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placeboing - Oh My God It's Christmas!

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 22, 2010 at 12:47:44 PM

Artist: placeboing
Title: Oh My God It's Christmas!
Source: Left 4 Dead 2
Tags: Nick Ellis Rochelle Coach One of those charging things auto-tune Davidz123
BPM: 111
Filesize: 813kb
Play Time: 00:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. BOOMER (4.51 stars, 55 notes)
  2. DAVIDZ123 (4.69 stars, 57 notes)
  3. SMOKER (1.77 stars, 26 notes)
  4. TANK (5 stars, 102 notes)
Download: placeboing - Oh My God It's Christmas!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ellis, sweetie, can this wait?

16th map~.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 18 times in total.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
One of my first mods so don't laugh~

General:

I don’t think it’s a good idea to have Kiai mode throughout the map
BG Colour should be black

Smoker:

00:34:114 – Add clap?
00:41:682 - ^?


BOOMER:

00:10:940 – Slider is pretty ugly

Funny map
mekadon_old
mekadon_old
wtf L4D2 doujins
Ellis look stupid as well as all of them~~

SPOILER
SMOKER
00:30:331 (2) - 1 grid left, 1 down (grid lv2)

BOOMER
none?

TANK
00:12:967 (7) - Coach said "cut that shit out" a.k.a delete it
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Holy shit it's Christmas already?!

[General]
Left 4 Dead 2 feels more like it belong in tags, but I don't know much about this song so I might be wrong.

Do you need kiai time for this?

Background proportions is pretty bad.
Crop to 853x640


[SMOKER]
00:08:777 (1,2,3,4) - (Suggestion) Move this pattern 3,5 grids (Level 2)

[BOOMER]
00:13:102 (1) - Lazy placed spinner :<

[TANK]
00:10:940 (1) - Can't you make it the same as 00:08:777.
00:13:102 (1) - Lazy placed spinner :<

*Insert comment about what I think about the map here*
*star*
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I like the kiai D:.

I'll fix the background when I feel like it AKA while a BAT's modding it about to bubble it while I'm rushing to resize everything.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
This song doesn't needs any Kiai Times.
The MP3 ends in the worst way possible, can't you make it fade away?

[TANK]
I hate your slider speed. I said it before, I say it now.
00:13:102 (1) - Remove whistle from the beginning and end. Don't forget to remove the sldierwhistle. 00:08:777 (1) and 00:10:940 (1) do it that way, so don't break the pattern.
00:19:588 (1) - ^
00:40:060 (1) - ^
00:37:898 (1) - Remove whistle from the end.

I don't like your use of whistles <_<. Oh well, I don't like Normal Whistles anyways~

[BOOMER]
00:10:940 (1) - Make the end and the beginning at the same height.
00:17:426 (1) - ^
00:42:222 (1) - ^
00:18:507 (3) - This underlaps (1) in a weird way.

Ugh, use more points to make prettier sliders. Usually 4 or 5 points are enough to make pretty symmetrycal sliders.

[SMOKER]
00:37:898 (1) - <_< Reshape it in a straight way.
00:38:979 (2) - End 1/2 sooner (?)
00:40:060 (3) - Reshape.

Are you sure about the offset? I get like 24 ms early.

Fine, no death streams, that's an improvement...
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Some of those that wear forces
Are the same that burn crosses

Dayum you picked the best possible time to map this

General
Inheriting instead of red section kthx

SMOKER
00:13:102 (1) - Not snapped extend or shorten by half a tick
00:17:426 (1) - Ugly can't really be bothered to evaporate. I forgot the word I'm looking for so that'll have to do
00:18:507 (2) - Align start and end horizontally, may need grid 3 for this

BOOMBER
00:20:534 (5) - Delete? Fix spacing.
00:31:412 (1) - Yo make it perfectly staight and symmetrise

TANK
00:13:102 (1) - Align start and finish
00:17:696 (2) - ^, symmetrise
00:39:385 (6) - Overlaps with 1, move so it isn't. Suggestion.

