1. _vanity's Insane (3.77 stars, 596 notes)
2. Advanced (2.53 stars, 399 notes)
3. Fizz's Insane (3.78 stars, 554 notes)
4. Hoen's Easy (1.16 stars, 121 notes)
5. moph's Hard (3.3 stars, 482 notes)
6. Normal (1.71 stars, 250 notes)

Hoen's Easy by Hoen
Normal
Advanced
Hard by moph
Fizz's Insane by Fizz
_vanity's Insane by _vanity

1. tags? (pop, rock, punk, idk e.e)
2. mp3 needs to be 192kbps, ask me if you need help with converting
3. double check for unsnapped notes

1. Blankets so many blankets! I'll mention this once 00:11:442 (1,2) - use the slider circle thing as a guide for the blanket
2. 00:12:324 (2) - I recommend that you shorten this slider to 1/1. 00:12:765 - this note shouldn't be ignore imo, then add a single to 00:13:206 -?
3. 00:14:530 - This gap isn't necessary, you should map this.
4. 00:15:853 (2) - there are two strong notes here 00:15:853 - and 00:16:074 - try one of these
   
   example

   
   http://puu.sh/hbWRj.jpg
5. 00:19:383 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - inconsistent spacing here, try keeping it the same
6. 00:24:677 (2) - 1/2 slider instead?
7. 00:25:118 (3) - take out the reverse and add a single here 00:25:559 - this might just be my opinion, but i recommend you don't end sliders on these large white ticks, strong beats such as this should be clickable.
8. 00:24:236 (1,2) - stack the end of (2) onto (1)?
9. 00:26:442 (2,1) - stack the ends of these two?
10. 00:30:412 (4) - same story with ending sliders on strong beats, it just feels better to click on stronger beats like that.
11. 00:45:412 (1,2) - rather plain for that drum solo there right? try using more 1/2 notes here
12. 00:54:236 (2,1) - stack the starts? just for neatness
13. 00:58:206 (3,3) - stack?
14. 00:49:383 (1) - as for these long sliders i think a 1/1 reverse slider would fit better as it maps 00:49:824 - either way its okay
15. 01:19:383 (2) - same story as on the second line
16. 01:23:795 (7,2) - fix stack (use the coordinate thing for precise movement)
17. nothing else new to say, try making the map neater tho mostly with your blanketing and stacking. Rhythm overall is pretty solid except for the ending sliders on large ticks thing, I really recommend against that. I know this is a normal but you could really up the complexity of the rhythm here a little. Most of the map is 1/1, I really suggest you map some of the 1/2 guitar and drum bits that stand out to you. This will not only make the map more interesting but will reduce the large diff gap between this and the hard.

1. HP5?
2. *Repeats speech about slider ends on large white ticks*
3. *Repeats speech about blankets and stacks*
4. 00:11:442 - single here plz, even if you are mapping the vocals its weird to have nothing there when a strong first note is present
5. 00:19:162 - map this plz, there's an obvious beat there 00:20:486 - this gap here is fine as theres nothing in between
6. 00:21:809 - ^
7. 00:45:853 (4,5) - triple? there's a beat here 00:45:964 - should be okay since the bpm is low
8. 00:46:626 - ^ note here as well (optional)
9. 00:52:912 (3,4,5) - this triple should start here 00:53:133 - listen carefully
10. 00:53:684 - note here as well
11. 01:06:148 (2,3,4) - unnecessary triple
12. 01:28:427 - same as before, should be mapped
13. 01:52:912 (4,5) - same story as before, triple?
14. 01:59:971 (3,4,5) - same as before, needs to be moved down 1/2
15. 02:06:478 - single here
16. 02:13:206 (6,7,8) - unnecessary like before
17. 02:59:751 (2,3) - triple, 03:00:192 (4,5) - same here, might be overkill but will make that part epic
18. 03:07:030 (3,4,5) - move down 1/2, strong triple there like before, where as where you have it now doesn't need one.
19. 03:12:986 (3,4) - triple, 03:13:206 (4,1) - same here, again making the section more epic to play?
    
    example

    
20. 03:14:420 - should be a note here to make it a 5 note stream, present in the music (drums)
21. 03:20:265 (1,2,3) - again not necessary as nothing in the music supports it being there.

