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Hitori Tori - perthed again (yambabom remix)

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Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28. huhtikuuta 2015 at 12:25:58

Artist: Hitori Tori
Title: perthed again (yambabom remix)
Tags: breakcore collab collaboration Zapy ktgster Frey Irreversible Aka
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5484kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,78 stars, 413 notes)
  2. Akaphyxia's Normal (2,26 stars, 311 notes)
  3. Easy (1,75 stars, 184 notes)
  4. Extra (6 stars, 858 notes)
  5. Frey's Insane (4,95 stars, 803 notes)
  6. Hard (3,64 stars, 510 notes)
  7. Irrphyxia's Insane (4,48 stars, 644 notes)
  8. ktgster's Extra (5,38 stars, 992 notes)
  9. Zapy's Extra (6,07 stars, 706 notes)
Download: Hitori Tori - perthed again (yambabom remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD THE MAPSET, CHANGED MP3 13.4.2015


Extra - Zapy
Extra - Asphyxia
Extra - ktgster
Insane - Frey
Light Insane - Asphyxia & Irreversible
Hard - Asphyxia
Advanced - Asphyxia
Normal - Asphyxia & Aka
Easy - Asphyxia


Modders & Checkers & Testers
Kyshiro
Axarious
Azer
JappyBabes
Xilver
Alumetorz
oreNa_
grumd
Doomsday
Lust
Chewin
monstrata
Yales
Moo-Chan
Mazzerin
byfar
CXu
Nerodae
Axarious
Nhawak
Kenterz
Oracle

Special thank you box
Ringating - Adjusting the BG!
Lust - Re-encoding the mp3!
Shiro - Helped a lot with the offset!
Aka - Perfecting the offset!

Collaboration parts
Normal
00:00:331 - to 00:42:997 - Asphyxia
00:42:997 - to 01:25:664 - Aka
01:36:330 - to 02:29:664 - Asphyxia
02:29:664 - 02:50:997 - Aka

Insane
00:00:331 - to 00:42:997 - Asphyxia
00:42:997 - to 01:25:664 - Irreversible
01:36:330 - to 02:29:664 - Asphyxia
02:29:664 - 02:50:997 - Irreversible
Last edited by Asphyxia , edited 75 times in total.
captin1
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captin1
the hype is unreal
oreNa_
oreNa_
can't wait to play this and fail the first 20 seconds ;D hype c:
Xilver15
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Xilver15
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Last edited by Xilver15 , edited 1 time in total.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia

Xilver wrote:

ZAPY HYPE?

Small IRC over Asphyxia's diff:

