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Avenged Sevenfold - A Little Piece of Heaven(NSFW)(Approval)

posted 2010-05-23T14:34:20+00:00

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Larto

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Larto 2010-05-23T14:34:20+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 25, 2010 at 22:58:27

Artist: Avenged Sevenfold
Title: A Little Piece of Heaven
Tags: nsfw metal
BPM: 145
Filesize: 29517kb
Play Time: 07:36
Difficulties Available:

Marathon (4.74 stars, 954 notes)

Download: Avenged Sevenfold - A Little Piece of Heaven
Download: Avenged Sevenfold - A Little Piece of Heaven (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Best played with video!
NOT SAFE FOR WORK - INCLUDES VIOLENCE AND SUGGESTIVE SCENES

She was never this good in bed even when she was sleeping
Now she's so perfect I've never been quite so fucking deep in

Considering this one of my best works so far. Beats Tigerlily by miles in my opinion.

Last edited by Larto 2010-05-25T20:58:36+00:00, edited 16 times in total.

Nachy

Joined April 2009

Nachy 2010-05-23T14:51:37+00:00

Mashley

Joined September 2008

Mashley 2010-05-23T14:53:40+00:00

02:12:068 (2) - Out of pattern, move down one grid
03:55:182 (7,8) - Seems a little high, down one grid.

Really good job, honestly looking through this I didn't notice there were no breaks until I saw the timeline.
1000th post lol

Beuchi

osu! Alumni

Joined February 2009

Beuchi 2010-05-23T15:10:03+00:00

<3 Simply awesome.

aRiskOfRain

osu! Alumni

Joined June 2009

aRiskOfRain 2010-05-23T15:10:49+00:00

02:29:050 (7) - New combo, like every other time. And no new combo for the note after.

Bittersweet

Joined February 2010

Bittersweet 2010-05-23T15:13:14+00:00

nice son- i'll check the map later ;x

Jarby

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2010-05-23T15:20:55+00:00

Ew, those volume changes

Ekaru

Joined July 2008

Ekaru 2010-05-23T15:25:35+00:00

Lower HP Drain by 1 because of the really slow parts.

Really awesome, star.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2010-05-23T15:55:17+00:00

01:31:076 (9) - Add new combo
01:31:283 (1) - Remove new combo
02:07:514 (1,1,1) - I know this is for approval but still.
04:09:236 (1,1,1) - ^
06:11:850 (1,1,1,1) - ^
06:59:022 (1,1,1) - ^
07:37:207 (1,1) - ^

Ilu.

Armin

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2009

Armin 2010-05-23T16:14:13+00:00

I LOVE YOU TçT

Derekku

COOL DUDE

Joined March 2009

Derekku 2010-05-23T19:38:34+00:00

[General]
*I'm a bit wary of the mp3 quality... It says that it's 320 kbps, but the filesize is WAY too low for it to be higher than 128 kbps or so...

[Marathon]
00:30:001 (2,1,2,3) - (nazi) spacing
00:32:897 (2,3) - (nazi) ugly overlap
01:09:518 (9) - gotta love the anchors on this
01:54:662 (2) - move back to the blue tick? (and then fix spacing) :V
02:04:411 (9) - this one could technically be 1/4th later, but he sings it slightly between (like on the 1/8th) so meh oh well
02:06:893 (9,1) - pause between these is a bit awkward
02:09:272 (1) - I think a finish would sound better on here than a clap.. (or at least have both)
02:24:701 (6) - Maybe remove the whistles from the repeat and last part.. Right now they make the slider sound a bit weird since the repeat is on a 1/8th and the last part almost falls on the white tick.
02:37:955 (5) - ^
03:56:423 (2) - move back to the blue tick and fix spacing ;3
04:04:271 - feels too fast, so perhaps lower the bpm like you have in other sections (144.8x)
04:10:997 (1) - same finish suggestion as before
04:26:467 (5) - remove whistles
04:39:717 (4) - ^
05:50:110 - for some reason, it's doing two fountains between the inherited and uninherited section, even though there's no section between them to turn it off. However, I think the kiai would be better starting on the uninherited section (05:50:317) anyway..
06:45:780 (8) - shorten to the blue? :U
06:58:401 (8,1) - awkward pause
07:00:780 (1) - finish
07:16:207 (5) - whistles
07:29:449 (4) - ^

