Hayami Saori,Tange Sakura,Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary(LP) · forum

xinhe

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

xinhe 2010-04-03T10:21:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月11日 at 19:58:10

Artist: Hayami Saori, Tange Sakura, Minaguchi Yuko
Title: Eternal Diary
Source: Love Plus
Tags: manaka nene rinko konami Ex Boy
BPM: 126
Filesize: 11403kb
Play Time: 03:36
Difficulties Available:

Ex Boy's Love!! (4.65 stars, 413 notes)
Love Plus (4.78 stars, 485 notes)
Manaka (3.08 stars, 154 notes)
Nene (4.33 stars, 216 notes)
Rinko (1.67 stars, 103 notes)

Download: Hayami Saori, Tange Sakura, Minaguchi Yuko - Eternal Diary
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Love plus
爱相随
ラブプラス

this my first map~:D~thanks everyone give me help. may be this map is not very good. but i hope i can have you support

2010.6.5:update skin
2010.6.9:Reset settings offset
2010.6.10:The first version completed
2010.6.11:Correct the offset
Change the MP3
Modify the RINKO difficult
2010.6.12:Modify the MANAKA difficult
Modify the NENE difficult
2010.6.14:Thanks Ex boy remake Skin
Upload Ex boy's lover DIFF
2010.6.15:RINKO DIFF finish
2010.6.19:MANAKA DIFF finish
2010.6.20:NENE DIFF finish
2010.6.22:Love Plus DIFF finish
Thanks NatsumeRin help me add the hitsound in RINKO MANAKA NENE DIFF

Last edited by xinhe 2010-07-11T16:07:35+00:00, edited 97 times in total.

abalee

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abalee 2010-06-04T14:09:26+00:00

back to WIP.

xinhe

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xinhe 2010-06-04T18:24:01+00:00

abalee wrote:
back to WIP.

THANKS!!!!abalee

vincerio

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vincerio 2010-06-06T07:54:10+00:00

Love Plus

(also change love plus into Love Plus)
maybe... put KONAMI in the tag
your offset is wrong...( but i don't know what exactly it is...)

Maximun resolution for back ground is 1024x768 (resize the one that exceed that size )
[General] try to rearrange some notes ,put it in the same row or pattern with others, there are many a little bit wrong placing note.

for example
[Love Plus]
00:04:957(5) - move up 1 grid lv 3 also adjust other afterward

00:14:481(16) - make it symmetry

00:07:814(8)- make it straight
etc...

also more than 15 combo is not good...
nice try :3

xinhe

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Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

xinhe 2010-06-06T12:07:04+00:00

THANKS vincerio.The LOVE PLUS difficulty is not yet complete

. So this difficulty have many question

. I will complete it as soon as possible.

str007

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Joined January 2010

str007 2010-06-07T10:43:23+00:00

star~

Last edited by str007 2010-06-07T10:52:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nozomi Kiriya

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Nozomi Kiriya 2010-06-07T10:48:47+00:00

>.<

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-06-07T10:57:31+00:00

:P

Snowy Dream

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Snowy Dream 2010-06-07T10:58:24+00:00

star~

threeee3

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threeee3 2010-06-07T11:06:11+00:00

= =~

Ballance

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Ballance 2010-06-07T11:12:09+00:00

先star吧。

xBubu

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xBubu 2010-06-07T11:16:42+00:00

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-06-07T11:17:19+00:00

星星是浮云啊..

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-06-11T13:11:43+00:00

[General]

osb文件没什么用就删掉吧
难度名最好直观点能表现出难度的
建议Hitsound(特别是clap)加在这里

[RINKO]

这是Easy吧建议HP和Overall减2—3
总体来说间距有点乱建议开Distance Snap重新放置一下
00:33:629(1):Finish
00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:10:296(1):去掉结尾Finish 另外感觉延长一拍或在后面一拍加个Circle感觉比较好（后面也是）
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
01:44:105(1):Finish
01:59:343(1):^
02:09:820(5):去掉Finish
02:10:772(6):从5下移走
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[MANAKA]

间距也是很乱……
最好不要有太多地方与[RINKO]难度一样
00:31:248(2,3):从1下移走另外建议去掉Finish音效或者在3,4,1加Finish
00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:11:724(1):Finish
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
01:56:963(2,3,4,1):统一间距
02:10:772(8):去掉结尾处Finish
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[NENE]

00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:00:296(1,2,3,4,5,6,7):不太容易理解
01:15:534(1,2,3,4,5,6):间距过小
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish

[love plus]

这个难度……
有的地方太简单，有的地方太难需要做大幅度改动
00:31:963(5):去掉Finish
00:32:201(6):Finish
00:43:629(20):从19下移走另外Combo数不要超过15
00:44:105(1,2,3):间距明显不一
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:23:153(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11):我彻底晕了

