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Yui Makino - Synchronicity (TV Size)

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Sakura
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 29, 2010 at 3:31:36 PM

Artist: Yui Makino
Title: Synchronicity (TV Size)
Source: Tsubasa Tokyo Revelations
Tags: Clamp OP Opening Shulin
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5309kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.44 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Normal (3.64 stars, 128 notes)
  3. Shulin's Easy (1.81 stars, 80 notes)
Download: Yui Makino - Synchronicity (TV Size)
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My 2nd beatmap, decided to try a shorter song due to the sugestion of Fuuko
Special Thanks:
- FuukoLover for suggesting me to do this =D
- CDFA for Hitsound mod

[Things bothering me]
- None at the momment

[Updates]
- I think i fixed [Hard]
- Updated [Shulin's Easy]
- Fixed [Normal] due to new BPM offset and mp3
- Changed mp3 and offset on all diffs
- Added [Shulin's Easy]
- Fixed some issues on [Hard]
- Reduced distance on 1/2 streams on [Normal]
- Fixes due to xierbaliti's suggestions
- Fixes due to Derekku's siggestions
- Modifications due to gdeath suggestions
- Modifications due to AtemiskKun suggestions
- Edited some sliders on [Hard] into Bezier Sliders
- All Catmull sliders on [Normal] Have been removed and replaced with Bezier Sliders
- Modifications due to Dusty's Suggestions
- Modifications due to YGOkid's and emaal's suggestions
- Modifications due to yeahyeahyeahhh's modding
- Added OP and Opening tags (why didnt i notice this till now)
- Minor adjustments
- Modifications and fixes thanks to James modding
- Modifications due to Astom and orioncomet suggestions
- Added Hitsounds to both difficulties and Fixed [Hard] ok now i think this is ready =D
- Added [Hard] Difficulty
- Minor fixes on [Normal]
- Fixed [Normal] with James suggestions which imo they were really good fixes
- Changed song into a better quality mp3 (My internet was goofy when uploading need further confirmation if it uploaded correctly)
- Changed combo colors to make it prettier
- Major modifications to the chorus (Flipped the whole chorus vertically)
- Made the Non-Chorus "harder?" to try to keep consistency
- More minor adjustments [Normal]
- Resnapped and added/removed beats according to 1/4 scale
- Increased Accuracy Difficulty on [Normal]
- [Easy] was changed into [Normal] due to suggestions from the community
- Adjusted BPM/Offset and adjusted some beats according to this new settings
- Reduced Accuracy Difficulty on [Easy]
- Minor Fixings (Awaiting Modding)
- Added a preview point
- Added a BG image for those that dont want the video

[Notes]
- None at the momment
Last edited by Sakura , edited 95 times in total.
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
In game help.

Keep improving it.
Sakura
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Thanks for the BPM/Offset numbers,your help has helped me improve my map a lot ^^
Vicious117_old
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Vicious117_old
Am liking it so far, Keep messing around a bit and i think it will be awesome :)
James2250
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Normal:
check Shift + ctrl + A for some useful tips on fixing spacing
you will need to add some more hitsounds but the claps don't sound bad
end kiai time at 01:23:422
(don't forget to fix any spacing when moving notes)
00:25:018 (5) - move to 00:24:911
00:25:231 (6) - move to 00:25:124
00:30:337 (4) - move to 00:30:443
00:31:507 (7) - shorten by 1/4
00:36:613 (1) - make straight?
00:38:103 (3,4,5) - align
01:08:209 (7) - move to 01:08:103
01:14:486 (8) - move to 01:14:379
01:22:571 (1) - add note
01:22:996 (2) - add note
I would put a spinner from 01:23:422 to 01:26:826 and fade out the end

*star*
good luck on other difficulties
Sakura
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James2250 wrote:

