1. Easy (1,35 stars, 210 notes)
2. Hard (2,53 stars, 368 notes)
3. Normal (1,77 stars, 252 notes)

Kazuya wrote:

Hey \o

It's only ideas!

[Hard]

00:09:520 (1) - Remove repeat, andput circles here: 00:09:975 - 00:10:088 - This fits to the vocals. nope, if notes were 1/6 snapped then yes, it will fit, but I didn't use 1/6, sorry.
00:17:250 (2,3,4) - ^ Timeline example: http://puu.sh/c742y/94c1ccc0aa.jpg same, I'll ignore these suggestions since I've already explained that u3u
00:24:071 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm hmm hmm. Position examples: http://puu.sh/c74az/241b184b63.jpg http://puu.sh/c74gc/49619fd7eb.jpg what about next notes =w= anyway I'll think something different
01:09:997 (2) - CTRL + G? yeah
01:15:568 - Missing circle. Put it here fits good~
01:17:728 (3) - 01:18:182 (4) - CTRL + G. Better jump. owo Move 01:18:637 (1) - circle here:x: 412 y: 224. Move 01:19:546 (3) - circle here: x: 100 y:224 I don't want to make a blanket uwu it breaks the flow imo
01:55:052 (1) - Remove repeat, and put circles here: 01:55:506 - 01:55:620 - This fits to the vocals.
02:02:782 (2,3,4) - Same as above: http://puu.sh/c742y/94c1ccc0aa.jpg (Timeline example.)
02:05:964 (1) - 02:06:874 (2) - CTRL + G. Better! agree o3o
02:18:696 (1) - Move slider here: x: 92 y: 328. owo Good jump. sounds nice but I'll keep my actual pattern for now >3<
02:47:798 (3,4) - Create jump. >_< Example: http://puu.sh/c75fw/7eef29c506.jpg I prefer the blanket
02:53:482 (2) - 3 circle better. >_< that slider follows good those vocals imo :3 it's ok

[Normal]

AR: 5! sure o3o

01:04:086 (3) - Hmm.Blanket? ^^; http://puu.sh/c75zs/e93cf099f4.jpg Move slider here: x: 144 y: 68 and move slider center (white tick) point here: x: 200 y: 44 fixed u3u
01:40:918 (2) - Long slider. It's not fit here. Follow the background effects (guitar). Timeline example: http://puu.sh/c7682/9479f04b52.jpg well my intention was doing a calm part here o3o
01:47:739 (3) - ^ Timeline example: http://puu.sh/c76ck/14eb6a82c4.jpg same
02:48:708 (2) - ^ Please follow the background effects. same
03:03:259 (2) - ^ same (I appreciate your good ideas though)
02:01:872 (4) - Blanket? ^-^; is there need to be fixed? it's ok imo.
02:10:966 (1) - Remove slider, put circle here: 02:10:966 - , and put 1/1 slider here: 02:11:421 - Better! owo Timeline: http://puu.sh/c75OT/e2f7f6be8a.jpg

[Easy]

00:25:435 (1) - Remove repeat, and move slider here: 00:25:890 - , put circle here: 00:25:435 - It sounds a lot better. actually there is no problem with that so I prefer to ignore that type of suggestions unless it's totally necessary uwu
00:39:986 (1) - ^ Remove repeat, move slider here: 00:39:986 - and put circle here: 00:39:986 -
01:27:277 (1) - First: Remove circle: 01:28:186 (2) - . Second: Move (01:27:277 (1) -) slider here: 01:27:731 - , and put circle here: 01:27:277 - Much better. owo
02:10:966 (1,2) - Better: Timeline example: http://puu.sh/c76P3/1c9a09b78e.jpg
02:42:796 (4) - move circle here: x: 256 y: 200 b-but the flow ;_;
03:19:174 (1,2) - Replace them.Timeline: http://puu.sh/c770l/6e0bd31dd8.jpg

Good luck. ^-^

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there~
These are just suggestions feel free to skip some of these
I don't really understand why u have multiple red lines, is it because the offset in the song changes? try to add only first offset, you will notice ofc it changes, have a better look ~

[Hard]

