This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 03, 2010 at 6:39:26 PM

Artist: samfree feat. Mitani Nana
Title: NanaNana Fever Miracle Tonight
Source: UTAU
Tags: Garven Krisom
BPM: 164
Filesize: 4849kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:

1. Garven's Normal (3.29 stars, 215 notes)
2. Insane (4.89 stars, 533 notes)
3. Krisom's Easy (1.78 stars, 94 notes)

Download: samfree feat. Mitani Nana - NanaNana Fever Miracle Tonight
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NanaNana Fever

Try 375 as offset

ナナナナフィバ～

I did some weird rhythms in this, so the hit sounds were hard to make consistent... If it's weird to you, feel free to edit/maul/whatever.

Download: samfree feat. Mitani Nana - Nana Nana Fever Miracle Tonight (ouranhshc) [Garven's Normal].osu

I like it
Insane play really nice

Have a Star~

Oh, it's very nice.
I like Vocaloid , yurobeat , Ryu mix songs.
So I really like you chose songs and maps.
star～

my mod

Good luck

*sigh*
Ok, lets get this done.

[General]
Tags. Garven. Add him. All diffs :3
Guess who has an osb. in his foldeeeer >w<!
There's another singer in this version. I'm sure of it. The first part feels much more robotic than the second one. If you don't belive me, turn off hitsounds and compare 01:34:765 to 00:33:118. Look for the other singer so that you can add her. I doubt it is samfree singing.


[Insane]
-Technically, hitsounds are well made. But they tend to get a little annoying, specially in the chorus. Reduce the volume? Also, add some softwhistles a la LukaLukaNight Fever. Check that map, it has great hitsounding.
-00:29:826 (2,3,4...) This. This is kinda hard to read. You follow the lyrics in the combo before, but this one follows the beat (?). Besides, 00:31:106 (5,6,7,8) of this same combo seems to follow the lyrics, AGAIN D: How to fix? Oh well, you could add a soft whistle at the sliders (2) and (4) at the start and ending to make it more readeable. Also, you could remap this to the lyrics OR to the beats. A nice idea too would be transforming these sliders into repeat sliders?
-00:38:423 (1) - Ok, I now know what larto was talking about. It's nice to the view, but this spacing is really messed up. It's just one beat of distance, so this one should follow the distance snap more strictly than the others (wich are readeable). Watch out for stuff like that oury <_<
-00:48:667 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rotate By 225º? It looks better IMO. Also, (5) could be placed on where (1) or on where (5) is wihout messing up the spacing for (4,5,6), but that's up to you. (You can apply the same thing to 00:54:521 (1,2,3,4,5), but rotating by 135º)
-01:06:228 (9) - This slider could look much better. Try to create something like this. Here's the code if you rather using this one.
-01:08:789 (6) - Remove?
-01:21:411 (4,6) - I'm not going to force you, but I don't like how these sliders overlaps (5). Feel free to change it or not. I'd make a circle with them, though.
-01:45:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - A star pattern here would look awesome. Try to create one here, at 01:51:594 (1,2,3,4,5), and at these patterns in the slow section of the map. That way you get a jump wihout spacing issues.
-02:47:935 (3) - This looks too far away. Flipped vertically (1) and (2) ? Now make (3) as close to (2) as (1) is to (2). This is the same combo, so the spacing should be consistent. Moving just one grid down (3) and (4) seems to work nice wihout altering much else.

Everything else seems fine and ready. Well, it's readeable for me at least <_<

[Garven's Normal]
- Raise OD by 1 or by 2?
- 00:25:801 (3) - >_< This could be prettier.
- 02:36:777 (2) - This is curve. (1) is linear. Try to change the styles of the sliders in different combos, that's just a personal opinion, though.

Nothing more for this one. Try to use more sliders for big gaps between notes though. It felt empty sometimes >_<"


Overall, enjoyable, and some nice patterns pop out of nowhere in Insane.

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
look at what Krisom said.
emm.. the BG is 938*768, i think you need a 1024*768 one instead.
offset:got about -6

[Garven's Normal]
yay. OA+1
slider tick rate:2? sounds better.
00:48:667 (1) - there should be one more green line to change the hitsound sample before the note but not exactly on it.
01:01:837 (2) - finish at the end?
01:30:923 (3,4,5) - nazi, 1 grid left
01:58:545 (1) - finish at the end?
02:29:643 (1) - same as the 1st kiai.