Normal:
check Shift + ctrl + A for some useful tips on fixing spacing Hope they are useful X_X
you will need to add some more hitsounds but the claps don't sound bad I'd need help with hitsounds then
end kiai time at 01:23:422 Done although i dont see how it's relevant
(don't forget to fix any spacing when moving notes)
00:25:018 (5) - move to 00:24:911 Done + Fixed new spacing
00:25:231 (6) - move to 00:25:124 Done + Fixed new spacing
00:30:337 (4) - move to 00:30:443 Done + Fixed new spacing
00:31:507 (7) - shorten by 1/4 Done
00:36:613 (1) - make straight? Done (sometimes it just refuses to be straight for some reason X_X)
00:38:103 (3,4,5) - align Woops didnt see that, thanks ^^ Fixed!
01:08:209 (7) - move to 01:08:103 Done, i was debating this one myself earlier
01:14:486 (8) - move to 01:14:379 Fixed
01:22:571 (1) - add note Added
01:22:996 (2) - add note Added
I would put a spinner from 01:23:422 to 01:26:826 and fade out the end Nice suggestion i like it

*star*
good luck on other difficulties
Clashway
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Clashway
Lets see if I can be of any assistance to you with my thoughts on these matters.

- 00:54:273 (10) - I'd call that a keeper. I liked it.
- 01:02:039 (X) - I'd say keep it as is. I think it works fine. In my opinion, add there if it was on a harder difficulty.
- 01:08:209 (7) - Definitely move it back a tick. I noticed James had posted the fix for this a few minutes before I started typing this post, but I'll just throw this in anyway.

As an overall feel, I really like the flow of the map. I found it to be quite fun. Something I seem to have a fondness for are moments like at 00:30:656 (5,6,7). It just feels overly fun to hit notes like that.

I think this deserves a +star because I am actually pretty excited to see what you can do for a hard. Keep it up and good luck!
Sakura
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Thanks =D your feedback is appreciated ^^
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Offset: 6,850

Normal:
00:10:231 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these. They seem kinda pointless ~.
00:13:635 (3) - Add finish on beginning of slider
00:17:677 (4) - Add whistle
00:17:890 (5) - Add finish
00:21:720 (7) - Add whistle
00:24:486 (4,6) - ^
00:27:252 (3) - Add finish on beginning of slider
00:31:294 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up
00:38:103 (3,4,5) - Move 1 grid down.
00:40:018 (1) - Add finish (goes with the music)
00:40:443 (3,3) - Add clap
00:44:273 (3) - Add whistle at the end of the slider
00:45:975 (4) - Add finish
00:47:677 (3) - ^ (goes with the music)
00:49:401 (3) - Add clap
00:51:103 (3) - Add whistle
00:51:742 (5) - Add clap
00:52:806 (8) - ^
00:54:508 (10) - Add finish
00:54:508 (10) - Move to white tick and re-space
00:55:784 (2) - Add finish at end of slider
01:22:593 (1,2) - Add finishes
01:23:444 (1) - Don't make the silence so sudden :D. Maybe add a bit more timing sections going gradually down in volume :D.

Hard:
00:08:103 (4) - Add clap
00:09:805 (4) - ^
00:11:530 (4) - ^
00:18:339 (1) - This spinner ends in a wierd place.
00:20:041 (1,2,3) - Move these 3 notes back one tick each after re-snapping (They will be on blues, so move them to white-red-white.)
00:24:722 (6) - End this back on the white tick.
00:27:275 (3) - Add finish (Goes with music)
00:28:552 - Add note here
00:28:977 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This might be just something that happened because of the +thirtysomething offset addition, but this sounds wierd)
00:32:807 (1,2,3) - Delete these ~
00:36:637 (1) - Move this back to white tick
00:37:062 (2) - Move this forward to white tick
00:37:169 (3) - - Move forward to white tick, and then end slider at the next white tick.
00:37:913 (4) - Remove this ~
00:38:871 (6) - Move back to white tick
00:40:786 (5,6) - Move these two back one tick.
00:40:892 (6) - Add finish (goes with music)
00:42:594 (6) - Add clap
00:43:020 (1) - Add clap and whistle
00:45:998 (3) - Add clap
00:47:594 (5,6) - Same as 00:40:786
00:49:403 (6) - Add clap
00:49:828 (1) - Add clap and whistle
00:50:679 (3) - Move forward to white tick.
00:53:658 - Add note here
00:53:764 to 00:55:254 - Put something here. Not a break, as it seems too abrupt to be a break ~.
01:08:977 (1) - Move slider end back to white tick.
01:10:998 (4) - Move back to blue tick
01:11:317 (5) - Move back to red tick.
01:17:700 (9) - Move forward to red tick, and end on red tick (forward)
01:18:977 (1) - Spacing ;~;

