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Nightwish - She Is My Sin

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NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月9日 at 20:30:01

Artist: Nightwish
Title: She Is My Sin
Tags: Wishmaster gothic metal rock
BPM: 153
Filesize: 3236kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.56 stars, 312 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 523 notes)
  3. Normal (3.2 stars, 132 notes)
Download: Nightwish - She Is My Sin
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...~Nightwish~
all diffs done...ready for modding.
3.1 add 3rd combo color, some other things fixed.
3.5 finally find a timing that makes me comfortable =v=
Last edited by NatsumeRin , edited 23 times in total.
Saten ruiko
196 posts
Joined November 2009
Saten ruiko
STAR~~
uranuss8600
99 posts
Joined July 2009
uranuss8600
STAR! ;)
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
Wishmaster gothic metal rock 写在source里面
musci track=1.5~2秒

normal+
作为normal+也难了，改为hard，再增加一个normal难度会更好
[00:13:40] no clap. use finish
[00:19:67] add finish
[00;45:06] 声音下降一格，有点大了
[01:03:88] ^
[01:48:28] add a note
[02:12:00] no whistle
[02:38:08] 这里用kiai不太好，因为这里是soft音效
[02:51:20] spacing太近了

insane
建议，或许做图多一点折返式slider会更好
[00:07:91] 之前的渐强音用的不错，这里也用一下
[00:25:59] no clap. use finish
[01:14:56] maybe finish?

all in all 不错的图，我觉得比夏祭做的好啊
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NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin

LKs wrote:

Wishmaster gothic metal rock 写在source里面 并不是series或game，觉得不合适
musci track=1.5~2秒 fixed

normal+
作为normal+也难了，改为hard，再增加一个normal难度会更好 有犯懒的因素。。。不过这个作为Hard不会过简单么。。。Edit：恩，还是加了个难度……
[00:13:40] no clap. use finish fixed
[00:19:67] add finish fixed
[00;45:06] 声音下降一格，有点大了 fixed，不过没降那么多= =
[01:03:88] ^ ^
[01:48:28] add a note fixed
[02:12:00] no whistle 这个个人感觉还是whistle更好。。。
[02:38:08] 这里用kiai不太好，因为这里是soft音效 其实insane也是的。。。本意就是高潮一normal高潮二soft。。。
[02:51:20] spacing太近了 fixed

insane
建议，或许做图多一点折返式slider会更好
[00:07:91] 之前的渐强音用的不错，这里也用一下 fixed
[00:25:59] no clap. use finish fixed
[01:14:56] maybe finish? soft的finish插进去不好听。提前用normal感觉怪怪的

all in all 不错的图，我觉得比夏祭做的好啊
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LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs
OMG..没注意你写的。。
希望多关注一下timing……
timing没问题，offest我感觉不错的。
position of preview point 是不是应该等于[01:29:079]
BPM=153 and resnap all notes(suggestion
NatsumeRin
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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

LKs wrote:

OMG..没注意你写的。。
希望多关注一下timing……
timing没问题，offest我感觉不错的。
position of preview point 是不是应该等于[01:29:079]
BPM=153 and resnap all notes(suggestion
BPM=153后面的音就失准了，原因不详……所以我才比较困扰timing问题。。。毕竟有个零头总觉得会有点别扭。。。
LKs
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Joined August 2009
LKs

NatsumeRin wrote:

BPM=153后面的音就失准了，原因不详……所以我才比较困扰timing问题。。。毕竟有个零头总觉得会有点别扭。。。
是吗。。如果是这样的话就不用改
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795
来这里问一下
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
>Requested Timing Mod<

~Overall~
  1. Add "Wishmaster Album" as a source
  2. Delete "wishmaster" tag
  3. I suggest to add 3rd combo color (Gray or Red)
  4. I have +1 or 2 ms

Star~

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Ask for re-mod, if you want Thunderstorm to check your map.
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
requested Mod session
Some suggestions
[Normal]
01:40:841 - spacing (no jumps on normal D:)

[Hard]
Slider tick rate 2?

Rest seems fine

BMP=153.07 (your 153.03)
Offset is fine, but on chorus it mistimising about 10 ms late

That's all

~star
JamesLeao
366 posts
Joined October 2008
JamesLeao
Insane:
01:28:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 我觉得这里那么小声的话，不如弄个slider（建议

Hard:
Fine

Normal:
Fine

没什么很严重的地方，我也不想挑刺，Good Luck
Teara
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Teara
Nice, nothing major, but take a look at these please :)

Star for a good beatmap

[General]

Delete the .osb

Combo colours~ I personally dislike black/white combo colours, but in this case, try these

white/gray ( makes it a lot easier to see the approach circle. )

Combo1 : 128,128,128
Combo2 : 255,255,255

[Normal]

Reduce slider tick.

