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Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 13 marca 2010 at 01:41:03

Artist: Thomas Newman
Title: First Date
Source: WALL-E
Tags: Ost Movie Pixar Soundtrack
BPM: 119
Filesize: 8895kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,65 stars, 163 notes)
  2. Normal (3,06 stars, 103 notes)
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Nice song from movie WALL-E <my favourite animated movie atm>.
I just had to make it.
This map is really not so hard.
Enjoy :]

Changelog:
Update 1 <4.03.2010> : Midget's and Breeze's suggestions, hitsounds changes
Update 2 <5.03.2010> : Fartownik's, James2250, Orioncomet's, VanMoNky's and Matma_Rex's suggestions, changed Distance Spacing in Normal to 1.0 <check it>
Update 3 <5/6.03.2010> : Updated Normal difficulty (it's now longer)
Update 4 <6.03.2010> LKs suggestions
Update 5 <7.03.2010> James2250's, Samipale's and Neo Adonis suggestions
Update 6 <8.03.2010> Offset change (from 170 to 162)
Update 7 <9.03.2010> ErufenRito's suggestions
Update 8 <11.03.2010> Beuchi-chan's suggestions
Update 9 <13.03.2010> Astom's suggestion
Ranked - 13.03.2010 by Mafiamaster :D
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Resize/crop BG. (1024x768 is Max)
  2. Delete .osb file.
  3. I suggest offset: 163
~Normal~
  1. I suggest Circle size: 2
  2. 00:18:440 (1) - This is unrankable | Make it longer or remove it.
  3. 00:24:364 (4) - Don't use 1/8. Place a note instead.
~Hard~
  1. I suggest Circle Size: 3
  2. 01:06:477 (1) - Start it on red tick.
Try to mod it yourself as well.

Star~
Breeze
Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are just suggestions

Wow, Wall E, I love this movie, cute Wall E

[Timing]
  1. Offset : 163
    I'm not sure the timing, BPM seem not a integral number >: (
[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit
[Normal]
  1. soft sound too loud, try 75%
  2. 00:18:429 (S) - Unrankable spinner, auto play should at least could get 2000 bonus
  3. 00:38:230 (3) - Can't tell which side to go :/ Please move end out of start
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:364 (S) - this spinner to short
  2. 01:00:919 (1-6) - Hard to read, maybe 3,5 new combo or change them
  3. 01:13:524 (S) - Maybe silence the end better
Short song, nothing much to mod
I'm not good at hitsound, you should ask more modder to give you hitsound suggestions
star
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Midget wrote:

~Overall~
  1. Resize/crop BG. (1024x768 is Max) Changed size of image to maximum allowed.
  2. Delete .osb file. Done.
  3. I suggest offset: 163 Changed offset to 163.


~Normal~
  1. I suggest Circle size: 2 Changed size to 2.
  2. 00:18:440 (1) - This is unrankable | Make it longer or remove it. I replaced it with circles.
  3. 00:24:364 (4) - Don't use 1/8. Place a note instead. Removed this slider and placed circle.


~Hard~
  1. I suggest Circle Size: 3 Changed size to 3.
  2. 01:06:477 (1) - Start it on red tick. Done.


Breeze wrote:

Wow, Wall E, I love this movie Same :D

[Timing]
  1. Offset : 163
    I'm not sure the timing, BPM seem not a integral number >: ( Offset is now 163. I'll ask some people to look at BPM, but imo its good with this one.


[General]
  1. osb.file didn't used, please delete it then full submit Done.

[Normal]
  1. soft sound too loud, try 75% Soft sound is ~75%.
  2. 00:18:429 (S) - Unrankable spinner, auto play should at least could get 2000 bonus Replaced.
  3. 00:38:230 (3) - Can't tell which side to go :/ Please move end out of start Moved end of slider a bit.


[Hard]
  1. 00:24:364 (S) - this spinner to short I made it longer, so auto gets now 2k bonus.
  2. 01:00:919 (1-6) - Hard to read, maybe 3,5 new combo or change them Changed spacing.
  3. 01:13:524 (S) - Maybe silence the end better Silenced.


Short song, nothing much to mod
I'm not good at hitsound, you should ask more modder to give you hitsound suggestions I'll try to find some people to look at whole map.
Thanks for you both ;)
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Move "Movie" from source to tags. Remove "wall-e" from tags.
2. Add kiai time. Perhaps, from 00:50:583 to 01:13:272?