Not the best map I've seen

Wait nvm
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
The timing section is there because I had to manually loop the mp3 (Otherwise this map would have been extremely short), and I couldn't really get it to be completely in 4/4 (aka I was lazy and said "I could use an uninherited timing section."). I wouldn't have really cared, as I was beasty and cut it perfectly with the music, but still, something with pusling or something made me have to care~.

I'll try fixing the mp3's end.

Thanks for the modding ;D.
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[SMOKER]

00:13:077 (1) - For the sake of the AIMod's suggestions, you should make it shorter, because it's a bit hard for newbies. Make it end 1/1 earlier
00:19:564 (1) - Remove the clap in the repeat, it doesn't fit with the clap-hitsound pattern
00:32:493 (2) - Whistle at the start
00:35:466 (1) - 1/1 earlier?

[BOOMER]

No problems, just...increase the circle size?

[TANK]

00:21:996 (2) - This is very hide, try to stack its end with the other previous end's slider
00:27:126 (x) - Just to make this more crazy I suggest to you to add a spinner here, making it end 00:28:747 here

Starred. °-°
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Nice xD only lol!
Star

PD: Delete .osb u_u and resize u BG to 1024x768 :P
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
3,087 posts
Here since the beginning
RemmyX25
OH MY GOD ITS CHRISTMAS
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Oh... I couldn't find any problem and my suggestion... I'm sorry:o

This song is interesting for me.
Nice map~
star & gl ;)
-David
291 posts
Joined August 2009
-David
Mod! [REQUESTED AT QUEUE]

Anything marked with a * is a suggestion.

[SMOKER]
00:37:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3 line up with 4 *

[BOOMER]
Fine.

[TANK]
00:17:672 (2) - Move right 2 *

Everything else seems fine to me.

Guest diff!

[attachment=0:4db7a]placeboing - Oh My God It's Christmas! (CDFA) [DAVIDZ123].osu[/attachment:4db7a]

+Star!
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'll accept your diff~. Just have to do some modding on it before I submit~.

EDIT: Just a summary of what I did.

Spacing was off in some places.
Added a few notes. Removed like, 1 or two
Fixed some sliders.
Combos went a bit weird sometimes.

But overall it's good~.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Song Setup (All)

Add "Davidz123" to Tags

[DAVIDZ123]

00:09:834 (1,2,3,4) - (1) and (3) aren't snapped on each other correctly (kinda nazi but...w/e just do it)

Starr'd
-David
291 posts
Joined August 2009
-David

animask wrote:

[DAVIDZ123]

00:09:834 (1,2,3,4) - (1) and (3) aren't snapped on each other correctly (kinda nazi but...w/e just do it)
Fixed!

[attachment=0:5d5d2]placeboing - Oh My God It's Christmas! (CDFA) [DAVIDZ123].osu[/attachment:5d5d2]

CDFA wrote:

I'll accept your diff~. Just have to do some modding on it before I submit~.

EDIT: Just a summary of what I did.

Spacing was off in some places.
Added a few notes. Removed like, 1 or two
Fixed some sliders.
Combos went a bit weird sometimes.

But overall it's good~.
Thanks! It's kinda how I map a bit.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
[SMOKER]

there are not errors.

[BOOMER]
nice ~ :D

[DAVIDZ123]
nice ~ :?

[TANK]

too cruel :o


merry map ~ successes.


~STAR :!:
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
sorry... but don't like mapping :cry:
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

You know,just before you I was modding a ~4:30 map,so you can't even imagine how happy am I.

[General]
00:45:871 (x) - Kiai ends here.

[SMOKER]
Fine.

[BOOMER]
00:20:645 (6) - Confusing.Just put (4,5,6) at the same place.
00:22:942 (4) - Delete it.Sounds much better w/o it.

[DAVIDZ123]
00:13:618 (3) - Uh..fix the shape,please.

[TANK]
00:37:898 (1) - What's the hell with it? Is it drunk? Make a straight line here,please.

Good luck,star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

YGOkid8 wrote:

sorry... but don't like mapping :cry:
Cool.
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