413 (1) - remove this offset and then re-snap all note
02:40:630 - remove this offset, use the 0.5x bpm then re-snap all notes
02:47:298 - remove this offset don't forget to re-snap
03:32:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is also kinda mess make it neater
03:35:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - you don't have to make it easier just make it more neat like the stream in 03:39:563 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5)
04:03:447 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - a little mess IMO change it?

All fixed,thanks a lot! kudoso~~

Dark Reiz wrote:

Spacing modding~

SPOILER

Normal:
00:11:997 (3) - put the slider a bit higher to match it with the end of (1) Fixed
00:34:658 (6) - I think it should be placed slightly to the right (Yes, I know it's a trifle )

Insane:
I couldn't really understand what spacing you used. Please, assure that distance snap tool is on and recheck the beatspacing.i used the spacing 0.8x except 1:29:091-1:57:751,3:02:016-3:28:399,3:42:896-3:44:673.because these parts used 2x BPM offset.if open the ds tool.it will make them too diffcult to play

Combo modding~

SPOILER

Normal:
00:13:108 (4) - new combo
00:44:212 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:097 (1) - ^
01:04:652 (11) - new combo
01:04:874 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:873 (1) - ^
01:08:207 (8) - new combo
01:09:095 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:095 (1) - ^
01:11:761 (9) - new combo
01:14:427 (1) - remove new combo
01:15:538 (5) - new combo
01:21:093 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:533 (1) - ^
01:39:533 (1) - ^
01:39:977 (7) - new combo
01:40:422 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:310 (1) - ^
01:41:977 (7) - new combo
01:42:421 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:641 (4) - new combo
01:53:530 (1) - remove new combo
01:54:418 (4) - new combo
01:55:307 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:196 (6) - new combo
01:56:862 (1) - remove new combo
All fixed

Insane:
00:09:553 (14) - new combo
00:09:775 (1) - remove new combo
00:11:219 (12) - new combo
00:12:219 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:108 (16) - new combo
00:13:774 (1) - remove new combo
00:14:885 (17) - new combo
00:23:772 (3) - ^
00:27:327 (3) - ^
01:31:312 (6) - ^
01:34:867 (6) - ^
01:36:645 (8) - ^
01:36:867 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:200 (5) - new combo
01:39:755 (1) - remove new combo
01:40:199 (11) - new combo
01:40:422 (1) - remove new combo
01:41:977 (6) - new combo
01:42:421 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:532 (7) - new combo
01:50:864 (12) - ^
01:51:086 (1) - remove new combo
01:52:641 (4) - new combo
01:54:418 (3) - ^
02:28:411 (1) - remove new combo
02:35:520 (1) - ^
03:03:571 (5) - new combo
03:07:126 (6) - ^
03:10:903 (6) - ^
03:12:013 (1) - remove new combo
03:18:012 (6) - new combo
03:24:900 (3) - ^
03:26:677 (3) - ^
03:53:560 (5) - ^
03:55:377 (5) - ^
03:56:226 (1) - remove new combo
03:57:115 (5) - new combo
03:58:892 (5) - ^
03:59:114 (1) - remove new combo
04:00:669 (10) - new combo
04:01:780 (1) - remove new combo
04:02:558 (6) - new combo
04:03:447 (1) - remove new combo
04:03:780 (1) - ^
04:03:891 (1) - ^
04:04:224 (11) - new combo
04:04:891 (1) - remove new combo
All fixed

Hitsound modding~

SPOILER

Normal:
01:39:311 (5) - needless whistle
01:56:196 (1) - whistle here?
02:00:639 (2,3) - ^
02:01:528 (4) - remove whistle?

Insane:
01:36:867 (2) - put clap here?
01:37:756 (4) - ^
01:43:199 (5) - needless clap here

all fixed

thanks!here are you kudoso

orioncomet wrote:

lol!! nice hitsound custom ; ) thank you~

[General]
- Delete "vocaloid" from TAG because It's already on Source FIXED
- BG Colour: Black FIXED
- Make sure that your Preview point all the Diffs are the same FIXED

[Easy]
hitsound mod

SPOILER

00:14:885 (1) - try sound finish FIXED
00:21:995 (1) - try sound finish at begin silder FIXED
00:38:880 (4) - try sound finish at last silder FIXED
00:45:323 (3) - ^ FIXED
01:01:097 (1) - try sound finish FIXED
01:57:973 (5) - ^ FIXED
02:10:415 (1) - ^ FIXED

