1. Hard (4,65 stars, 158 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 253 notes)
3. Normal (3,06 stars, 99 notes)

[DBF] wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:423 (3) - finish. OK~
00:23:572 (4) - remove whistle and add clap. OK~
00:56:736 (5) - left 1, use grid lvl 3. OK~
01:13:317 (1) - finish. OK~
01:18:463 (3) - ^ in end. OK~
[Hard]
all fine.
[Insane]
all fine.. no.. that awesome~ ~

i really like your skin and map, that awesome, and i think you can faster do it ranked, good luck..

Vikon wrote:

[General]
01:13:127 why you use red timing section here? It's so that the first beat stays at the longest white line.. ;w; Deleted the green one.
1) If you think the timing is off after that time... you can keep it, but delete the green timing section at the same time.
2) If not, delete it and resnap all notes

The map can be better if using symmetric and more rounded sliders.(still, The straight slider are fine)

[Normal]
00:31:958 (2) make it symmetric? Symmetric with.... what? ^^;

[Hard]
01:03:407 (x) add a note here? OK~

[Insane]
00:53:877 (x) add a note here? I think this is fine without one. ^^;

Good map, Star~

quintessence wrote:

Nice map!
The skin is great,too. Thanks~ ^^
[Normal]
1:13:127(2) finish. (Here is finish in Insane difficulty.) OK~

[Hard]
1:13:127(3) finish. (Here is finish in Insane difficulty.) OK~

[Insane]
0:42:918(x) add a note. (Suggestion) OK~
0:43:108(x) add a note. (Suggestion) OK~

☆Star

Leorda wrote:

HEI

[Skin]
1) Your skin is waaay too cut off the glow. You have to remake the skin with no-glow, otherwise, it would be bad looking
Example hit300g at slideshow

Oh shi--- Damn, why haven't I noticed that earlier. ;_; I promise I'll fix them, but right now I don't have time to do that.


2) Your spinner-circle is too confusing for me, because there is no dot in the middle of the spinner, so you have to make a dot in the middle of the spinner Added circle there~

[Normal]
00:14:042 (x) - Add note here?? OK~
00:15:567 (x) - ^
00:34:245 (3) - New combo OK~
00:40:345 (3) - ^
01:00:548 (6) - Make symetric?? OK~
01:13:317 (1) - Cut short this spinner to previous white tick (but the long vocal end at 01:15:795) and silence at the end is better OK~
01:25:325 (1) - Make parallel? Parallel with.. what? ;_;
01:25:897 (2) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:047 (4) - Move 1 grid up? OK~
00:24:716 (8) - This object makes me confusing because of this placement, can you find another placement?? Better?
00:25:097 (10) - New combo?? OK~
01:13:317 (1) - Cut short this spinner to previous white tick (but the long vocal end at 01:15:795) and silence at the end is better OK~

[Insane]
Fine~

I love this skin! BTW, what the name of font is that? Thanks~ The font used in scrore-points is called DFMaruGothic-SU and the other one used in everywhere else is DFGMaruGothic-SU.. It was a big font pack with lot's of japanese fonts but I don't remember where I donwloaded it. ;_;
Good song
STAR

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All Diffs~
Storyboard:
- Max size for Storyboard items is 800x600. Please resize "sb.png". Resized~

~Normal~
00:16:711 (3,4) - Copypaste (1,2) and make a horizontal flip (yay symmetry <3) OK~
01:16:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This whole part sounds a bit weird, and probably it is because of the blank space and the first slider starting in a weird beat. If you make the spinner 1/1 shorter and move these objects (or at least the first slider) 2 white ticks earlier it sounds better, at least for me. You can always ignore this though xP Better now? ;3;

~Hard~
00:43:394 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - <33333 XD ~
00:54:068 (3) - I'd make this part of the slowdown section too, it makes the change a bit sudden and unexpected =x OK~

