01:39 juankristal: sup
01:40 Gravey-: Hallo :3/
01:40 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080440 yknow
01:40 juankristal: when I have 3x 200 in an advanced diff
01:40 juankristal: I question myself how "good" I am xD
01:40 Gravey-: Ayyy lmao
01:41 juankristal: its quite an old map it looks like
01:43 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080460
01:43 juankristal: alright thats better Xd
01:43 *juankristal is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/718199 kors k - Our Faith [Advanced]]
01:43 juankristal: you ready sir?
01:44 Gravey-: Ye i'm ready >w<)b
01:44 juankristal: lets see what we can do
01:45 juankristal: so first question
01:45 juankristal: 00:03:811 (3811|2) - why is that a single note? xD
01:46 Gravey-: Oh lol seems like i missed it
01:46 Gravey-: Added SN at   -    00:03:811
01:46 juankristal: o7
01:46 juankristal: theeen, second thing
01:47 juankristal: I believe you saw this one coming
01:47 juankristal: 00:10:668 (10668|0,10754|0) - 
01:47 juankristal: I dont think using a jack on that particular section is bad by any means
01:47 juankristal: in fact, I do believe a jack fits quite nicely
01:47 juankristal: its a bit sudden, but the pitch ask for it
01:47 Gravey-: Oh
01:47 juankristal: the thing that bothers me a bit is that both arcwin diffs (those are harder ones(
01:47 juankristal: none of those have that jack at all
01:48 juankristal: yeah, you both are different mappers and you both have your own styles of how to map this song
01:48 juankristal: maybe adding a long note here (1/2 long) 00:10:497 -  can help the jack to be a little less sudden
01:48 juankristal: perhaps just delete the jack and make it at different columns as arcwin does instead
01:49 Gravey-: Hmm
01:49 juankristal: (also, I dont know how much english you know because if you have issues with it I can try to be a little bit more idk, simpler? xD)
01:50 Gravey-: Lol it's okay i do understand
01:50 Gravey-: Well what i did is
01:50 Gravey-: 00:10:668 (10668|0) -    I moved this to |4| tho
01:51 juankristal: okey
01:51 juankristal: did you add any long note or not?
01:52 Gravey-: Nope
01:52 juankristal: alright
01:52 juankristal: sooo, lets see whats next
01:52 Gravey-: >w<)b
01:53 juankristal: 00:15:811 (15811|0,16154|3) - I feel this 2
01:53 juankristal: should be in the same column
01:53 juankristal: column 1 should be fine
01:53 juankristal: because same pitch
01:53 juankristal: unless you are just not paying attention to pitch in general and you just want to make balance patterns
01:54 Gravey-: I fix it with this instead http://puu.sh/oGNFL.png
01:54 juankristal: cool :D
01:54 Gravey-: >w<)b
01:55 juankristal: 00:19:240 (19240|0,19583|3) - 
01:55 juankristal: those ones
01:55 juankristal: which sound are you following? xD
01:55 juankristal: if you follow the same previously pointed then those arent 1/2
01:55 juankristal: I mean, they feel like less long
01:56 Gravey-: Hmm well ye hmm
01:56 juankristal: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080512
01:56 juankristal: thats a suggest
01:57 juankristal: if you want to use something like that 
01:57 juankristal: you can try arcwins option as well of using 1/4 ln's but I feel they dont fit the diff
01:59 Gravey-: I did the 1st one, your suggestion thanks~
01:59 juankristal: alright :D
01:59 juankristal: the rest of that section looks fine
01:59 Gravey-: >w<)b
01:59 juankristal: this
01:59 juankristal: 00:31:926 (31926|3,32097|0,32440|2,32611|1) - 
01:59 juankristal: is something that I think is risky and I feel it doesnt fit
01:59 juankristal: because you suddenly decide to follow which looks to be a... guitar?
02:00 juankristal: when you were normally mapping the other sound instead
02:00 Gravey-: Lol
02:00 Gravey-: I'll follow the white lines (Piano)
02:01 juankristal: you can try to use long notes to follow the guitar and actualy follow those 2 notes
02:01 juankristal: but its up to you
02:01 juankristal: if not, you should follow only the piano
02:01 juankristal: it feels inconsistent and it is inconsistent
02:02 Gravey-: I only follow the piano here lol
02:03 juankristal: but I mean this 2 00:32:097 (32097|0,32440|2) - 
02:03 juankristal: those are following guitar
02:04 Gravey-: Ye
02:04 juankristal: thats why I said it feels inconsistent
02:05 Gravey-: Ohh
02:06 Gravey-: I removed them and follow only the piano~
02:06 juankristal: alright
02:06 juankristal: can I ask why is this note snapped like that? 00:44:911 (44911|3) -  xD
02:08 Gravey-: For the synth? Lol
02:09 juankristal: is it really 1/8 snap? xD
02:09 juankristal: I feel it like, so random xD
02:09 juankristal: I think the sounds are in red and blue ticks
02:09 Gravey-: Oh lmao
02:10 Gravey-: I don't feel so sure as well
02:10 Gravey-: Well i'll move it to the blue line
02:10 juankristal: and about pattering of that particular part
02:11 juankristal: as we decided to remove the jack previously mentioneed in the diff
02:11 juankristal: I feel we should remove this ones as well
02:11 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080554 something like this might work
02:11 Gravey-: Oh ye ye w8 i'll fix this part
02:11 Gravey-: Oh ocake thanks^
02:12 juankristal: lol ocake
02:12 juankristal: that sound funny xD
02:12 Gravey-: Lol
02:13 Gravey-: Fixed!
02:13 juankristal: 00:54:554 (54554|0,54640|0) - same goes here
02:13 Gravey-: Fixed!
02:13 Gravey-: >w<)b
02:15 juankristal: for this last kiai
02:15 juankristal: 01:06:897 (66897|2,67068|2,67583|1,67754|1) - I feel those jacks are a bit unconfortable
02:15 juankristal: 00:19:583 (19583|2,67068|2,67240|0) - you can fix those easily by ctrl+h and move to left
02:15 juankristal: its up to you tho  because is pattering choice
02:15 juankristal: but I feel those a bit unconfortable to play
02:16 Gravey-: Lol actually i feel the same
02:18 juankristal: the rest of the diff looks fine
02:18 juankristal: so that should be it for the advanced
02:19 Gravey-: Fixed! and thank you!
02:20 juankristal: for the medium diff
02:20 juankristal: to give mostly a quick look and keep spread consistency
02:20 juankristal: 00:19:240 - remember that part 
02:20 juankristal: and probably doing something like advanced but with less density should work
02:21 juankristal: btw
02:21 juankristal: I like how you map the guitar as long notes in the medium but not the advanced XD
02:21 Gravey-: Oh ye
02:22 Gravey-: Lmao
02:22 juankristal: actualy
02:22 juankristal: most of the "issues" that the medium diff has
02:22 juankristal: are the same stuff I pointed in the advanced
02:22 juankristal: just that with lower density in general
02:22 juankristal: and easier patering
02:22 juankristal: so just looking at the advanced mod should be fine
02:22 juankristal: lets see if I can find another thing
02:23 Gravey-: Okay got it >w<)b
02:24 juankristal: ouch the second kiai
02:24 juankristal: you are using snaps like this 00:55:840 (55840|0,56526|3) - 
02:24 juankristal: which arent like, baaaad 
02:24 juankristal: but I feel that for a medium is not cool
02:24 juankristal: its probably even harder than advanced xD
02:24 juankristal: or at least harder to time
02:25 juankristal: I suggest to make it like normal 1/2 streams with doubles in the white ticks
02:25 Gravey-: Ohh
02:25 juankristal: or between 2/1 whites
02:25 juankristal: and use parts like this one
02:25 juankristal: 01:00:383 - 
02:25 juankristal: to make a transition and not make it too repetitive
02:26 juankristal: and even more important
02:26 juankristal: 01:03:811 - 
02:26 juankristal: those kind of sections
02:26 juankristal: using this 01:03:811 (63811|3,64154|0) - as doubles
02:26 juankristal: this one
02:26 juankristal: 01:05:011 (65011|3) - 
02:27 juankristal: and delete each note that doesnt follow that sound xD
02:27 juankristal: that would make the diff fun to play and not that hard for the medium tier players
02:27 Gravey-: Ayy lmao
02:27 juankristal: and not being repetitive
02:27 Gravey-: Ocake lemme fix thhis part
02:27 juankristal: mmh
02:27 juankristal: I will try to make something and send it
02:28 juankristal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5080604 something like that 
02:29 juankristal: and last
02:29 juankristal: 01:29:011 (89011|2,89097|0,89183|1) - this is too hard for medium imo xD
02:30 juankristal: 01:31:497 (91497|2,91754|0,91840|2) -  same this kind of stuff
02:30 juankristal: and mostly using streams with long notes in general
02:32 juankristal: and for now I feel that might be it D:
02:32 juankristal: I really need to go to sleep now xD
02:33 Gravey-: Ohh i see well pls post the log in the thread so that i can gib you kudos
02:33 juankristal: alright, going to do that then

