1. Insane (4,95 stars, 298 notes)
2. Normal (3,14 stars, 110 notes)
3. orion's Hard (4,89 stars, 241 notes)
4. Sallad's Normal (3,28 stars, 133 notes)

orioncomet wrote:

:) I have some custom-hitsound though, plz full submission again after you got them

• • Offset: 2980
  • Add some tags

• • 00:41:048 (x) Add a spinner here and end it here 00:43:945 (white tick)
  • 01:00:490 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:10:635 (1) - Start this slider here 01:10:842 (white tick)
  • 01:25:740 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:30:704 (4) - Delete this circle and add a spinner; end the spinner here 01:32:566 (red tick)

• • 00:41:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:04:104 (2,3) - Spacing

1. LuigiHann wrote:

   Foreign names should be presented in the same name order as used on Wikipedia (generally, Given Name followed by Family Name, the western order, for consistency).

   , so artist better be Megumi Hayashibara, and I love her so much <3
2. Add Sallad4ever, onrioncomet to all difficulties' tags
3. Two combo colour looked samilar, maybe change on to another colour

1. 00:57:587 (S) - spinner ends here and KIAI starts here
2. 01:00:070 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 01:10:622 (x) - KIAI starts here
4. I feek this difficulty ends at a werid place, maybe map to 01:32:553?
   Also, some patterns could confuse beginner as a easiest diff, anyway fine for me, maybe rename to normal better, if you do so raise OA 1-3 tick

1. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here
3. 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down
4. 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me

1. 00:40:829 - 00:43:311 - Why here break ._.
2. 00:55:829 (x) - Add a note here
3. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Offset: 2980 rdy
  • Add some tags rdy

[Easy] (this is a Normal imo)

• • 00:41:048 (x) Add a spinner here and end it here 00:43:945 (white tick)
  • 01:00:490 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:10:635 (1) - Start this slider here 01:10:842 (white tick)
  • 01:25:740 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:30:704 (4) - Delete this circle and add a spinner; end the spinner here 01:32:566 (red tick)

[Insane]

• • 00:41:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:04:104 (2,3) - Spacing

Breeze wrote:

[onrion's Hard] seem you want me to bite your neck really.

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me
   Fixed but by my way, nvm >w<

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. LuigiHann wrote:

   Foreign names should be presented in the same name order as used on Wikipedia (generally, Given Name followed by Family Name, the western order, for consistency).

   , so artist better be Megumi Hayashibara, and I love her so much <3
2. Add Sallad4ever, onrioncomet to all difficulties' tags
3. Two combo colour looked samilar, maybe change on to another colour

[Easy]

1. 00:57:587 (S) - spinner ends here and KIAI starts here
2. 01:00:070 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 01:10:622 (x) - KIAI starts here
4. I feek this difficulty ends at a werid place, maybe map to 01:32:553?
   Also, some patterns could confuse beginner as a easiest diff, anyway fine for me, maybe rename to normal better, if you do so raise OA 1-3 tick

[Sallad's Normal]

1. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here
3. 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down
4. 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol

[onrion's Hard]

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me

[Insane]

1. 00:40:829 - 00:43:311 - Why here break ._.
2. 00:55:829 (x) - Add a note here
3. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here

Nice skin, SB and map

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- The two combocolours are so similar, maybe make the second one a bit darker? (0,0,128 RGB looks good oxo) xD
- Hitsounds are imo too loud.:o

~Easy~
- The end sounds... empty. All the diffs are mapped until the end of the song, why not this one?mmm rdy x3

00:55:945 (1) - Extend it to white tick. rdy

~Sallad's Normal~
01:32:566 (1) - Soft hitsound sample, please?

~orion's Hard~
01:22:014 (4) - Well, the repeat arrow isn't really hidden, but it could be hard to see... Up to you to change it =x

~Insane~
00:15:393 (3) - Move 1 lv3grid right for the sake of symmetry (yeah, so nazi xD) hahah rdy xD
00:50:152 (1) - Delete New Combo.RDY
00:50:980 (1) - ^rdy
00:57:497 (2) - Hmmm... sounds kinda weird o.O' >:3


Cool SB (Oh, and comboburst is <3)

~Sallad's Normal~
01:32:566 (1) - Soft hitsound sample, please? Yeah okay

[Sallad's Normal]

* 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here Yup done
* 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here yeah
* 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down hehe yup
* 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol added

xxheroxx wrote:

Pubbled~

yuckothegreat wrote:

Super cool beatmap!

Normal
1:18:290 (3,4,5) - These sliders don't seem to go with the song, and are not spaced so thier difficult to judge. D:

Sallad's Normal
0:45:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put finish on all these no D:
0:54:290 - Add a circle, and start the spinner 1 or 2 ticks later D;
0:57:600 - All the other difficulties have kiai time here.creator chose

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