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SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size)

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Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on terça-feira, 23 de Março de 2010 at 22:47:15

Artist: SNoW
Title: Sakasama no Chou (TV Size)
Source: Jigoku Shoujo
Tags: Enma Ai Inversed Butterfly Dusty
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6356kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dusty's Hard (4,84 stars, 226 notes)
  2. Easy (1,11 stars, 57 notes)
  3. Jigoku Fuuko (4,64 stars, 177 notes)
  4. Normal (3,37 stars, 118 notes)
Download: SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size)
Download: SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th beatmap

Jigoku Shoujo opening.
I hope you enjoy it~

"In this crazyness, and uncertainty
I wonder if we can leave behind each and everyone's thoughts somewhere
In this craziness, you gave me life
I wonder to how far can we protect a single thought."

Special Thanks:

Dusty: Guest diff.
yeahyeahyeahhh/ouranhshc: Hitcircle.
Last edited by Fuuko , edited 13 times in total.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
<3

Download: SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size) (FuukoLover) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Rokodo
1,104 posts
Joined August 2008
Rokodo
Video.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ydzjzitt5zm
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
A bunch of storyboarding stuffz.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
GJ (･:ﾟдﾟ:･)b ~
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Nice stuff, Fuuko. :3
Anyway, I saw no special issues :3
Good luck.

Here's my star.
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- First combocolour is really hard to see sometimes, maybe make it a bit brighter.
- SB elements can't exceed 800x600px max, resize "butterfly.png" (yeah I know I gave it to you... sorry xD)

~Easy~
No problems, Good Job!!

~Normal~
No problems, Good Job!!

~Dusty's Hard~
- Add Tags on this diff.
- Disable Countdown.

Yeah, that's it. Cute storyboard btw <3
Good Luck~ *star*
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Dusty's Hard:
One thing that kinda bothers me on this diff, the inconsistency of spacing on the triples and 1/4 streams. Allow me to give you examples.

00:03:573 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Notice spacing here
SPOILER

00:13:906 (1,2,3,4) - Then compare it to this
SPOILER

The latter (00:13:906 (1,2,3,4) - ) plays much better imo and should be the consistent spacing in the diff. So What I'm suggesting is you make every triple or 1/4 stream spaced like the first one (or even just a bit off like this (00:17:073 (1,2,3) - ) closer. It'll be nicer to the user as the more spaced out one can cause annoying misses/100s.

Also maybe lower the slider velocity? Its kinda fast imo... Other than that.. good stuff dusty! :)

Normal:
Fine =]

Easy:
01:26:906 (1) - Move this to 01:27:073 - and remove one repeat. A quick note after a spinner isn't recommended for an easy diff.

Good map, if you want me to mod the other diff when its done let me know.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[All difficulites]
I think 00:45:073 is a better Preview point
The first custom color is pretty bad due to that it's very hard to see the approach circles (Both with and without video) so I strongly suggest you change it

[Storyboard]
Well...First of all, the storyboard is set to diff. specific even if it appears in every difficulty :<
Change it to that everything is in the OSB and then remove the codes in the difficulties.

Also, resize the butterfly picture (and then change the storyboard) because they are pretty big in the folder but in the storyboard they are pretty small ;)


[Easy]
01:27:073 (1) - This is a bit too tricky for an easy but thats maybe just me

[Normal]
00:31:406 (2) - Ugh. I hate when circles/sliders touch the HP bar :<
00:53:739 (2) - Maybe add circle here?

[Jigoku Fuuko]
Igored on request...

[Dusty's Hard]
There is no tags here, add the tags from the other difficulites.

Well, that's it.
The whole thing with the storyboard is because it's pretty stupid as it is right now ;)
Otherwise it was good so here's a star
*star*
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Easy~
Its fine. Parts like 01:10:739 (5,1,2) - might confuse beginners but I am not an easy expert. I never played them.

Normal~
00:08:739 (1,2,3) - Spacing

Jigoku Fuuko~
00:19:239 (1,2) - Spacing
00:26:073 (3,4) - Spacing
00:30:073 (1,2) - Spacing

Dusty's Hard~
00:24:573 (1,2,3) - Spacing
00:27:239 (1,2,3) - ^
01:03:739 (1,2,3) - ^


I like this song. My favorite difficulty is Jigoku. :p
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
IRC modding and star~


Dusty's diff has alot of minor spacing changes (compare 00:08:739 (1,2,3,4) and 00:17:073 (1,2,3)). It's not important, but looks bad D:



EDIT: make spinner background jpg, too (yes, it works now).
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
And it's a pubble for you ;)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Fixed obvious spacing issues. (The spacing is still a little different during Kiai, but it should be mouse-friendly now?)

Also, I had a hard time seeing the butterfly the first time I played through it, maybe try this butterfly out? It glows a little for contrast



Download: SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size) (FuukoLover) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko
I can't map this for a while, so yeah, I gotta study...and I am not even close to my pc...
*moved to another city*

Man. At least it's still a good map. <3'

Thanks Dusty.

Also, I ask to BATs who I've asked to mod to not to, since I can't fix anything now.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Good luck studying!
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko

Dusty wrote:

Good luck studying!
Thanks, I will need it. >_>
Even though I don't really feel like studying, sheesh.
And on top of that, I can't even map.
But anyawys, I hope I can get this ranked soon.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
And here we go. Sorry keep you waiting for this...

Easy & Normal
Wonderful!

Jikou Fuuko
00:21:739 (1) - find a better shape for this...
00:36:739 (4) - clap on this slider's start
01:18:073 (3) - maybe move this a square down and a square right

Dusty's Hard
00:41:073 (1) - move this a square up
01:09:406 (3,4) - fix spacing!
01:26:906 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end

An ordered, fine hitsound-placing for a catchy map!
Double-starred. (Good luck for the hard study & moving ;3)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty

Lokamp wrote:

Dusty's Hard
00:41:073 (1) - move this a square up
01:09:406 (3,4) - fix spacing!
01:26:906 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end
Already fixed in my copy, done, and OK.

Download: SNoW - Sakasama no Chou (TV Size) (FuukoLover) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko
The fixed thing here:

Download: Fixed.rar
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Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Maybe make hitsounds a bit more loud?


Easy:

00:53:406 (3) - isn't that slider too close?


Normal:

00:07:739 (4) - move one grid right (grid level 3) in order to mirror 00:05:406 (4).

Hard:
Good.
00:21:739 (1) - this slider is ugly, could look better, but not important anyway :3

Dusty's Hard:
00:03:239 (1) - that note doesn't really follow the beat or lyrics, mby try to put it at 00:03:073? If you do then adding a beat at 00:03:406 would also be better.
00:38:739 (4,5) - these 2 sliders are kinda messed. On 00:37:739 (1,2,3) 3 circles make a triangle, why not to make next 2 sliders symmetric to that triangle?
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