Kawaii Muffin wrote:

Hey.
From #Modreqs

General

The volume change is cool, but I feel like youre over using it a bit.
Maybe experiment with more than just the normal audio sampleset
Some sliders dont look nice
Some consistancy issues, mostly with hitsounds.

Normal

00:14:089 (3) - That beat needs some friends
00:19:383 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - The NC doesn't really fit the song, Ik it is for the follow point, but it seems odd imo
00:33:280 (1) - Finish (^since you added a finish on a similar rhythm before^)
00:34:603 (2) - ^
00:45:412 (1) - Maybe use a slider to express the drums that comes in
01:26:001 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - Same thing as before about the NC
01:33:501 (2,3,4) - Odd change in volume
01:50:706 (1) - Clap
01:51:148 (2) - Remove clap
02:05:265 (3) - Finish
02:07:030 (2,3) - Remove finish
02:08:795 (2) - This should not have a reverse arrow.
02:59:971 (4) - Volume is lowered in the middle of slider
03:29:971 (1) - Finish

Hard

00:33:059 (7) - Remove clap?
00:34:383 (3) - NC
00:34:603 (1) - Remove NC
01:25:559 (6) - Finish
02:46:736 (8) - Lower the volume a bit more

Hope this helps!

moph wrote:

From ✞Kuki and Moph's Modding Q✞
slighty late sorryyy

[General]

1. tags? (pop, rock, punk, idk e.e) onto it
2. mp3 needs to be 192kbps, ask me if you need help with converting still looking for an mp3 x(
3. double check for unsnapped notes

I'm on cutting edge so aimod gets kinda weird

[Normal]

1. Blankets so many blankets! I'll mention this once 00:11:442 (1,2) - use the slider circle thing as a guide for the blanket cleaned-up
2. 00:12:324 (2) - I recommend that you shorten this slider to 1/1. 00:12:765 - this note shouldn't be ignore imo, then add a single to 00:13:206 -? done
3. 00:14:530 - This gap isn't necessary, you should map this. right
4. 00:15:853 (2) - there are two strong notes here 00:15:853 - and 00:16:074 - try one of these done
   
   example

   
   http://puu.sh/hbWRj.jpg
5. 00:19:383 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - inconsistent spacing here, try keeping it the same done
6. 00:24:677 (2) - 1/2 slider instead? 1/2 reverse slider added instead
7. 00:25:118 (3) - take out the reverse and add a single here 00:25:559 - this might just be my opinion, but i recommend you don't end sliders on these large white ticks, strong beats such as this should be clickable. i'll keep it as it is for now
8. 00:24:236 (1,2) - stack the end of (2) onto (1)? invalid
9. 00:26:442 (2,1) - stack the ends of these two? invalid
10. 00:30:412 (4) - same story with ending sliders on strong beats, it just feels better to click on stronger beats like that. leaving as it is
11. 00:45:412 (1,2) - rather plain for that drum solo there right? try using more 1/2 notes here added something interesting
12. 00:54:236 (2,1) - stack the starts? just for neatness invalid
13. 00:58:206 (3,3) - stack? invalid
14. 00:49:383 (1) - as for these long sliders i think a 1/1 reverse slider would fit better as it maps 00:49:824 - either way its okay no change
15. 01:19:383 (2) - same story as on the second line done
16. 01:23:795 (7,2) - fix stack (use the coordinate thing for precise movement) invalid
17. nothing else new to say, try making the map neater tho mostly with your blanketing and stacking. Rhythm overall is pretty solid except for the ending sliders on large ticks thing, I really recommend against that. I know this is a normal but you could really up the complexity of the rhythm here a little. Most of the map is 1/1, I really suggest you map some of the 1/2 guitar and drum bits that stand out to you. This will not only make the map more interesting but will reduce the large diff gap between this and the hard. I'll see if it is definitely a problem in the future or not

