Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)

posted
Total Posts
35
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 01 de mayo de 2010 at 21:00:53

Artist: PNGN6
Title: Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)
Source: Penguin Musume Heart
Tags: Kataoka Azusa Ise Mariya Nanjou Yoshino Nogawa Sakura Kadowaki Mai Hidaka Rina Nico Nico Douga Kytoxid Dangaard IOSYS
BPM: 166
Filesize: 9135kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Dan (1,23 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Hard (4,85 stars, 201 notes)
  3. Kytoxid's Insane (5 stars, 265 notes)
  4. Normal (4,07 stars, 132 notes)
Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.)
Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
3 April 2010 - Re-Download Please (Skin Deleted)

Penguin Musume Heart OP :D

I'll map the ED1 & ED2 in the future

Easy by Dangaard
Normal by Me
Hard by Me
Insane by Kytoxid

Thanks Dangaard and Kytoxid ^^
Last edited by Vicho , edited 36 times in total.
Kotomi-chan
139 posts
Joined April 2009
Kotomi-chan
Me gusto la song x) aunque el video es raro LOL ¿Puedo intentar hacer una dif? :D
Star! x3
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

Kotomi-chan wrote:

Me gusto la song x) aunque el video es raro LOL ¿Puedo intentar hacer una dif? :D
Star! x3
intentar hacer una diff? Sii xD
Gracias :3
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
My apologies for the delay.

Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (Vicho-kun) [Kytoxid's Insane].osu
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Ame el mpa *-----*
y estrella ^^
eso es todo lo que puedo dar xD
Ignacio_old
378 posts
Joined August 2009
Ignacio_old
:D
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
IRC modded offset -6ms and some spacing error on [Hard] and [Normal] diff

Starrr ~
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
1,136 posts
Joined September 2009
Kenezz
Bueno aqui te dejo los archivos del skin
Agregalos si te gustan :B
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=X2KSFX8W

Staar
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Hola! bueno no me voy a complicar la vida hablando inglés xDD...a lo que voy...a Moddear! xD

[General]
Timing: Correcto
le veo correcto los detalles técnicos...

Bueno, ahora a checar las diffs.

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:33:456 (8) - Alínealo con el final del slider...es un poco incómodo hacer ese pequeño movimiento.
00:46:468 (1) - Moverlo un cuadrito (nivel 3) a la izquierda
00:53:697 (2) - ^ pero hacia arriba
01:02:553 (3,4) - Alínealo con el final del anterior slider y distribuye un poco más equitativamente el espacio que hay entre el slider y los siguientes 2 combo.
01:06:167 (4) - Sube un cuadro (nivel 3)

Conclusión: Buena composición, pero fíjate en la simetría de los items...en eso los modders molestan más en las diff. más fáciles.

[Hard]
SPOILER
-00:10:324 (7,8,9) - Duda dudosa ♪♫...pondrás esos circles de esa forma intencionadamente? es que vi unos sliders ligeramente torcidos en los siguientes combo. Alínealos**
-00:14:480 (7) - cambia la posición de ese slider...pinta a ser muy random.
-00:33:276 (2) - Alinear con slider 1
-Conclusión: Discute con un MAT/BAT acerca de los errores que arroja el AImod...estéticamente el map es fácil de entender, pero hay usuarios que toman demasiado en serio lo del AImod

**Recomendación

[Insane]
SPOILER
-00:55:505 (1) - correr 2 grids (nivel 3) a la derecha
-01:26:950 (1) - este spinner debe finalizar en un beat blanco.
-01:26:950 (1) - bajale el volumen a cero al final**

**Recomendación

Qué buen map! Suerte!! ya te dí estrellita
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
Todo está fixeado. muchas gracias j35u5891221 :3
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
First of all
need make a easy diff?

Normal
reduce volume?

Hard
reduce volume?
00:45:565(3) - add a note?

Insane
00:05:987~00:23:336 reduce volume?

star~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I really think you need an Easy. Normal is 4.00 stars so it will appear as Hard :/
- The spinnercircle needs to be 666x666. Also it doesn't look nice being totally transparent >.<
- Delete the .osb file :3

~Normal~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit?

00:26:589 (5) - New Combo. Try to not make combos of 9-10 circles for easiest diffs.
00:32:733 (7) - ^
00:38:155 (7) - ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo?
01:05:264 (3) - The reverse arrow of the slider is almost hidden here, invert the slider to fix it :3
01:09:601 (8,1) - New Combo on (8) and delete New Combo on (1).
01:22:613 (1) - Delete New Combo.

~Hard~
00:10:324 (7) - New Combo.
00:15:023 (8) - ^
00:37:974 (7) - ^?
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:04:902 (2) - Fix spacing here.
01:14:661 (8) - New Combo.