I see lots of potential in this :D. Remember that all of my hitsound modding should be taken as suggestions (unless I put (goes with music) or something. :3~
Sakura
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CDFA wrote:

Offset: 6,850

Normal:
00:10:231 (1,2,3,4) - Delete these. They seem kinda pointless ~. Umm, ok ^^ i guess Done
00:13:635 (3) - Add finish on beginning of slider OMG THANKS A LOT! been looking for hitsound mod for a while
00:17:677 (4) - Add whistle Done
00:17:890 (5) - Add finish Done
00:21:720 (7) - Add whistle Done
00:24:486 (4,6) - ^ Done
00:27:252 (3) - Add finish on beginning of slider Done
00:31:294 (6,7) - Move 1 grid up Yeah it slipped off my sight, thanks for pointing it out ^^
00:38:103 (3,4,5) - Move 1 grid down. ^
00:40:018 (1) - Add finish (goes with the music) Done
00:40:443 (3,3) - Add clap Done
00:44:273 (3) - Add whistle at the end of the slider Done
00:45:975 (4) - Add finish Done
00:47:677 (3) - ^ (goes with the music) Done
00:49:401 (3) - Add clap Done
00:51:103 (3) - Add whistle Done
00:51:742 (5) - Add clap Done
00:52:806 (8) - ^ Done
00:54:508 (10) - Add finish Done
00:54:508 (10) - Move to white tick and re-space Done
00:55:784 (2) - Add finish at end of slider Done
01:22:593 (1,2) - Add finishes Done
01:23:444 (1) - Don't make the silence so sudden :D. Maybe add a bit more timing sections going gradually down in volume :D.Will be done later

Hard:
00:08:103 (4) - Add clap Done
00:09:805 (4) - ^ Done
00:11:530 (4) - ^ Done
00:18:339 (1) - This spinner ends in a wierd place. Reduced by half a beat
00:20:041 (1,2,3) - Move these 3 notes back one tick each after re-snapping (They will be on blues, so move them to white-red-white.) Done and respaced
00:24:722 (6) - End this back on the white tick. Done
00:27:275 (3) - Add finish (Goes with music) Done
00:28:552 - Add note here Added
00:28:977 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This might be just something that happened because of the +thirtysomething offset addition, but this sounds wierd) Actually i just thought it would add difficulty when adding them
00:32:807 (1,2,3) - Delete these ~ Done
00:36:637 (1) - Move this back to white tick Done and re-aligned
00:37:062 (2) - Move this forward to white tick Done and re-spaced/aligned
00:37:169 (3) - - Move forward to white tick, and then end slider at the next white tick. Done
00:37:913 (4) - Remove this ~ Done
00:38:871 (6) - Move back to white tick Done (except due to the recent changes it's now a (4))
00:40:786 (5,6) - Move these two back one tick.Done
00:40:892 (6) - Add finish (goes with music) Done
00:42:594 (6) - Add clap Done
00:43:020 (1) - Add clap and whistle Done
00:45:998 (3) - Add clap Done
00:47:594 (5,6) - Same as 00:40:786 Done
00:49:403 (6) - Add clap
00:49:828 (1) - Add clap and whistle Done
00:50:679 (3) - Move forward to white tick. Done
00:53:658 - Add note here Done
00:53:764 to 00:55:254 - Put something here. Not a break, as it seems too abrupt to be a break ~. Added "something" =P yeah seriously i did add something
01:08:977 (1) - Move slider end back to white tick. Done
01:10:998 (4) - Move back to blue tick Done
01:11:317 (5) - Move back to red tick. Done
01:17:700 (9) - Move forward to red tick, and end on red tick (forward) Done
01:18:977 (1) - Spacing ;~; Just snapped the 10 to the slider

I see lots of potential in this :D. Remember that all of my hitsound modding should be taken as suggestions (unless I put (goes with music) or something. :3~
Ok thanks for your help =D i wish i could give you 2 kudos for that detailed modding
Astom
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Astom
Wenaz x3
En rojo tal vez importante, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-Recuerda usar AIMod para evitar errores como el que te menciono en Hard

[Hard]
-00:06:826 (1) Este circle no esta bien puesto en la linea de tiempo (Object ins't snapped).
-00:55:360 (1) Terminalo en 00:55:785
-01:20:041 (4) Este slider se ve mucho mejor que todos los demas del map, quisa deberias intentar mejorar el aspecto de algunos sliders y hacerlos mas como este
-Intenta formar algunas curvas con los circles, se ven demaciados "cuadrados" en las formas.