[Hard]

1. HP5? applied
2. *Repeats speech about slider ends on large white ticks* what's so bad out this? I still don't get it
3. *Repeats speech about blankets and stacks* done
4. 00:11:442 - single here plz, even if you are mapping the vocals its weird to have nothing there when a strong first note is present added
5. 00:19:162 - map this plz, there's an obvious beat there 00:20:486 - this gap here is fine as theres nothing in between added
6. 00:21:809 - ^ done
7. 00:45:853 (4,5) - triple? there's a beat here 00:45:964 - should be okay since the bpm is low added
8. 00:46:626 - ^ note here as well (optional) added
9. 00:52:912 (3,4,5) - this triple should start here 00:53:133 - listen carefully modified
10. 00:53:684 - note here as well added
11. 01:06:148 (2,3,4) - unnecessary triple changed to slider
12. 01:28:427 - same as before, should be mapped mapped
13. 01:52:912 (4,5) - same story as before, triple? done
14. 01:59:971 (3,4,5) - same as before, needs to be moved down 1/2 moved
15. 02:06:478 - single here added
16. 02:13:206 (6,7,8) - unnecessary like before changed to slider
17. 02:59:751 (2,3) - triple, 03:00:192 (4,5) - same here, might be overkill but will make that part epic epicified
18. 03:07:030 (3,4,5) - move down 1/2, strong triple there like before, where as where you have it now doesn't need one. done
19. 03:12:986 (3,4) - triple, 03:13:206 (4,1) - same here, again making the section more epic to play? made epic
    
    example

    
20. 03:14:420 - should be a note here to make it a 5 note stream, present in the music (drums) yay for 5notestreams x(
21. 03:20:265 (1,2,3) - again not necessary as nothing in the music supports it being there. ok

Needs a bit more work on the neatness scale but nice overall!
Good luck

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ coming from my modding Q~
Yay I love this song :3
Let's start~!

[General]

1. Why don't put the offset at 11,442? There's no sound at 854 so it wouldn't make sense to put the offset there... Then resnap the kiai I like having the timer point as close to the beginning of the song as possible. However if this makes it unrankable, I will change the offset
2. You don't need to check "widescreen support" (song setup -> design -> widescreen support) since you don't have storyboard; unless you wanted to add one. Storyboard in the works :s
3. You don't need to check "letterbox during breaks" as well. Storyboard in the works :s
4. You also can set the combo colors so it would match with the background (song setup -> colours) I suggest to set it to orange, red, until chocolate. changed colors to lighter hues because the storyboard is going to be very bright/wacky
5. I think you can use custom hitsound for clap like drum sound or something because the sound in the song is mainly drum, not clap currently looking for a custom hitsound

[Normal]