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:21:529 (9,10) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (4,5) spacing :P
00:24:782 (7) - New Combo.
00:41:589 (7) - ^
00:53:697 (9) - ^

Nice map and song, good luck!! *star*
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
Wow I love this song
Very good map. :3 So just some suggestions:

-Normal-
HP-1 or HP-2
01:21:167 (1) - add whistle at this slider's end
01:22:613 (1) - ^
01:24:059 (1) - add whistle at this slider's start&end
01:25:505 (3) - ^


-Hard-
00:15:746 (11) - move it 1 grid up
01:08:697 (1) - I don't like this jump.a bit hard to read for me.
01:09:240 - add a circle here? like this:
SPOILER

-Kytoxid-
00:46:468 (1) - add finish?
01:03:276 (1,2) - use soft-finish? Soft-finish is seems better than normal's. :)
01:15:384 (1) - remove clap
01:15:746 (2) - add clap
01:16:107 (3) - remove clap
01:16:468 (4) - add clap

*star*
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Halo Vicho kun

Here's my gift for you :)
The hitsound by all means are suggestion only :D

Normal
I'm afraid there will be any MAT/BAT complain about the 4 star rating :o
Maybe decrease OD and HP by 3 or can I make an easy diff for you?
01:21:167 (1,1) - use finish on goth the slider end


Hard
00:20:806 (8) - new combo
00:29:480 (1,2,3) - nice one :D I got careless and hit 3 first :o
00:43:035 (3) - new combo
01:00:203 (6,7) - whistle ?
01:11:770 (4) - ^


Kytoxyd's insane
00:13:215 (1,2,3,4) - my favorite pattern :oops:
00:31:830 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:32:733 (13) - new combo


00:57:312 this part of the song cant leave my head
What ? Muranai ??

Very catchy song, you have my STAR :)
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho

H-boy wrote:

First of all
need make a easy diff? wait for that :D

Normal
reduce volume? No

Hard
reduce volume? No
00:45:565(3) - add a note? Ok

Insane
00:05:987~00:23:336 reduce volume? No ._.

star~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I really think you need an Easy. Normal is 4.00 stars so it will appear as Hard :/ Wait for the easy
- The spinnercircle needs to be 666x666. Also it doesn't look nice being totally transparent >.< spinnercircle deleted
- Delete the .osb file :3 ok

~Normal~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a bit? ok

00:26:589 (5) - New Combo. Try to not make combos of 9-10 circles for easiest diffs. yup
00:32:733 (7) - ^ ^
00:38:155 (7) - ^ ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo? yes :3
01:05:264 (3) - The reverse arrow of the slider is almost hidden here, invert the slider to fix it :3 ok
01:09:601 (8,1) - New Combo on (8) and delete New Combo on (1). ok
01:22:613 (1) - Delete New Combo. yup :3

~Hard~
00:10:324 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:15:023 (8) - ^ ^
00:37:974 (7) - ^? ^
00:46:468 (1) - Delete New Combo. ok
01:04:902 (2) - Fix spacing here. fixed
01:14:661 (8) - New Combo. ok

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:21:529 (9,10) - Fix spacing. Compare this with (4,5) spacing :P fixed
00:24:782 (7) - New Combo. ok
00:41:589 (7) - ^ ^
00:53:697 (9) - ^ ^

Nice map and song, good luck!! *star* thank you!

xierbaliti wrote:

Wow I love this song me too *-*
Very good map. :3 So just some suggestions:

-Normal-
HP-1 or HP-2 fixed
01:21:167 (1) - add whistle at this slider's end yup
01:22:613 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:059 (1) - add whistle at this slider's start&end ^
01:25:505 (3) - ^ ^


-Hard-
00:15:746 (11) - move it 1 grid up ok
01:08:697 (1) - I don't like this jump.a bit hard to read for me. ok
01:09:240 - add a circle here? like this: ok
SPOILER
[attachment=0:92645]00000001.jpg[/attachment:92645]

-Kytoxid-
00:46:468 (1) - add finish? ok
01:03:276 (1,2) - use soft-finish? Soft-finish is seems better than normal's. :) ok
01:15:384 (1) - remove clap ok
01:15:746 (2) - add clap ok
01:16:107 (3) - remove clap ok
01:16:468 (4) - add clap ok

*star* thank you!!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Vicho kun

Here's my gift for you :)
The hitsound by all means are suggestion only :D

Normal
I'm afraid there will be any MAT/BAT complain about the 4 star rating :o
Maybe decrease OD and HP by 3 or can I make an easy diff for you? fixed and... no, thanks ^^U
01:21:167 (1,1) - use finish on goth the slider end ok


Hard
00:20:806 (8) - new combo ok
00:29:480 (1,2,3) - nice one :D I got careless and hit 3 first :o xD
00:43:035 (3) - new combo ok
01:00:203 (6,7) - whistle ? ok
01:11:770 (4) - ^ ^


Kytoxyd's insane
00:13:215 (1,2,3,4) - my favorite pattern :oops:
00:31:830 (1) - remove new combo ? ok
00:32:733 (13) - new combo ok


00:57:312 this part of the song cant leave my head
What ? Muranai ?? Soko da, MARANAI! >.<

Very catchy song, you have my STAR :) thank you >.<
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
Easy Dan go!

Download: PNGN6 - Renai Jiyuu Shoujo (Short Ver.) (Vicho-kun) [Easy Dan].osu
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
Star~ >w</
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Add "IOSYS" to tags.


~Easy Dan~
00:05:987 (1) - add hitfinish at start
00:36:709 (3) - add clap at middle, remove clap at end

~Normal~
01:02:733 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:08:697 (7) - ^
01:09:601 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:22:613 (2) - remove hitfinish

~Hard~
00:25:324 (5) - stack it
00:54:420 (1) - curve down
00:55:505 (4) - add clap at end
00:58:035 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:08:517 (4,1) - NO D:
01:20:806 (9) - remove hitfinish
01:21:167 (1) - add hitfinish at start

~Kytoxid's Insane~
00:30:565 (6) - new combo
00:41:227 (6) - add whistle
01:14:300 (8) - add clap


+Star
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Vicho
All Fixed... except that...

DJPop wrote:

01:08:517 (4,1) - NO D:
what are you talking about? :O
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
Muy bueno!!!! buena suerteeeeeeee :oops:
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 35