00:41:245 (3) - Should start on the red tick? (00:41:049)
00:59:281 (2) - New combo? maybe
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
timing is enough fine.
i just come to shoot my star for you since jamesleao already modded it.
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Normal
00:13:016 (4) - make it in-line w/ 00:12:232 (3)
00:23:994 (2) - move 1 tiny grid left
00:38:893 (1) - make this slider symmetry
00:53:008 (5) - move 1 tiny grid right
01:44:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - :3 nice mapping for normal diff
Hard
00:59:281 (2) - symmetry
02:18:284 (3) - move to the previous red tick? it follows the vocal better
Insane
8-)

A fine beatmap :D
STAR!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO!

[General]
1) Source?

[Normal]
~Timing~
00:01:744 (T) - Snap the green timing section here
00:03:704 (T) - ^
00:04:880 (T) - ^
00:06:841 (T) - ^
01:14:866 (T) - ^
01:16:434 (T) - ^
01:25:844 (T) - ^
01:33:882 (T) - ^
01:35:254 (T) - ^
01:40:155 (T) - ^
01:41:625 (T) - ^
01:46:428 (T) - ^
01:47:800 (T) - ^
01:52:505 (T) - ^
01:54:172 (T) - ^

~Hitsound~
00:24:778 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:57:713 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:03:986 (1) - ^
01:07:122 (1) - ^
01:13:396 (3) - ^
01:22:805 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:32:215 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:44:762 (1) - Add a finish hitsound

[Hard]
~Timing~
00:01:744 (T) - Snap the green timing section here
00:03:704 (T) - ^
00:04:880 (T) - ^
00:06:841 (T) - ^
00:23:504 (T) - ^
01:07:024 (T) - ^
01:16:434 (T) - ^
01:25:844 (T) - ^
01:28:099 (T) - ^
01:28:295 (T) - ^
01:28:491 (T) - ^
01:28:687 (T) - ^
01:28:883 (T) - ^
01:33:882 (T) - ^
01:35:254 (T) - ^
01:40:155 (T) - ^
01:41:625 (T) - ^
01:46:428 (T) - ^
01:47:800 (T) - ^
01:52:505 (T) - ^
02:03:483 (T) - ^
02:03:876 (T) - ^
02:04:268 (T) - ^
02:04:660 (T) - ^
02:05:052 (T) - ^
02:06:718 (T) - ^
02:16:030 (T) - ^
02:23:871 (T) - ^
02:25:440 (T) - ^
02:34:850 (T) - ^
02:36:614 (T) - ^
02:37:398 (T) - ^
02:38:084 (T) - ^
03:03:177 (T) - ^

~Hitsound~
00:16:937 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:22:805 (1) - ^
01:25:942 (1) - ^
01:26:530 (2) - ^
01:27:118 (3) - ^
01:32:215 (1) - ^
01:35:352 (1) - ^
01:38:489 (1) - ^
01:40:057 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
02:06:718 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
02:23:969 (3,4,5,6) - Add a finish hitsound
02:28:674 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
02:31:811 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
02:34:948 (1) - ^
02:35:536 (3) - ^
02:44:357 (1) - ^
02:47:494 (6) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
02:53:767 (1) - ^
02:56:904 (1) - Add a finish hitsound

[Insane]
~Timing~
00:01:744 (T) - Snap the green timing section here
00:03:704 (T) - ^
00:04:880 (T) - ^
01:14:866 (T) - ^
01:16:434 (T) - ^
01:28:099 (T) - ^
01:28:295 (T) - ^
01:28:491 (T) - ^
01:28:687 (T) - ^
01:28:883 (T) - ^
01:33:882 (T) - ^
01:35:254 (T) - ^
01:40:155 (T) - ^
01:41:625 (T) - ^
01:46:428 (T) - ^
01:47:800 (T) - ^
01:52:505 (T) - ^
02:03:483 (T) - ^
02:03:876 (T) - ^
02:04:268 (T) - ^
02:04:660 (T) - ^
02:05:052 (T) - ^
02:06:718 (T) - ^
02:12:893 (T) - ^
02:16:030 (T) - ^
02:23:871 (T) - ^
02:25:440 (T) - ^
02:34:850 (T) - ^
02:36:614 (T) - ^
02:37:398 (T) - ^
02:38:084 (T) - ^

~Hitsound~
00:16:937 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:20:073 (1) - ^
00:38:893 (1) - ^
01:22:805 (1) - ^
01:25:942 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:26:530 (3) - ^
01:35:352 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
02:28:674 (1) - ^

Not bad
STAR
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
mod迟了不好意思，既然timing好了我就挑一下好了


Normal
01:26:530(1) - 你想(1)在play的时候站在正中间的话，就把他移下1 grid(gird lv2)
01:46:918(x) - Add a circle
01:47:898(x) - Add a circle
上面的两个circle要加就一起加

Hard
note没snap好
01:53:387(1) - 同Normal

Insane
note没snap好
02:56:904(x) - Add a circle
02:57:296(x) - Add a circle
03:02:393(1) - 同Hard


SPOILER
要挑刺的确是有不少可以挑的,总体感觉玩得就像自己是个人工节拍器
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Capitalize the title.