1. So many green lines *^* If this makes it unrankable, then i'll tidy it up
2. Check AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) and check the "check distance snap" option. There are some DS problems, you should fix them. there's just one left (but there is a whole beat delay and i can't make it snap without it looking weird 01:10:559 (4) -
3. 00:11:442 (1) - You might want to add finish hitsound at slider's head done
4. 00:13:648 (4) - I think you should avoid this kind of stack on Normal because it might be surprising for new players, but it's still acceptable. we'll see if I can leave it in
5. 00:14:089 (5,3) - Stack properly done
6. 00:30:412 (5,2) - ^ done
7. 00:16:295 (4) - Maybe whistle+finish would be better than clap at head... done and applied to rest of the diff and the hard
8. 00:23:353 (5) - ^ done
9. 00:30:412 (5) - ^ etc done
10. 00:33:280 (1,1) - Overlapped maybe try to move (1) elsewhere, like this http://puu.sh/hhLiu/a0b8ebb1cf.jpg then DS the rest edited that part
11. 00:33:280 (1) - No need to NC here removed
12. 00:46:736 (3) - NC and add finish at head done
13. 01:18:501 (1) - Add finish at head done
14. 01:22:030 (7) - Remove the reverse to follow the vocal better, since the vocal ends here 01:22:251 done
15. 01:22:912 (1,2) - If you apply the mod above, you can change these circles to a 1/2 reverse slider which starts here 01:22:692 for better polarity. http://puu.sh/hhLNw/0f22579d45.jpg edited that bit
16. 01:24:677 (2) - Be careful, reverse arrow shouldn't be covered should be fine
17. 01:29:971 (2,4) - Poor overlap, move (4) a little bit down i want to leave it as is :/
18. 01:49:383 (4) - DS this thing this was where I got to with the revamp. any DS issues after this was because I haven't finished revamping past this point
19. 01:53:795 (1) - Add finish at head added
20. 02:12:324 (2,4) - Stack properly done
21. 02:14:971 (1) - Add finish done
22. 02:34:603 (1,2) - DS these mentioned above
23. 02:41:662 (3) - ^ and the rest I think mentioned above
24. Wait, you seem to change default Distance Snapping midway, I don't think that's allowed on Normal .-. mentioned above
25. 03:10:559 (1,3) - I don't really like this overlap, it's kinda trappy for normal imo .-. I think you better just make slider bows http://puu.sh/hhM9k/2fe0602232.jpg not a sliderbow but something else
26. 03:00:853 (1) - add Finish at head done
27. 03:22:030 (1) - ^ done
28. 03:27:324 (2,4) - Overlap -,- change (4)'s shape maybe done
29. Well, overall it's a good map, but you still need improvement at placement, blankets, stack, overlap, and hitsounds

[Hard]

1. I think AR 8 is too fast, you can try 7.5 or 7.8, you also can increase the HP to 6 i wanna leave it 8 :/ but HP changed to 6
2. 00:14:971 (3,5) - Stack properly done
3. I see there are still many stack problems, I want you to look at it and selfmod it after my mod hopefully most of them are fixed
4. 01:28:206 (3,4,1,2,3) - Make a perfect star shape maybe? I think it looks better
5. 01:32:398 (4) - You might want to at hitsound at this "tss" sound. Maybe whistle or something sounds kinda unnatural there so not added (the lone whistle)
6. 01:32:618 (5) - NC here instead of here 01:32:839 (1) - ok
7. 01:36:148 (3,5) - Actually I think this kind of slider bows are ugly, this would be better imo http://puu.sh/hhMMa/81e11f86fd.jpg then it would be followed by a jump :3 done
8. 01:40:339 (1) - No need to NC here (01:39:677 (1) - poor lone combo ) NC removed
9. 01:41:662 (4) - I saw a lot of these on your map, it's good, but I think it would be better if it's balanced, I mean, like this http://puu.sh/hhMTE/db5f9a5af8.jpg instead of one part long and the other part short good point, I think I was just lazy there
10. 02:12:324 (3,6) - dat trappy sliders >.< challenge set? :<
11. 02:18:942 Maybe you should map this part for hard, but I think it's good idea to add a short break, so you might start here 02:25:559 I kinda wanna leave it so it's similar to the normal
12. 03:00:412 (7) - add NC if you want to change SV suddenly like this so the player would be prepared added
13. 03:07:471 (6) - ^ added
14. That's all, good map, but need improvement on hitsounding (especially finish hitsound) try to selfmod and add finish hitsound whenever you feel necessary

Good luck, hope it's get ranked soon ^^
Best map of this song so far

Garven wrote:

Did some basic modding on new combo use and pattern construction.

Good luck!

PlaceHolder
I'll mod the map tonight
This is one of my favorite song when i was a kid :'), owww you make me cry :')

1. I think those normal Hits sounds like overuse, you might wanna add this custom Soft Hits Into your mapset
2. Remove pop, rock, punk on the tag please?
3. Please use AR4 in Normal
4. Please set DS in Normal into 0.9x for the sake of Newbies
5. Use the Smallest Grid in Normal please
6. uh, i think 1,30 Slider velocity in Normal is too fast ;w;, can you set them into 1,10 or 1,00 only?

