1. Easy (0,53 stars, 142 notes)
2. Hard (4,04 stars, 303 notes)
3. Insane (4,66 stars, 473 notes)
4. Normal (2,8 stars, 228 notes)

orioncomet wrote:

BPM: 130
Offset: 49

If you want to use BPM as 65, I think you should change silder speed to 0.5x better then use Red timing selection ;w;
but w/e you like, and If you don't mind a few offset, though..

Matma Rex wrote:

About the timing - it's fine. Technically BPMs 65 and 130 with 0.5x are the same, but the first part of song is very different than the other in terms of speed and mood. The second red section is to make the white lines align well

However, if you want to do it anyway, just place a green 0.5x section over the first red one (on the same time).

These are mostly suggestions, not commands. You don't have to agree with them all.

[Normal]
01:13:434 (4,1) - you should use the same spacing as before, currently it can give an impression that these are 1/4 apart. It is "using" same distance snap... Its just the change of bpm . Anyways, changed

01:19:896 (4,1) - I have a weird feeling that these should be spaced as if they were 2/1 apart. It just looks bad now :/
01:27:281 (1,1) - and again, as earlier, use the same spacing as before.
Along with the changes from above, i did some changes and forgot how this part was...

01:47:588 (1,1,1) - spacing looks bad, even if it's technically correct. Think about spacing sliders as a whole, not only about their beginnings and ends - the note in the middle should IMO be a bit lower and to the left (2 grids?). Hmm... Actually, i cant go further than that unless i break distance snap... And... i dont know how to think that way... D:

02:12:511 (4,5) - spacing (dist. snap messes up due to BPM change) Why the hell i have a 2x section here?. Anyways, fixed

02:26:357 (4,1) - again, that thing about spacing as in the previous section. Or maybe just stack them? But... it looks ugly... D:
03:05:127 (1,2) - make them not touch? It looks bad (IMO, I'm a nazi about that ) Lol...

[Hard]
00:24:511 (4) - new combo?
02:00:281 (3,4) - make them not touch?
Done them all

[Insane]
00:51:278 (4) - why isn't it lined up with the previous 3 notes? Me being a jerk



The map is IMO almost p-bubble'able now, but you need at least 8 stars first. Once you get them, you can post in my queue again and I'll do it (disregard the rule about no more than 5 at once). I think ill take more time hitsounding than gettting those 8 stars...

Oh also, you could delete the .osb from the folder, but it's probably gonna reappear later anyway, so I wouldn't bother with full upload.


PS. Sorry, I suck at hitsounding stuff myself, can't help you D:

i cant go further than that unless i break distance snap

Senbon wrote:

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.

[General]

Delete unused .osb and full submit.
I gotta say I like all the songs you map.
Timing is fine. o_0

[Normal]

00:00:049 (1,1,1,1) - I'd remove the new combos... Done
01:21:281 (1) - Cut down two repeats and fill in with notes on white ticks? Not really understanding what you mean...
01:37:203 (2) - Whistle on end?
01:39:049 (2) - ^
01:44:819 (2) - Whistle?
01:46:665 (2) - ^
01:47:588 (1) - Whistle on first repeat?
01:50:819 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:52:204 (2) - Whistle?
01:54:050 (2) - ^
01:54:973 (1) - Whistle on all?
01:56:819 (1) - ^
Done them all, i like them
02:02:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:03:281 (6) - New combo.
I prefer to leave them as they are.
02:13:665 (1) - Finish?Done

[Hard]

01:21:281 (1) - Cut down two repeats and fill in with notes on white ticks?
01:37:434 (3) - Whistle?
01:39:280 (3) - ^
01:44:819 (2) - ^
01:46:665 (2) - ^
01:47:588 (3) - Whistle on first repeat and end?
01:52:204 (2) - Whistle on start?
01:55:896 (2) - Whistle?
01:57:742 (2) - ^
02:13:665 (1) - Finish?
Done most of them. Changed some to keep consistency with easy

[Insane]

00:51:278 (4) - Move next to (3)? Intentional... Might consider putting them like that if more people suggests it.
01:44:819 (4) - Whistle?
01:46:665 (4) - ^
01:47:586 (1) - Whistle on first repeat and end?
01:52:202 (2) - Whistle on start?
01:55:894 (2) - Whistle?
01:57:740 (2) - ^
02:13:894 (1) - Finish?