1. 00:09:126 - 00:09:468 - 00:09:811 - 00:10:154 - 00:42:040 - 00:42:383 - 00:42:726 - 00:43:068 - 01:14:954 - 01:15:297 - Add one note
2. 01:26:440 (86440|2) - Remove this note? You never used 2 notes for that sound
3. 01:25:754 (85754|2,86097|1) - 01:26:954 (86954|1) - Make to 1/2 Holds
4. If you changed the above then move this 01:27:468 (87468|1) - to 4

1. 00:16:840 (16840|1,16840|2) - Move to the left
2. 00:17:011 (17011|0) - move to 3
3. 00:17:183 (17183|2) - move to 4
4. 00:53:526 - 00:53:868 - Add one note

1. 00:07:754 - 00:08:097 - 00:08:440 - 00:08:783 - 00:42:040 - 00:42:383 - 00:42:726 - 00:43:068 - You maybe want to add one more note here for the drums
2. 00:43:240 - Add one note at 2
3. 00:44:268 - Add one note at 1
4. 00:52:497 - Add one note at 1
5. 00:54:211 (54211|0) - You can make this a hold to 00:54:554 - and move this 00:54:640 (54640|0) - to 2 after
6. 01:03:811 (63811|3) - 01:04:154 (64154|2) - 01:04:497 (64497|1) - 01:05:868 (65868|1,66040|3,66211|2,66383|1) - Change to 1/2 hold
7. 01:39:211 - Add note at 2
8. 01:39:297 (99297|2) - Move to 4
9. 01:39:383 - Add note at 3