1. 00:11:488 (1) - change into 1/2 slider please? and then add a 1/2 slider too in here 00:11:929 - (following vocals)
2. 00:13:252 (4) - remove this? and then add a 1/2 slider here 00:13:032 -
3. 00:13:694 (5) - change into 1/2 slider fits better
4. 00:13:694 (5) - add a note if you want to follow the vocal here
5. 00:15:017 (1) - Move this to 00:15:238 - and then add a notes ay 00:14:797 - and 00:15:017 -
6. 00:17:002 - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/hpbmP/738cb72f83.jpg
7. 00:22:076 (1) - 1/2 fits better C:
8. 00:22:517 - add a note if you accept above^
9. 00:24:723 - 00:26:267 - try this pattern http://puu.sh/hpbK4/f8d43e8e8f.jpg

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my M4M Queue

Thanks for modding my map earlier! Time I return the favour..

General
- Your timing's fine, but maybe you could adjust your timing points by setting them 18 milliseconds earlier? (e.g. your uninherited point at 900ms should be adjusted to 882ms). it's probably just me though i can't see anything like this? maybe the set you have is not updated

Normal
- Fun map for a normal, the rhythm is good too
- The note at 00:13:694 isn slightly misaligned with 00:12:811(2). Move it one unit to the right to fix this done
- Why is there a middle pivot in the slider at 00:15:017(1)? Right-click it to remove it done
- Slider at 00:26:488(2) could be made less curvy to better blanket 00:26:047(1) done
- Slider at 00:29:135(1) could be made less curvy to better blanket 00:30:017(2) done
- Blanket fix at 00:41:488(3). I'll let you figure out these ones on your own done
- Blanket fix at 00:49:429(4) done
- Maybe replace the notes at 01:07:958(1, 2) with a 1/1 slider?i want to emphasize the drums at this part. so, not applied
- Slight misalignment at 01:24:723(5). You can fix this by moving this slider from its current position (x241, y200) to (x240, y199) done
- Blanket fix at 1:29:135(1) and 01:30:017(2) done
- Slight misalignment at 01:59:576(3) with 01:57:370(1). Move from its current position (x353, y281) to (x352, y280) done

Hard
- Another fun beatmap to play
- Consider making the note at 00:33:988(2) a 1/2 slider because the "-ny" when she says "deny ends on 00:34:208 done
- ^^ at 00:35:311(3) (same reason as above) done
- Add a note at 00:39:944, and make the notes at 00:40:164(1, 2) 1/2 sliders because the guitar riffs (I think that's what they're called?) end on the red offbeats there done. sounds and plays a lot better now
- ^^ at 00:41:488(1, 2) (same reason as above) done
- Add a note at 00:43:914, and make the notes at 00:44:135(2, 3) 1/2 sliders (same reason as above) did a slight modification but not exact
- Replace the notes at 01:00:458(5, 6) with a 1/2 slider perhaps? leaving as it is to emphasize the "how" and "we"
- Replace the note at 01:41:047(3) with a 1/2 slider because the "-ng" when she says "along" ends on the red offbeat done
- Slider at 02:13:252(1) isn't properly aligned with the slider at 02:12:370(3). This is an easy fix; just delete the slider at 02:13:252, and copy/paste the slider from 02:12:370. Remember to reverse (Ctrl + G) the start and end positions of the slider if you do this done. I dunno why I didn't do this
- Some blanketing issues. Happy hunting the hunt is on!