后面不说了……

Good map!!!
~STAR~

joshua7911

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joshua7911 2010-06-11T15:14:33+00:00

beautiful song~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-06-12T12:34:55+00:00

Just suggestion If you feel weird or don't like plz ignore it ^^

Over all

　● maybe change manaka,nene,rinko,konami to manaka nene rinko konami in Tag

Easy

00:17:925 (3,1) - this jump I think hard for Easy ^^" plz don't make jumpy in easy XD
01:03:639 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:07:925 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Normal

00:24:592 (6,7,8) - move right 1 grid
00:32:211 (1) - Remove new combo
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:57:925 (1) - Remove new combo

Hard

00:29:830 (1,2) - I think this jump is crazy for hard
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:46:020 (9) - new combo ?
01:49:830 (9) - ^
01:53:639 (9) - ^
02:01:258 (9) - ^
02:05:068 (9) - ^
02:09:115 (10) - delete note

Love Plus

00:43:163 (3) - I think stop stream at this point is better
01:02:925 (4) - up 1 grid
01:12:449 (4) - new combo ?
01:14:592 (10) - ^
01:15:544 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:17:449 (2) - new combo
01:39:830 (6,7,8,9) - I think this part is hard to see >x<
01:42:925 (1) - end of slider at 01:43:163
01:57:925 (1) - move down little and use spacing same with 2-3 is better for me and remove new combo
02:06:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - stop stream at 02:08:877
02:58:996 (2) - delete note
03:07:568 (4,6,8) - delete note and set spacing again ^^

xinhe

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Topic Starter

xinhe 2010-06-13T14:01:57+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
[General]

osb文件没什么用就删掉吧
难度名最好直观点能表现出难度的
建议Hitsound(特别是clap)加在这里
[attachment=0:e7db9]mod6.JPG[/attachment:e7db9]

[RINKO]

这是Easy吧建议HP和Overall减2—3
总体来说间距有点乱建议开Distance Snap重新放置一下
00:33:629(1):Finish
00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:10:296(1):去掉结尾Finish 另外感觉延长一拍或在后面一拍加个Circle感觉比较好（后面也是）
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
01:44:105(1):Finish
01:59:343(1):^
02:09:820(5):去掉Finish
02:10:772(6):从5下移走
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish
[MANAKA]

间距也是很乱……
最好不要有太多地方与[RINKO]难度一样
00:31:248(2,3):从1下移走另外建议去掉Finish音效或者在3,4,1加Finish
00:41:724(2,4):去掉Finish
00:45:058(2):延长到00:46:963并去掉结尾处的Finish
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:11:724(1):Finish
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
01:56:963(2,3,4,1):统一间距
02:10:772(8):去掉结尾处Finish
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish
[NENE]

00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:00:296(1,2,3,4,5,6,7):不太容易理解
01:15:534(1,2,3,4,5,6):间距过小
01:26:963(2,3,4):换成slider
01:30:772(2,3,4):^
02:13:153(1):提前一拍并去掉Finish
[love plus]

这个难度……
有的地方太简单，有的地方太难需要做大幅度改动
00:31:963(5):去掉Finish
00:32:201(6):Finish
00:43:629(20):从19下移走另外Combo数不要超过15
00:44:105(1,2,3):间距明显不一
00:47:439(1):延长到00:52:667并去掉Finish
01:23:153(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11):我彻底晕了
后面不说了……

Good map!!!
~STAR~

谢谢impossible的MOD～～～～努力修改中

xinhe

116 posts

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Topic Starter

xinhe 2010-06-13T14:04:28+00:00

S i R i R u wrote:
Just suggestion If you feel weird or don't like plz ignore it ^^

Over all

　● maybe change manaka,nene,rinko,konami to manaka nene rinko konami in Tag

Easy

00:17:925 (3,1) - this jump I think hard for Easy ^^" plz don't make jumpy in easy XD
01:03:639 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:07:925 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Normal

00:24:592 (6,7,8) - move right 1 grid
00:32:211 (1) - Remove new combo
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:57:925 (1) - Remove new combo

Hard

00:29:830 (1,2) - I think this jump is crazy for hard
01:43:401 (3) - maybe delete this is matching with music
01:46:020 (9) - new combo ?
01:49:830 (9) - ^
01:53:639 (9) - ^
02:01:258 (9) - ^
02:05:068 (9) - ^
02:09:115 (10) - delete note

Love Plus

00:43:163 (3) - I think stop stream at this point is better
01:02:925 (4) - up 1 grid
01:12:449 (4) - new combo ?
01:14:592 (10) - ^
01:15:544 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:17:449 (2) - new combo
01:39:830 (6,7,8,9) - I think this part is hard to see >x<
01:42:925 (1) - end of slider at 01:43:163
01:57:925 (1) - move down little and use spacing same with 2-3 is better for me and remove new combo
02:06:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - stop stream at 02:08:877
02:58:996 (2) - delete note
03:07:568 (4,6,8) - delete note and set spacing again ^^