1. Cyborg kevincela (5 stars, 376 notes)
2. Cyborg Kuro-chan (4,82 stars, 247 notes)
3. Cyborg M (4,39 stars, 202 notes)
4. Dr. Go (1,81 stars, 122 notes)
5. Matatabi (3,31 stars, 170 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

[Kuro-chan]
0:#2:592 (3) down 2 grids Done.
0:41:772 (8,9) spacing Done.
spacing quite unconsistent (0.77x~0.92x), but it's still acceptable~

[hard] and [normal] are both nice.

Bass-chan wrote:

[Easy]
Uhh I would rather call it Normal instead Easy...


[Normal]
Good


[Hard]
00:14:723 (3) - uhh confusing, move further Done.


[Kuro-chan]
Decrease Approach rate please. Done.


Make easier diff please. No

I'll star when will done.

NotShinta wrote:

General: Offset sounds wrong. I'm no timing expert, so confirm with someone else. I'll ask to someone.

Hard
Dis spacing on a Hard... I won't ask you to redo it, but it looks very cluttered and confusing.
Move the circle size down a bit? Done + some pattern change.
Speaking of which, all of the other difficulty settings are at the center. I've made some test and I prefer to mantain it.
00:14:723 (3) - Technically correct spacing, however, many players would keep their cursor still when doing the repeats, so this looks confusing. Changed.
00:17:182 (8) - delete, fix spacing for prettiness. Oh, it sounds well

Normal
Very nice diff, especially with the complexity of some of these sliders. Thanks
01:02:428 (1) - Remove new combo? If someone else ask for change, I'll do it.
01:05:051 (1) - ^ ^
01:41:772 (1) - Close to a spinner for a Normal... Removed and replaced with a slider.
01:59:805 (1) - ^Sorry, but I really like it, so I don't change it.

Easy
Yeah, this is pushing an Easy. Still, shouldn't matter. lol
Difficulty settings still in center, make them easier. No.
01:59:805 (1) - Again, too close to a spinner for an easy. Just delete it and extend the spinner by 1/1, Same as Normal.

• Timing: BPM: 183,05; offset: 149
  Il nero tra i custom colourssssssss ;~;
  Forse agli hitcircles potresti aggiungere un alone bianco trasparente di sottofondo, completamente trasparenti sono davvero difficili da vedere bene, a volte.
  Aggiungi un'ombra o un bagliore ai comboburst, magari? Aiuterebbe a coprire alcune seghettature nei bordi.
  Se proprio ti servono tutti gli elementi della skin di default, forzala tramite Song Setup e leva le componenti che non hai modificato (come i vari hit0, hit100 etc...) oppure modifica anche quelli
  Il video ha l'audio: Versione senza audio che pesa meno QUI

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:57:182 (1,1) - quanlcuno si lamenterà che sono troppo vicini a livello temporale.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:11:608 (2,3) - trovo uno slider più intuitivo qui
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:15:542 (8,1) - spacing

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:12:100 (6) - suona piuttosto strano.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:16:854 (3,4) - spacing

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Approach Rate + 1? Rendiamo il distacco tra Hard e Kuro-chan un po' inferiore
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:14:723 (2) - CTRL-R
  00:25:051 (x) - 01:16:198 (x) - beat con clap qui, davvero.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Overall Difficulty -1? (NON Approach rate)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Timing: BPM: 183,05; offset: 149 Fatto.
  Il nero tra i custom colourssssssss ;~; Schiarito.
  Forse agli hitcircles potresti aggiungere un alone bianco trasparente di sottofondo, completamente trasparenti sono davvero difficili da vedere bene, a volte.Fatto.
  Aggiungi un'ombra o un bagliore ai comboburst, magari? Aiuterebbe a coprire alcune seghettature nei bordi. Fatto, spero.
  Se proprio ti servono tutti gli elementi della skin di default, forzala tramite Song Setup e leva le componenti che non hai modificato (come i vari hit0, hit100 etc...) oppure modifica anche quelli Fatto.
  Il video ha l'audio: Versione senza audio che pesa meno QUI Messo video nuovo.

- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:57:182 (1,1) - qualcuno si lamenterà che sono troppo vicini a livello temporale. L'hanno già fatto XD
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:11:608 (2,3) - trovo uno slider più intuitivo qui Fatto.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:15:542 (8,1) - spacing Fixato.

- Normal:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:12:100 (6) - suona piuttosto strano. Se qualcun'altro lo fa notare lo cambio.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:16:854 (3,4) - spacing Fixato.

- Hard:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Approach Rate + 1? Rendiamo il distacco tra Hard e Kuro-chan un po' inferiore Fatto.
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:14:723 (2) - CTRL-R Fatto.
  00:25:051 (x) - 01:16:198 (x) - beat con clap qui, davvero. Fatto.

- Kuro-chan:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Overall Difficulty -1? (NON Approach rate) No.

Guarda, ora come ora ci sono tante cosucce qua e là fa aggiustare per renderlo davvero un mapset completo, ma sei su un'ottima strada.
Se hai domande su cose che non ti sono chiare, chiedimi quando vuoi.
KD stella per potenziale e attesa, stella appena le cose sono risolte.