That's about it. It's been a while since I've listened to Paramore myself, heheh. Good luck with your map, and hope this helps

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

this is the best version of the image I could find (which is unfortunate cause it seems to have a mix of upscaling and compression artifacts). I cropped+resized to 1366x768, and then I added some noise to mask the artifacts and give the illusion of quality (lol).

image

no kds

1. soft-sliderslide3 and soft-slidertick3 aren't used right now. Unless you're gonna use them later, delete them
2. I think that both AR are a bit too high for these kind of bpm and difficulty. 4 for normal and 6~7 for hard is enough imo

• I really suggest you to use grid tiny (ctrl+1) or no grid snap at all to unify your DS. Right now, it isn't really even almost on the whole map. Recheck the whole map cuz of it ><

1. 00:20:752 - add note for the clear vocal and instrument(?
2. 00:29:135 (1,2,3) - make distance more even
3. 00:34:429 (3) - this note isnt needed at all for vocals. otherwise this whole pattern 00:32:664 (1,2,3,4) - is missleading imo ><. and makes me wonder why you don't map 00:24:282 - for example.
4. 00:45:017 (2,3,4) - rhythm is kinda lost here cuz the snares and vocals starting at this point 00:45:238 - and not being mapped. I'd suggest something like this i guess http://puu.sh/huBQH/13863e6d85.jpg
5. 00:52:958 (4,5,1) - distance needs to be more even, also it'd be nice to avoid the overlap with 00:51:194 (2) - at all, so the map keeps its neatness
6. 00:59:576 (3,4) - some claps are missing here
7. 01:00:899 (1,2,3) - this pattern would play much better if the next slider isnt like at the beginning of the previous. Something like this is nicer imo http://puu.sh/huC76/e35bfdd9a8.jpg
8. 01:02:664 (3,4) - stacking on sliders ends is a really bad idea for a normal. It's hard to read for new players and really discouraged for the people i think. It applies to all the instances too.
9. 01:08:841 (3) - finish on tail
10. 01:19:429 (2,3,4) - flow isn't really good here, would be nicer if 4 curved has a more natural movement, like this maybe http://puu.sh/huCy1/4b6ec48bae.jpg
11. 01:22:958 (3) - this rhythm is a bit weird, it reverse to "nothing". 00:22:738 (2,3,4) - something like that is better i guess, or maybe this http://puu.sh/huCJ2/88222a5fb7.jpg
12. 01:31:341 (4) - Altho i like that you mapped this beat, you didnt map this to cover the melody better at the beginning which makes the map not constant at all. Would be nice that you map these kind of beat on the first part too.
13. 01:39:723 (1,2) - flow is a bit iffy imo. If you rotate 2 like -45° looks a lot better, doesnt it?
14. 01:51:635 (1,2) - swap nc to keep constancy(?
15. 02:17:885 (7) - you dont need this note at all and even 02:18:326 (9) - . 02:17:664 (6,7,8,9,10) - this whole pattern creates a peak on this section that doesnt really fit the music neither.
16. 02:32:885 (2) - i'd remove this note if i were you. So this pattern follows vocals on a nicer way
17. 02:36:194 (1) - clap on tail
18. 02:46:120 (5,6,7) - this pattern feels a bit awkward, cuz how the drums sound. It'd be better to use 1/1 slider imo so it doesnt sound out of place http://puu.sh/huDru/d868c3bc4e.jpg
19. 02:50:311 (1,2) - the way these looks isnt really cool. If you move 2 somewhere more away like x104y160, it'll looks a lot better
20. 03:03:547 (5) - this sliderslide has drum-sampleset which makes the slilent sliderlide not work xD. Change it to Auto pls

