Kocari wrote:

Hello Milan- here as requested from modding queue

[Normal]

00:31:616 (3) - Snap in place and then move slider end to the right 1 click for better parallel aaaaaa i dunno what u mean with "snap" it's snapped correctly and parallel is fine
00:39:845 (3) - Snap this correctly same
00:53:559 (2) - Move to the left 1 click for better blanket it's fine already
01:05:902 (1,2) - My preference but do something like this? http://puu.sh/dpTD6/3b04aa9fb6.jpg It feels better with cursor movement and no unnecessary cuts when playing that note. When the others 3 notes after that are snapped the others should be fine afterwords okey i did something
01:08:302 (5) - I don't believe that clap is necessary otherwise you would have put it around here 01:10:016 (3) but it's not necessary, sounds better without it It's necessary for constancy with the previous parts and the kiai owo
01:21:673 (4) - Snap this back in place to bring consistent spacing it has consistent spacing already o.o
01:55:788 (2) - Would feel best if moved up to something like this http://puu.sh/dpTSk/d8ecabb119.jpg that's practically the same to what i have

[Hard]

01:22:359 (1,2,3,4) - Would feel best in my opinion to just even out the spacing on those 4 sliders moved thing around
No other problems

Beautifully made tbh. There isn't any problems. 1/8 sounds really good and it was overall a fairly good mapset. As of now I don't see any problems on insane. I hope this mod will kickstart a rank from you soon.

Yoeri wrote:

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Also short mod sorry.

[General]
Offset -10 okey
The combo colours are hard to see, try using brighter ones. sure
Nice bookmarks

[Normal]
00:33:674 (2,3) - Make these parallel? the transition between 1 and 2 would be bad tho
01:05:902 (1,2) - Switch these around. It keeps constancy with the previous part in addition that it follows the music correctly imo, ill see others people opinions tho
01:16:874 (1,2) - ^
01:29:216 (3,1,2) - This is okay but it gets really boring to play really fast. ye i was lazy here, changed stuffs
01:40:188 (3,1) - These aren't completely parallel. i see them just fine
01:50:131 (2,3,4) - Soft sampleset. cool
02:06:588 (1) - I feel like a spinner at 02:06:931 would fit better. Ill think about it ><

[Hard]
00:24:245 (4,1) - Blanket. All these blankets are just fine to me
00:29:559 (3,1) - ^
00:37:102 (1,3,4) - This is a bit hard to read. I hate stack leniancy ;w;
00:45:331 (1,2,3) - Blanket?
00:50:816 (1,2) - ^
00:52:702 (2,3) - ^
00:56:302 (1,2,3) - ^
01:29:216 (1,2,3,1) - Blanket?
01:40:188 (1,2,3,1) - ^
01:49:788 (1,2,3) - Soft sampleset on everything except the start of (1). k
02:00:759 (1) - Try a 1/1 slider and a circle instead? http://puu.sh/dqoNP/54af1166cb.jpg uh ill think about it again, but it follows the vocals just fine as well as i wanted to have a difference with insane
02:02:474 (2,3,4,5) - Blanket.
02:06:588 (1) - Spinner.

[Insane]
00:24:074 (3,4,5) - The timing of pressing these is extremely awkward. I suggest using two sliders each with one return instead. Ill see what others people say about it. I can 300 this, and i suck
00:26:816 (3,4,5) - ^
00:35:045 (3,4,5) - ^ you can also use spaced streams here since you've introduced the rhythm already.
00:37:788 (3,4,5) - ^
00:43:274 (3,1) - Blanket?
00:48:759 (3,4,5) - Same as before.
00:58:188 (2,3) - Put these further apart? why? owo it plays fine i think
01:00:931 (2,3,1) - Blanket?
01:06:931 (5,1) - ^
01:27:835 - So I feel that compared to the intro, the kiai is actually rather easy. Try increasing the distance in the slider patterns here. I dont care about that, i can delete kiai or add one to the intro and everything will be fine lol
01:28:531 (4) - This is the only slider of its kind, seems out of place. yee
01:30:245 (5,1,2,3,4) - This is rather easy. what is the problem with that..
01:35:035 (2) - ctrl+g no, i also want variaty on here
01:36:406 (2,3) - Blanket.
01:40:864 (3,4,5) - ^
01:41:549 (1,2,3,4) - A bit easy.
01:49:778 (1,2,3) - Use soft sampleset on these except the start of (1) k
01:54:578 (3,4,5) - Stack? You do that everywhere else. i dont think this really matters..
02:01:435 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - If anything this part should be more dense, not less. it follows vocals
02:06:578 (1) - Spinner.
02:11:721 (1) - Finish? there's no cymbal in here o.o as far as i can hear

appleeaterx wrote:

hellooooo milan! from my queue

:idea: General

* Yoeri already suggested a different offset, but I got 57. I'm no timing expert, so I think you should ask some more people as well :3 Gonna ask someone to check it i guess:o
* File size of your background is way too big. Try to reduce it.k
* Add 'Universus' to the tags if you feel like it. It's the album where this song if featured on.k