Sunny Holic wrote:

[Normal]
01:23:404 (1) - repeat one more time and reverse selection(ctrl+r) I've put the slider in another way.
01:26:027 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:26:371 (5) - stack with 00:26:535 (1) ? No.
00:34:074 (1) - reduce 1 repeat and move to 00:34:238 Done.
00:34:074 (N) - add a note Done.
00:35:385 (N) - add a note Done.
00:35:713 (2) - move to 00:35:549 I've choose another way to do it.
00:36:696 (3) - add a note ^
01:00:624 (2) - reverse selection(ctrl+r)? No.

[Kuro-chan]
00:09:654 (1) - turn off grid snap and use 0.0x distance to stack better Done.

Famfrit wrote:

To get started, to correct timing. then put everything on the rhythm and write in queue. I'll help: 3

Timing:
BPM: 183 Done.
Offset: 138 Done.

Good luck

Famfrit wrote:

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9) Done.
- Reduced audio (7/11) Done.

Easy:
01:59:810 (1) - post spinner circle. with this Approach is not a look good. maybe you lengthen a spinner? No.
01:57:187 (spinner) - finished on 01:59:810 No.
<Sound>
W - Whistle. E - Finish. R - Clap
Time (00:00:00) - exact time of bit
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00:02:105 - R Done.
00:02:760 - R Done.
00:04:400 - R Done.
00:05:383 - R Done.
00:07:351 - R Done.
00:08:006 - R Done.
00:23:088 - R Done.
00:23:744 - R Done.
00:25:383 - R Done.
00:26:367 - R Done.
00:43:252 - R, 00:43:580 - R, 00:43:908 - R, 00:44:236 - R, 00:44:564 - R Done.
00:45:056 - R, 00:45:383 - R, 00:45:711 - R Done.
00:49:318 - R?, 00:50:793 - R? No.
00:51:941 - R?, 00:53:416 - R? No.
00:54:892 - R Done.
00:56:039 - R Done.
00:58:498 - R, 00:58:826 - R, 00:59:154 - R, 00:59:482 - R Done.
01:01:285 - R No.
01:02:433 - R No.
01:05:465 - R Done.
01:06:203 - R No.
01:07:351 - R Done.
01:08:334 - R Done.
01:08:990 - R, 01:09:318 - R, 01:09:646 - R, 01:09:974 - E+R Done.
01:20:793 - R No.
01:22:269 - R No.
01:23:416 - R No.
01:24:892 - R No.
01:26:367 - R Done.
01:27:515 - R Done.
01:28:334 - R Done.
01:29:318 - R Done.
01:29:974 - R, 01:30:301 - R, 01:30:629 - R, 01:30:957 - R Done.
01:41:777 - R, 01:43:252 - R No.
01:44:400 - R, 01:45:875 - R No.
01:47:351 - R Done.
01:48:498 - R Done.
01:50:301 - R Done.
01:50:957 - R, 01:51:285 - R, 01:51:613 - R, 01:51:941 - R Done.
01:53:580 - R Done.
01:54:236 - R Done.
01:56:203 - R Done.
01:56:859 - R Done.
Pretty good easy :3

Normal:
- If you want soundmod - write on queue or pm
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01:31:107 - add a spinner? finished on 01:34:877 No.
01:59:810 (1) - post spinner circle. with this Approach is not a look good. maybe you lengthen a spinner? No.
01:57:187 (spinner) - finished on 01:59:810 No.
Pretty good normal :3

Hard:
- If you want soundmod - write on queue or pm
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01:31:107 - add a spinner? finished on 01:34:877 No.
No errors too

Kuro-chan:
- If you want soundmod - write on queue or pm
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00:05:219 (4) - delete 1 repeat Done.
00:09:654 (1,2,3,4) - Cltr+R? No.
00:42:433 - add a circle No.
00:57:838 (4) - delete 2 repeat No.
01:31:107 - add a spinner? finished on 01:34:877 No.
Awesome

Kuro-Chan Kuro-Chan
Yeah Yeah Kuro-Chan!
Kuro-Chan~ I like this Good Luck Thanks

shabao_pig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


the cursor of this skin looks too light on background and circles If someone else will notice it maybe I'll change it.


Kuro-chan

00:27:842 (2,1) - move 1 farther away from 2? This would take me too time to re-place the other beat, so no.
00:30:301 - add a note here or seperate 00:29:974 (4,5) It's done on purpose.
01:27:842 - add a note here or seperate 01:27:515 (8,1) ^


Hard

00:18:334 (1,2) - all notes of these two sliders are on red line and hear bad with the music Thats a good point. Changed.
01:29:810 (1) - start it at 01:29:646? No.


Normal

00:14:400 - add a note? Done.
00:38:006 (1) - in this diff you'd better not start a repeat slider on red line No.
00:43:252 (1) - well I'm strongly agaist starting notes on red line after a halt, at least in this diff and Easy.Although it seems to match the music
01:50:301 (4,1) - spacing Done.


Easy

00:13:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems hard to beginners. I still suggest you not start notes on red line Nah, it follows the vocals.
01:57:187 (1,1) - the circle is a little close to the spinner in Easy I really like it and it's done on all other diffs, so I won't change.


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