[Normal]
-- Map the rest of the song. It's a 1 minute song.
00:38:230 (3) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!]
00:46:549 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Normal hitsound is not fit to this part. Sounds weird.

[Hard]
00:16:171 - This point, the hitsound is too loud.
00:38:230 (1) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!]
00:42:389 - This point, the hitsound is too loud.
00:49:574 (1) - It's hidden slider. It's unrankable. Move it somewhere. [!]
01:06:465 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
Star. This is nice.
James2250
you don't need walle wall-e in tags as its in source

Normal:
00:38:230 (3) - separate start and end points more
why not map all of this like hard?

Hard:
00:35:457 (1) - remove new combo?
00:36:969 (1) - ^
00:38:230 (1) - ^ (and I would seperate start and end points more)
00:55:625 (1) - ^
01:01:297 (1) - remove new combo?
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick)

nicely done
*star*
orioncomet
[General]
- offset: 1,173 - resnap all note.. err... about bpm BPM Analyzer told me 90.. but.. orz too slow, No fit for me
- Delete "wall-e" from TAG Because It's already on Source
- Delete "Movie" from Source

[Normal]
00:49:574 (1) - try replace sound finish with clap, can you make this spinner longer then this? This spinner is too short for Normal, IMO, Maybe make it longer like Hard

[Hard]
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick)

starrrrrr
Matma Rex
[Normal]
Jakiś taki ucięty ten diff jest D:
00:23:860 (3) - poprzednie notki trochę to zaslaniają, może być mylące (zwłaszcza w najłatwiejszym diffie).
00:31:423 (4) - nowe kombo?
00:38:230 (3) - kurde, brzydko wygląda to złączenie początku z końcem. Albo powinno się nakładać (i musisz dorobić jakieś strzałki w storyboardzie), albo (prawie) w ogóle nie stykac. Zresztą, strzałki to bym i teraz dorobił.

[Hard]
Jesli chce ci się, to mozesz pozmieniać te "ostre" slidery na ladne, okrągłe D: (np. 00:30:163 (4))
00:38:230 (1) - patrz Normal.
00:50:331 (3,4,5,6) - o fu, to jest mylące D: Ale generalnie rzecz biorąc OK.
01:00:919 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dodaj jeszcze jedną notkę, żeby konczylo sie na bialym ticku.
01:06:465 (1) - sekcję wyciszającą lepiej dać albo na samym końcu slidera (dosłownie 1/8 przed), albo na samym początku. Teraz, jeśli ktoś będzie miał bonus na sliderze, to najpierw będą "bing"-i, a potem nagle nie.
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Matma Rex wrote:

[Normal]
Jakiś taki ucięty ten diff jest D: Pod wieczór dorobię resztę :p
00:23:860 (3) - poprzednie notki trochę to zaslaniają, może być mylące (zwłaszcza w najłatwiejszym diffie). Done.
00:31:423 (4) - nowe kombo? Nowe kombo zrobione.
00:38:230 (3) - kurde, brzydko wygląda to złączenie początku z końcem. Albo powinno się nakładać (i musisz dorobić jakieś strzałki w storyboardzie), albo (prawie) w ogóle nie stykac. Zresztą, strzałki to bym i teraz dorobił. Zmienione <i w hardzie i normalu>

[Hard]
Jesli chce ci się, to mozesz pozmieniać te "ostre" slidery na ladne, okrągłe D: (np. 00:30:163 (4)) Zmieniłem 2 slajdery na bardziej zaokrąglone.
00:38:230 (1) - patrz Normal. Zmienione <i w hardzie i normalu>
00:50:331 (3,4,5,6) - o fu, to jest mylące D: Ale generalnie rzecz biorąc OK. D: Jeden z niewielu momentów, w których można tego diffa nazwać "hardem" :/
01:00:919 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dodaj jeszcze jedną notkę, żeby konczylo sie na bialym ticku. Done + zmieniłem timing o jednego ticka 1/4 do przodu.
01:06:465 (1) - sekcję wyciszającą lepiej dać albo na samym końcu slidera (dosłownie 1/8 przed), albo na samym początku. Teraz, jeśli ktoś będzie miał bonus na sliderze, to najpierw będą "bing"-i, a potem nagle nie. Rozumim, dałem na samym początku + wieczorem zmienię odgłos bonusu za spinnery na pusty.
Wielkie dzięki za +star i moda :D




orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- offset: 1,173 - resnap all note.. err... about bpm BPM Analyzer told me 90.. but.. orz too slow, No fit for me Well, Analyzer about BPM said that correct timing should be 119,13 - it doesnt fit into this song. D: + sorry, i didnt changed offset - its same as this currently one < at least it seems like it's not D: >.
- Delete "wall-e" from TAG Because It's already on Source Done.
- Delete "Movie" from Source Moved to "tags".

