Paramore - Where The Lines Overlap · forum

Larto

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Larto 2010-06-03T00:26:14+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, August 19, 2010 at 3:20:35

Artist: Paramore
Title: Where the Lines Overlap
Tags: Brand New Eyes
BPM: 160
Filesize: 7919kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.26 stars, 131 notes)
Hard (4.36 stars, 241 notes)
Insane (4.95 stars, 380 notes)
Normal (2.94 stars, 170 notes)

Download: Paramore - Where the Lines Overlap
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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No one is as lucky as I, huh?

Last edited by Larto 2010-06-19T01:27:13+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

Kecco

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Kecco 2010-06-03T11:58:56+00:00

I think odehodwohdoosij is better than djoidwiojiwjdiojej, but It's up you.

Anyway, dowjdioSiojioejTfjroiAijiofejioR~

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-06-03T21:26:40+00:00

General
make sure your timing sections are snapped. some of the kiai sections in "Normal" aren't snapped

Insane
00:44:075 (3,4,5) - why is (3) so far away from 2
00:55:512 (1) - no new combo
00:55:700 (2) - new combo
00:56:075 (4) - same as before
01:47:075 (5,6) - line up with (3) and (4), 01:47:450 (7,8,9,10,11) - move 1 grid right to line up with (5)
02:23:168 (1,1) - maybe make this one spinner?

Normal
00:25:325 (4) - one grid right

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-06-03T21:27:43+00:00

Easy;
00:51:575 (5) - ugly
00:54:575 (4) - ^
01:08:262 (1) - This break ends wierdly; how about just a circle at 01:09:200?
01:42:575 (5) - hmhm
01:45:575 (4) - ^
02:21:950 (1,2) - lolsymmetry

Normal;
00:36:575 (6,1) - lolspacing
00:38:825 (3) - What is this supposed to be on?
01:08:262 (1) - Delete
01:14:075 (2,3) - lolsymmetry
01:16:325 (3) - Right a grid.

Hard;
00:25:325 (4,5) - ugh
01:16:325 (3) - ^
01:28:700 (1) - ^

Insane;
01:29:637 (6) - 1/4 earlier
02:30:950 (5,6) - spacing

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-06-03T21:28:26+00:00

No, I need attention <_<

[Genral]
I'm worried about those gaps at Insane and Hard, the ones before the Kiai Time appears. At least at insane, the player loses 2/5 of his HP.

[Insane]
01:34:699 (2) - I don't understand this stream x_x
01:47:825 (9) - I know it's for symmetry, but you could move (6) a bit closer to (7) and so on to make this symmetrycal and evenly spaced.
01:55:137 (6) /Nazi/ -Spacing? Half grid down, maybe <_< Oh well, it's barely even noticeable when playing...

[Hard]
00:55:325 (6) /Nazi/ - Spacing? Too far away. One grid down should do it

[Normal]
Oh, you <_<"! Your spacing is meant to confuse me! While most people keep the spacing even during the song, or make it higher at kiai times, you reduced it! That's evul... <_<

[Easy]
02:30:950 (2) - Move this ~~clores~~ closer to (1). (2) It's too close to (3), so this looks kinda out of place

Star :3

EDIT: 3 mods in 3 minutes, XD!

Rolled

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Rolled 2010-06-04T02:06:10+00:00

B> Paramore beatmap project.

arien666

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arien666 2010-06-05T15:35:05+00:00

[Easy]
00:41:825 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:53:825 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:27:575 (4) - Maybe align with 01:26:075 (1) seems good imo ;_;
01:44:825 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
02:19:325 (3) - How about move 1 grid down?

[Normal]
Where The Notes Overlap?
This diff seems fine for me :3

[Hard]
00:22:137 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up and left?
01:57:387 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid up?

[Insane]
00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?
01:35:637 (9) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid up?
01:40:700 (5) - How about move 1 grid down?
01:44:825 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 'last grey tick' 1 grid left like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11990
01:47:637 (8,9,10,11) - How about move 1 grid right?

This song is nice ;_;
Anyway, good luck for your another song :3

Rolled

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Rolled 2010-06-06T12:03:17+00:00

How do you even notice shit like that I don't even

00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?

nooooooo

arien666

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arien666 2010-06-07T03:29:22+00:00

Rolled wrote:
How do you even notice shit like that I don't even

00:30:387 - [Suggestion] Break?
nooooooo

Actually, I considered at HP drain ;_;
So, I suggested like that...

But, your songs are awesome ;_;

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-06-09T12:19:55+00:00

Not really feeling like going ultra precise over hitsounds and combo numbering. 02:10:700 - I don't like the kiai starting here. Makes it feel anticlimatic. The finish note on it and the normal hitsounds on the slider after it aren't helping either. And EW DIFFERENT BREAK LENGTHS ON EACH DIFFICULTY. Seems pointless. The background doesn't really fit the song either.

Easy:

00:30:200 (1) - Remove finish.

Hard:

00:50:825 (3) - This could be better. It's not constructed very carefully and it shows.

Amazing.

Larto

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Larto 2010-06-09T18:04:22+00:00