1. Finishes are overused imo >< Some sounds cool but others are just out of place, for example 00:19:649 (1) - 00:20:973 (1) - 00:34:649 (2) - 00:33:326 (1) - 00:52:076 (4) - 01:00:458 (5,6) - etc. Just go over the map and see places where's neither cymbal nor high impact music that makes you want to add finishes.
2. NC'ng is unconsistent and wierd. How you did on Normal was nice. Adding NC every 1 or 2 measures is much better than how it's right now
3. 00:22:958 (6,1) - would be nice if these were stacked or not overlapped at all. Now looks a bit ugly to me. Breaking a bit your DS on hard isn't a real problem.
4. 00:41:488 (1,2) - these claps are really annoying ><, cuz there's no snare on those places
5. 00:42:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it'd be much better to use a more constant distance between thse notes cuz it's the same rhythm as a whole. Changing it for 00:45:238 (1) - is fine tho
6. 00:58:252 (2,4) - this overlap is just ugly ;_; could you avoid it?
7. 01:36:855 (4,5) - ^
8. 01:00:899 (1) - this should have finish, (instead of the notes before this one)
9. 02:17:885 (2,3,4,5) - i think you should use higher distance between these. The music doesnt get as slower as it does here 01:10:605 (1,2,3) - for instance.
10. 02:32:664 (1) - using 1/1 here is quite weird. Music is faster and vocals are at 02:32:885 - too. Altho i'd do something totally different like http://puu.sh/huF16/9ba492d68a.jpg
11. 02:44:797 (3) - delete this? so it's constant with 02:36:194 (1,2) - . And sounds cooler too :3
12. 02:47:223 (1,2,3,1,2) - unify distance please ><
13. 03:07:517 (1) - this slow down on the middle of the whole kiai is weird and doesnt play well at all. Also, you dont do this kind of thing on hard, specially when you use 0.75 vs 1.5. Others like 03:00:458 (1) - may be questionable, dunno.
14. 03:13:804 (2) - there's nothing on the music there, but yes here 03:13:583 -
15. 03:17:223 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pentagon looks bad, cuz some small overlaps that the notes have. You can either use the polygon tool or not use grid snap to do these kind of stuffs, so it looks neater

Milan- wrote:

hi

[general]

1. soft-sliderslide3 and soft-slidertick3 aren't used right now. Unless you're gonna use them later, delete them deleted soft-slidertick3 but kept soft-sliderslide3. I think it's being used to mute the slider sound
2. I think that both AR are a bit too high for these kind of bpm and difficulty. 4 for normal and 6~7 for hard is enough imo

made Normal ar -> 4 and Hard ar -> 7

[normal]

• I really suggest you to use grid tiny (ctrl+1) or no grid snap at all to unify your DS. Right now, it isn't really even almost on the whole map. Recheck the whole map cuz of it >< I think I rechecked it. The Grid is off

1. 00:20:752 - add note for the clear vocal and instrument(?) added
2. 00:29:135 (1,2,3) - make distance more even done
3. 00:34:429 (3) - this note isnt needed at all for vocals. otherwise this whole pattern 00:32:664 (1,2,3,4) - is missleading imo ><. and makes me wonder why you don't map 00:24:282 - for example. added a note to the second mentioned time. I want to keep the circle to emphasize on the guitar
4. 00:45:017 (2,3,4) - rhythm is kinda lost here cuz the snares and vocals starting at this point 00:45:238 - and not being mapped. I'd suggest something like this i guess http://puu.sh/huBQH/13863e6d85.jpg ok
5. 00:52:958 (4,5,1) - distance needs to be more even, also it'd be nice to avoid the overlap with 00:51:194 (2) - at all, so the map keeps its neatness changed it up a bit
6. 00:59:576 (3,4) - some claps are missing here added
7. 01:00:899 (1,2,3) - this pattern would play much better if the next slider isnt like at the beginning of the previous. Something like this is nicer imo http://puu.sh/huC76/e35bfdd9a8.jpg changed it a bit
8. 01:02:664 (3,4) - stacking on sliders ends is a really bad idea for a normal. It's hard to read for new players and really discouraged for the people i think. It applies to all the instances too. removed all consecutive stackings
9. 01:08:841 (3) - finish on tail added
10. 01:19:429 (2,3,4) - flow isn't really good here, would be nicer if 4 curved has a more natural movement, like this maybe http://puu.sh/huCy1/4b6ec48bae.jpg done
11. 01:22:958 (3) - this rhythm is a bit weird, it reverse to "nothing". 00:22:738 (2,3,4) - something like that is better i guess, or maybe this http://puu.sh/huCJ2/88222a5fb7.jpg done
12. 01:31:341 (4) - Altho i like that you mapped this beat, you didnt map this to cover the melody better at the beginning which makes the map not constant at all. Would be nice that you map these kind of beat on the first part too. modified the first part
13. 01:39:723 (1,2) - flow is a bit iffy imo. If you rotate 2 like -45° looks a lot better, doesnt it? yip ^^
14. 01:51:635 (1,2) - swap nc to keep constancy(? that was an accidental early NC :<
15. 02:17:885 (7) - you dont need this note at all and even 02:18:326 (9) - . 02:17:664 (6,7,8,9,10) - this whole pattern creates a peak on this section that doesnt really fit the music neither. changed to slider
16. 02:32:885 (2) - i'd remove this note if i were you. So this pattern follows vocals on a nicer way changed to a circle
17. 02:36:194 (1) - clap on tail added
18. 02:46:120 (5,6,7) - this pattern feels a bit awkward, cuz how the drums sound. It'd be better to use 1/1 slider imo so it doesnt sound out of place http://puu.sh/huDru/d868c3bc4e.jpg alright
19. 02:50:311 (1,2) - the way these looks isnt really cool. If you move 2 somewhere more away like x104y160, it'll looks a lot better didn't use exact co-ords but did change it
20. 03:03:547 (5) - this sliderslide has drum-sampleset which makes the slilent sliderlide not work xD. Change it to Auto pls whoops ;_;