[Normal]
- Overall -1? FIXED
hitsound mod

SPOILER

00:45:323 (6) - try sound finish FIXED
01:29:535 (3) - try sound finish at begin silder FIXED
01:57:751 (4) - try sound finish at last silder FIXED
02:01:528 (4) - try sound finish FIXED
02:10:415 (1) - try sound finish at last silder FIXED

[Insane] This diff should be [Challenging]... Orz ummm [extreme] ok?
- Re snap all note, I feel like many note that aren't snapped FIXED
00:11:330 - this timing seem useless? FIXED
01:01:096 - ^ FIXED
- add warning x2 BPM on some parts that use x2 speed silders.. I saw you already have it on the folder.. and If you're already add it, Plz try Full Submit again FIXED,that's my carelessness~
01:05:762 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing FIXED
02:07:302 (3,4,5,6) - ^ FIXED
02:12:192 (2) - try sound finish FIXED
02:49:519 (3) - spacing FIXED

starr ~ thanks!kudoso

xxheroxx wrote:

[Easy]

01:45:532 (4,1) - Spacing sure fixed~

thanks,and kudosu!

Real1 wrote:

Hi there, Crocodile!

[Easy]
00:45:323 (3) - How about extending this slider to 00:46:434? Fits better with the lyrics Fixed
01:40:199 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for easy! Make it easier! how about this?

SPOILER

This map should end with a longer spinner, like the one you used in normal. fixed


That's all. PM me when this map has 8 priority and these issues fixed for a pubble.

thanks and kudosu!

1. BPM : 135
2. Offset : 7776
   Remember to resnap all notes

1. 02:40:630 - background-hb.jpg comes too sudden, do some fade better

1. 81498a069bbe2cff7b8947be.jpg, background-hb.jpg, black.jpg is a little big, allowed bigest size is 800x600 pixel since they are SB sprites. And, combobursts should not be wider than 500 pixel
2. There's no video in your folder, are you forget to put it in? If so, please re-fullsubmit. Or, you should delete this code in your all diff.'s osu.file, for example [Extreme] diff. :
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"ex.diff.jpg"
   Video,0,"834c0c3638c1607f0f3329b1bb289eb928716532_baofeng.avi"
   //Break Periods
   2,15085,17540
   2,57742,60197
   2,132392,145511
   2,173050,179561
   2,224873,230882
   2,246201,248656
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   Delete red part
3. I think countdown didn't fit this song, turn off better, if you do so, delete count1s.wav, count2s.wav, count3s.wav

1. 00:21:995 - Unused timing section? There are few sound volume change :/
2. 00:58:653 (2,3) - sounds werid, use 3 sliders at 00:58:431 - 00:58:875, 00:59:320 - 00:59:764, 01:00:208 - 01:00:653 better
3. 01:07:984 (5) - sounds werid, try exten (4) to 01:08:207 with finish sound in slider end
4. 01:21:981 (4) - finish sound instead of whistle
5. 01:29:091 Timing section - Put it at 01:28:869 since there is sound change
   Oh, holy crap I hate normal whistle sound >:
6. 01:53:530, 01:55:307, 01:57:751, 02:00:195 Timing section - Put them before notes

1. 00:12:442 (3) - put the start of it stack with (1)'s end looked better
2. 00:13:553 (2) - stack front red (3)
3. 00:33:553 (4) - make end stack well with (3), turn off grid snap if possible
4. 00:59:331 (1) - no finish
5. 01:15:553, 01:15:998, 01:17:998, 01:18:887, 01:19:331, 01:19:775 Timing section - Put them before notes
6. 02:05:109 (2) - add finish

1. Oh, so many timing section right on notes, put them before notes, I'm lazy to point them out all lol (Remember, just those which has sound change, at slider/spinner middle or end is OK)

Breeze wrote:

Hi!Breeze!