Offset might be a bit early in a few spots, but I seemed to only hover around 5-10ms off while still getting 300's. *grumbles at multiple timing sections*

Nice job~ <3

RandomJibberish

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Joined August 2009

RandomJibberish 2010-05-23T19:51:20+00:00

EVVERRYYBBODDY'S GOOOTTTAA DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEE SOOOOOMMMETTIIME~

This is made of Awesomeness

I've nazi'd it a little here, but I want this map EVEN MORE AWESOME

00:30:208 (1,2,3) - Make a right angle?
00:32:690 (1,2,3) - This looks weird, smooth out the spacing...
00:37:449 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:44:897 (1,2,3,4,5) - This'd look better as a more regular pentagon, it's a little off as is. Also maaaaybe make it a hexagon along with (6).
01:09:518 (9) - Wow crazy. You could symmetricallise it a little more but some of those points could be hard to get at

01:14:483 (9) - Maybe end a half beat earlier?
02:12:896 (4,5,6) - Make a straight line like (7,8,9)
02:57:634 (1,3) - Maybe move these out so if you were to flip 02:58:048 (2) horizontally they'd be in a straight line?
03:38:630 (2,3) - These don't quite fit with the music as well as they could IMO
04:08:822 - Add a note here and...
04:09:236 (1) - ...Start this on 04:09:029 ?
04:53:155 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Flip this horizontally?
05:24:843 (1,2,3) - Move slightly up and to the left for prettyness?
06:27:987 (2,3,4) - Make a straight line
06:58:608 - Add a note here and...
06:59:022 (1) - ...Start this on 06:58:815?
07:31:724 (2,3,4) - Make a straight line

BABY DON'T CRY-EYE-EYE-EYE-EYYYYEEE

EDIT: Bah I was cut. Sorry if I'm repeating anything~

Sakura

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Joined March 2010

Sakura 2010-05-23T20:52:03+00:00

[General]
Try stripping the audio from the video to save file size?
--------Marathon----------------
06:11:845 (1,1,1,1) - I think theese would be better if put together into 1 spinner. [Suggestion]
06:25:086 (1) - Since you done this with similar sections, put multiple spinners here according to the vocal changing pitch? [Suggestion]

Those are the only things i found, nice map is nice +

NotShinta

Joined September 2009

NotShinta 2010-05-23T20:55:00+00:00

p

EDIT: Oh yeah I don't like 01:26:899 (1,2,3,4). Doesn't seem to fit for me.

KRZY

Former osu! Champion: #3

Joined May 2009

KRZY 2010-05-23T22:57:27+00:00

[marathon]

00:30:414 (2) - Incorrect spacing, if not done for a specific reason I would suggest that it is spaced correctly.
00:32:690 (1,2,3) - The previous patterns use 0.8x spacing, yet these three circles are lined up with 0.7x. If not intentional, might be better to use 0.8x spacing.

My feeble attempt at a mod. XD These were all I could find, consider them as light suggestions to make the map better.

Love the song and love the map. Fantastic job. Star!

Armin

osu! Alumni

Joined May 2009

Armin 2010-05-24T14:07:33+00:00

omg 666 circles
omg a kudosu star u.u

EEeee

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2010-05-24T17:02:37+00:00

*star
Awesome map,

glassd

Joined September 2008

glassd 2010-05-24T19:48:58+00:00

Great map! The only thing I would suggest is to change/get rid of the combo bursts, especially with the video playing. It really doesn't fit.

0_o

Joined December 2008

0_o 2010-05-25T00:40:03+00:00

Well that was mildly disturbing.

02:05:843 (x) - A note smack dab in the centre would be nice
03:28:015 (3,4) - This played kinda weird for me? It felt better playing it a second or third time so idk, might just be me. Ignore if you never thought so.
04:54:914 (4,1) - This threw me off, but maybe I just suck from not playing much lately
04:07:546 (x) - Again, a circle here? (and the same for the other parts like this)

Yeah it really doesn't feel like a 7 minute map, awesome.

Luvdic

Joined July 2009

Luvdic 2010-05-25T03:02:41+00:00

01:53:016 - Umm... maybe... just maybe... i just think... that it would sound better if you added a circle here, and the move 01:53:222 (2,3) 1/2 beat later. I guess the same applies for other similar parts...

Yay i suck at modding!

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