zhong wen ge~
maybe add "approachcircle.png" and "spinner-approachcircle.png" to be safe? (not really required imo)
Normal-
01:02:952 (5) - seems... discontinued, map a bit more till 01:04:286-ish? or remove this note.. at least make it sound more like a finish
The rest seems fair, the pace is swell~
Hard-
01:02:952 (5) - same as Normal
01:41:175 (3) - mm, the stack makes this note deter from your pattern :S, maybe move (4,5) so stack doesn't interfere? or ignore me~
Clean map~
LKs- Also very clean map..
00:34:730 - (I did a timing panel mod just in case) remove this, unused
01:22:064 (1) - add the normal hitsound to start of slider?
01:23:841 (1) - ^?
02:04:508 - 18s break? D: map a bit in? (personally I think breaks should be under 15s..)
02:34:064 (4) - remove whistle slider slide?
02:52:730 (5,9) - might as well just add the custom whistle? (normal hitsound)
AngelHoney- fast map...
Don't like the short slider streams, doesn't fit the song imo, your choice though, really think you should change most of them though
The jumps weren't too bad... some were kinda extreme though (ending)
00:32:286 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - wow that's uncomfortable to play, at least.. followed by a surprise jump too
00:51:841 (1) - up a tick? (on the small grid)
01:03:397 - same as Normal/Hard (map a tiny bit more?)
01:18:508 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - much better than 32:286~
01:22:064 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not against this pattern, I just don't like where you placed it, the vocal doesn't fit the slider stream imo
01:30:952 (1) - this whole pattern (up to 01:34:286 (8)).. er... fine, don't like it,doesn't fit too well imo, but your choice (would prefer changes)
02:36:286 (4,5) - maybe up a tick on small grid?
Some patterns I can't tell if you on purposely decreased then increased spacing or not ._.;
Kinda felt all diffs could map three more white ticks (map about 2s more) for a better ending in music?
The storyboard text.. why does the left and right ends have a slight shade of a light colour around the text? (noticed it while watch sb) no big deal though
Don't have to follow through any of these suggestions, as far as I'm concerned, I could pubble this if you want :3
