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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 01 Juni 2010 at 20:31:54

Artist: SMiLE.dk
Title: Doki Doki
Tags: euro dance
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3360kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Geisha (3,81 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Kimono (1,28 stars, 82 notes)
  3. Samurai (4,96 stars, 266 notes)
Download: SMiLE.dk - Doki Doki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Moe Moe AngelHoney~ My heart goes BOOM! If you don't like my SB, I will cry and go on. Remember! I working hard to make a SB for that. With Malin and Veronica, Malin was leave the SMiLE.dk after she sing Doki Doki, hiks. And Hanna will join the SMiLE.dk to replace Malin ^^. Enjoy! EDIT : Hanna was left from SMiLE.dk in this year :cry:, to replace Hanna, The member will replace Hanna, her name is Cecilia

PLEASE REDOWNLOAD, DUE THE SB CHANGED, YOUR EYES ARE NOT KILL ANYMORE

Update in April 01, 2010 : Colinnyan's Mod
Update in April 02, 2010 : AngelHoney's Mod (Moe Moe AngelHoney~)
Update in April 05, 2010 : Beuchinyan's and H-boy-chan's Mod
Update in April 06, 2010 : haisha-kun's and Xero-chan's Mod
Update in April 07, 2010 : xxheroxx-chan's and Rinnyan's Mod
Update in April 08, 2010 : Shunyan's and Midget-kun's Mod
Update in April 11, 2010 : Low-eH's Mod
Update in April 13, 2010 : Breezer's Mod, Skin added, fix some SB
Update in April 17, 2010 : Shinnyan's Mod, offset changes (Breezer's Offset)
Update in April 21, 2010 : Sonnynyan's Mod, few pattern is added
Update in April 24, 2010 : Derekku's Mod
Update in April 27, 2010 : tmokb-chan's and Liss-kun's Mod. SB fix Redownload pls (LISSETTE SUCKS!!)
Update in May 06, 2010 : Add some SB Item (Redownload please)
Update in May 13, 2010 : bliss-chan's Mod
Update in May 15, 2010 : Some stuff is deleted and fixed, redownload please
Update in May 20, 2010 : Louis's Mod
Update in May 30, 2010 : SB changed, redownload please
Update in June 01, 2010 : Gens' Mod, Some SB are fixed
Colin Hou
Good work, now just some suggestions~

[General]:
Mostly mod on the hitsound and some nazi mod :D
The gray SB frightened me a little bit...

[Kimno]:
Nice.

[Geisha]:
  1. [00:11:142(9)]: whistle?
  2. [00:13:714(1)]: whistle at the end.
  3. [00:15:642(5)]: whistle
  4. [00:57:857(T)]: add a circle with clap. location is...easy to find.
  5. [01:20:571(1,2)]: add finish at the beginning of the sliders?
  6. [01:27:428(1)]: finish is good, add a clap may work better (keep the finish)
  7. [01:39:428(1)]: end at 00:399:857 is better.
  8. [01:41:142(1)]: let the end of the slider can cover [01:40:285(2)] (lol nazi mod), then the next circle should also do some change.
[Samurai]:
  1. [00:16:285(7)]: new combo
  2. [00:16:285(7,8,9,10)]: spacing
  3. [00:46:285(2)]: move to [00:46:071]
  4. [00:47:571(3)]: move to [00:47:357]
  5. [00:57:428(9,10,11)]: add claps, have a try
  6. [01:02:357(T)]: add a circle? maybe works well... just like [01:33:214(4)]
  7. [01:46:285(13)]: finish
  8. [00:51:857(2)]: let 1 cover its start circle well..(lol nazi mod....again...)
  9. [01:39:857(3)]: remove the clap?
Goooooooooooood Job and have a star~
Topic Starter
Leorda

Colin Hou wrote:

Good work, now just some suggestions~

[General]:
Mostly mod on the hitsound and some nazi mod :D
The gray SB frightened me a little bit...

[Kimno]:
Nice.

[Geisha]:
  1. [00:11:142(9)]: whistle? Done
  2. [00:13:714(1)]: whistle at the end. Done
  3. [00:15:642(5)]: whistle Done
  4. [00:57:857(T)]: add a circle with clap. location is...easy to find. Done
  5. [01:20:571(1,2)]: add finish at the beginning of the sliders? Done
  6. [01:27:428(1)]: finish is good, add a clap may work better (keep the finish) Done
  7. [01:39:428(1)]: end at 00:399:857 is better. Done
  8. [01:41:142(1)]: let the end of the slider can cover [01:40:285(2)] (lol nazi mod), then the next circle should also do some change.
Done

