1. <3 (4.11 stars, 496 notes)
2. Easy (1.6 stars, 163 notes)
3. Hard (3.12 stars, 359 notes)
4. Normal (2.11 stars, 251 notes)

Crystal wrote:

from my queue~

[Info]

1. Red: Unrankable Issues
2. Bold: Highly Recommended
3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]

1. "<3" looks weird for a diff name lol, consider changing to something else. osu! needs more love
2. Looking fine.

[<3]

1. 00:10:061 (6) - Change to a slider, to keep consistent with 00:06:384 (3,4,5) - . it's actually find, cuz it fits the vocals just fine
2. 00:23:223 (7) - 56|212, distance looks nicer. i want it to be a rect line, but moved a bit up tho
3. 01:14:944 (6) - Change to a 1/2 slider, it's not a good idea to have a sudden stop here, imo. it's fine to stop here
4. 01:19:082 (5) - Change to 2 circles, maybe. na these are low sounds, sliders fit better imo
5. *01:49:427 (6) - ^
6. 01:35:289 (4,6) - Ctrl+G, the jump can be smoother. cool
7. 01:57:789 (6,1) - Stack? on purpuse
8. 02:05:806 (5) - This might be better. http://puu.sh/eFVhp/62d44e6748.jpg but the flow from previous note would be bad
9. 02:25:461 (2) - 424|248, the pattern can be clearer and can have a stronger feeling. im not a big fan of huge 1/4 jumps, especially for this song

[Hard]

1. 00:10:061 (6,7,8) - Shouldn't rhythm be like this? http://puu.sh/eFVXr/efc401f4c1.jpg na it follows vocals just fine
2. 00:14:319 - Since she changes her tone here, better to have a note here. i wont have any difference between hard and insane then...
3. 00:16:448 (9,10) - Try this. The pattern won't be that abrupt. http://puu.sh/eFWaB/a79ad03611.jpg ok :3
4. 00:26:319 - Same with 00:14:319. sa,me
5. 00:43:392 (1,4) - The overlap can be weird. Will it be better to stack on 00:44:599 (5) - ? i dont playing it, but if i find another place ill see ;o
6. 01:19:082 (5) - 432|344 might be better. i want this jump
7. 01:24:599 (5) - ^ 360|120. ^
8. 01:26:323, 01:26:668, 01:27:013 - Don't ignore drums here. ;w; vocals are cool too
9. 01:29:772 (5) - Missing a beat & Starting a slider at a 1/4 doesn't make sense, imo. Consider this one.http://puu.sh/eFX0J/51e3e78d6a.jpg If u listen to the melody, it actually makes sense. I did it a lot lol
10. 01:52:875 (3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe too hard for "Hard". Change 01:53:220 (4,5,6) - to a slider? ok:3

[Normal]

1. 00:11:610 (1) - Try this rhythm. http://puu.sh/eFXnh/0f25b57d03.jpg uhm ill other people opinion on this one ><
2. 01:16:496 (1) - A simple slider is enough for me, like 01:15:634 (6) - . (It means you don't need to put a red anchor here.) dont blame my art slider plz ;w;
3. Fine.

[Easy]

1. 00:06:384 (3) - Set the 3rd anchor at 512|260, to make sure that the last 3 anchors are at a straight line. ok lol
2. 00:09:480 (3) - ^ 0|260
3. 00:28:388 (1,1) - 1 spinner can be ok. Since newcomers can get confused with 2 close spinners. newcomers actually dont stop to spin i believe. people do this a lot
4. 01:24:772 (2,3) - Better blanket them.na
5. 02:06:151 (3) - Out of the screen? 0.0 i see it on the screen fine o.o uhm

good luck!

Kocari wrote:

This BG is fucking amazing...

appleeaterx wrote:

hello milan! as promised

:idea: General

* The source should be "劇場版 花咲くいろは HOME SWEET HOME". It's on their logo, and on their website. [url=Take for example this page, where both text and logo's have the '劇場版' and capital letters.[/url]

* Also add "gekijouban" to the tags.

Hitsounds

* 00:14:900 (9) - Intentional no whistle here? i find it not so high pitched to add one ><
* 00:35:806 (1) - Add a whistle here? Same sound as 00:38:565 - k
* 00:54:254 - Optional, but remove the clap here? The actual clap in the song is actually on the blue tick after that. it's on both actually. Imo
* 01:02:530 (7) - ^ ^
* 01:07:185 (4) - Sounds kinda like a cymbal crash to me, consider using a finish instead? i dont think it's needed but ill see ><
* 01:41:323 (1) - There should really be a soft finish imo, the cymbal is really noticeable. k

Easy

* 00:11:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is loooooong. Adding a NC at 00:14:126 (5) - would fit >-< ill see later >< i dont want to break my constancy
* 00:28:388 (1,1) - It's not unrankable to have two spinners here, but some BATs told me on my setsuna plus map it's better to have one long spinner in easy/normal diffs - feel free to keep though why that spoiler xd ok
* 00:37:013 (3) - This is quite confusing, as you are skipping the clap at 00:37:185 (3) - . I'd just keep a 1/1 rhythm here, so it's easier and actually follows the main instruments. i dont want to have a 3/2 gap, maybe ill add a repeat to cover the clap, but ill see ><

* 00:42:530 (3) - Same as above.
* 01:20:461 (3,4,5) - I'd place a slider somewhere here to make it a bit more simple. Three times loose 1/2 notes are really hard to time/hit for beginners. actually short sliders are more difficult for beginners hehe
* 02:00:289 (5) - This is perfectly following the vocals, but there's a clear tone shift in the song at 02:00:634 - which really should be clickable imo. ok