1. 00:10:088 - Circle here nope, that will be an overmap, that vocal is not in blue tick o3o
2. 00:10:884 - Rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/c85CC/e313be05b3.jpg (first white line visible is 00:10:884) first slider is ok but not the next one, I prefer my actual pattern
3. 00:24:071 - You should find a hitsound for this sound. (also 00:25:890, 00:27:709, etc). Drum finish could work well yeah maybe I should do it in all diffs... working on it
4. 00:50:444 (2) - IMO you should shorten this by 1 blue tick and put a circle here 00:50:899 so that the hitsound can match the music. If you do so, then normal sampleset on 00:50:785 and 00:51:127, and soft clap on 00:50:899 not sure about this, it's ok but I don't want to make this more difficult
5. 01:29:550 (1,2) - These 2 aren't parallel in case you were going for that ;w; fixed I guess
6. 01:34:438 (2) - use Normal smapleset there's no need imo, I want to use only soft sampleset o3o
7. 01:34:552 (3) - normal sampleset on sliderend same
8. 01:48:989 (2) - I think a normal hitnormal(no clap/finish/whistle) would be better than a soft clap yeah, I agree listened to it so many times and... I prefer to leave the clap there ;w; sorry
9. 02:00:508 (1,2) - Line up properly? fixed
10. 02:28:245 - Should get a normal hitnormal what I said
11. 02:42:683 and 02:43:024 - Use normal sampleset same
12. 02:56:893 (2) - Same as before, maybe you should shorten by 1 blue tick and place a circle at 02:57:347 so the hitsounds can match the music(i.e. normal sampleset here 02:57:234, softclap here 02:57:347) same
13. 03:11:785 and 03:12:126 - normal sampleset same

[Normal]

1. you probably should fix this XD http://puu.sh/c870l/0dcade5a57.png wth I didn't notice ;_; fixing it
2. 01:05:905 (1) - Should probably keep constant with the previous parts and not use a 2/1 slider was following one vocal ~
3. 01:13:180 (1) - ^ same
4. 02:13:695 (5,1) - If these 2 are meant to be blanketted then you should fix it hm... idk how, it's ok imo
5. 02:26:881 to 02:28:245 feels empty with the strong beats in the music. maybe a 1/1 slider from 02:27:336 to 02:27:791 that will be unrankeable xD it's just a small pause :3
6. 03:08:715 (1) - I'm disappointed you didnt flip this one lol, since this is the most odd shape slider in this part o3o?
7. That's all I see for this mode, maybe just follow some off the hitsound stuff in the hard diff mod if possible ~

[Easy]

1. 02:01:872 (2,4) - Stack pls I will be breaking symmetry uwu
2. 02:07:328 (4,1) - Blanket (when you're using red points on a slider I find it's easier to blanket with 2 white points in between the head and the red point instead of just one. Or if you use 1 it will work but u need to be very precise with that 1 dot) I'll try lol
3. 02:28:245 - Circle here (this part still feels kinda empty) not really, another pause o3o
4. All I could find ~ as long as you follow the rhythm it's ok

I'm kinda noob at hitsounding so my suggestions may be wrong but I just go by what I hear. If it's wrong, I'm very sorry

Good luck with your map!

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Inyuschan! req in-game

:idea: General

* Maybe not really necessary, but maybe add a bookmark at 00:07:246 (1) - so it's easier for other modders/BATs and maybe yourself to find the begin point.
* 03:12:353 - No KIAI here? hm... idk if it's necessary here since it's almost the ending
* Most of the hitsound problems in my mod are listed in 'Hard', so please check the other diffs for hitsound issues that I listed in the 'Hard' diff as well
* EDIT: You should check the title. I think it's "I'm Gonna Be (500 Miles)". I'm not completely sure, I'll ask a BAT
Sources you might want to use:
Wikipedia page of the song
YouTube-video on the official 'emimusic' channel
Amazon.co.uk entry from the album
iTunes entry of the album

Maybe you can also find some tags this way ^^

:arrow: Testplay

* Easy (+DT,HR) - Score ~ Replay
* Normal (+DT) - Score ~ Replay
* Hard (+DT) - Score ~ Replay

Easy

* 00:50:899 (4) - I'd be more logical to me if you put this directly on the y-axis, because of (2). b-but the flow... u3u
* 01:46:829 (3) - This is the easiest diff in the map, and imo the slider end is a little bit too far away from the spinner center. Not a big issue, but it'd be nice if you fixed it by slightly redoing this pattern. Try a symmetry-pattern with (1) nah I already did a symmetry-pattern
* 02:07:783 (1) - You can improve this blanket here. Use the code if you want. Also the DS seems a little weird, I made everything 1.05x here - would looks better this way. thanks a lot :3