[Samurai]:
  1. [00:16:285(7)]: new combo Done
  2. [00:16:285(7,8,9,10)]: spacing Done
  3. [00:46:285(2)]: move to [00:46:071] No
  4. [00:47:571(3)]: move to [00:47:357] No
  5. [00:57:428(9,10,11)]: add claps, have a try Done
  6. [01:02:357(T)]: add a circle? maybe works well... just like [01:33:214(4)] Done
  7. [01:46:285(13)]: finish Done
  8. [00:51:857(2)]: let 1 cover its start circle well..(lol nazi mod....again...) No
  9. [01:39:857(3)]: remove the clap? No
Goooooooooooood Job and have a star~
Thanks for the star
AngelHoney
SB

00:44:571 - unexpected..?
MANY STAR.png is sexy~

Samurai

00:47:464 (3) - ??
00:51:428 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked ?
00:54:857 - add a note ?
01:46:714 - add some notes? ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6230

Geisha

00:45:428 (3,5) - ??
01:42:857 (1,3) - ^ lol

Kimono

fine :3

Doki Doki ,yeah i like this SB ☆⌒Σ(≧д≦)ゝ
Topic Starter
Leorda

AngelHoney wrote:

SB

00:44:571 - unexpected..?
MANY STAR.png is sexy~ >////<

Samurai

00:47:464 (3) - ?? Fixed
00:51:428 (1,2) - Not perfectly stacked ? color=#00FF00]Fixed[/color]
00:54:857 - add a note ? Added
01:46:714 - add some notes? ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6230 No, sorry

Geisha

00:45:428 (3,5) - ?? Fixed
01:42:857 (1,3) - ^ lol Fixed

Kimono

fine :3

Doki Doki ,yeah i like this SB ☆⌒Σ(≧д≦)ゝ
OMG! I LOVE YOU ANGELHONEY >////////<
Sallad4ever
Waktunya balas budi :)
Lagunya mirip butterfly :D

SB
This kind of SB is actually my favorite :)
00:47:999 the SB is spinning but because of the spinner you can't see it :o (except Samurai diff)

Samurai
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is very insane :o

Well this is not a mod, just my comment
Thanks for always helping me Leorda :D
Topic Starter
Leorda

Sallad4ever wrote:

Waktunya balas budi :)
Lagunya mirip butterfly :D

SB
This kind of SB is actually my favorite :)
00:47:999 the SB is spinning but because of the spinner you can't see it :o (except Samurai diff) But, you can the SB when you play CtB

Samurai
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is very insane :o Why?

Well this is not a mod, just my comment
Thanks for always helping me Leorda :D
Well, sorry about that
But thanks ^^
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Storyboard images can't exceed 800x600px size, you'll have to resize "MINI SNOW.png" and "SAKURA BIG.png"
- I think the two last combocolours are kind of unnecesary, they're so similar to 2nd and 3rd colours oxo
Storyboard:
- Fade the green coloured background on 44571ms.
- I think that it'd be better if you make the stars on the first chorus (starting on 51428ms) fading at the end of each pulse.

~Kimono~
00:10:714 (6) - New Combo. 10 is too large for the easiest diffs :/
00:27:428 (6) - ^
00:56:571 (6) - ^
01:45:857 (4) - ^

~Geisha~
00:10:285 (6) - New combo.
00:17:142 (8) - ^
00:54:857 (x) - Add a note here? It feels like (1) comes earlier.
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here too? It sounds empty imo.
01:41:142 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:44:571 (1) - ^

~Samurai~
00:08:571 (8) - New Combo.
00:31:821 (5) - Fix spacing here.
00:33:214 (9) - New Combo.
00:39:428 (8) - ^
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks so "messy" compared to the general spacing of the song. Increase spacing between them a bit?
00:49:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. Also, make a horizontal flip of this one, the overlap is a bit ugly imo oxo
01:24:428 (8) - New Combo.
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here? Same reason as [Geisha].

Nice map <3 *star*
TTTTTTTTTTTT
First of all
:)
Bule:suggestions

Kimono
reduce volume?

Geisha
reduce volume?
00:45:642(x) - add a note
00:46:928(x) - ^

01:19:285(x) - ^
01:19:714(x) - ^
01:20:142(x) - ^
01:20:357(x) - ^


Samurai
reduce volume?
01:19:285(x) - add a note
01:19:499(x) - ^
01:19:714(x) - ^
01:20:142(x) - ^
01:20:357(x) - ^
01:39:857(3) - move one gird down

Star~
Topic Starter
Leorda

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Storyboard images can't exceed 800x600px size, you'll have to resize "MINI SNOW.png" and "SAKURA BIG.png" It's ok when you scale in-game
- I think the two last combocolours are kind of unnecesary, they're so similar to 2nd and 3rd colours oxo No
Storyboard:
- Fade the green coloured background on 44571ms. Fix
- I think that it'd be better if you make the stars on the first chorus (starting on 51428ms) fading at the end of each pulse. No