[Insane]

03:06:314 (1,2,3) - IMO it's too loud. The finish is enough in this case, please lower the volume. Do the same in [Hard] too.

I don't know about the timing at all, sadly it might be off. Ask someone good in timing to check it.
NatsumeRin
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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
all fixed except for the many green timing sections....
because most of them are just for hitsounds, so i just resnap sections around kiai time.
Breeze
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Breeze
只用红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他都只是建议

[Timing]
  1. BPM : 153.05
  2. Offset : 878
    记得resnap all note,还有让timing section对准时间线(至少让kiai设置的对准)
[General]
  1. osb文件没有用,请删掉再full-submit
  2. 我觉得没必要使用audio lead-in,当然要用的话也没问题
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:161 (1,3,5,7) - 这里的clap放在(2,4,6)和7的结尾比较合适,我给你的timing已经把长白线对准鼓声,对着鼓声所在白线下clap不会错的,不过也只是建议,你这么放clap听起也顺
  2. 00:54:573 (1-6) - 这里就是对准长白线,然后每2条白线的clap,这个就很好
  3. 01:05:946 (3) - 加clap?
  4. 01:29:074 (T) - 在这个timing section之前设一个和这个音量设置一样的timing section,不过不用设KIAI,因为有音量变化
  5. 01:33:887 (T) - 为什么这里要降低音量呢?
  6. 01:35:357 (1-6) - 这里clap有点乱...以01:35:749为开始,每隔2条白线放一个clap,即:
    01:35:749 (1), 01:36:534 (2), 01:37:318 (3), 01:38:102 (4), 01:38:887 这里没note,不放clap或者设SB clap, 01:39:671 (5)
  7. 01:41:632 (1...) - 这一串从(2开始加clap : )
[Hard]
  1. Slider Tick Rate : 2
  2. 00:08:298 (3,4) - 这里slider结尾的clap听着不是那么顺 :/
  3. 01:33:897 (T) - 仍然不知道为什么这里要降低音量
  4. 02:18:495 (4) - 往左边一格(lv3)
    有些地方clap我也建议每隔2条白线放一个,不过这难度按背景重音加clap的方法也很不错
[Insane]
  1. 02:06:338 (10-11) - 这2个clap太奇怪了,去掉吧
nice map
改好后PM我,差不多可以pubble了 : )
NatsumeRin
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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Breeze wrote:

只用红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他都只是建议

[Timing]
  1. BPM : 153.05
  2. Offset : 878
    记得resnap all note,还有让timing section对准时间线(至少让kiai设置的对准)
我觉得这个BPM & offset 更不合适……试了很多次，都不行。

[General]
  1. osb文件没有用,请删掉再full-submit fixed
  2. 我觉得没必要使用audio lead-in,当然要用的话也没问题
减到了1秒

[Normal]
  1. 00:45:161 (1,3,5,7) - 这里的clap放在(2,4,6)和7的结尾比较合适,我给你的timing已经把长白线对准鼓声,对着鼓声所在白线下clap不会错的,不过也只是建议,你这么放clap听起也顺 这里没改
  2. 00:54:573 (1-6) - 这里就是对准长白线,然后每2条白线的clap,这个就很好 谢谢= =
  3. 01:05:946 (3) - 加clap? 没加，这里作为slider可以顿一下，折射到taiko里是9hits黄条，都无伤。
  4. 01:29:074 (T) - 在这个timing section之前设一个和这个音量设置一样的timing section,不过不用设KIAI,因为有音量变化 fixed
  5. 01:33:887 (T) - 为什么这里要降低音量呢? 改掉了
  6. 01:35:357 (1-6) - 这里clap有点乱...以01:35:749为开始,每隔2条白线放一个clap,即:
    01:35:749 (1), 01:36:534 (2), 01:37:318 (3), 01:38:102 (4), 01:38:887 这里没note,不放clap或者设SB clap, 01:39:671 (5)     采用的是o o o x o o x o这个节奏，接的折返slider恰好是x o o所以感觉有点乱？但是并不打算改成千篇一律的节奏形式。
  7. 01:41:632 (1...) - 这一串从(2开始加clap : )
改了1:46:227（2）这个音为clap，前面维持的节奏同上。

[Hard]
  1. Slider Tick Rate : 2 fixed。这样在各模式上都更顺。
  2. 00:08:298 (3,4) - 这里slider结尾的clap听着不是那么顺 :/ 没动，尽管我也觉得有点但是全normal更糟糕。。。
  3. 01:33:897 (T) - 仍然不知道为什么这里要降低音量 fixed
  4. 02:18:495 (4) - 往左边一格(lv3) 没动，维持和（6）对称位，（3）是我故意往左拉了一格的。
    有些地方clap我也建议每隔2条白线放一个,不过这难度按背景重音加clap的方法也很不错
[Insane]
  1. 02:06:338 (10-11) - 这2个clap太奇怪了,去掉吧
和之前(4-5)是对应音，没有动

nice map
改好后PM我,差不多可以pubble了 : )
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