SPOILER
2015-02-05 22:59 Asphyxia: did I force you to test https://osu.ppy.sh/s/268693 btw
2015-02-05 22:59 Asphyxia: but thank so much, I love the support you give me
2015-02-05 22:59 Asphyxia: if you hate Zapy, you'll hate this map too
2015-02-05 23:02 Xilver: wow 
2015-02-05 23:02 Xilver: that was horrible 
2015-02-05 23:02 Xilver: my play, that is 
2015-02-05 23:02 Xilver: map was good
2015-02-05 23:03 Asphyxia: nah it's just hard
2015-02-05 23:03 Asphyxia: your play was fine
2015-02-05 23:03 Xilver: 01:59:330 (3,4,5,6) - 
2015-02-05 23:03 Xilver: these kinda kill the flow 
2015-02-05 23:03 Xilver: with them being so close to each other
2015-02-05 23:03 Xilver: imo
2015-02-05 23:04 Asphyxia: so do you think having a larger spacing from eachother while maintaining that idea
2015-02-05 23:04 Asphyxia: would fix it?
2015-02-05 23:04 Xilver: yeah
2015-02-05 23:04 Asphyxia: kk consider it fixed
2015-02-05 23:05 Xilver: 00:12:664 (3) - 
2015-02-05 23:05 Xilver: i feel like it's gonna play better if 3 is moved more up
2015-02-05 23:05 Xilver: something like this
2015-02-05 23:05 Asphyxia: 01:59:664 (5) - x:88 y:228
2015-02-05 23:06 Xilver: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2697893
2015-02-05 23:06 Xilver: i suggest 192 72 for 3
2015-02-05 23:09 Asphyxia: fixed
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: and tbh
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: general idea for this ma
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: map
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: i'm not a huge fan of spaced triples 
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: but that's just me 
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: i personally think normal triples would do the trick just fine 
2015-02-05 23:10 Xilver: but ask other people before you consider it
2015-02-05 23:12 Asphyxia: I might change some, but seeing how the map is composed, it'd kinda destroy the style
2015-02-05 23:12 Asphyxia: on some parts
2015-02-05 23:12 Asphyxia: but yea if you have more suggestion feel free to, you can get your kudosu
2015-02-05 23:14 Xilver: nah i don't do it for kudosu
2015-02-05 23:15 Xilver: 02:49:997 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 
2015-02-05 23:15 Xilver: same concept with them being too close to each other
2015-02-05 23:16 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/fxwvJ/c51cfaaba5.jpg
2015-02-05 23:16 Asphyxia: Any better?
2015-02-05 23:16 Xilver: 02:07:664 (1,2) -  maybe curve these?
2015-02-05 23:16 Xilver: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2697913
2015-02-05 23:17 Xilver: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2697915 i was thinking something like these 
2015-02-05 23:17 Xilver: i mean up, down, up down
2015-02-05 23:20 Asphyxia: hmm
2015-02-05 23:20 Asphyxia: plays nicely, fixed
2015-02-05 23:20 Xilver: which ones?
2015-02-05 23:20 Xilver: the end?
2015-02-05 23:20 Asphyxia: yes
2015-02-05 23:20 Xilver: alright cool
2015-02-05 23:20 Asphyxia: for the curved ones, I need more time to think since it'd break the
2015-02-05 23:21 Asphyxia: straight line slider-idea for that section
2015-02-05 23:21 Xilver: yeah sure 
2015-02-05 23:21 Xilver: if it plays worse don't apply it
2015-02-05 23:26 Asphyxia: if that was all, pls post the log to the thread
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: oh 
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: one more thing 
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: about the stream
2015-02-05 23:29 Asphyxia: which
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: 01:56:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: ignore 1 and 2 lol 
2015-02-05 23:29 Xilver: i'm not a fan of the curve 
2015-02-05 23:30 Xilver: i think just a straight line stream would be fine 
2015-02-05 23:30 Xilver: it could be curved but i don't think an acute curve looks nice
2015-02-05 23:30 Xilver: i mean it looks nice, it just kinda kills the anticipation
2015-02-05 23:31 Asphyxia: Thing is that 01:56:664 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - has 2 parts, 01:56:664 (3,4,5,6) - is the nice, quiet section where as 01:56:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - gets louder
2015-02-05 23:31 Asphyxia: so I wanted to make them different, somewhat like in the music
2015-02-05 23:31 Asphyxia: but hmm
2015-02-05 23:31 Xilver: good point 
2015-02-05 23:31 Xilver: the thing is i don't think most players would notice it 
2015-02-05 23:31 Xilver: but hey it still plays well regardless
2015-02-05 23:31 Xilver: or maybe i'm just too used to zapy's diff
2015-02-05 23:32 Asphyxia: zapy hype???!!
2015-02-05 23:32 Xilver: YES
2015-02-05 23:32 Xilver: but yeah, up to you if you wanna fix 
2015-02-05 23:32 Xilver: that's all i got
Thanks so much! <3
340
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340
WOW
<3
Asphyxia
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Topic Starter
Asphyxia

340 wrote:

WOW
<3
Thanks!!

And for the people that are curious about the spread, I got few QATs approval on it, so it should be perfectly fine for ranking.

Screenshots

ktgster
Elite Mapper
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ktgster
Finally finished!
grumd
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grumd
Asphyxia's Extra:

01:15:997 (3,1) -
FUCKING LEARN TO MAKE SYMMETRICAL WAVE SLIDERS PLEASE

oh and

THIS MAP IS SO FUCKING GOOD, JEEZ, ASPHYXIA OFFICIALLY ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MAPPERS.
THANKS.

and i HIGHLY suggest to end the map 03:12:330 - here
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia

grumd wrote:

Asphyxia's Extra:

01:15:997 (3,1) -
FUCKING LEARN TO MAKE SYMMETRICAL WAVE SLIDERS PLEASE I STUDIED AND NOW, HOPEFULLY, IT'S GOOD

oh and

THIS MAP IS SO FUCKING GOOD, JEEZ, ASPHYXIA OFFICIALLY ONE OF MY FAVOURITE MAPPERS. LOL WTF THANKS
THANKS.

