I am not so sure about timing, but your timing is definitely off. Try this.
BPM - 85.58
offset - 213ms
Remember to resnap after using this new timing.
NORMAL
This is not a Normal for sure, I suggest changing it to Hard.
00:14:193 (1) - Hrmm... I am not sure about this slider, since usually sliders with unknown direction are not allowed. But I suggest you still keep it until a MAT/BAT says you can't.
01:49:399 (1) - NO, a big NO ! There shouldn't be a slider hidden under a slider, BAT will sure won't approve this.
INSANE
This whole difficulty is a mess in terms of timing, I am sorry I am so blunt. xD
- 1st thing 1st, change beat snap divisor to 1/4
- 2nd, delete those timing sections with 255.25 bpm, you won't need those. (Unless you can tell me the reason you use 255.25 bpm at 00:25:009 in this difficulty but not in Normal) Anyway, delete it.
- Resnap all the notes. ( Go to Timing (just below the window) -> Resnap all notes (red fonts) )
- Notes usually don't fall on blue tick unless it's necessary or streams.
Mapping wise, this is quite ok for a 1st map. I like your usage of hitsounds, where you know when to use soft and when to use normal.
Oh yea, remember to make at least 1 difficulty with 3.5 stars and below. It is a must.
No star for now, after you fix timing, forum PM me back for a re-mod and star~ :3