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
2:15:509 End kiai here? Done

[normal]
3:00:050 (4,5) will it be too near to the margin?
3:12:511 (1) ^ It doesnt really goes offmap when is being played. But changed anyways
This overall spacing is really nice. However how come most of the accents are on small slider ticks? @@ Umm.. if you were to give examples, i think i would understand it more, or be more specific...

[hard]
2:13:665 (x) there should be a drum sound in the song. Add a note here? Umm... No?

[insane]
0:48:509 (1,2,3,4) Even the spacing among these four circles? Will be taken into consideration.
1:06:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) uneven spacing How so? i believe all those notes have 1.6x distance spacing
3:25:202 (2) This jump is nearly "TAG jump" O_O, maybe too far?
3:28:894 (2) ^
3:29:817 (3) ^
3:32:586 (2) ^ (<- this is just suggestion) Intentional, but ill consider making them closer if more people suggests it.

star~

Umm.. if you were to give examples, i think i would understand it more, or be more specific...

How so? i believe all those notes have 1.6x distance spacing

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"

xxheroxx wrote:

• Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"

James2250 wrote:

seeing as you sb'ed some lyrics deleting the osb file would be a bad idea..its fine there
Im still not quite sure if lyrics is correct yet, theres like 2 or 3 verses that i would like to hear confirmation from other people...

Normal:
03:22:434 (4) - add whistle to repeat
03:25:204 (3) - add whistle to the end
03:26:127 (4) - ^
03:29:819 (4) - add whistle to repeat
03:32:588 (3) - add whistle to the end
03:33:511 (4) - ^
I knew there was something missing... >_>

Hard:
02:12:511 (4,5) - spacing
03:31:204 (5,6,7) - ^
Done... i think? Didnt really notice the spacing problem.

Insane:
make stack leniency the same as the other 2 difficulties
hp drain is too high, lower it by 2 ticks
Done
some of these spacing things might be intentional but will just mention them
00:47:355 (3,4) - spacing Nobody had noticed it >_>, but done Lol
00:51:279 (4) - align with othersOkay... too much people already, so done.
00:53:125 (3,4) - spacing I think its done too?
00:57:971 (2,3) - ^ Intentional, so no.
I could point out other spacing things but im sure they are jumps so yeah..

PM me after fixes and I will pubble

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
01:42:050 (1) - Delete New Combo. Done
02:28:896 (1,1) - ^
02:31:665 (1,1) - ^ Kinda done... They were weird suggestions

~Hard~
01:50:819 (1) - Delete New Combo.
02:28:896 (1,1) - ^
02:31:665 (1,1) - ^ Same as normal...
03:10:434 (8) - New Combo. Did new combo at 03:10:665 - instead of where you suggested
03:18:050 (9) - ^ Done

~Insane~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate a bit, the HPbar goes down to the red part on slowdowns even when you have full combo D: I have seen maps worse ;D, But, i think it was okay at 10, it used to be at 10, and i was able to pass it perfectly

00:48:048 (4) - Fix spacing.
00:53:817 (4) - New Combo. Try to not make jumps on the same combo, please.
00:58:663 (3) - ^ I think ill keep them like they are for now...

00:59:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks so messy >.<
01:03:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (You can clearly see the pattern form on editor, but in play mode it looks really messy because of the high OD) Intentional... its not like i cared that people could see i made a pattern.

01:51:278 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:52:202 (2) - New Combo.
Ill keep it for now... And also... i wonder why you didnt suggested the same for hard.

02:15:048 (10) - ^
02:51:048 (5) - ^
Done

Not bad, but there are some crazy jumps on Insane (those at the end of the song) that worry me a bit, not a big deal, though, I've seen that kind of jumps on other maps so keep going!! Good luck with this ^^ *star*
My intention too, i wanted to make the last part of the map much harder than the rest. Although i may change them a bit, the designs kinda bug me a bit, so they may end up closer when its done. Also, i was able to fc this part several times, so... Lol