This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June-02-10 at 3:22:39 PM

Artist: Abingdon Boys School
Title: STRENGTH (TV Size)
Source: Soul Eater
Tags: H-boy Sallad4ever Ending 4
BPM: 95
Filesize: 11920kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.46 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.71 stars, 164 notes)
3. H-boy's Normal (3.34 stars, 116 notes)
4. Insane Sallad (4.9 stars, 238 notes)

Download: Abingdon Boys School - STRENGTH (TV Size)
Download: Abingdon Boys School - STRENGTH (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beat map
Hope you enjoy
I thank H-boy and Sallad4ever for their guest diff
I thank Dragvon for letting me use his skin stuff

Thanks~

Yo

[General]
1) All diff is don't need a Lead-in
2) You need a normal and insane diff

[Timing]
You're timing is reaaaaaaaly off, well try my offset and resnap all notes. Remember check my offset
Offset : 483

[Easy]
00:00:483 (1) - Extend this slider to 00:01:115
00:05:535 (1) - Add a finish?
00:17:216 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
00:52:893 (4) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7160

Not bad
STAR

WooT~
Don't sure about video offset, though =|
http://www.mediafire.com/?zolomzimwz2

Requsted mod session go~

[Easy]
00:01:745 (2) - 1 grid down and right
00:13:743 (1) - minor spacing issue, also move it 1 square up
00:15:637 - 2 short for an easy, end it here, imo - 00:18:163
00:23:215 - ^, i'd better replace it with a slider
00:56:681 - ^, end it here imo - 00:58:576 (just delete 1)


Rest seems fine

[General]

1. Remove Anime from tags in Hard diff.
2. Turn off countdown, it's useless

[Timing]

1. BPM : 95
   Offset is fine
   Resnap all notes and at least make KIAI timing section right on ticks

[Easy]

1. Audio lead-in : 2s-3s better
2. 00:58:588 (x) - KIAI starts here, set a timing section here same to 00:58:527, then remove KIAI set of 00:58:509 timing section, and better put 00:58:509 to 00:58:272
3. 01:23:219 (x) - KIAI ends here
   
   notes are fine, good job, but hitsound...emm, you could just add clap to fit drum sound, that would be nice

[Hard]

1. 0:00:000 - 00:58:509 - Hitsound too loud, lower a bit
2. 00:16:430 (S) - Spinner ends here
3. 00:45:956 (5,6) - Spacing too close
4. 00:52:588 (6) - A little close
5. 00:58:588 (x) - KIAI starts here, set a timing section here same to 00:58:527, then remove KIAI set of 00:58:509 timing section, and better put 00:58:509 to 00:58:272
6. 01:15:640 (4) - Spacing too far
7. 01:20:693 (4) - ^
8. 01:23:219 (x) - KIAI ends here

Put more effort on hitsound would make this map more fun
star

Normal
Download: Abingdon Boys School - Strength (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [H-boy's Normal].osu

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
the timing should be all the same on all diffs. and a secoud offset may be needed imo.

[Easy]
it seems u used 0.9x distance snapping. once decided, don't change it since this is [Easy].
i don't like the whistles.= =
00:22:588 (3,4,1) - spacing?
01:19:430 (2) - why end kiai here?

[H-Boy's Normal]
00:21:952 (2) - make this slider symmetrical?
00:41:211 (7) - new combo?
00:47:841 (6) - 1 grid up.
00:51:314 (7) - new combo?
01:01:576 (1) - ends 1/4 later. i'm not sure if it's good to follow the vocal with a long slider.
01:11:681 (1) - ^
01:06:154 (6) - new combo?

[Hard]
Decrease HP Drain to 6 and Overall Diff to 7, since this is a Hard, not Insane.
00:09:954 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:796 (1) - remove new combo and set it on (2)
00:15:321 (1) - break after this is too short, remove it plz.
00:46:262 (6,1) - ..wait, the end of slider and the start of spinner is on the same time line.
00:50:682 (1) - remove new combo and set it on (3)
00:53:524 (9) - new combo and remove new combo on next (1)
01:05:158 (3,4) - not snapped.
01:05:316 (4,5) - spacing?
01:11:204 (6) - new combo and remove new combo on next (1)
01:13:730 (5) - ^
01:18:105 (1,2) - not snapped.

star. maybe need more mods.

Easy
00:00:483(1) - add finish at the begin
00:01:746(2) - remove whistle at the begin
00:03:009(1) - add finish
00:03:640(2) - add whistle
00:04:272(3) - add clap at end and remove clap at the begin
00:28:272(4) - remove whistle?

H-Boy's Normal
need other's mod...

Hard
00:00:483(1) - add finish at the begin
00:03:008(1) - ^ and remove whistle
01:15:625(3) - spacing(need new combo?)
01:20:676(3) - ^

not snapped
01:05:158(3)
01:05:316(4)
01:08:105(1)
01:08:263(2)

Hi

General
Music Track is too short, update to 2 or 3 (song setup > audio > Music track)

Easy
00:12:482 (4) - New combo here
00:13:746 (1) - Remove new combo here

H-Boy's Normal
00:30:792 (3) - Add hitsound whistle
00:33:318 (3) - Add hitsound whistle
00:33:949 (4,5) - Add hitsound whistle
00:38:054 (5) - Add hitsound finish

Hard
00:30:792 (4) - Add hitsound whistle
00:38:369 (1) - Add hitsound finish


Starr**

General:
- Increase the volume on the audio, it's way too soft. After you do that, don't forget to Full Submit
- And after you do that, increase the volume of the hitsounds as well
- All diffs. start at the same place, so the audio lead-in time should be the same for all diffs. as well