96,272,127783,6,0,B|168:304|224:240|224:240|304:264,1,200
356,312,129147,2,0,P|372:264|360:212,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,130512,1,0,0:0:0:0:

* 02:30:519 (3,1) - This blanket could also be improved a little, by moving it a couple grids up/left. But if you decide to fix the blanket, make sure to check the symmetry in this combo after it. I think it's ok imo o3o
* 02:42:796 (4) - Same thing with the y-axis at the beginning of my mod, but it's not a very big issue here, because of the DS. same then

Normal

* 00:07:701 (2) - (all diffs) Consider adding a whistle here - the vocals change here. it doesn't sound good for me
* 00:14:976 (1) - Very nazi - but for symmetry with 00:11:339 (1) - put it on x236. that breaks the DS
* 00:18:614 (1) - Try stacking this on (3), doesn't look that perfect in the editor - but plays well. nah I prefer my actual pattern since is ok ;w;
* 00:36:348 (4) - Move this around x276,y122 - so the slider body covers (2) so it's in the middle of the slider. fixed I guess
* 01:13:180 (1) - With long sliders like these, I recommend to make the slider ticks a little louder than usual, so the player still hears something. I don't see any problem here owo
* 01:35:007 (1) - The middle slider tick in on the x-axis like (4) is. Now it looks like the slider is not perfectly symmetrical. Adjust the slider a little, like this? my fault >< done

* 01:47:739 (3) - Not sure about this one, but there's a NC/spinner in the Easy and Hard diff and not here. there's a spinner in easy. NC consistency is not the same as hard, so it's ok
* 02:03:236 (6,1) - This pattern would look better if it was perfectly symmetrical imo - but it's also fine now. hmm I don't see any problem o3o
* 02:07:783 (1) - I'd separate the two slider points a little bit further like 01:42:282 (1) - and 01:47:739 (3) - it looks better like that. it's not the same rhythm, maybe is because that ~
* 03:19:628 (1) - ^ there's only one point

Hard

* 00:22:252 & 02:00:508 etc.. - (In all diffs) Would be nice if you put some drum finishes with a volume of around or claps in sections like these. It'd really fit in my opinion. Try putting one on for example 00:24:071 (1) and see how it turns out ^^ okay, working on it... I've tested so many times and doesn't sound good imo :/
* 00:26:344 (2,4) - This is not blanket properly, but maybe it's on purpose o.o I didn't want to make a blanket
* 00:39:077 (2,3) - ^ it's ok imo D:
* 00:48:171 (2,3,1) - You could increase the DS here a little bit. The triangle formation is a little small here imo. wasn't intentional that triangle xD
* 01:04:086 (1,2) - The music is almost exactly the same as 00:27:709 (1,2) - (and other parts of the song) where you put whistles on the slider end - but now there are claps - make them consistent? Both sound fine, so I'd pick only one. trust me, is not the same ><
* 01:09:543 (1) - My personal preference, but consider adding a soft whistle on this? only using claps there
* 01:13:180 (1) - I really do recommend adding a whistle here, since the vocals here are slightly higher and louder than the rest. ^
* 01:20:456 (1) - You only have a finish here, while 00:36:803 (1) in the first KIAI has a whistle and a finish. Delete/add one? oops, fixed
* 01:30:460 (2,1) - Stack these perfectly. done
* 02:23:357 (1) - There's definitely a sound at the end of the spinner. A soft or a drum whistle fit in quite well here. maybe drum finish
* 02:26:881 (1,2,3) - The volume of the music is slowly increasing here, maybe add some extra green lines to make the notes gradually louder until the KIAI starts? why not <3
* 02:41:432 (1,2,3) - Fix the blanket with the first (1), it's nicely done with the second (1) though. any problem imo ~

This mapset is really nicely done, no unneeded jumps, nice sliders, good flow - and it's really fun with DT, even on the easier diffs! Look at the hitsounds a little, and this mapset should be ready for rank! Have a star and good luck!

