smsh150 wrote:

Hello! M4M as you said in your queue :3

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1. 00:31:897 (1) - Maybe make this more beautiful, example: http://puu.sh/gkSV3/c0a6005969.jpg
2. 00:30:281 (4) - Move to x168 y280 to look more smoothly
3. 00:36:512 (3) - same here as above [00:31:897 (1) - ]
4. 00:40:205 (3) - Move to x260 y128 to look more smoothly
5. 01:25:435 (5) - Move to x432 y324 to look more smoothly
6. 01:42:974 (2) - In my opinion, not so curve slider fits better
7. 01:49:435 (1) - minor: check distant
8. 01:50:820 (2) - minor: improve blank a bit :3
9. 02:34:666 (3,4) - Maybe make these to look more smoothly?
10. 03:22:666 (3) - blanket would be improve
11. 03:25:897 (2) - maybe make this straight slider?

fixed some stuff

[Hard]

1. 00:16:205 (1) - Make it more symmetrical, example: http://puu.sh/gkUxG/2c1f916d2a.jpg | Make yourself better one xD not suposed to go for it
2. 00:24:512 (1,2) - are these meant to be same sliders? it doesn't look like it nope just some ctrl+j/h[/color
3. 00:32:358 (2,7) - maybe try to stack these two?
4. 00:52:205 (5) - improve blanket is fine like it is
5. 01:11:128 (8) - blanket? if yes, improve it a bit
6. 01:54:974 (5) - improve blanket is fine like it is
7. 02:06:974 (3,7) - maybe try to stack these? no reason to do it
8. 02:24:974 (6) - as above no reason to do it
9. 02:28:666 (5) - minor: as above no reason to do it
10. 03:22:205 (2) - improve blanket no reason to do it
11. 03:46:205 (5) - this is odd slider, maybe make it straight and point it to other way? no reason to do it,is a blanket if you notice

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, sorry about the delay.

[General]

1. Remove BEYONCÉ it's already in the artist. is the name of the album aswell so idk

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1. 00:31:897 (1) - 00:36:512 (3) - minor - their shape can be improved, I believe. Though you're free to leave them if the shape is intended. i prefer to keep it as it is
2. 00:58:666 (6) - break it into two 1/1 sliders? So, this would match with the vocals and music. it fits atm aswell imo
   Note: 02:01:435 (6) - just for the consistency.
3. 03:18:974 (2,1) - players might mistakenly hit (1)'s tail instead of its head. Since this is the easiest diff, can we make this one more readable for newbies? there is a lot of time to understand where you have to go
   
   Just check the copypasted patterns and apply similar suggestion for some patterns if/when necessary. It is a pretty nice diff, actually.

[Hard]

1. 00:34:897 (7,8) - the jump feels really random. I understand that it is done for the pattern but it is not connected with music. Please, try to avoid it.
2. 00:44:358 (1,1) - I wouldn't keep NCs on these two. The fist one gives you the idea, soo the following two can do well even without a NC. As for the NC at 00:45:281 (1) - let's kep it, since it gets speed upped.
   Note: 01:47:128 (1,1) - same.
   
   Not much to suggest, nice job!

Overall, the set is quite alright. I just feel quite uncomfortable about blankets. Try to wok on appearance just a little more.

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Best of luck!