[Normal]
00:49:574 (1) - try replace sound finish with clap, can you make this spinner longer then this? This spinner is too short for Normal, IMO, Maybe make it longer like Hard It's now with "finish" hitsound. I'll make more of Normal today later.

[Hard]
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick) Done.

starrrrrr Thankya =D


James2250 wrote:

you don't need walle wall-e in tags as its in source Done.

Normal:
00:38:230 (3) - separate start and end points more Done <in normal and hard>.
why not map all of this like hard? I'll map it today, but later.

Hard:
00:35:457 (1) - remove new combo? Done.
00:36:969 (1) - ^ Done.
00:38:230 (1) - ^ (and I would seperate start and end points more) Done.
00:55:625 (1) - ^ Done.
01:01:297 (1) - remove new combo? Done.
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick) Done.

nicely done
*star* Thanks, and thanks c:

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Move "Movie" from source to tags. Remove "wall-e" from tags. Moved to tags, removed.
2. Add kiai time. Perhaps, from 00:50:583 to 01:13:272? Sure, added :D I'll add it also to Normal, but after i'll mod it.

[Normal]
-- Map the rest of the song. It's a 1 minute song. I will map it today.
00:38:230 (3) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!] Done.
00:46:549 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Normal hitsound is not fit to this part. Sounds weird. Changed hitsounds.

[Hard]
00:16:171 - This point, the hitsound is too loud. Well, to be honest i really like this part <+ hitsounds are fitting into song> - and thats why i made it louder than other parts of songs D: I'll make it more silenced after ill ask more people to look at it.
00:38:230 (1) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!] Done.
00:42:389 - This point, the hitsound is too loud. ^up
00:49:574 (1) - It's hidden slider. It's unrankable. Move it somewhere. [!] Moved.
01:06:465 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick. Done.

Star. This is nice.Thankya ;)

Thanks guys.
fartownik
Offset: 170 (+7)

[Normal]

Please map it to the end. The whole map has only 2 difficulties so they should be fully mapped.

00:43:020 (4,1) - Swap new combo.
00:44:028 (3,1) - ^
00:47:053 (5,1) - ^


[Hard]

00:26:139 (3) - Curve it prettier? :P
00:36:475 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too loud and the samples sound strange. Could you hitsounds it another way?
00:38:240 (3) - Maybe a horizontal flip? The pattern goes left and suddenly changes right by this slider. It should fit better.
01:00:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It isn't unrankable, but the stream like this in the difficulty like this? :P You can keep it, but I suggest to change this pattern.

Cool relaxing map ;) Not much issues.
+star
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

fartownik wrote:

Offset: 170 (+7) Done in both difficulty's.

[Normal]

Please map it to the end. The whole map has only 2 difficulties so they should be fully mapped. Done.

00:43:020 (4,1) - Swap new combo. Done.
00:44:028 (3,1) - ^ Done.
00:47:053 (5,1) - ^ Done.


[Hard]

00:26:139 (3) - Curve it prettier? :P Done... i think.
00:36:475 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too loud and the samples sound strange. Could you hitsounds it another way? Well, tbh i don't have much ideas to make hitsounds in there D: I'll think about it and ask other people.
00:38:240 (3) - Maybe a horizontal flip? The pattern goes left and suddenly changes right by this slider. It should fit better. Flipped.
01:00:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It isn't unrankable, but the stream like this in the difficulty like this? :P You can keep it, but I suggest to change this pattern. Changed placing.

Cool relaxing map ;) Not much issues.
+star Thank you for mod & star =)
Weird... Whatever, i removed <again> few tags and changed source.
LKs
WALL-E~>w<

general

source & Tags : Ost Movie Pixar Soundtrack
make music lead in = 2s
imo,this map no need a kiai..cause this is a relax song

Normal

[00:38:23] change shape?
[00:38:23] no finish, use whistle

Hard

[00:04:07] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%
[00:08:23] remove the slider .and set a circle here (and whistle
[00:12:14] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%
[00:33:66] remove finish .maybe add finish at [00:33:95] ?
[00:38:23] i dont think this very beautiful.. so change shape for better effect
[00:40:25] remove clap. Normal-finish(C1) or Soft-whistle are fit here
[00:49:32] no hitsound here
[00:52:48] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%

good map. star!

