from your queue~
[Kantan]
00:11:822 - move to 00:11:116 - and change to d? kinda weird because futsuu doesn't have note there
since there is no 3/1 or longer break from 00:21:704 ~ 00:45:351 - i think you should try to make one if possible so it's not as intense as the kiai, for example removing a note at 00:35:469 -, and 00:24:174 -
how about:
00:36:880 - change to d,
00:38:645 - move to 00:37:939 - and change to k,
00:40:057 - add d,
00:41:116 - change to k
this way would have some sort of consistency between the two similar section at 00:22:763 ~ and 00:34:057 ~
01:30:174 - since you are alternating the pattern between 2-plet and 4-plet, i think you should add d here. Also it would help the spread with futsuu.
01:35:822 - , 01:47:116 - you're not going to add d in place like these?
02:23:822 - , 02:35:116 - same as ^
01:53:116 - add finisher? crash cymbal
02:43:939 - maybe change to d? the drum sound is more similar to 02:49:586 - than 02:46:763 -
02:55:233 (1,2,3) - change to ddk? almost same reason as^
02:51:351 - , 02:51:704 - consider to remove to make a rest moment, currently this section feels as intense as final kiai
03:12:174 - change to d to have consistency with the kick drum at 03:09:351 - and 03:06:527 - ?'
03:19:233 - add note to make the kiai a bit more challenging and variative?
[Futsuu]
00:10:410 - and 00:10:586 - consider to add d to create more balanced spread with muzukashii.
00:11:469 - maybe change it to D since you used it in every other diffs?
00:19:586 - , 00:19:763 - consider to remove to make it consistent with 00:13:939 - ? also it's actually denser than muzu at this point
00:21:704 - can be removed as well for spread sake
00:24:704 - maybe move to 00:23:998 - ?
00:33:527 - move to 00:33:704 - and 00:33:880 - remove this note? i think the rhythm is a bit too complex
00:44:822 - same as ^
01:35:116 - , 01:40:763 - maybe you want to make it denser but it ends up with same pattern length with Muzu
01:50:116 - remove? vocal more clear
02:01:939 - could be removed imo for more balanced spread
02:07:586 - , 02:13:233 - 02:18:880 - , 02:24:527 - , 02:30:174 - , 02:35:822 - same as ^
03:31:410 (1,2) - feels more natural to be shifted 1/2 to left
03:37:055 - remove and 03:37:410 - shift 1/2 to left?
03:42:704 - remove and 03:43:057 - shift 1/2 to left?
03:45:880 - remove
to be continued