1. Kami no Tate (4.11 stars, 59 notes)
2. Kyojinhei (1.16 stars, 27 notes)
3. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (5 stars, 552 notes)
4. Smothered Mate (4.97 stars, 500 notes)
5. Souken no Tou (5 stars, 661 notes)

JInxyjem wrote:

[Smothered]
01:46:971 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - What the heck? You might as well remove them?

[Souken]
01:59:319 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...You either map at least half of this or you make it a large break. I assure you this is not fun to play.

James2250 wrote:

combo burst needs to be under 500x768 so resize it (its 508x768 atm)
there are certain things you do not need in the folder such as selection mod things so delete them all
are all the scorebar colors needed in there when they all look the same?
delete ogg file in folder
go through the folder and make sure everything there is needed
im not a fan of the lack of hitsounds but oh well

Kami no Tate:
00:28:087 (4) - redo this so the next combo's 1 is stacked under the end of it
00:32:202 (4) - redo this so the 2 is stacked under the endpoint
01:01:699 (4) - add note

Smothered Mate:
lower overall diff as this isn't the hardest one
very repetative...
01:46:971 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - really isn't a good ending

Souken no Tou:
00:26:715 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack these?
very very long break....like very long, I would suggest you shorten this and map some of it
way too many spinners together lined up (I know someone else will complain about them)
02:43:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack these

Personally I think the mapping style could use with some more creative and original patterns as it does get very repetitive at times and I think some well placed hitsounds could improve the map
However won't stop you if you want to pubble so
*star*

EDIT:
oops didn't see this until now
but the difficulty spread for your map is too high
(you need a difficulty below 4 stars at least as right now you basically have a 4.2 and two 5 stars and there is already a big discussion going on alot how maps are becoming too difficult, I would also recommend making your 4.9 less)

arken1015 wrote:

Guess what?

Proto-bubbled :3

Good luck XD

impossiblexu wrote:

好图！ 下面是我的一些建议
[General]
关于皮肤:slider上的数字不太明显，不容易分出两头，建议把数字做的明显点。
[Kami no Tate]
为什么整个难度都没有hitsound呢？
如果不知道在哪里设置hitsound，看这：

在画圈的地方加。（加clap比较好）
00:29:116(2):把这个往左上移一格更美观点
01:01:699(4):这个放在1和3的下面更好些。
01:00:670(1,2,3,4):加finish。
[Smothered Mate]
同样添加hitsound
01:02:899(4,5,6):如果不改改皮肤的话，这里会很难看清。
01:14:786(2,3,4,5):同上。
01:19:119: 这里重叠很严重，应该改改。
01:30:509:同上
[Souken no Tou]
同样添加hitsound
02:27:785:最好不要全都是一个hitsound，如果一定要这样的话，
建议你把我的附件放到歌曲根目录下，并在Timing Setup中，选中Audio里的Custom Override 1
（需要添加的那一段）


全部都是建议，修改不是必需的。