08:20 Lally: hello o3o/
08:20 -Nya-: Oh hey, Lally~
08:21 Lally: o3o
08:21 Lally: how are u?
08:22 -Nya-: Fine thanks. You?
08:22 Lally: lazy cat as always o3o
08:22 Lally: i wanted to ask you that thing on your userpage about bubbes o3o7
08:22 Lally: *coff coff*
08:22 *Lally hides
08:23 Lally: ( / w \    )
08:23 -Nya-: Oh, do you want to send me a request?
08:23 Lally: yap o3o i have a ready mapset :3 slow bpm 2 diffu song o3o
08:25 -Nya-: Np then. I'll be happy to check it out. Let's see. I want to finish modding this mapset first, so can you just stay online for a while, then we can do IRC.
08:25 Lally: sure i'll be here for 1 more hour then i'll go to se my best friend o3o
08:26 Lally: just poke me when you're done dw :3 ty
08:26 -Nya-: I think I'll be done by then. Okay~
08:26 Lally: \o3o/ haiii
09:06 -Nya-: Ok, we can do that IRC mod now. Send me the link.
09:06 *Lally is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/644939 Beyonce - Pretty Hurts]
09:06 Lally: o3o sure
09:08 -Nya-: Lol, just one page?
09:09 Lally: yap o3o the map is slow and simple you'll see
09:09 -Nya-: Is it really necessary to write beyoncE in the tags. i don't think players will looks for it using that.
09:09 Lally: is the album name so idk
09:11 -Nya-: Ok, maybe you can add Knowles in the tags, cuz that's her surname
09:12 Lally: nah not such important didn't use it in other beyonce map and such tag is not in the other mapsets
09:13 -Nya-: Ok, but about the album: I see it says it's spelt like this: http://puu.sh/grMex/cbd1b3591c.png Just like her name, lol
09:15 Lally: http://puu.sh/grMka/81f10e0e10.jpg
09:15 Lally: itunes ^
09:15 Lally: BEYONCÉ in tag aswell
09:16 -Nya-: Why does it look like this then: http://puu.sh/grMpD/700802cbd3.png
09:17 Lally: because everything get uncapitolize in the tags
09:17 -Nya-: Uncheck "Widescreen support" since you don't have a SB
09:17 Lally: i don't have it ò-ò i remove it yesterday
09:17 Lally: oh oh normal
09:17 -Nya-: Yeah :P
09:17 Lally: fuh yap
09:18 -Nya-: Oh, and I realize now that the e is capitalized because of that thing on the e
09:18 Lally: u-u
09:19 -Nya-: Sorry, that was a bit of a blonde moment :P
09:19 *Lally pats dw
09:21 -Nya-: :P Anyway, that blue lines doesn't look snapped. It's next to the ticks.
09:21 Lally: i changed offset you can see flask post the bookmarks were done before that
09:22 Lally: and is not so important bookmarks are not a important part of a map
09:22 -Nya-: Oh okay.
09:23 -Nya-: Why do you have a .osb file? You don't have a storyboard.
09:24 Lally: no .osb file in my folder
09:24 Lally: o3o
09:25 -Nya-: Ugh, why do I have one then? http://puu.sh/grMZw/a69dd16d54.png
09:25 Lally: http://puu.sh/grN22/991a169cd7.png
09:25 Lally: dunno gonna update later will see if desapear
09:26 -Nya-: Yeah, I guess. 
09:27 -Nya-: 00:25:435 (2) - In normal, maybe just curve this slider a bit less. Like 00:22:666 (3) -  When sliders are very curved, they tend to look ugly imo.
09:28 -Nya-: 00:31:435 - Why not place a note here? I think it will flow nicely.
09:28 Lally: k done
09:29 Lally: wanted to have a little space before the vocal restart
09:29 -Nya-: 00:31:897 (1) - Eh, I'm not really a fan of this shape. Try this: http://puu.sh/grNjh/b2a9534760.jpg
09:30 -Nya-: 00:36:512 (3) - Same thing here.
09:30 Lally: some said it already but i like it so will not change it o3o
09:30 Lally: btw
09:30 Lally: i have to go out now  or i'll be late ;_;
09:30 Lally: are you going to be here later?
09:31 -Nya-: Yeah, I will. Then we can continue.
09:31 Lally: ty moe o3o ♥
09:31 -Nya-: :) Np~
09:31 Lally: see ya later >3<////
09:31 -Nya-: Ok~! ^^
09:32 Lally: :3!!
12:35 Lally: o3o/ back
12:36 -Nya-: Hey, Lally~ Ok, let's continue.
12:36 Lally: uguu when you have time o3o
12:37 -Nya-: I have.
12:37 Lally: yay \o3o/
12:38 -Nya-: I still have that OSB file, even after I redownloaded but I'm going to ignore it, since you don't have it.