:!: samipale may mod this map too
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

LKs wrote:

general

source & Tags : Ost Movie Pixar Soundtrack Replaced.
make music lead in = 2s It's like this all the time... o.o
imo,this map no need a kiai..cause this is a relax song I'll leave it, but i'll think about deleting/replacing it.

Normal

[00:38:23] change shape? Why D: Imo it doesn't look so bad.
[00:38:23] no finish, use whistle Whistled.

Hard

[00:04:07] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.
[00:08:23] remove the slider .and set a circle here (and whistle) Removed.
[00:12:14] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.
[00:33:66] remove finish .maybe add finish at [00:33:95] ? Removed finish sound. I think it sounds weird with finish at [00:33:95].
[00:38:23] i dont think this very beautiful.. so change shape for better effect I'll leave it. If some more people will ask about it, i'll change this.
[00:40:25] remove clap. Normal-finish(C1) or Soft-whistle are fit here Done - Soft-Whistle.
[00:49:32] no hitsound here Done.
[00:52:48] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.

good map. star! Thank you (:
RobalPboo
Nice beatmap :)
You are nice mapper , Mr. Gaddy
Star'd*
James2250
Normal:
looks good

Hard:
00:07:733 (1) - remove new combo (so its the same as normal)
then make 00:08:993 (6) a new combo
00:40:38 timing section isnt needed?

I would also recommend removing the kiai as it doesn't really fit with such a relaxing song
call me back after fixes and I will pubble
SamiPale
[Normal]
Seems no problem around,but the volume of soft-whistle is too loud.

[Hard]
00:04:077,00:16:178,00:28:279,00:42:396 - volume problem too

00:08:993(3) - add whistle
00:22:733(5) - suggestion,this circle move to 00:22:228?
00:23:111(7) - suggestion,hitsound of the end try to use Normal-Finish(no custom sound)?(Low the volume)
00:45:043(5) - i heard just one clap around,try to add more
00:56:640(1) - hitsound try to use Normal-Normal at beginning and use Normal-Clap at end
00:57:396(2) - hitsound Normal-Normal

SPOILER
notes and hitsound setting are good
but i think long slider is hard to be made pretty :)
star
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
looks good Yay :D

Hard:
00:07:733 (1) - remove new combo (so its the same as normal)
then make 00:08:993 (6) a new combo Moved
00:40:38 timing section isnt needed? Removed

I would also recommend removing the kiai as it doesn't really fit with such a relaxing song Removed on both difficultys

samipale wrote:

[Normal]
Seems no problem around,but the volume of soft-whistle is too loud. Changed a bit volume <lowered>, so now it's like in Hard.

[Hard]
00:04:077,00:16:178,00:28:279,00:42:396 - volume problem too 00:04:077; 0:28:279 - well, imo these parts with a bit higher volume fits there, 00:28:279; 00:42:396 - i made this part with a bit higher volume, because these hitsounds there are really fitting into song

00:08:993(3) - add whistle Added
00:22:733(5) - suggestion,this circle move to 00:22:228? Moved
00:23:111(7) - suggestion,hitsound of the end try to use Normal-Finish(no custom sound)?(Low the volume) Imo Normal-Finish doesn't fit in there D:
00:45:043(5) - i heard just one clap around,try to add more Added one clap at [00:18:825]
00:56:640(1) - hitsound try to use Normal-Normal at beginning and use Normal-Clap at end Done
00:57:396(2) - hitsound Normal-Normal Done

SPOILER
notes and hitsound setting are good
but i think long slider is hard to be made pretty :)
Thanks :d Well, it's not easy to change such long sliders to make them "prettier" :/
star Thankya ;)
Really thanks c:
aRiskOfRain
Wow, what a pleasant map to play.
James2250
sorry I missed one thing :oops:

Normal:
00:37:733 (1) - goes up into the health bar..move it down on the grid (then space the rest of the combo out)

(you also might want to move the endpoint down on 00:30:169 (4) (hard) so it doesn't go so high on the gird)

I can pubble after that

Edit:
Pubbled!! :)
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
00:37:733 (1) - goes up into the health bar..move it down on the grid (then space the rest of the combo out) Moved

(you also might want to move the endpoint down on 00:30:169 (4) (hard) so it doesn't go so high on the gird) Moved

I can pubble after that

Edit:
Pubbled!! :) Very thanks :D
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