1. Cool (4.11 stars, 169 notes)
2. Heat (4.91 stars, 366 notes)

greenpoint0 wrote:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1LdIKJ3gw4

Dusty wrote:

The sliderticks sound really strange near the beginning because they go off-beat, maybe custom-sound silence them? And I think that the hitsounds are loud, maybe lower their volume a little? Changed the patterns and reverted the slider tick rate to remove the horrible-sounding ticks.

[Cool]
00:07:032 (1) - maybe symmetrical? Or not, it could seem strange. But it seems strange to me right now already, well, whatever. Not going for symmetry here.
02:04:571 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack these (and make a symmetrical triangle surrounding the center)? It seems anticlimactic They're there to emphasize the raindrop on the video. There's nothing much to do here, anyways.

[Heat]
00:12:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this confused me, partly because (3,4) get covered up a little bit by the purple slider, and a little bit because (1,2) are 1/4 beat apart while (3,4) are 1/2 beat apart, so I couldn't tell what the pattern was until I went into editor. Moved (2,3) away from slider.
01:50:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ These patterns don't seem to be in the music, either, which doesn't help :< Sure they do. I played a bit with the hitsounds to incorporate some of my own beats, which is probably already playing with the music itself. More of a personal thing.
02:04:571 (1,2,3) - same as Cool? See comment on same time in Cool.

Lokamp wrote:

Cool
02:04:571 (1,2,3) - move them on the center of the screen and let the previous spinner end a timing tick early. After a thorough check with this part, I actually the spinner end a tick later. Did not do anything to the three notes, as I don't want them to sit boringly at dead center. Still, I should probably thank you for letting me notice the spinner.

Heat
[General] Too much 12+ combo series... you had better to shrink some of them. Shortened some of the longer combo chain.
00:46:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - find a more original spacing, please. (plus, new combo on 5th) Changed the pattern.

Another well-made composition starred. Now let's play some Rhythm Tengoku :3

rust45 wrote:

Maybe add "Heaven" to the tags?

[Cool]
00:07:032 (1) - This is rather short for the easiest diff IMO. I really don't think most noobs will be able to pull this off first try. Fixed.
00:14:649 (1) - Place 1/4 back. No. I made the previous notes sync with the 1/1 ticks for a reason, and placing this back will only confuse most newbies.
00:22:032 (1) - Another iffy spinner. Unlike the other spinners, this one merits the short duration. It's reasonable in my opinion.
00:53:673 - This break spans for nearly 20 seconds, I don't see why it needs to be this long. (Keep in mind some people don't play with video in case that is the reason) This map has a semi-progressive way of increasing difficulty. This break prepares the players for the chorus.
01:10:782 (1) - Another iffy spinner. Same with 00:22:032.
01:52:149 (1) - Place 1/4 back Same with 00:14:649.
01:59:532 (1) - Once again, may be too short for noobs. Fixed.

[Heat]
Fun, but the small circles aren't my cup of tea, but it's fine the way it is.

Have a star for one of my favorite songs and games off of Rhythm Heaven. And don't forget the good maps.

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
Offset: Seems to be spot-on!
SB: Cute :3

[Cool]
As a Normalish difficulty, I see no problems, but I think that this is a little bit too hard to be the easiest difficulty. Already talked about this in IRC, but to clarify for those who weren't there: I tried compensating for the 1/4 notes by adding patterns that would easily lead the 1/4 notes. Lowered the difficulty settings, nonetheless.

[Heat]
Fun :3

I'd pubble this right now, but I really think that it could use an easier diff. That, or give Cool larger circles, and fix some of the blue tick notes (as they would be very unpredictable and hard to 300 for newer players).