This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 4일 금요일 at 오후 11:05:05

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Border of Death
Source: Touhou
Tags: Yakumo Yukari ignorethis
BPM: 160
Filesize: 15778kb
Play Time: 04:34
Difficulties Available:

1. !ignore this (3.61 stars, 346 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 465 notes)
3. Lunatic (4.98 stars, 589 notes)
4. Normal (2.99 stars, 159 notes)

Download: IOSYS - Border of Death
Download: IOSYS - Border of Death (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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pending~

It's jump map

Thanks to playing

XD

gooood jump

Star

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Delete the .osb file, then "Full Submission"
  • "bg321.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels
  • Add a preview point in all diffs
  • Offset 24290 (resnap all notes)
  • Add some Source (if possible) and some tags
  • Remove countdown

[Normal]

• • 00:59:895 (1) - You should separate the start-slider form the end-slider
  • Remove the unused kiai-timing sections
  • 01:04:020 (3) - New combo

[Hard]

• • 01:27:270 (x) - Add a circle

=w=//

[Ganeral]
- Source: Touhou
- Tag: Yakumo Yukari
- Set a preview point to all diffs

[Normal]
OwO... remove useless Timing selection after 04:00:082

[Hard]
00:26:707 (7) - remove new combo and new combo here 00:27:270 (1) ?
01:06:082 (5) - new combo?
01:27:270 - add note and sound finish?
03:09:645 - 03:35:145 - this break is so long, imo

[Insane]
03:09:645 - 03:35:895 - this break is so long, imo

Starr

In red maybe important,In blue suggestions

[Normal]
-00:25:020 (3) Start this slider in 00:24:832
-00:27:645 (1) make ir 1/2 shorter and add 1 repeat

[Hard]
-Nice
-Run AIMod

[Insane]
-Run AIMod
-00:59:336 (1) Unsnaped
-00:59:899 (1) - -^

StaR =)

[General]
is the video a little... laggy?
kiai time should be from 01:03:287 to 01:27:133 and 02:18:249 to 02:42:085
and the kiai at the end seems too long. end it at 04:36:257

[Normal Moddo]
many timing problems >_>
01:03:598 (x) - add a circle here
01:04:211 (4) - move it 1/2 beat to the right (in the timeline)
01:07:189 (2) - same thing ^
01:11:360 (4) - move it 1/2 beat to the left (timeline)
01:12:070 (x) - add a circle here
01:19:272 (2) - move it 1/2 beat to the right (timeline)
01:19:613 (3) - extend the slider to 01:20:183
01:20:183 (4) - move 1 beat to the right (time line)
01:21:113 (5,6) - remove beat 6, replace beat 6 with beat 5
01:21:193 (1,2,3) - extend slider and move beat 2 and 3 1/2 beat to the right in timeline
01:22:644 (4) - extend
01:23:504 (6) - extend?
02:12:228 (1) - only use the backslider once, and add some notes near it because 02:13:848 doesn't fit with the beat
maybe the same mistakes are near the end too

[Hard]
03:09:892 (break) - don't make the break too long

[Insane]
03:09:892 (break) - don't make the break too long

And *ahem*
PLEASE GIVE KUDOSU TO PEOPLE WHO HELPED YOU, thank you. (you know, that button near the users' avatars?)
we need to make a living too, you know.

anyway,


i like the map, music and video :3
hope to see it ranked

Fixed all
thanks.

give star

-update-

[All Diffs]
00:59:915 (1) - I don't like this slider, I don't think the slow BPM really fits at all and I don't like how the slider noise cannot be heard for the whole slider. I suggest making this normal. If not that, 1/2.

[Normal]
You seem to be using quite a lot of sliders.
00:48:102 - I don't like this break, if you map it, the players will have about a minute of playing timing before the first break which I think is good for a normal.
00:59:915 (1) - If you don't make all diffs normal for this slider, at least make it normal BPM on this one, the slow BPM may trip up noobs and I don't think it's in the state where they might not be able to adapt since you then have sliders going 4x as fast.
01:51:665 - Same as the first break.

[Hard]
00:48:102 - Same as Normal
01:51:665 - Same as Normal
03:09:665 - Now this is a reallly long break. I suggest trying to find some way to shorten it.
03:36:290 - Why is it like this and not fully mapped like Insane?

[Insane]
You have a max score of 15 Mil, this is 5 Mil above the recommended guideline.
This map has the countdown disabled while the other maps have it on, please make it consistent.
00:31:415 (6) - It's very hard to tell that this is a slider due to the hit bursts.
00:59:352 (1) - This isn't snapped.
00:59:915 (1) - This is also a problem in this map due to the fact it's so slow that the HP drains too much.
It is indeed a very jumpy map, maybe too jumpy, you have a lot of 1/2 jumps where it doesn't seem to fit well, I'll let you decide what to change but for god's sake don't mess with these jumps, they are awesome: 03:57:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

Hard and Insane are a bit too long, but they're fun, I'll let someone else check this. Star~

star ~

Normal

[00:24:29] normal finish maybe better

Hard

[00:24:29] normal finish maybe better
[01:05;54] one more time return?

Insane

[00:24:29] normal finish maybe better

too much hitsound i think.
and in fact ,i like the old one more than this new Border of Death

anyway a star

good~~ star~

스타입니다 얍!

ps. not yet for pubbling

ff!

you said it's jump map right? <3

Download: IOSYS - Border of Death (dksslqj) [Relaxing!].osu

Normal:

01:46:790 (2) - Start it one 1/2 beat earlier
01:54:290 (2) - Move one level 3 grid down
02:30:290 (1) - The repeat on this is nearly imposible to see. D: Perhaps make that slider go in another direction?

Hard:

00:54:290 (6) - New combo
01:37:602 (4) - Too far from (3)
01:41:352 (6,7) - This seems a bit awkward, but I guess it's fine

Lunatic:

-The max score seems a bit high but considering how hard this is to FC it should be fine

04:24:290 (3) - New combo?

Nice work! *star*