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ o3o

<General>

Close "Widescreen Support"?? I guess it should open only when you have a SB!! oh yeah nice catch
Sorry I don't really good at Timing >.< it's ok c:

<Easy>

01:05:905 (1) - Move down 1 grid for better blanket~~ xD fixed
02:07:783 (1,2) - DS is too small~ (Move right 1 grid) true ;w;
03:19:174 (1,2,3) - Different DS too~ fixed

<Normal>

00:15:886 (2,3,4) - Make them to Straight?? Maybe X:196 Y:324 fixed in another way
00:50:899 (4) - Add a green line with Drum + clap? (Clap this whole slider) I don't want to add any drum sound, at least for now
02:28:245 (1) - Change to Drum + clap? same
02:42:796 (4) - ^ same
03:11:898 (4) - ^ same

<Hard>

00:12:703 (3,1) - These part I think all can Blanket better, hmm maybe it's just nazi~ But if you fix then I believe this map would be bette!!~r x3 done =w=
00:18:614 (1,2) - ^ I don't see any problem here
00:39:077 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:20:206 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:00:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:35:007 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^, I'm not sure about this ;w;
01:58:235 (3,1) - ^ fixed a bit
03:14:627 (2,3) - ^ this shouldn't be a problem

00:50:444 (2) - Try this beat~ follow the drum :3 I'm trying to avoid that rhythm... if it was insane I'd think about it but ┐(￣ー￣)┌
01:49:330 - Add a note here? yeah and fixed something else
02:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - These part should be (Drum + clap)!! If you accept, all add clap plz~~ :>
The whistle sound not really fit the music IMO~ fits good imo I use whistles in ~calm~ parts o3o
02:57:234 - End at 02:57:234 - and add a note at 02:57:347 - same as 00:50:444 (2) ~

That's all~ Relax song! ^^
Good luck~~

neonat wrote:

Easy

00:28:163 (4,1) - consider making this a blanket, cuz in the end 00:30:892 (3) can be another shape than what it is now since 00:30:892 (3,4) don't really blanket each other anyway Fixed all.
00:44:078 (1,3) - use the same shape? Would look nicer, it's kinda obvious they aren't the same They weren't? Well, fixed just in case.
01:40:009 (2,3) - 1.04x spacing is quite pushing the limits of 1.0x spacing, it can almost be perceived as a variation of 1.1x, visually, you can see that there is a difference in spacing here True, thanks.
01:45:465 (1,2,3) - allow the flow to curve more smoothly? I think I prefer what I did o3o

SPOILER

02:07:783 (1,2) - blanket? It's done.
02:25:062 (1) - Considering the song, I think the spinner would be better if it started at 02:23:471 where he holds the vocal and end it at 02:25:062 where he stops: Yeah, I guess so.

SPOILER

Normal

00:07:246 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why is the starting in a 4 beat phrase for NC, then it becomes 8 beat phrases all the way? Oops, fixed. NC should be each two stanzas.
02:13:695 (5,1) - blanket? I've tried to fix it
02:25:062 (1) - same suggestion as in Easy Same.

Hard

00:13:158 (1,2) - rotate them so that00:13:158 (1) can blanket 00:12:703 (3) - ? I don't really understand this ><
00:20:206 (3,1) - blanket? Fixed a bit.
00:26:344 (2,3,4) - this doesn't really look neat
00:26:572 (3,1) - blanket nicely
00:27:481 (5,2) - blanket? Improved all this stuff.
00:39:077 (2,3) - ^ Yep, fixed.
01:10:907 (4,1) - ^ I think this one is ok.
01:35:007 (1,2) - consider more spacing between them? it's like separate calls in the chorus phrase after all It's a good idea but I prefer to keep it as it is :3u
01:36:598 (4) - is not in the middle of 01:35:007 (1,3) either Hm... Maybe now ;w;
01:58:235 (3,1) - blanket? It's ok imo.
01:59:599 (2,3) - blanket isn't perfect I don't see any problem here ;w;
02:23:357 (1) - this was what should have been done in the previous 2 difficulties :\ lol Yeah well, I wanted to make Easy and Normal different because... well, easiest difficulties, I wanted more variety. Anyway thank you for mentioning this ;w;
02:37:567 (3,1) - blanket these instead, 02:36:885 (2,1) don't really match up anyway due to the low curve of 02:36:885 (2) It's ok for me, also I guess 02:36:885 (2,1) - are already blanket ><
02:48:253 (4,1) - blanket? k
03:05:078 (1,2) - ^ It's fine.
03:14:627 (2,3) - ^ Improved.

Could have had more wider spacing between each phrase in the vocals in the chorus for more emphasis and effect. Also if there was a difficulty with more vocal emphasis/melody rhythm, since the Hard was sadly mostly just beat-based rhythm, that would be great, it would make the map more interesting, because after awhile, it just got repetitive in Hard.


Good Luck

Nwolf wrote:

Source is not How I Met Your Mother, they've played that song for a much longer time True, but it's really known especially for HIMYM, anyway fixed x)