12:38 Lally: will try to update after and will see o3o
12:38 -Nya-: Ok~
12:39 -Nya-: 00:39:743 (2) - Hm, in Normal, won't this flow be better? http://puu.sh/gs1Ph/a43ad9e8c7.jpg
12:40 Lally: will change just a bit
12:41 -Nya-: 00:42:051 (5) - Rather add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:43:897 (1) - 
12:41 Lally: new lyrics so this is why new combo on 1 on 5 doesen't fit at all imo
12:41 Lally: consistency with hard aswell
12:42 Lally: have a new combo on down down down
12:42 Lally: not before
12:42 -Nya-: 00:53:589 (1,2) - Try to improve blanket or make (2) a straight slider.
12:42 -Nya-: Ok~
12:43 Lally: ok
12:44 -Nya-: 01:15:512 (1,1) - I feel the reaction time between the spinner and the next note is too short. So I suggest ending the spinner here: 01:18:051 - 
12:44 Lally: is more than 1500 ms so is fine
12:45 -Nya-: Hm, if you say so. Sometimes, I also thought the reaction time was fine, but then other modders said otherwise.
12:46 Lally: i9 asked other bn aswell about that and is totally fine
12:46 -Nya-: Ok, cool~
12:47 -Nya-: 01:32:358 (3) - Maybe this is better flow? http://puu.sh/gs2tK/66209b1f90.jpg
12:48 Lally: this is the reason for why it iss like that : http://puu.sh/gs2A1/88f4707c3a.jpg
12:48 Lally: to make everything looks parallel in a staight line
12:49 -Nya-: Hm, I still think flow is much more important though
12:49 -Nya-: 01:56:358 (1,2) - Same as previous suggestion. Improve blanket or straight slider instead.
12:49 Lally: yap
12:50 -Nya-: 02:01:435 (6) - Move this tail a bit to the left to make more parallel with 02:00:512 (5) - 
12:52 Lally: i wanted to create a different flow not a parallel one here
12:52 -Nya-: I don't really see the difference but okay.
12:53 -Nya-: 03:40:666 (2) - This can also be more parallel by moving the tail a bit to the right.
12:54 -Nya-: Nice Normal.
12:54 -Nya-: Now Hard.
12:54 Lally: yap this one
12:55 Lally: ty o3o
13:00 -Nya-: 00:44:820 (3) - Why not also move this lower till it's consistent with 00:44:358 (2) - 
13:00 -Nya-: 00:51:512 (4,5) - This blanket can be improved a bit.
13:01 Lally: blaket is fine http://puu.sh/gs3MP/5c84514a53.jpg
13:02 -Nya-: Really? The head is higher than the tail
13:03 Lally: is not such noticiable and is nazi imo o3o and it works fine as it is u_u uguu
13:03 -Nya-: 01:06:281 (7) - I don't think it can hurt if you try to stack the head of this slider perfectly on top of 01:04:205 (3) - 
13:05 -Nya-: 02:06:974 (3,7) - Same thing here; that stack.
13:05 Lally: ok
13:07 -Nya-: 03:06:974 (2,3,4) - Rather a circular pattern? http://puu.sh/gs4iZ/d4d57bff7c.jpg
13:07 Lally: hmm i like it as is atm ;_;
13:08 -Nya-: Ok, everything else looks fine.
13:09 Lally: o3o uguu will update
13:09 -Nya-: Ok~
13:09 Lally: you see i told you before =w=
13:10 -Nya-: Lol, yeah. :)
13:10 Lally: done =w=)b
13:17 -Nya-: Ok, everything looks great~
13:17 Lally: \o3o/

Inyuschan wrote:

[General]

1. NCs are set in a weird way at least for me. I know it can be confusing due vocals and all but I'd make things easier and just add NC each one/two stanzas, depending of the diff.

personally this kind of things are going to be followed when you don't know what to follow,personally i follow vocals in my NC and i feel ok with it and until now nobody had to say something about it =w= are just NCs

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1. 00:53:589 (1,2) - tbh I don't like how it looks because it's like curve slider is almost touching (1) which is a bit untidy for me. I think you can curve (2) in a different way.
2. 01:56:358 (1,2) - Same here, looks like you made some copypaste lol

done
[Hard]

1. 00:44:358 (2,3) - NC here as well due different SV change?
2. 01:47:128 (2,3) - Same.

we decided with bakari to rome those 2 since are low sv changes and just to notice the big one the slowest and the highest

Hm, looks clean for me. Poke me.