[Hard] :

a bit easy for hard xD
few spacing problems
hitsounds good, but can be improved

01:23:675 (2) - clap at the begining ?
00:02:061 (3) - whistle ?
00:02:377 (4) - clap, not whistle
00:02:693 (5) - no hitsound here
00:03:640 (2) - clap at the begining ?
00:09:954 (4) - add clap at the begining
00:14:690 (4) - add finish at the end
00:27:319 (3,4) - spacing a little strange ( move (4) 3 squares up and a square right )
00:39:632 (3) - the clap at the middle is odd
00:40:895 (2) - add a clap with the whistle ?
00:40:421 () - I think you really should add a circle here
00:42:474 (6) - clap on the middle
00:43:421 (7) - no hitsounds here
00:44:052 (8) - clap at the begining too
00:44:684 (1) - remove clap
00:44:999 (2) - remove clap
00:45:315 (3) - add clap
00:45:947 (5) - add finish ?
00:46:262 (6) - maybe replace by 2 circles on red and blue tick (or a smaller slider) (and finish on the first circle)
00:49:104 (2) - remove the first clap
01:00:470 (5,6,1) - again a strange spacing ... try to keep the same distance between these 3 objects ( maybe move down (6) )
01:02:364 (2,3) - clap on the (3), not the (2)
01:03:311 (5) - add clap at the begining
01:05:206 (3,4,5,6) - for me, it sounds better if you add a circle just before (5) ( and maybe one just after to ? )
01:20:360 (2) - add clap
01:20:518 (3,4) - spacing issue ... you have to fix that!
01:20:834 (4) - add finish at the end
01:23:675 (2) - add finish

[Normal] :

no mistakes in the map and it's hard too have amazing hitsounds with a [Normal] timeline

00:25:109 (1,2) - whistle at the end of (1) and not on (2)
00:39:316 (3,4) - not an issue, but this little space is odd, move (3) without grid snap and distance snap
00:44:684 (1) - clap at the end
00:54:787 (1) - ^
00:55:734 (2) - maybe a square left ?
01:08:365 (3) - add finish here ?

[easy] :

00:05:535 (1,2,3) - fix this spacing *.*
( you have a lot of spacing mistakes like that in the map fix them ! )
00:18:798 (1,2) - it's an easy diff ! big mistake *.*
00:22:588 (3,4) - ^

well, all the diff seems to be like that, so, you should redo the diff with only one spacing
( and grid 3 ! )
the timeline is good for an [Easy] diff

fix at least spacing problems in the hard diff and then I give you a star

Edit : it's much better now star

Easy is 95BPM, while the rest are 95.02 BPM. Please recheck.

[Easy]
Nazi: Some of the beats aren't on grid snap.

[H-boy]
Nazi: 00:18:794 (1) - Move it one grid left?
01:01:576 (1) - Move it 1/4 a beat back. Easier to catch, even if it is a little off.
01:11:681 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Nazi: 01:08:363 (1,2,3) - Make it like this:

Starred.

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Source should be "Soul Eater": delete Ending 4 from it

[Easy]

• • 00:56:061 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle here
  • 01:23:851 (x) - Add a circle

[H-boy's Normal]

• • 01:01:102 (5,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
  • 01:01:418 (1) - End this slider here 01:03:628 (white tick)
  • 01:11:523 (1) - End this slider here 01:13:733 (white tick)

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
I'll check with AImod (Ctrl+Shift+A) too, so, if there's something found on it for your difficulties, i'll write "AImod!"

[General]
Source: Soul Eater (Remove Ending 4)

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty too high for an Easy! Lower them by 1-2 ticks
00:01:746 (2) - Spacing.
00:03:640 (2) - ^.
00:05:535 (1) - ^.
00:06:798 (3) - ^.
00:08:061 (1) - ^.
00:56:061 (3) - What's with this slider? It has a strange symmetryc line.
..And go on, there's some spacing errors like the firsts i meant.

[H-boy's Normal]
00:06:955 - Why don't you map this part?

[Hard]
Just that little spacing problems like Easy

And that's all! *star*

[E]

[00:58:588] use green line

[h boy]

[00:07:113] np but..why insert a break here?...

[00:58:576] useless red line ,remove

[hard & Hboy & easy]

hitsound too loud

star

Hello^^

Death the kid wrote:

Has no video, if you can get me a video then I will love you forvever

Mistype :p

General
- 01:08:693 Re-kiai?
- AI mod says to reduce kiai :p Maybe end at 01:17:838?

Easy
- 95.02 BPM
- 01:23:219 Wrong time in the Green line.. or timing

00:28:272 (4) - Finish instead whistle
00:55:430 (2) - Whistle

H-boy's Normal
- 01:23:207 Wrong like Easy

Hard
- 01:23:206 Same with Easy

00:14:690 (4) - No Finish in the end
00:15:321 (5) - Clap
00:23:215 (1) - No Finish
00:30:160 (3) - No Clap
00:40:579 (1) - Clap
01:03:944 (6) - No Whistle in the slide

Good, Star~

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Looks pretty nice so far, maybe I will make the insane if it's ok with you^^.

Dangaard wrote:

Looks pretty nice so far, maybe I will make the insane if it's ok with you^^.

of course thank you!!!!!!

Wow Dangaard will make an insane too

I'm not as good as Dangaard so you can do whatever you want with this
Here you go
Download: Abingdon Boys School - Strength (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Insane Sallad].osu

well hope you like it
Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Wow Dangaard will make an insane too

I'm not as good as Dangaard so you can do whatever you want with this
Here you go
[attachment=0:f7077]Abingdon Boys School - Strength (TV Size) (Death_the_kid) [Insane Sallad].osu[/attachment:f7077]

well hope you like it
Star~

Oh, didn't know you were going to map the insane diff already. Yours is pretty nice, so there is no need for more insanes^^