~Insane~
00:54:068 (3) - Same as in Hard, though this one doesn't seem that sudden... I decided to leave it like that. =w=

Ahh I love this song x3 and the map is really nice, great job!! ^w^ *star*

frost-b-spec wrote:

i watched #modReqs :)
great map~

[Kiai]
0:31:19 ~ 0:31:38 - delete Bubububut... I don't want to. ;_;
0:55:59 ~ 1:13:12 - start 0:55:21 I think it's much better when it starts at the 1st beat.

star

Garven wrote:

[General]
00:18:998 (7) - Maybe from here during this part of the song switch to soft hit sounds, then go back to normal when you do that quick kiai fountain? Ohh, sure thing~

[Skin]
hit300g and hit300k need to be within 256x256, I believe.
Fits rather well! Resized. ;w;

[Normal]
A little difficult for the easiest diff in the set, but it's less than 3 stars. Good 'nuff. :D
00:14:042 (3) - [Nazi] Maybe move this up two grids to line up with the 1 slider before it? OK~
00:15:567 (6) - ^
01:11:984 (1,2) - Maybe reform these so they don't end up semi-overlapping where the 2 and 4 used to be? OK~
Eh, just suggestions here. Good map.

[Hard]
00:13:852 (3) - Maybe move the end point so it's not slightly overlapping the previous slider? OK~
00:15:376 (3) - ^
00:22:047 (4) - Maybe do a copy/paste of the 3 slider *control H, then R) before it to make it symmetrical? That would also make the start of 00:22:810 (5) not overlap a little, though the end point still does. I'm not sure if I fully understood, I also replaced the (5) now, is it better? ;w;
01:18:273 (4) - Maybe set this up so it's not touching where the (2) was? OK~

[Insane]
This is nice 'n fun.
The combo changes are a little weird musically, but it's hard to keep it consistent with what you were doing visually. I'll just leave it. OK~ ^^;

1. light color NOTE+KIAI+light color BG and this makes some people give up retrying after they missed one note and just remove this beatmap.
2. my suggestion is: SB Effort is enough and just remove the KIAI time
3. press F4-->StoryBoarding-->Misc.Toggles-->Display epilepsy warning

1. 01:13:127 (T) - use a green line instead of a red one

1. 00:21:285 (3,4) - make the end of (4) cover (3), you may use shift button to do tiny change.
2. same time issue in Normal

1. 01:25:325 (1,2,3) - put them further
2. same time issue in Normal

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. light color NOTE+KIAI+light color BG and this makes some people give up retrying after they missed one note and just remove this beatmap.
2. my suggestion is: SB Effort is enough and just remove the KIAI time
3. press F4-->StoryBoarding-->Misc.Toggles-->Display epilepsy warning

Awwww. ;_; Well, I changed the kiai to star fountains, would that be better now? I also don't think that the sb is enough to epilepsy warning... But if someone other also says about it, I'll add it.


[Normal]:

1. 01:13:127 (T) - use a green line instead of a red one

OK to all~

[Hard]:

1. 00:21:285 (3,4) - make the end of (4) cover (3), you may use shift button to do tiny change.
2. same time issue in Normal

[Insane]:

1. 01:25:325 (1,2,3) - put them further OK~ OK~
2. same time issue in Normal

I just modded in Chinese for this map and before I click 'submit' I found my mistake orz. Awww. ;w;

Very nice song and mapset, star~

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello Lanttu.

Nice song,cute skin,I like it.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Fine.

[Insane]
00:20:522 (2) - Move 1 grid up to allign with the (1) slider. OK~
00:50:827 (2) - Move 1 grid up? OK~
01:00:739 (3) - Oh,well,almost perfect,but maybe allign a little better? OK~

Wow,I'm surprised.This map rocks,so go go for ranked! Star~

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:15:224 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:414

• • 01:15:605 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:796

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders OK~
  • 01:15:224 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:414 OK~

[Hard]

• • 01:15:605 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:15:796 OK~