SPOILER

[Timing]

1. BPM : 135 Fixed
2. Offset : 7776
   Remember to resnap all notes

[SB]

1. 02:40:630 - background-hb.jpg comes too sudden, do some fade better i need this style,so sorry

[General]

1. 81498a069bbe2cff7b8947be.jpg, background-hb.jpg, black.jpg is a little big, allowed bigest size is 800x600 pixel since they are SB sprites. And, combobursts should not be wider than 500 pixel fixed
2. There's no video in your folder, are you forget to put it in? If so, please re-fullsubmit. Or, you should delete this code in your all diff.'s osu.file, for example [Extreme] diff. :
   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"ex.diff.jpg"
   Video,0,"834c0c3638c1607f0f3329b1bb289eb928716532_baofeng.avi"
   //Break Periods
   2,15085,17540
   2,57742,60197
   2,132392,145511
   2,173050,179561
   2,224873,230882
   2,246201,248656
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   Delete red part Fixed
3. I think countdown didn't fit this song, turn off better, if you do so, delete count1s.wav, count2s.wav, count3s.wav Fixed

[Easy]All fixed

1. 00:21:995 - Unused timing section? There are few sound volume change :/
2. 00:58:653 (2,3) - sounds werid, use 3 sliders at 00:58:431 - 00:58:875, 00:59:320 - 00:59:764, 01:00:208 - 01:00:653 better
3. 01:07:984 (5) - sounds werid, try exten (4) to 01:08:207 with finish sound in slider end
4. 01:21:981 (4) - finish sound instead of whistle
5. 01:29:091 Timing section - Put it at 01:28:869 since there is sound change
   Oh, holy crap I hate normal whistle sound >:
6. 01:53:530, 01:55:307, 01:57:751, 02:00:195 Timing section - Put them before notes

[Normal] All fixed

1. 00:12:442 (3) - put the start of it stack with (1)'s end looked better
2. 00:13:553 (2) - stack front red (3)
3. 00:33:553 (4) - make end stack well with (3), turn off grid snap if possible
4. 00:59:331 (1) - no finish
5. 01:15:553, 01:15:998, 01:17:998, 01:18:887, 01:19:331, 01:19:775 Timing section - Put them before notes
6. 02:05:109 (2) - add finish

[Extreme] All fixed ,i guess

1. Oh, so many timing section right on notes, put them before notes, I'm lazy to point them out all lol (Remember, just those which has sound change, at slider/spinner middle or end is OK)

It takes so long time to mod lol
Awesome map anyway
have my blue and purple star
Real1 said he would pubble your map, so after fixed the red part in my post
you could ask Real1 for a pubble
good luck! ^ ^

lol thanks for you hard work ,kudos

LKs wrote:

lol LKs

OMG cool BG

vocaloid---> Vocaloid
girl romantic freak--->Girl Romantic Freak 改好了


Easy
[00:21:99] 这条绿线没用，删掉（如果你只是想标记的话用蓝线 快捷键ctrl+b
[00:45:32] ^
[01:08:42] move 1 grid down（grid level=3
[01:29:09] 记住，bpm和音效类型改变的时候，绿线要设在前面。比如这个绿线要设在这条白线之前
[01:29:09] 这里开始kiai？ 个人认为加kiai觉得可能会给玩家带来一点小小的困扰，特别是新手难度，我这里加了一小段kiai作为finish音的装饰 可以吗？
[01:56:19] 这里间距不对，调一下

除了[01.29.09] 全部改好了

Normal
你记住，如果有两个slider的首尾里的很近，那么就要把他们重合在一起。我把你需要改的发上来
[00:12:44]
[00:13:55]
[00:33:54]
[02'04'63]

完成


Extreme
有潜力，但是现在需要一些改动。记住不管多难要有固定的spacing，当然jump除外，你的有些排布的太杂乱了，让他们有序一点 1和0.5我用了0.8的间距 2x为了不至于变成到处跳来跳去用了0.3的间距 稍微改动了几个note 看看可以吗
[00:53;54] 向上一格
你的SB提示的位置不好，刚提示2X就来0.5x。换个时间出SB

应该改完了

大谢 Kudos

Real1 wrote:

Hello again. It seems my modding yesterday wasn't at my best. Heh. Blame the alcohol. I found some new things.


[Easy]
You have forgotten to RE-SNAP the notes after your new BPM from breeze. Please do. yaah.carelessness sorry
The HP drain is maybe a bit too high for an Easy, consider lowering it one or two ticks. fixed


[Normal]
The end spinner ends in silence, but not the Easy one. Make them consistent? fixed


[Extreme]
Maximum score is very high. However, the map is very hard, so it may, or may not be a problem. i hope not..

02:35:553 (4,5,6) - These three notes are hard to figure out. If you're gonna be evil, at least make the (4) a new combo! i don't think these three notes can make the map evil,and they are in the same sentence of lyric.so i don't think it is fit to make the (4) a new combo

03:36:220 (7) - Consider making this a new combo. fixed

Anyway kudos