~Kimono~
00:10:714 (6) - New Combo. 10 is too large for the easiest diffs :/
00:27:428 (6) - ^
00:56:571 (6) - ^
01:45:857 (4) - ^

~Geisha~
00:10:285 (6) - New combo. Fix
00:17:142 (8) - ^ Fix
00:54:857 (x) - Add a note here? It feels like (1) comes earlier. No
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here too? It sounds empty imo. No
01:41:142 (1) - Delete New Combo. No
01:44:571 (1) - ^ No

~Samurai~
00:08:571 (8) - New Combo. Fix
00:31:821 (5) - Fix spacing here. Fix
00:33:214 (9) - New Combo. Fix
00:39:428 (8) - ^ Fix
00:47:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks so "messy" compared to the general spacing of the song. Increase spacing between them a bit?
00:49:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as above. Also, make a horizontal flip of this one, the overlap is a bit ugly imo oxo Fix
01:24:428 (8) - New Combo. Fix
01:25:714 (x) - Add a note here? Same reason as [Geisha]No.

Nice map <3 *star*

H-boy wrote:

First of all
:)
Bule:suggestions

Kimono
reduce volume? No

Geisha
reduce volume? No
00:45:642(x) - add a note
00:46:928(x) - ^ No[/color]
01:19:285(x) - ^
01:19:714(x) - ^ No
01:20:142(x) - ^ No
01:20:357(x) - ^[/color] No

Samurai
reduce volume?
01:19:285(x) - add a note No
01:19:499(x) - ^ No
01:19:714(x) - ^ No
01:20:142(x) - ^
01:20:357(x) - ^ No
01:39:857(3) - move one gird down Fix

Star~
Thanks for modding you guys
Kerensa
Overall:
the kiai time plus that annoying sotrybaording really hurts peoples eyes, i dunno in my opening the oppping of the picture is just to strong with the kiai time.

kimono:
reduce the audio down abit. really over powering. specially for the easy dif T_T

Geisha:
00:56:571 [7] new combo?

sumarai:
00:28:928 [5] new combo?
--- story boarding kills my eyes----
01:32:571 [1] spacing is decieving.. hmhmm maybne turn it so that it starts at [3]?

yeahhh..
star ~
Topic Starter
Leorda

haisha_ wrote:

Overall:
the kiai time plus that annoying sotrybaording really hurts peoples eyes, i dunno in my opening the oppping of the picture is just to strong with the kiai time. Why?

kimono:
reduce the audio down abit. really over powering. specially for the easy dif T_T No

Geisha:
00:56:571 [7] new combo? Fix

sumarai:
00:28:928 [5] new combo? Fix
--- story boarding kills my eyes----
01:32:571 [1] spacing is decieving.. hmhmm maybne turn it so that it starts at [3]? Fix

yeahhh..
star ~
Thanks for modding
BTW, try reducing the brightness of your monitor, it would be help
-Xero-
Yo,


[Overall]
That SB is really annoying in some parts..
Dunno if you need the Thumbs.db data. I'm not in for Storyboarding, so you should know better.

[Geisha]
01:01:928 - Add a cirlce here maybe.

[Samurai]
00:56:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Place them in the mid?
01:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't make any sense to me.
01:32:571 (1,2,3,4) - ^ + they're damn hard here.
01:40:714 (5) - 1 tick to the right

Good Luck with your map!
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Offset 6880 (resnap all notes)
[Kimono]

  • • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) and end it here 00:37:714 (white tick)
    • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner

[Samurai]


  • • 00:26:571 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:26:785 (x) - ^
    • 00:26:999 (x) - ^
    • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick)
    • 00:40:928 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:44:357 (x) - ^
    • 00:44:571 (x) - ^
    • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner
NatsumeRin
[General]
offset: about +5?

[Kimono]
slider tick = 2?
01:01:737 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use 1 or 2 slider instead.


[Geisha]
OA=5... now it's really too low...
00:46:308 (6) - new combo
01:44:594 (5) - ...this slider... remap?

[Samurai]
before 00:18:880 (1), use a custom hitsound instead of the whistle?
00:25:737 (9) - new combo?
00:27:022 (15,1) - spacing
00:32:594 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on next (1)
Topic Starter
Leorda

Xero_HT wrote:

Yo,


[Overall]
That SB is really annoying in some parts.. Fuck you
Dunno if you need the Thumbs.db data. I'm not in for Storyboarding, so you should know better.

[Geisha]
01:01:928 - Add a cirlce here maybe. No

[Samurai] All Fixed
00:56:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Place them in the mid?
01:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps don't make any sense to me.
01:32:571 (1,2,3,4) - ^ + they're damn hard here.
01:40:714 (5) - 1 tick to the right

Good Luck with your map!