[Hard]

1. Finishes are overused imo >< Some sounds cool but others are just out of place, for example 00:19:649 (1) - 00:20:973 (1) - 00:34:649 (2) - 00:33:326 (1) - 00:52:076 (4) - 01:00:458 (5,6) - etc. Just go over the map and see places where's neither cymbal nor high impact music that makes you want to add finishes. touched up on finishes
2. NC'ng is unconsistent and wierd. How you did on Normal was nice. Adding NC every 1 or 2 measures is much better than how it's right now changed to NC every 2 measures and in some cases, 1 measure
3. 00:22:958 (6,1) - would be nice if these were stacked or not overlapped at all. Now looks a bit ugly to me. Breaking a bit your DS on hard isn't a real problem. stacked it
4. 00:41:488 (1,2) - these claps are really annoying ><, cuz there's no snare on those places removed
5. 00:42:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it'd be much better to use a more constant distance between thse notes cuz it's the same rhythm as a whole. Changing it for 00:45:238 (1) - is fine tho widened distance snapping
6. 00:58:252 (2,4) - this overlap is just ugly ;_; could you avoid it? avoided
7. 01:36:855 (4,5) - ^ avoided
8. 01:00:899 (1) - this should have finish, (instead of the notes before this one) changed
9. 02:17:885 (2,3,4,5) - i think you should use higher distance between these. The music doesnt get as slower as it does here 01:10:605 (1,2,3) - for instance. righto
10. 02:32:664 (1) - using 1/1 here is quite weird. Music is faster and vocals are at 02:32:885 - too. Altho i'd do something totally different like http://puu.sh/huF16/9ba492d68a.jpg widened distance
11. 02:44:797 (3) - delete this? so it's constant with 02:36:194 (1,2) - . And sounds cooler too :3 sounds cooler now :3
12. 02:47:223 (1,2,3,1,2) - unify distance please >< done
13. 03:07:517 (1) - this slow down on the middle of the whole kiai is weird and doesnt play well at all. Also, you dont do this kind of thing on hard, specially when you use 0.75 vs 1.5. Others like 03:00:458 (1) - may be questionable, dunno. removed the one in kiai time but kept the others
14. 03:13:804 (2) - there's nothing on the music there, but yes here 03:13:583 - keeping it for consistency
15. 03:17:223 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pentagon looks bad, cuz some small overlaps that the notes have. You can either use the polygon tool or not use grid snap to do these kind of stuffs, so it looks neater

fixed the pentagon