and i HIGHLY suggest to end the map 03:12:330 - here I personally feel a lot more comfortable with the current spot, and because I seriously don't like to different difficulties to have different ending spots so I'll leave this as it is, for now at least
Thanks! Aka also elaborated on something you said for the normal difficulty, but I couldn't come up with anything cool yet so uhh yea. KDs for that ty a lot <3
moya
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moya
zapy + asphyxia + ktgster = masterpiece holy shit
Lust
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Lust
log
15:58 Asphyxia: Hey Noah!
15:58 *Lust spanks Jon
15:58 Asphyxia: Can I make you test a light Insane me and Irre are making?
15:58 Lust: wassup
15:58 Lust: sure
15:58 *Asphyxia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669513 Hitori Tori - perthed again (yambabom remix)]
15:58 Asphyxia: ''Light Insane w/ Irre''
15:59 Asphyxia: since these difficulties are more aimed for your rank players, I feel like you'd be the best to give any suggestions
15:59 Asphyxia: if there's a need for it
16:00 Asphyxia: and because you're a QAT
16:00 Asphyxia: lol
16:03 Lust: dling
16:05 Lust: wtf my dl speed so slow
16:05 Lust: ok done
16:05 *Lust is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669513 Hitori Tori - perthed again (yambabom remix)]
16:05 *Asphyxia spanks Noahs internet
16:05 Lust: just as an fyi i havent played std in awhile so
16:05 Lust: kinda rusty
16:08 Lust: oooo nice mao
16:08 Lust: p
16:09 Asphyxia: alright that's nice to hear
16:09 Asphyxia: I hope the spacing is appropriate for such Insane
16:09 Lust: somethings
16:09 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/669513 Hitori Tori - perthed again (yambabom remix) [Light Insane w/ Irre]]
16:10 Lust: 00:09:830 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - due to way stacks are automatically handled, this looks a bit clustered in play so the player might get either lost or bombarded with too many objects
16:10 Lust: its a pretty pattern in the editor, but in play it could be kinda awkward
16:11 Asphyxia: should I space the triplets or do you have any suggestions
16:11 Lust: 00:20:497 (2,3,4,7,8,9) - this pattern was a lot more "clean" to play because the stacks are further apart
16:11 Lust: nah just find another location for either 00:10:330 (6,7,8) - or 00:09:830 (2,3,4) - 
16:14 Lust: 00:50:664 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern was difficult to read because of the AR, a bit too many objects clustered on the screen at once so i was a bit lost when it came up
16:14 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/h6sYr/3188d2ae01.jpg
16:14 Asphyxia: should be cool now
16:14 Asphyxia: hmm yea that's Irre's part
16:14 Asphyxia: I wonder
16:14 Asphyxia: Irre wanted Ar9
16:14 Asphyxia: but I think it's a bit too high for such Insane
16:14 Lust: looks like it
16:14 Lust: the way he mapped his parts
16:15 Lust: fits for ar9 waaay better
16:15 Asphyxia: but then there's my parts which are ehh
16:15 Asphyxia: maybe a bit too fast for it?
16:15 Lust: 01:01:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - this section was almost impossible to read for me cuz of the AR
16:15 Asphyxia: I mean, I can put Ar 9 tho but
16:15 Lust: i dont know if you noticed me struggling but
16:15 Lust: i couldnt figure out the rhythm much at all
16:15 Lust: i can post the log in the thread for irre to read if you'd like
16:15 Asphyxia: sure
16:16 Asphyxia: I changed it back to Ar 9 then
16:16 Lust: going to try everything ar9 again
16:17 Lust: muchhhhh better
16:18 Lust: even your parts are smoother too
16:18 Asphyxia: alright
16:18 Lust: especially your jump patterns
16:19 Lust: although 01:02:664 (1,2,3,1,2) - this in irre's part is still just a bit too unclear, there was a lot of momentum in the previous patterns and as a result the player jumps to 01:03:330 (1) - too quickly unaware of the rhythm
16:20 Asphyxia: definitely do post these on the thread
16:20 Asphyxia: valid points
16:20 Asphyxia: also sorry for bothering you to test, I might ask you another day for the mp3 + to test the Hard
16:20 Asphyxia: since you probably play them the most
16:20 Asphyxia: since usually you know what's good for these difficulties
16:21 Lust: thats all i found for the diff so far
16:21 Lust: nice workku c:
16:21 Asphyxia: thanks a lot! <3

just some slight irc modding, some points for irre in there too
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Uh.. well I personally don't think a change is needed there, isn't it perfectly in the song? And that's a common used technique..
Changed the first tho.
Frey
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Frey
Hitsounds
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:perthed again (yambabom remix)
Artist:Hitori Tori
ArtistUnicode:Hitori Tori
Creator:Asphyxia
Version:Frey's Insane
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Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Pending~
Chewin
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Love you Chewin, thanks so much for the stars! <3
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined May 2013
Monstrata
Quick mod with Asphyxia over IRC~ Glad what I brought up was helpful :).