[Insane]
00:11:350 (1,2) - increase volume on these two notes.
00:12:082 (1) - 00:23:789 (1) also make this part louder.
00:41:350 (1,2,4,5) - sth to nazi here... 1&2 1 grid right, 4&5 1 grid left.
00:48:667 (1) - there should be one more green line to change the hitsound sample before the note but not exactly on it. if you don't do that, when player hits earlier they will hear different sounds.
00:49:399 (5) - i guess you need a new combo.... and the shape of (1,2,3,4)... can you make it better?
00:55:253 (5) - ^
01:45:740 (1) - same timing point problem
02:18:850 (6) - whistle at the start.
02:19:399 (1) - whistle at the end.
02:20:314 (4) - whistle at the start.
02:20:862 (1) - whistle at the start and end.
02:22:874 (4) - ^

Garven's Normal

• Lower HP drain one tick, it's kind of harsh for the lowest difficulty

Insane

• 00:17:935 (1,8) - This part struck me as odd. It transitioned out of the surrounding pattern pretty suddenly. Personally I would change it, but it's still following the beat and it looks nice so it's only a suggestion

Wish I could do more, but everything else looks good to me. Starred

•Overall•
Offset : 371 ~ Resnap All Notes

•Garven's Normal•
02:00:009 (3,4) - Distance spacing.

Other diff is good for me.

Nice map~
Star!~

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Open all .osu files and change...
  
  SPOILER

  //Background Colour Transformations
  3,100,255,128,0
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 64,117,255
  Combo2 : 128,255,128
  
  • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
  • Disable countdown

[Garven's Normal]

• • 00:02:753 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 00:05:679 (1) - ^
  • 00:06:960 (2) - "New combo"
  • 00:08:423 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:08:606 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 00:09:887 (2) - "New combo"
  • 02:48:667 (x) - Add a circle

the easiest doesn't have to be below 3.00 <=== that is a guideline, and guidelines =/= rules

[General]
*I have some issues with the artist/title/source before I go any farther. I don't know why I didn't catch this on MikiMiki, but...
*samfree isn't the singer; the vocaloid/utau is. "samfree" (or capital s, whichever way) should be the source to stay consistent with most other vocaloid/utau songs.
*artist should just be "Mitani Nana"
*add "utau" to tags and possibly "vocaloid" as well?
*should "Nana Nana" be "NanaNana"? I'm not sure about this..

[Garven's Normal]
01:42:814 (1) - perhaps move back a white tick and extend?
01:59:459 (2,3,4,5) - spacing?

[Insane]
00:00:557 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I was expecting these to get lower and lower in volume =(
00:03:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:228 (1) - this sounds much better with 0 volume (or a decrescendo)
02:17:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some of the whistles sound too loud and jangly here imo ;x
02:49:948 (1) - bleh don't end kiai in the middle of a spinner. End it 1/4th before it starts. Also, silence/decrescendo please

Like I mentioned in irc, I really dislike the difficulty spread for this map. Normal->Insane is kinda meh... Actually, I feel like Normal is a bit too tricky to be the easiest diff in this set. There's too many unpredictable offbeats due to the mildly-high bpm. The offbeats could be changed and the circle size could be upped, but I think that it would be better to just add a third diff. If you could at least add an Easy to the set (@ouran) I'd believe that this work would be much stronger. :p

Your hitsounds are getting better

bmin11 wrote:

Your hitsounds are getting better

Victory !!!

star >w</

nice work

#modReqs


:D
STAR!

hello~
sorry about late mod >"<

[Krisom's Easy]
fine.

[Garven's Normal]
fine.

[Insane]
very good!

sorry i can't find any problem, sorry >"<

nice map
nice song~
star!

Krisom's Easy

Pretty much fine.

I did notice these while testing.

00:51:594 (3) - This slider has a jagged edge. Straighten the move points.

01:48:667 (3) - Also noted the jagged edge on this.

02:00:374 (1) - ^

Garven's Normal

00:16:472 (3) - Adjust the end move point up and right a unit or so to make it look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13005
I think it feels more natural that way.

Insane

Fine as far as I can tell. It flows very well.



Starred.

[Insane]
nothing I would change

[Garven's]
The overall difficulty is low, it makes 00:00:375 (1,2) - look really "WTF? are these 1/4 notes?"
Also, with the amount of notes this map has, it plays better with OD+2

patterns like 01:51:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) feel stressful to play because of the offbeat note, so I'd add some sliders in there but eh, w/e
02:52:326 (5,6,1) - This should be moved down 1 grid, it's not really symmetrical with (3,4)

[Krisom's]
mini circles :<
OD+1

01:31:106 (3,1) - is the overlap intended?
01:32:570 (1,2,3,4) - what is this shape supposed to be? it doesn't look right
01:35:496 (1,2,3,4) - reverse of ^
02:04:033 (1,2,3) - it's almost straight but not quite? IMO it's better if make it either more straight or more curvy