Normal

* 00:11:610 (1,2) - What does this exactly follow, lol? Try a repeat here? Would fit with the vocals. dont blame my vocal mapping ;( ok

* 00:28:388 (1,1) - Same as Easy diff k
* 00:44:254 (2) - I recommend deleting this done, because 00:42:530 (4,5,1,2,3) - contains a lot of single-tapping with tricky 1/2 rhythms. And since you are mainly following the guitars with the repeat slider (1), deleting this note should be fine as there is no guitar present here. ill see later, cuz i mapped the drums with 00:42:875 (5) - so for some people i need to map this drum too orz
* 00:45:806 (5) - Consider placing this somewhere else. 1/2 blankets with such low DS don't look that good and confuse the player. i wanna keep it ;w;

* 01:44:082 (1) - Consider curving the other way for better flow with (2)? k

* 02:19:944 (1,2,3,4) - Is this supposed to be symmetrical? If it is, you should highlight them all, because they're not x_x Try rearraging them a bit? i moved 3 and 4 just a bit orz, it's fine already though

Current


After some tweaking

Hard

* 00:10:835 (8) - This slider ends at a rather strange place. Consider extending the slider to the next white tick, to catch both the vocal end, and the guitar. k
* 00:51:582 - Map this note as well? To make it rhythm-wise the same as 00:54:341 (5) - na, this isn't as noticiable as the other one
* 01:16:323 (1) - I'd make this a 1/2 slider with a repeat, to also catch the downbeat/drum sound on the large white tick. A circle + slider would work great as well. na it's fine

* 01:29:772 (4,5) - The 1/4 sliders starts a bit late imo, because the stream in the song itself already starts on the white/blue tick earlier. I recommend you to use the same rhythm as 01:07:358 (2,3,4) - and 02:02:703 (3,4) - k

Insane

* 00:23:803 - Consider mapping this note as well? You did map 00:19:545 (6) - and there's a guitar note here. ill consider this >< not sure if it's really neccesary for vocals
* 00:51:582 - ^ (same as hard diff this time) k

sorry for short mod, i avoided mentioning stacks lol
The Insane diff is so fun! it's pretty bad lol

good luck :3

1. 00:10:448 (4) - Consider following vocals here, thus making the slider 1/1 instead of 3/2
2. 00:22:835 (4) - ^^
3. 01:04:072 (3,4) - Please fix blanket
4. 01:18:914 (1,2) - It's all so straight. Please curve it a little, also improves flow
5. 01:22:362 (5) - Curve to increase flow with (6)

1. 01:43:026 (4) - Consider following vocals here
2. 02:10:976 (4,1) - Blanket

1. 00:35:117 (1) - 1/2 to follow music better?
2. 00:37:875 (1) - ^^ (Same applies to the following ones which are the same)
3. 01:30:983 (3) - Curve for better flow please
4. 01:33:052 (1,2) - Blanket

1. 00:18:190 (2,4) - Fix stack please
2. 00:57:865 (3,4,5,1) - Flow here isn't that great. From clock-wise movements, you suddenly go to anti-clockwise and vice versa

Baraatje123 wrote:

M4M

[General]
Are you sure about the timing?
It seems a bit weird, all those red lines uhm it should be rankable imo. At the beginning the slow down is clear enough. The others parts are just the drums being inconsistent and timming resets. It sounds good enough for me, if you don't think so let me know.

[Easy]

1. 00:10:448 (4) - Consider following vocals here, thus making the slider 1/1 instead of 3/2 Uh i prefer using 3/2. Technically vocals end early but there's still eccho and melody going on, so it fits a lot better as 3/2 to me
2. 00:22:835 (4) - ^^
3. 01:04:072 (3,4) - Please fix blanket i think i did?
4. 01:18:914 (1,2) - It's all so straight. Please curve it a little, also improves flow curved 1 a bit
5. 01:22:362 (5) - Curve to increase flow with (6) It's ok to me this way, 4-5 feels more comfortable this way too

[Normal]

1. 01:43:026 (4) - Consider following vocals here trid something. Here too 01:09:934 -
2. 02:10:976 (4,1) - Blanket it's blanket'd enough to me

Great diff

[Hard]

1. 00:35:117 (1) - 1/2 to follow music better? It's ok as 1/1 too. Didn't want to use the rhythms as insane
2. 00:37:875 (1) - ^^ (Same applies to the following ones which are the same)
3. 01:30:983 (3) - Curve for better flow please ok
4. 01:33:052 (1,2) - Blanket blanket is fine to me

Great diff

[<3]
Are you sure about the diffname? It's ok. It doesn't show on editor cuz osu doesnt want to be loved </3. Also this http://osu.ppy.sh/b/570953 . In addition that the lyrics of this song use kokoro and stuff like that
Even the editor has troubles showing it
It just displays it as 3

1. 00:18:190 (2,4) - Fix stack please k
2. 00:57:865 (3,4,5,1) - Flow here isn't that great. From clock-wise movements, you suddenly go to anti-clockwise and vice versa the movement plays cool to me, it's more like a down-up than circular flow so it doesn't feel bad either ;w;

All diffs are well made, but look a little better for incorrect blankets. I only noted the visible ones (while looking at 100% in the editor) i dont really care about blankets too much.. ;w;
Call me back when it's fixed for qualify (less then 1 page, we can do it!)

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