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yamas03 - bloomin' octagon

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 28, 2010 at 12:41:47 PM

Artist: yamas03
Title: bloomin' octagon
Tags: Jack Black Teara MittenMasterzz Doomsday Sesame Street
BPM: 181
Filesize: 8135kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Doomsday's Triangle (1.37 stars, 55 notes)
  2. Hexagon (4.76 stars, 161 notes)
  3. MM's Octadon (5 stars, 666 notes)
  4. Octagon (5 stars, 314 notes)
  5. Square (3.51 stars, 89 notes)
Download: yamas03 - bloomin' octagon
Download: yamas03 - bloomin' octagon (no video)
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Screw counting my beatmap count I'll just keep a mental note.

One of my better maps.

Added Teara to the tags for mapping that one part in Octagon mode.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 25 times in total.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
I'll be sorry~

[Triangle]
Quite good actually! Hitsound it like octagon?
01:09:081 (5) - This feels out of place with a 1/2 repeat imo.
01:25:985 (3) - ^. Also, reshape? You've done better sliders.

[FFFFFFFOctagon]
FFFFFFFFFFWhyyyyyy, Triangle was quite good ;_; Y'know, spacing is ok, but you know what will I complain about (yeah, sliderspeed)
00:35:273 (3) - what?
00:38:256 (2) - What?
01:16:704 (5) - WHAT?!
Taking off those 1/8 repeat sliders, this is kinda good as far as I could thell, I'm not an experienced player, so take that in mind.

Yeah, I'm starring this, Triangle~
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Timing seems fine

Nazi mod your sliders, they can be even more sexy! :<

and here is the idea I spoke about. to lazy to put it all in notepad, faster if I do this.

Star

Download: yamas03 - bloomin' octagon (CDFA) [Octagon].osu
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
By the looks of things you need an easy. I can make you one if you want. (If you let me, I'd rename "Triangle" to "Square" maybe, and I'll call my diff "Doomsday's Triangle")
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Hooray

Download: yamas03 - bloomin' octagon (CDFA) [Doomsday's Square].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Desu.

I even updated the tags right when I got the diff, I sure am special.
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
.osb is sXXX :3
[Suggestion] If possible, why don't you remove sound from flv file :3?
[Suggestion] As this song is about octagon, how about make spin as OCTAGON?

[Doomsday's Sqaure]
S=r^2<<<<
01:24:991 (1) - This is NOT Sqaure
01:34:272 (2) - [Suggestion] How about move end position on center :3?

[Hexagon]
S=3/2*(sqrt3)*r^2<<<<<<
00:47:868 (5,6) - [Suggestion] Why don't you make these sliders straighten by 1 grid?

[Octagon]
S=7*r^2<<<<<<<<
00:29:969 (3) - [Suggestion] How about make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15561
00:35:273 (3) - [Suggestion] Why don't you make this slider straighten by grid?
00:38:256 (2,3,1) - Seems little hard imo ;_;



BTW, where's pentagon?<<<
Anyway, good luck :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yeah it's in pending now.

Also ilu all.
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Square:

A few slider overlaps, not too much of an issue. Good! Let's point them out anyways for cookies:

00:17:374 (3,1) -
00:30:632 (2,1) -
01:23:665 (2,1) -

Hexagon:

Same with the overlaps, but again it's not really an issue. Let's point out otherstuff!

00:21:351 (5) - Slightly more curvy please
01:18:693 (4) - Make the curve smoother please
01:21:345 (5) - More balanced/smoother please
01:25:985 (3) - Eer...? Okay I guess
01:32:946 (1) - So loooooooong, fix that please

Octagon:

00:35:273 (3) - God save us all. Make a 1/4 repeat please
00:38:338 (3) - ^. It sounds like a fart actually.
01:16:704 (5) - ^

Summary of this difficulty: OMG AWESOME

Pretty good since I couldn't find anything but visual stuff. Star there.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Silent hitsounds. Turn them up a bit. 1/8 repeats. Make them 1/4.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
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Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[General]
delete .osb

[Octagon]
00:26:655 (1) - look it's not straight D:
00:49:194 (1) - ^
00:50:188 (4) - ^
00:53:834 (7,8,9) - align 9 with 7 or on the countrary
00:54:165 (10,11,12) - down by 1
01:14:384 (1) - strange slider, I think it could be like the next one
01:28:968 (5) - you can try to align the end with the start, but it's not really necessary
01:34:934 (9,10) - they should both point straight down or have equal angle (I hope you get it)

[Hexagon]
00:13:396 (1) - look it's not straight D:
00:23:009 (6) - ^
00:30:632 (5) - ^
00:45:216 (1) - ^

[Square]
00:51:845 (2,1) - It's a bit not looking nice, when they overlap like this, but you can leave it as it is

Again, just visual stuff. Nice map, star~
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
No kudos for this, but Hexagon; 00:26:655 (5) - lol offscreen
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Ughh... the dud ein bg looks so... ermm nvm me ;D

Doomsday square:

00:34:941 - Break -> Maybe map this break?

Hexagon:

00:21:351 (5) - Are you serious? Its offmap.
00:26:655 (5) - And this one is slightly offscreen too.
00:34:941 - Break -> You should map this break too.
I dont really like parts with 0 volume... Cause the music is not exactly.... silent... >_> But thats just me though.

Octagon:

00:30:632 (5) - Maybe try for symmetry? Or more asymmetry... as you wish.
I dont really like parts with 0 volume... Cause the music is not exactly.... silent... >_> But thats just me though.


You still have .osb file.
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Hexagon:

Only those offscreen sliders, which were mentioined at the previous post

Didn't found anything else, star~
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Oh my that background scares me.

[Hexagon]
00:21:351 (5) - wh-wh-why this slider so low. Maybe roll it vertically?

[Octagon]
00:53:171 (1) - the whistle on every third note in this combo sounds kinda dull to me.
01:14:384 (1,2) - (2) looks ugly, move it one grid right and then move the middle square two grids right? ;_;
01:19:356 (9,10,11,12) - Oh my god streams with so low volume, why? ;_;
01:22:008 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:23:665 (6) - Ugly slider.
01:28:968 (5) - Another one.

Other than that, awesome. This song is going to be stuck in my head for the rest of the day. XD Have a star. ☆
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Holy hell this made me lol.
Could I make a taiko?
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sure, go ahead >w<
roleykatsu
378 posts
Joined December 2008
roleykatsu
This is epic.

I remember seeing it on YouTube the first time; epic stuff.

I was actually planning to map another version of Bloomin' Feeling (Crushin' Feeling, as seen here xD)

Starred!

Also, can I make my own map contribution >_< ?
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sure >w<
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