SPOILER
18:39 monstrata: 00:46:330 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 
18:39 monstrata: This is such a nice jump sequence <3
18:39 Asphyxia: thanks!!
18:40 monstrata: If I could suggest something though, Try Ctrl+J'ing 00:48:997 (5) - Since the flow of this whole sequence is clockwise, having that slider around the bottom-left side of the screen makes more sense to me
18:42 Asphyxia: hmm
18:43 Asphyxia: fixed
18:44 Asphyxia: but in addition to keep the pattern the way I wanted with 00:49:497 (6) - , I ctrl + j'd that aswell
18:44 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3011063
18:44 monstrata: yepp
18:44 monstrata: I figured i didnt have to mention that haha :D
18:44 Asphyxia: yeah np
18:44 monstrata: yaaaa niiice :D
18:46 monstrata: 00:53:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Just Highlighting this <3333333 omg
18:46 monstrata: plus the jumps all make perfect sense to me haha
18:46 Asphyxia: haha
18:46 Asphyxia: thanks a ton!
18:46 Asphyxia: I tried to do mostly a circle motion kind of jumps
18:46 Asphyxia: while making straight lines
18:46 Asphyxia: and traingles
18:46 Asphyxia: e.g
18:47 Asphyxia: 00:54:830 (4,3,5,8) -
18:47 Asphyxia: and symmetrical
18:47 monstrata: ooo ya i see now ;o dam nice
18:49 monstrata: 01:14:164 (4,6,8) - Is 8 supposed to be there? It looks like your making two straight lines
18:49 monstrata: but 8 is a bit off
18:51 Asphyxia: good point
18:51 Asphyxia: fixd
18:56 monstrata: 01:39:330 (3,4,5,6,7) - Imo, the way this currently plays, I think you could improve the flow from 4 into 5. I tried rotating the triplet a bit (90 degrees counterclockwise)
18:56 monstrata: http://puu.sh/hdbnU.jpg
18:56 monstrata: Did something like that
18:59 Asphyxia: sure
18:59 Asphyxia: the logic behind the old pattern was that
18:59 Asphyxia: 01:39:830 (7) - would form some kind of a shape with 01:38:664 (6,2,4,8) -
18:59 Asphyxia: but that's fine, since the flow is indeed better
19:00 Asphyxia: I rotated it slightly more, because I wanted a completely straight line with 01:39:164 (2,4,5,6,7) -
19:00 monstrata: ooh. thats nice too :D
19:01 monstrata: Ya i just rotated 90 to test the flow haha, and ya. i thought you were making a linear pattern with 01:39:164 (2,7,9) - 
19:02 monstrata: lol the Kiai is so crazy damn. i don't think i can pass it. these kinds of maps are usually under-rated in terms of star-rating since slider-jumps aren't weighted much
19:02 Asphyxia: yeah, it's fine tho
19:02 Asphyxia: I don't care too much for the star rating itself, I just wanted to make a cool map
19:02 Asphyxia: haha
19:04 monstrata: well you definitely achieved that ;o. i mean like, its just gone into pending and i can barely see anything worth bringing up cuz its already so good lol
19:04 monstrata: btw my friend
19:04 monstrata: http://puu.sh/hdbRF.jpg
19:05 monstrata: looool
19:05 Asphyxia: LOL wtf
19:06 monstrata: hes been keeping up with your map for a while now. told him its finally in pending
19:06 monstrata: xDD
19:06 Asphyxia: that's damn awesome :O
19:07 monstrata: yaaa :D
19:08 monstrata: Okay. hmm... I think you could improve the flow here too: 02:22:664 (6,7) - Mainly because you've set up a nice circular flow from 1>5
19:08 monstrata: I tried moving them around a bit hang on puushing
19:08 monstrata: http://puu.sh/hdcao.jpg
19:09 monstrata: Basically, i stacked 6 on the sliderend of 1 (idk if you like that, if not its fine)
19:09 monstrata: and made a triangle pattern out of 02:22:497 (5,7,2) - 
19:09 monstrata: to sustain this circular flow 
19:12 Asphyxia: hmm
19:12 Asphyxia: I hope you don't mind if I keep that one
19:12 Asphyxia: you know
19:12 Asphyxia: while I get that it may have a better flow, I tested it couple of times and it felt like the map itself was way too focused on the bottom side
19:12 Asphyxia: 02:22:330 (4,5,6,7) - with these
19:12 Asphyxia: so the 6 kind of prevents that feeling, for me at least
19:13 Asphyxia: and that's why I'd like to keep it where it is
19:13 monstrata: Ahhh i see what you mean
19:13 monstrata: that makes sense too actually. i know its something i still need to pay more attention to when i map xD
19:14 Asphyxia: glad it makes sense
19:14 Asphyxia: I don't want to sound crazy lol
Aka
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Saoji
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Saoji
[General]
01:46:997 - You could add a kiai fountain here. It's even the preview of your map, add some epicness.
01:57:664 - Maybe here too then??