-Intenta hacer saltos con los circles, para hacer esto de forma facil agrega una linea de tiempo con velocidad x2 antes de la seccion donde vallan los circles con salto y usa distance snap, automaticamente aumenta la distancia, cuando termines borra la linea de tiempo con velocidad x2, otra cosa importante es que uses esto en un combo nuevo hasta que termine porque sino AIMod te arrojara errores x3

Ia eso en general no veo que este mal pero podria ser mucho mejor =)
Sldos x3 y StaR
orioncomet
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orioncomet
[General]
- Try Offset: +4ms [6 854] and Resnap all note

[Normal]
00:52:812 (8) - remove sound clap
00:55:365 (1) - replace sound clap with finish
01:23:450 (1) - silent last spinner

[Hard]
00:18:126 (4) - move this note to 1/2 backward (00:17:913)
00:30:892 (4) - ^ (00:30:679)
00:42:599 (6) - replace sound clap with finish
00:46:003 (3) - ^
00:47:599 (5) - remove sound finish
00:49:408 (6) - replace sound clap with finish
00:55:365 (1) - replace sond clap with finish at begin of silder
00:55:360 (1) - end this silder at white tick (00:55:785)
01:08:982 (1) - replace sound clap with finish at last silder
01:08:126 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder
01:21:743 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder
01:22:700 (1) - stat this spinner at white tick and end this spinner as the same and silent last spinner as well
Sakura
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Astom wrote:

Wenaz x3
En rojo tal vez importante, En azul sugerencias

[General]
-Recuerda usar AIMod para evitar errores como el que te menciono en Hard

[Hard]
-00:06:826 (1) Este circle no esta bien puesto en la linea de tiempo (Object ins't snapped). Rayos a duras penas vi eso, Corregido
-00:55:360 (1) Terminalo en 00:55:785 Ehh, parece que el "Ra" en esa parte esta en medio de ambos ticks, asi que da igual en cualquiera que este XD
-01:20:041 (4) Este slider se ve mucho mejor que todos los demas del map, quisa deberias intentar mejorar el aspecto de algunos sliders y hacerlos mas como este Tomare eso en cuenta para futuros beatmaps, es dificil para mi usar Bézier
-Intenta formar algunas curvas con los circles, se ven demaciados "cuadrados" en las formas.
No creo que sea aun lo suficientemente experta para tratar diseños con curvas X_X
-Intenta hacer saltos con los circles, para hacer esto de forma facil agrega una linea de tiempo con velocidad x2 antes de la seccion donde vallan los circles con salto y usa distance snap, automaticamente aumenta la distancia, cuando termines borra la linea de tiempo con velocidad x2, otra cosa importante es que uses esto en un combo nuevo hasta que termine porque sino AIMod te arrojara errores x3Ehh eso no se me habia ocurrido antes, aunque creo que es un poco tarde para cambiarlo

Ia eso en general no veo que este mal pero podria ser mucho mejor =)
Sldos x3 y StaR
Sakura
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orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Try Offset: +4ms [6 854] and Resnap all note Done

[Normal]
00:52:812 (8) - remove sound clap True it sounds kind of off there, Done
00:55:365 (1) - replace sound clap with finish Nice suggestion ^^ Done
01:23:450 (1) - silent last spinner It is supposed to have some kind of Fade Out through it, silencing it would contradict the purpose of the fade out