Hitsounds

* I assume that you used HS copier, so it applies to all diffs o3o/
* 00:25:435 (2) - Did you forget the whistle here? It's at 00:22:692 (2) - 00:28:178 (2) - and 00:30:921 (2) - yiiess
* Put claps at 00:49:092 (4) - and 00:49:264 (4) - , or remove them at 00:54:578 (4) - 00:54:749 (4) - etc... removed them
* 01:10:692 (4) - Clap instead of a whistle fits much more imo, since it's actually like the same sound as 01:13:778 (5) - , and then it'd also be constant. ops
* 01:34:349 (4) - Why is there an extra whistle here? I see why you might do this, but then you can basically apply it to every clap in the KIAI. i always follow the melody for normal whistles, they fit imo
* 01:35:721 (7) - ^
* 01:39:149 (2) - ^ etc...
* 02:11:721 (1) - Add a finish maybe? i still no hear a cymbal or similar on here, but okey i guess:3

Nice that you only used the standard samplesets, but I'm a bit confused with how you used the clap + whistle in the KIAI time. It fits and it does follow something I guess, but it's not consistent at all. It's on notes like 01:39:149 (2) - 01:35:721 (7) - etc, but not on for example 01:40:521 (5) - 01:41:892 (2) - etc. I just don't see the pattern you are going with. Please correct me if I'm wrong c: I'd put whistle on those notes as well but it's just too noisy, so i put extra whistle where the music get "stronger" (triples) and they are some unique parts where i used more to emphasis, it fits for me.. i'll see how it goes

Normal

* You might want to add a slidertick.wav file for this diff with a clap sound. i dont do that anymore, i did that only on my first map and it was like nahh xd
* 01:19:607 (1,2,3,4) - Try making this a bit more interesting, since you already has this repetivive pattern at 01:08:635 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:14:121 (1,2) - okey xd i did this diff quite boring i know ;w;

I couldn't find a lot in the diff, sorry. It's a nice diff! I only think that the flow is a bit repetitive, but overall it's fine.

Hard

* 00:21:835 (5,6,1) - Fix stack please c: i swear it's osu ;w; i cant stack sometimes, but in game they are fine
* 01:43:864 (3,4) - ^
* 01:54:578 (2,3,4) - ^
* 00:28:864 (1,2) - ^
* 00:36:406 (3,1) - Since your DS in your diff is constant most of the times, try making this the same DS as 00:25:435 (3,1) - i see the point but it's fine as it is for me anyways
* 00:37:949 (4,1) - Any reason why you didn't put a 1.8x jump here o_o? This is the only one that doesn't have it from the similar rhythms in the beginning.nice
* 00:46:692 (1,2) - Kinda expected you to have blankets here owo fk blankets
* 01:14:636 (2) - Delete note so it's rhythm-wise consistent with 01:10:006 (1,2) - ? no, cuz 01:10:006 (1,2) - is consistent with 01:20:978 (1,2) - this section follow vocals with 1/1 rhythm anyways
* 01:30:235 (4) - It's probably me, but I don't really like that you just emphasized the downbeat with a single repeat. The downbeat should be clickable, especially in a repetitive song like this imo. If you do want to keep the 1/4 try this, but if you don't want to change it, that's ofcourse fine as well :3 downbeat on this song isnt noticable at all (kiai) should be fine imo
* 01:35:549 (2,3,1) - ^ (wont be mentioning it anymore)
* 01:30:921 (2) - This diff only. Shouldn't this be a clap instead? clap is fine at the slider end o.o
* 01:36:749 (2,3,1) - Why not put equal DS here? The 1.34x ruins the 1.4x you are keeping anyway. they are all 1.4 on my screen o.o
* 01:52:006 (2,3,1) - If you do plan to keep this, CTRL+J? Would look nicer imo. (or ctrl+j 01:51:149 (1) - ) ill think about it, but it's fine as it's, cuz make the following symmetricall pattern more readable i guess

Nice and clean diff! Should be good to go

Insane

* 00:21:578 (6,7) - stack pls c:
* 00:21:921 (8,1) - ^
* 01:26:463 (5) - NC? You did one have in the Hard diff it'd have so many nc imo ;w;
* 01:40:864 (3,4) - These are way too close if I compare it to other 1/4 rhythms in the KIAI like 01:29:892 (3,4) - 01:32:635 (3,4) - etc. they are almost the same cuz autostack
* 01:43:863 (4,5) - Stack them o_o? You didn't do this for example at 01:32:635 (3,4,5) - im to lazy to see the stack leniancy thingD:
* 01:49:435 (10,1) - You sure about this DS? This can be misread as 1/4. should be fine, otherwise i can stack.. but it'd be so ugly and play so bad that ill rage quit

Really nice Insane. I really liked playing it, just a personal thing that I found that after 02:01:435 (3) - it was suddenly like really easy, but I guess it's a mappers preference. Good job! I followed vocals with 1/1 rhythms as it's the music, i dont care that much about difficulty anyways lol

good luck with this sexy beatmap