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:997 (1) - Improve blanket with 00:12:330 (2) - ><
  2. 01:01:664 - The break sounds a bit random. Add a spinner maybe?
  3. 00:40:330 (1) - ^ I guess it's better than the point above but..
  4. 01:17:664 (1) - Place the tail at x288 y348 for better blanket
  5. 01:44:330 (1) - Place it around x36 y 28 ? I think it looks better than the overlap at the end of the slider.
  6. 02:20:330 (4) - You can improve blanket a bit
[Akaphyxia's Normal]
  1. 01:56:830 (5) - Try to improve blanket e.e
[Advanced]
  1. 00:20:830 (5) - You could ctrl+j for better flow
  2. 01:18:330 (3) - Add a little curve? Your sliders are really straight o.o
  3. 01:56:997 (7) - I would add NC to prevent the mutiple reverses cause just before, you had the same thing 01:46:664 (8) - but it's way shorter. Might be confusing.
  4. 02:45:330 (6,1) - I would delete (1) and add a reverse, the rythme isn't enough obvious for a hard technique like this.
[Hard]
  1. 01:06:664 (3) - I find those kind of overlap not that neat. That's just my opinion.
  2. 00:10:664 (5,1) - Seriously this plays bad. I think it would be better if you stack (1) on the head of (5)
  3. 00:41:164 (3) - Keep the same DS than you did until now? The impact would be the same, but it would flow better I think
  4. 00:56:330 (1) - I would place the tail around x252 y284, or anywhere but try to not put the anchor almost at the reverse place, it plays bad.
  5. 01:13:664 (1,2,3,4) - It's pretty weird you place this pattern at this position on the timeline, while it would fit so much better here 01:14:164 (4,5) - (?)
  6. 02:20:164 (5,6,1) - lower it a bit?
[Irrphyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:00:497 (2) - I think it would look a bit better if you make it a bit more horizontal http://puu.sh/hdVyH/2edc3930e8.jpg
  2. 00:10:164 (5) - Add finish? The sound is similar than 00:09:664 (1)
  3. 00:20:830 (5) - ^
  4. 00:48:497 (7) - Lower it a bit to fix the blanket
  5. 00:53:497 (6) - Not sure why you didn't put a 1/4 slider here as well?
  6. 01:14:831 (5) - ^
  7. 01:51:497 (4) - Place it around x164 y201 for better flow? I feel that right now, it kinda looks like an unwanted anti jump lol
  8. 02:17:997 - There's clearly a note missing here
  9. 02:28:664 - ^ I really dont get it
[Frey's Insane]
  1. 00:15:330 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for better flow?
  2. 02:04:164 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Good !
[ktgster's Extra]
  1. 00:22:914 (12) - Remove? for constancitity (00:25:497 (11,11) - etc.)
  2. 00:32:830 (2) - Add NC. To make sure that 00:32:330 (1) - is slow down
  3. 01:56:997 (6) - NC cause new spacing (so a nc to prevent is always welcome) + readibility
  4. 01:57:330 (5) - You can also add one here, for constanticity if you did the point above (and I think it looks nice)
  5. 02:07:330 (5) - NC cause new spacing
  6. 02:12:163 (1) - Remove NC or remove it here 02:12:330 (1) -
  7. 02:18:664 (7) - NC new spacing ~
  8. 02:40:664 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it would be nice if you could make a blanket between (2) and the stream for a better look, not that it doesnt look good now, but it would improve.
  9. 02:50:664 (9) - Add NC or/and 02:50:330 (7) - here. I feel the first option is the best though.
[Extra]
  1. 00:42:664 (7,8) - Ctrl+g for better flow
  2. 00:52:497 (1) - Remove NC and add it 00:52:830 (2) - here. Would make sense considering the new rythme
  3. 01:06:664 (5) - Place the tail x284 y240 for better flow with 01:05:997 (2) - ? It's soooo straight right now
  4. 01:10:330 (5) - I would ctrl+g for flow too but I guess it's also fine this way, see what you prefer.
  5. 01:25:497 (9,1) - Ctrl+g? XD
[Zapy]
RIP AR10. I WANT MY AR10 BACK!

All diffs are pretty cools!
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