[Hard]
00:18:126 (4) - move this note to 1/2 backward (00:17:913) Done
00:30:892 (4) - ^ (00:30:679) Done
00:42:599 (6) - replace sound clap with finish Personally i think it sounds better with clap there
00:46:003 (3) - ^ This one does sound better with finish
00:47:599 (5) - remove sound finish Agree, Done
00:49:408 (6) - replace sound clap with finish Again i think this sounds better with Clap
00:55:365 (1) - replace sond clap with finish at begin of silder Agree, Done
00:55:360 (1) - end this silder at white tick (00:55:785) Umm i guess the mod above you was right then, Done
01:08:982 (1) - replace sound clap with finish at last silder Actually replaced clap with finish at start of this slider and left clap at the end
01:08:126 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder Removed clap from the end
01:21:743 (5) - remove sound clap at last silder ^
01:22:700 (1) - stat this spinner at white tick and end this spinner as the same and silent last spinner as well Likewise the Fade-Out is supposed to happen instead of just a silent spinner
James2250
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Normal:
could use with some more whistles before the kiai
00:17:917 (5) - I don't really think finishes work on this slider
00:21:109 (5) - add whistle
00:31:321 (6) - ^
00:44:300 (3) - add clap to the start
00:47:704 (3) - make it a clap?
00:52:811 (8) - add whistle
01:08:130 (7) - move left to align with the slider

Hard:
again needs more hitsounds before the kiai
00:06:849 (1) - isn't snapped
00:11:534 (4) - add clap
00:12:492 (4) - clap doesn't sound good
00:31:109 (1) - extend to 00:33:236
00:53:981 (10) - doesn't seem to fit in very well..might want to try mapping it in a different way
01:08:130 (5) - could look neater
01:10:683 (2,3,4) - align?
01:21:747 (5) - make neater?
01:21:747 (5) - extend 1/2
01:23:023 (6) - add note
01:23:023 (1) - start at 01:23:449 like normal
Sakura
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James2250 wrote:

Normal:
could use with some more whistles before the kiai Will try, but im still not sure where to add them
00:17:917 (5) - I don't really think finishes work on this slider Removed
00:21:109 (5) - add whistle Done
00:31:321 (6) - ^ Done
00:44:300 (3) - add clap to the start Done
00:47:704 (3) - make it a clap? I think it sounds better with the finish
00:52:811 (8) - add whistle Done, i agree
01:08:130 (7) - move left to align with the slider Fixed, thanks for pointing it out, must have forgotten in some resnapping

Hard:
again needs more hitsounds before the kiai Again, im not good with hitsounds but i'll try =P
00:06:849 (1) - isn't snapped I thought i fixed that Oo that (1) has a life of its own DX
00:11:534 (4) - add clap Oh yeah missed that one
00:12:492 (4) - clap doesn't sound good Moved the clap to the end of the slider, hope it's better there
00:31:109 (1) - extend to 00:33:236 Done
00:53:981 (10) - doesn't seem to fit in very well..might want to try mapping it in a different way Remapped that section
01:08:130 (5) - could look neater How about this new design then =)
01:10:683 (2,3,4) - align? Wow i missed that, thanks for pointing it out =)
01:21:747 (5) - make neater? Already did as well =D
01:21:747 (5) - extend 1/2 Done
01:23:023 (6) - add note Done
01:23:023 (1) - start at 01:23:449 like normal Done
MaverickNekoX
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i tried playing it last night, and I have a tough time on hard (like every beatmap i tried on hard lol) That was awesome. ^^ Nice job! ^^
AznDiceMan
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AznDiceMan
Pretty good beatmap Sakura, I'm sure that if you tweak it a little bit here and there you will be able to make it into a wonderful beatmap. Keep it up! I hope you come up with more beatmaps, I love em.
Glass
Glass
I'll check this tomorrow, have a star for now.
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
General:
Consider getting a new MP3, this quality on this one is very poor. You will need a new offset if you do so, and I highly recommend you do.
Consider adding me more hitsounds.

Hard:
00:53:236 (6) - Make this a regular note.
00:53:555 (7) - Move this to 00:53:449, and readjust spacing.
01:08:130 (5) - End this at 01:08:555.
01:21:534 (5) - End this at 01:22:172.

Normal:
Fine but could use a bit more... organization?


Overall:
Work on your hitsounds a bit and try making some patterns! Good luck.
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