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ZUN - Voyage 1969

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Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Sushi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 20 août 2010 at 10:57:41

Artist: ZUN
Title: Voyage 1969
Source: Touhou
Tags: Dagonpater Eiyashou Imperishable Night Eientei Kaguya Houraisan Eirin Yagokoro
BPM: 162,05
Filesize: 3051kb
Play Time: 02:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dagonpater's Hard (4,87 stars, 299 notes)
  2. Easy (0,97 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 524 notes)
  4. Normal (3,28 stars, 178 notes)
Download: ZUN - Voyage 1969
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oh look, cookies!

Do I need to say it's from touhou, and created by ZUN?

Many Thanks to dagonpater for the Diff and some stuff

Thanks to Zekira for timing.

enjoy~
Last edited by Sushi , edited 51 times in total.
Sonic Fumes
228 posts
Joined November 2009
Sonic Fumes
:) star
wtf, only 7 notes?
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Etoile~

500 post en même temps >.<
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
~Stur !

Quoi ?! Vous savez pas ce qu'est un stur !?

Bande d'incultes !!!
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
as far as I got
bpm / offset / +something
162.020 / 250 / (4/4)
162.010 / 18025
162.000 / 23950
162.000 / 35801 / 3/4
161.800 / 53578 / 4/4
163.000 / 77311
162.400 / 83200
162.000 / 89111
162.000 / 112814 / 3/4
161.800 / 130591 / 4/4

.020 - .000 section could be 020- 015 - 010 - 050 - 000 or something like that.
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Sushi
dvorak, you timing seems to be doubtful.
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
=O

star™
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar
Je suis ghey
Tu es ghey
Il/Elle est ghey
Nous somme ghey
Vous êtes ghey
Ils/Elles sont ghey

Trop bon mon français non ? :>
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
The maps are in very good shape. ZUN and Touhou fans wont form an angry mob and burn you at the stake. Star.


Overall

Add Imperishable Night and dagonpater to tags.

Normal

01:14:306 (1) - Straighten the slider points. They are crooked.

Dagonpater's Hard

Timing Section
Extra section
Inherited section Offset 120667 Remove?

00:20:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater. Notes 1 and 2 are not at the same angle as the sliders and even the sliders look angled very slightly different.

00:21:538 (5,6,7,1) - I think this could be mapped better. You kind of left a gap in between the sliders and added an odd combo jump to stack on a slider that reverses on a tone that I can't determine. 00:22:278 (6,7) - Part of the red combo.

Lunatic

00:24:500 (3) - Move down 2 units.

00:39:134 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe 4 should be more displaced in this to enhance the effect.

00:41:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unequal spacing. Fix.

01:53:920 (5) - Move down 1 unit. (Fixes spacing)

02:14:194 (4,5,1,2) - I think this would flow better if note 5 and 1 were more arched. I'm not sure how you would fit the slider end of note 1 though.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[General]
The background has somewhat bad proporations. crop it to 971x728.

osb. is haunting this map <.<

[Normal]
I kinda wished you mapped the full song on this :/
Also a bit too hard for the easiest difficulty.

00:51:351 (1) - (Minor suggestion) end this at 00:52:462.

[Hard]
The clap usage is kinda annoying, Claps every 1/1 is a bit too much imo.

02:32:798 (1) - Add finish.

[Lunatic]
This is too hard for me :/

00:16:170 (6,7,8,9,1) - This thing looks kinda ugly (I'm mostly thinking of between (9,1)) It shouldn't be that hard to make this look better.
00:57:182 (5,6) - Move down a grid? I think that's look better

Solid.
*star*
Fraolinch
577 posts
Joined November 2009
Fraolinch

TheVileOne wrote:

The maps are in very good shape. ZUN and Touhou fans wont form an angry mob and burn you at the stake. Star. Thanks ^^


Dagonpater's Hard

Timing Section
Extra section
Inherited section Offset 120667 Remove? Done.

00:20:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater. Notes 1 and 2 are not at the same angle as the sliders and even the sliders look angled very slightly different. Done. I think it's fine now.

00:21:538 (5,6,7,1) - I think this could be mapped better. You kind of left a gap in between the sliders and added an odd combo jump to stack on a slider that reverses on a tone that I can't determine. 00:22:278 (6,7) - Part of the red combo. 00:22:093 - I added a hit circle. 00:22:278 - I added a new combo and removed the one at 00:22:463 -

Xgor wrote:

[Hard]
The clap usage is kinda annoying, Claps every 1/1 is a bit too much imo. I don't think I will change anything to HS.

02:32:798 (1) - Add finish. There's no point adding a finish here imo. It wouldn't fit the music.

*star* Thanks ;)
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
:)
Alice
2,673 posts
Joined October 2008
Alice
SPOILER

scar1410 wrote:

Je suis ghey
Tu es ghey
Il/Elle est ghey
Nous sommes ghey
Vous êtes ghey
Ils/Elles sont ghey

Trop bon mon français non ? :> Non.

J'ai la flemme de modder alors j'ai juste testé la Lunatic. C'est dit. <:
Mais je pense pas que je dois te priver de star pour autant~~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Kitsunemimi
2,188 posts
Joined April 2009
Kitsunemimi
I haven't modded a map... in seven months...
But I love this song so whatever~

I think I'll start using a colour system, coloured suggestions are more important.