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Offset 6880 (resnap all notes)
Changed

[Kimono]

  • • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) and end it here 00:37:714 (white tick)
    • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner[/color] Fixed

[Samurai]


  • • 00:26:571 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:26:785 (x) - ^ Added
    • 00:26:999 (x) - ^ Added
    • 00:36:214 (1) - Start this spinner here 00:35:999 (white tick) No
    • 00:40:928 (x) - Add a circle Added
    • 00:44:357 (x) - ^ Added
    • 00:44:571 (x) - ^ Added
    • 01:49:714 (1) - Mute this spinner[/color] Fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: about +5? No

[Kimono]
slider tick = 2? No
01:01:737 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use 1 or 2 slider instead. Fixed


[Geisha]
OA=5... now it's really too low... Fixed
00:46:308 (6) - new combo Fixed
01:44:594 (5) - ...this slider... remap? Fixed

[Samurai]
before 00:18:880 (1), use a custom hitsound instead of the whistle? No
00:25:737 (9) - new combo? Fixed
00:27:022 (15,1) - spacing Fixed
00:32:594 (8) - new combo and remove new combo on next (1) Fixed
Thanks for modding you guys ^^
Shulin
General

-- Audio volume 70%-80% sounds too high atm.
-- Consider using a soft/silent slider slider slide.
-- Add an epilepsy warning "Storyboard" > "Display epilepsy warning"
-- Try to get all SB elements under 800 x 600, 640 x 480 is better though.
-- "MANY STAR".png, "MINI SNOW".png, "SAKURA BIG".png, are all over 800 x 600 so you'll have to resize those.
-- Delete "thumbs"

Kimono:

00:36:237 (1) - Start one tick earlier for spinning time?

Geisha:

00:20:165 (x) - Add a note.
00:34:308 (5) - New combo.
01:39:451 (1,2) - Less confusing if you follow the rhythm set at 01:37:737 (1,2,3) -

Samurai:

00:45:022 (1,2) - The overlap doesn't look great imo.
00:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really confusing spacing at first. It might be best to start 00:48:022 (1,2) - with your regular spacing instead of an anti jump.
00:56:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The claps at the end sounds bad.
01:24:022 (5) - New combo?
01:44:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well this stream doesn't really fit the music ;_; It kinda just feels tacked on...
01:46:522 to 01:47:808 - empty D:
01:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps don't fit the music.

Nice overall, but your SB size is unrankable.
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Shulin wrote:

General

-- Audio volume 70%-80% sounds too high atm. Done
-- Consider using a soft/silent slider slider slide. Done
-- Add an epilepsy warning "Storyboard" > "Display epilepsy warning" Done, but what is Epilepsy Warning?
-- Try to get all SB elements under 800 x 600, 640 x 480 is better though. Done
-- "MANY STAR".png, "MINI SNOW".png, "SAKURA BIG".png, are all over 800 x 600 so you'll have to resize those. Done
-- Delete "thumbs" I can't find the thumbs

Kimono:

00:36:237 (1) - Start one tick earlier for spinning time? No

Geisha:

00:20:165 (x) - Add a note. No
00:34:308 (5) - New combo. Fixed
01:39:451 (1,2) - Less confusing if you follow the rhythm set at 01:37:737 (1,2,3) - Fixed

Samurai:

00:45:022 (1,2) - The overlap doesn't look great imo.
00:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really confusing spacing at first. It might be best to start 00:48:022 (1,2) - with your regular spacing instead of an anti jump. Fixed
00:56:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - The claps at the end sounds bad. Fixed
01:24:022 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:44:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well this stream doesn't really fit the music ;_; It kinda just feels tacked on... Fixed
01:46:522 to 01:47:808 - empty D: No
01:48:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps don't fit the music. No

Nice overall, but your SB size is unrankable.
~ Star.
Thanks for modding
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Snap all sections = ="
~Kimono~
  1. 00:56:594 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:55:308 (4)
  2. 01:32:594 (6) - New Combo.
~Geisha~
  1. 00:34:308 (5) - New Combo.
  2. 00:56:594 (1) - Remove New Combo
Sorry, nothing more found. = ="
Topic Starter
Leorda

Midget wrote:

~Overall~
  1. Snap all sections = =" No
~Kimono~
  1. 00:56:594 (1) - Move this new combo to 00:55:308 (4) No
  2. 01:32:594 (6) - New Combo. Fixed
~Geisha~
  1. 00:34:308 (5) - New Combo.Fixed
  2. 00:56:594 (1) - Remove New Combo Fixed
Sorry, nothing more found. = ="
Thanks for modding Midget ^^
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