[Easy]
00:42:466 (1,2,3,4) - Unintuitive. (I clicked them like they were whole beats) Try using a slider? ...Actually, the following notes are like this, so I'm unsure about this one.
Looking good. Looks like a map of a long time ago though xD

[Normal]
01:14:306 (1) - Heeyy what dahh.. It's not perfectly straight!!! /jokes
I like the actual difficulties of these maps, they're not too hard unlike many maps recently.

[Dagonpater's Hard]
00:41:355 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda weird. Stick with the rhythm/timing of the music.
01:06:901 (5) - Bad anti-jump
01:12:640 (5) - Looks kinda weird since it's uneven, but not important at all. Do it like 01:30:411 (5).
01:58:363 (7,8,1,2,3) - Oh no, it's not with the rhythm/timing again.
02:10:585 (1) - It's off again. But it's 1.5 beats just like the other ones, so use those and flip it.
Couple of random errors, nothing too bad. c:

[Lunatic]
00:43:762 - 00:51:074 - Spacing inconsistency. Looks like combo of 00:48:019 (3) doesn't fit.
01:15:046 (3,4) - A bit screwy imo. (my cursor kept going instead of stopping there for that one note)
01:43:924 (1,2) - Inconsistent slider reverses.
02:03:639 (7) - Covering notes? Try moving it a bit to the side like you did on 02:03:639 (7).
I have a couple of other complaints about mapping tricks that I screwed up on while playing, but those are just me. Aside from me sucking, it looks really fun!~

Good job on the map. Didn't find any alarming errors or anything, and the maps are pretty fun to play, so star for you!
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
I tried to mod this but couldn't really find anything ( <--------- noob modder :P). I'm not even sure what im suggesting are even mistakes, for all I know you could have planned it like this. Oh well here are my suggestions anyway :3

~Dagonpater's Hard~
00:33:200 (2,3) - spacing
00:33:570 (3,4) - ^
00:33:756 (4,5) - ^
00:55:424 (4,5) - ^
01:06:531 (4,5) - ^
01:10:603 (6,7) - ^
01:39:111 (7,8) - ^
02:14:842 (2,3) - ^
02:15:212 (3,4) - ^
02:15:768 (4,5) - ^

...that is all (told you I was a noob XD )

~star~ goodluck
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Hard
00:19:317 (x) - add a note here?
00:21:908 (x) - ^
00:32:645 (x) - ^
00:41:355 (1,2,3,4) - sounds weird maybe like this? http://puu.sh/Ut ?
01:06:901 (5) - new combo?
01:09:770 (5) - ^
01:12:640 (5) - ^
01:45:868 (7) - remove this?
01:57:252 (3) - new combo
02:13:361 (x) - add note here
02:14:842 (2,3,4,5) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/UI
02:23:913 (5) - new combo
02:26:690 (5) - ^
02:28:171 (9) - add a note?
02:29:652 (5) - new combo?
Fraolinch
577 posts
Joined November 2009
Fraolinch

Haneii wrote:

I tried to mod this but couldn't really find anything ( <--------- noob modder :P). I'm not even sure what im suggesting are even mistakes, for all I know you could have planned it like this. Oh well here are my suggestions anyway :3

~Dagonpater's Hard~
00:33:200 (2,3) - spacing I did it on purpose
00:33:570 (3,4) - ^ No spacing problem here
00:33:756 (4,5) - ^^
00:55:424 (4,5) - ^ Jump
01:06:531 (4,5) - ^ No spacing problem here
01:10:603 (6,7) - ^ Done on purpose
01:39:111 (7,8) - ^ No spacing problem here
02:14:842 (2,3) - ^ Done on purpose
02:15:212 (3,4) - ^ No spacing problem here
02:15:768 (4,5) - ^^

...that is all (told you I was a noob XD I agree 8) (I'm joking of course))

~star~ goodluck Thank you very much ^^

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:19:317 (x) - add a note here? done
00:21:908 (x) - ^ done, then fixed the next notes
00:32:645 (x) - ^ done
00:41:355 (1,2,3,4) - sounds weird maybe like this? http://puu.sh/Ut ? I already fixed it thanks to Harris73's mod, but I still haven't send it to Sushi971. I'll do it today.
01:06:901 (5) - new combo? ^
01:09:770 (5) - ^ done
01:12:640 (5) - ^^
01:45:868 (7) - remove this? done. It actually sounds better now.
01:57:252 (3) - new combo done
02:13:361 (x) - add note here ^
02:14:842 (2,3,4,5) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/UI Done. Great idea.
02:23:913 (5) - new combo done
02:26:690 (5) - ^^
02:28:171 (9) - add a note? ^
02:29:652 (5) - new combo? ^
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Le titre de la musique, c'est pas plutôt "Voyager 1969" ?

Faust
osu! Alumni
4,783 posts
Joined January 2009
Faust
Lunatic - 00:12:837 - Pattern is neither here nor there. It doesn't look more intuitive than it is odd. I suggest moving 3,4 and 5 a little more towards the left side so there's a better spacing.

00:19:877 - Whoa, kind of messy. The notes are too packed in one area.
My suggestion would be to shift 00:19:159 more to the left side and do the same for this

00:28:763 - wow, this is hard to read. I recognize the pattern there though, I think you could add more
spacing for 3 and 7 so it doesn't look confusing.

01:09:122 - Flip this slider vertically.

02:03:361 - This is a huge rift. Spacing doesn't go with the song. Move them closer.

Pretty BG and smooth map. You can have a star.
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